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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 17:34:45 GMT 1
The lights slowly fade in the arena. Candles burn along both sides of the ramp. Red sparks fall into the constructed steel cage, showering the special guest referee, Shinn’s Theory. “Let’s Get Rocked” hits as the crowd boos. The Wench appears on top of the ramp with an expression of determination. She is being escorted by no one. She slowly walks to the ring and circles the cage. She grabs the cage from the outside and shakes it, checking it’s durability. She then climbs through the cage door and approaches Shinn’s Theory. The light turn on as Wench’s theme slowly fades. Shinn’s looks down at Wench as she looks up at him, remaining expressionless. Shinn’s Theory breaks the stare and walks to the opposite side of the ring, leaning into a corner, smiling.”Ugly” hits as the crowd jumps to their feet. Firefly makes his appearance at the top of the ramp. He raises both arms as he heads towards the cage. He approaches the cage and looks up at Wench. Firefly begins to laugh and shake his head. Firefly then climbs the cage, entering the cage the hard way. The fans cheer as Firefly approaches Wench. Shinn’s Theory steps in between the two of them as he quickly goes over the rules. This cage match is now a pinfall/submission match only. Shinn’s calls for the bell and this match is officially underway.Inter-Gender Steel Cage Match - Special Referee: Shinn‘s Theory Firefly vs. The Wench[/center][/color] Firefly and Wench continue to stare at one another. Firefly continues to laugh. The Wench slaps Firefly in the face. Firefly rubs his cheek, shaking his head. Again, Wench slaps Firefly in the face. This time, Firefly rubs his cheek without a smile. Wench swings towards Firefly for a third time, but Firefly blocks it. Firefly then shoves Wench to the mat. The crowd cheers as a smile overtakes Firefly’s face, once again. The Wench quickly nips up and attacks Firefly with lightening quick kicks and punches. Firefly backs into the corner, covering his head. Shinn’s Theory begins his 5 count. By the time he gets to 5, Wench refuses to allow Firefly out of the corner. Shinn’s gets in between the two, breaking the altercation. Wench seems furious at Shinn’s as he explains to her that she can still be disqualified in this particular match. Firefly storms out of the corner nailing Wench with a devastating clothesline. He then picks her up and performs a long standing suplex. He goes for the cover and Shinn’s quickly beings the count….1.…..2.….Shinn’s breaks the count as Wench was able to get a foot on the bottom rope. Firefly drags Wench to the center of the ring and applies a Sharp Shooter. The crowd erupts as Wench looks as though she is ready to tap out. Shinn’s is in position to make the call. All of the sudden the crowd begins to boo. Shinn’s Theory looks over his shoulder to see The Hood climbing the steel cage. Shinn’s Theory takes his eyes off of his duties and begins to climb the steel cage as well. The Hood and Shinn’s Theory meet at the top of the cage. The two begin exchanging blows. In the ring, Wench begins to tap out. Shinn’s Theory, still exchanging blows with The Hood, is unable to see this. Hellspawn then appears from underneath the ring. He quickly climbs into the ring carrying a sledge hammer. He nails Firefly in the back of the head with it. Firefly breaks the hold and falls limp onto the mat. Hellspawn tends to Wench for a short period of time. Hellspawn looks up at Shinn’s as Shinn’s is able to knock The Hood off the cage, sending him through the announce table. Hellspawn quickly climbs out of the ring and back underneath. Shinn’s Theory climbs back down the cage and hops into the ring. He sees both Firefly and Wench down. He begins his 10 count. 1.……2.……3.……4.…..5.……6.…..7.….. Wench staggers to her feet. She climbs to the top of the cage and performs a very impressive Davey Jone’s Locker. She crashes on top of Firefly and rolls him over. Shinn’s gets into position and counts….1.…..2.….3. The Wench wins this inter-gender cage match. The Wench - 13 Votes + 4.1 Promo Points = 17.1 Firefly - 13 Votes + 3.6 Promo Points = 16.6[/I] Winner: The Wench[/b] The Wench staggers to her feet raising her hand in victory. EMT’s rush down to the ring to check on The Hood. “Therapy Scares Me” hit’s the speakers as Addryd is shown running to the ring. He enters the cage an heads towards Shinn’s Theory. He begins to explain how Wench received the win. As this occurs, Wench drops to one knee and low blows Addryd. Hellspawn is now seen rolling out from under the ring. Shinn’s Theory doesn’t see him roll out from under the ring but does see him enter the ring. The Wench and Hellspawn begin to stomp away at Addryd.On the outside, The EMTs help The Hood to his feet and help him to the back. Shinn’s Theory then exit’s the cage, not worrying about what is happening inside. The lights dim in the arena and “For Whom the Bell Tolls” hits. The P2PW World Heavyweight Champion, Soul Reaper, appears on top of the ramp. He makes his way to the ring as Shinn’s stops just outside of the cages door.Soul Reaper walks down the ramp and approaches Shinn’s Theory. The two stare at one another for a brief moment. Soul Reaper shoves Shinn’s aside and enters the cage. He, along with the rest of Evil Unlimited, continue to brutalize Addryd. Shinn’s looks into the cage and caves. He enters the cage. Shinn’s spins Hellspawn around and delivers the Theory Driver to him. The Wench spins around and Shinn’s lays her out with Sweet Shinn’s Music. The crowd is on their feet as Soul Reaper stops his attack on Addryd and zones in on Theory. Theory urges Reaper on. The two begin to exchange blows. Soul Reaper gets the better of Shinn’s and pounds him into a corner, stomping him down to the mat.Floorstare is now shown running to the ring. The crowd goes nuts as Floorstare enters the cage and attacks The P2PW World Champion from behind. Floorstare and Soul Reaper begin to exchange blows as Firefly is now staggering on his feet. Floorstare whips Reaper towards the rope but Firefly lays the Champion out with a clothesline. Firefly and Floorstare continue to stomp away at Reaper as Shinn’s shakes away the cob webs. He exit’s the cage and grabs a microphone. He reenters the ring and calls for Floorstare and Firefly to stop.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Soul Reaper! I’ve had it with you and Evil Unlimited. I’m announcing your new Tag Team partner. This person will share the P2PW World Tag Team Champion Title with you. This person may bring a little confusion to your “well oiled” dark clique! This person is not here tonight. However, this person will be in your corner at this month’s PPV, “Rage Rules”, to defend your titles. Your opponents will be none other than former P2PW Tag Team Champions, Doc Holliday & Firefly! The crowd erupts as an angry look overcomes Soul Reaper’s face.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Consider your locker room to become a little more confusing….A little more unstable….A little more, Spaztastic! Your new partner………<br> The crowd waits as Shinn’s Theory begins to smile.Shinn’s Theory:[/b]….is Spaz! Now expressing a frustrated look, Soul Reaper stands looking into the eyes of Shinn’s Theory who is standing beside Floorstare and Firefly. Doc Holliday makes his way to the ring and stands along side them. Soul Reaper looks down at the fallen Wench and Hellspawn. Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Before we go, I bet you’d like to know who you’ll be defending your World Title against at Rage Rules. Man oh man, what a busy night you’re going to have. The man you’ll be facing at Rage Rules is in the building tonight and you will confront him……later in the show. Shinn’s drops the microphone and leaves the cage. Floorstare, Firefly, and Doc Holliday follow the Co-Owner up the ramp. The four men stand on top of the ramp, looking back towards Soul Reaper. An evil look from Soul Reaper is shown on Zeroin as the cage begins to rise. Soul Reaper tends to his Evil Unlimited members as Shinn’s Theory, Floorstare, Doc Holliday, and Firefly disappear into the back. The ring crew heads down and begins to construct the set for our third addition of “The Diddly Scoop”. We now turn our attention towards Zeroin.
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 17:37:37 GMT 1
The Outsiders are shown in their locker room. Da Man and Nation are sitting side by side on a long leather couch taping up their wrists and hands.Da Man:[/b] It’s good to have you back bro. Nation:[/b] It’s good to be back. The two men pause for a moment as they continue to prepare for their matches later on tonight.Nation:[/b] There’s a lot of new faces around here. I’ve even met this Chadwick guy. Pretty decent fella. And who is this hot piece of ass, Venus? Da Man laughs.Da Man:[/b] That’s SoundScream’s women. Nation:[/b] SoundScream? Da Man:[/b] He’s also new. Actually, he’s started a little faction already. Along with Venus, he’s enrolled Trent Acid. Nation:[/b] No shit. Ahhhh well. I’ll catch up on the roster when I need to. But, first thing is first. I never miss this…… Nation grabs the remote control and turns on the television as “The Diddly Scoop” is just about to start.Nation:[/b] This guy cracks me up. Da Man laughs as he rises to his feet.Da Man:[/b] I’ll catch up with you later. Without taking his eyes off of the television set, Nation continues to wrap his wrists and responds:Nation:[/b] Huh? Yea.. Ok. Later man. Da Man exit’s the locker room. We now take you to ringside. The Third Addition of “The Diddly Scoop” [/b][/color] ”TNT” hits and the fans show mixed reactions. All of the sudden, SoL appears on top of the ramp with a microphone. The crowd begins to boo.SoL:[/b] Well, I’m real sorry to disappoint you all, but Diddly Squat is not here tonight. So, I’ve taken it upon myself to take his place as host for a week. So, please hit my music. ”Rock Star” hits as SoL begins to laugh as he heads to the ring. He enters the ring and sits in Diddly Squat’s usual chair. He looks around towards the crowd, smiling as they remain booing. His theme slowly fades as he lifts the microphone to his mouth.SoL:[/b] You know, I was thinking all week. I was thinking, already knowing Diddly Douchebag wouldn’t be in the arena tonight. So, I knew I would finally have a nice spot on Turmoil to address all of my wonderful fans. The crowd continues to boo.SoL:[/b] With that said, I have scheduled no special guest. Instead, let’s have a simple Question and Answer segment. Since I am the host AND the guest, I suppose I’ll start. You guessed it, the crowd continues to boo.SoL:[/b] SoL? What is your main purpose for becoming part of the P2PW? Short pause.SoL:[/b] Well SoL, that’s a good question. You see, the main reason why I came to the P2PW is because….. SoL is interrupted by “In The Shadows”. The Rage Champion appears on top of the ramp. Rocky struts down to the ring and enters. He sits in the other seat and grabs the a microphone.Rocky:[/b] We like your style. We really do. But this Q&A won’t happen on our watch. What we’re here to talk about is our match at Rage Rules. You see, we’ve been signed to defend our title against…. SoL interrupts Rocky.SoL:[/b] SoL? Rocky smiles towards SoL.Rocky:[/b] You wish. Actually Shinn’s signed a Title vs. Title match. We will be facing Nation at Rage Rules for the Rage Title and the International Title. The fans erupt.Rocky:[/b] Of course, the winner of that match will become both the International Champion and the Rage Champion. SoL:[/b] That would be one hell of an accomplishment. Rocky:[/b] Yes, you are correct But, Nation has been out of action for quite some time. So, we’ve decided to add a stipulation for tonight’s match involving Chilly Will and Nation. This match is now a Submission Only Match. If Nation can not make his opponent submit tonight, we will not only get his Rage Title shot taken away from him, but he will be stripped of the International Championship as well. The crowd begins to boo as Rocky stands, dropping the microphone.SoL:[/b] Rocky? If I may as you one question before you leave? Rocky picks up the microphone and nods.SoL:[/b] Do I have a spot on the Rage Rules card? Rocky:[/b] You bet your ass. SoL:[/b] And my opponent? Rocky:[/b] You’ll find out that night. But here is a hint: The match will be called “The Battle of the Egos”. Rocky drops the microphone and rolls out of the ring. He disappears into the back as SoL stands there, smiling. We now take focus on Zeroin.Starcrunch is shown skipping down the hall. She passes by Doc Holliday. The two exchange a quick high-five. She stops in front of Shinn’s Theory’s office door. He taps on the door.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Come in…<br> Starcrunch enters, sucking on a Slurpee. She approaches Shinn’s and sits on his lap.Starcrunch:[/b] Well? Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Well what? Starcrunch:[/b] Well, who am I defending my title against at Rage Rules? Shinn’s Theory:[/b] If you want an answer, I want a sip. Starcrunch holds the cup towards Theory’s mouth as he takes a sip through the straw.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Ahhhhhhh…. Smooth. Just the way I like it. Starcrunch:[/b] Well? Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Hit me again. Again, Starcrunch gives Shinn’s a sip of her Slurpee.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Ouch! Son of a bitch…. Starcrunch hops off the lap of Shinn’s Theory.Starcrunch:[/b] What! What did I do? Holding his eye, Shinn’s shakes his head.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Nothing. Ice Cream headache, that’s all. Friggin’ literal brain freeze. Starcruch laughs and sits back on Shinn’s lap.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Alright. I know you want her so you’ll get her. You’ll defend your title against Venus. Starcrunch hops to her feet in excitement.Starcrunch:[/b] Thank you so much! She skips to the door. Just as she opens it, Floorstare is entering. Starcrunch kisses Floorstare on the cheek and skips out of the office. Floorstare looks puzzled and turns towards Shinn’s.Floorstare:[/b] What the hell was that for? Shinn’s Theory:[/b] I think she’s got Uranus…….I mean…… Venus on the brain. Floorstare:[/b] Screw it, I’m not even gonna ask. The scene fades as we now take you back to ringside.
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 17:40:18 GMT 1
”Sexy Boy” hit’s the speakers as newcomer, Chilly Willy, makes his way to the ring. He slaps hands with a few of the fans on the way to the ring. He then slides into the ring and poses for the fans. As his music dies down, “The Wolfpac Theme” hits. The fans jump off their seats as the return of Nation is finally taking place. He appears and the cheers become deafening. Sporting a smile, he walks to the ring and enters. Without wasting any time, he attacks the newcomer. The referee calls for the bell.Singles Competition - Non Title Match - Submission Only Outsider’s Member - Nation vs. Chilly Willy [/b][/color] The two men lock up. Nation powers Chilly Willy into the corner. The referee calls for a clean break and receives it. Nation backs away and stands in the center of the ring, waiting for the newcomer to advance. He does. The two lock up again. Chilly Willy quickly puts Nation into a headlock. Showing nice speed, Chilly then breaks the hold, and applies a waist-lock. Nation is able to reverse the hold. Chilly is now on the receiving side of a waist-lock. Chilly then reverses the hold but Nation is quick to break it, whipping Chilly off of the ropes. Chilly returns and connects with a flying forearm to the head of Nation, which takes Nation down to the mat. The newcomer is showing an impressive debut. He aids Nation to his feet and begins to nail him with quick uppercuts. Nation staggers back-first into the corner. Chilly approaches him. He grabs him by the arm and whips him into the opposite corner. Chilly runs in but Nation is able to move out of the way. Chilly slams into the corner, chest-first. As he springs back, Nation nails Chilly with a falling neck breaker. The crowd begins to cheer as Nation has gained control of this match. Nation rolls the newcomer over and pins him. The referee reminds Nation that this is a Submission Only match. Nation stands, aiding Chilly to his feet. Nation begins to deliver hard rights to Chilly, backing him into the corner. He then climbs to the second rope. He continues to deliver hard rights to the top of Chilly’s head as the fans count along with each blow. After 10, Nation drops back onto the mat. Chilly falls to the mat. The crowd is on their feet now as Nation signals for his finisher. Chilly Willy staggers to his feet and Nation nails him with the Nation’s End. He then applies a crippler cross face on Chilly Willy. The newcomer shows a lot of heart here as he refuses to tap out. But, after such a devastating string of moves Chilly taps out. The crowd jumps to their feet as the referee calls for the bell. Nation breaks the hold and stands. The referee raises his hand in victory. Nation - 21 Votes + 4.26 Promo Points = 25.26 Chilly Willy - 4 Votes + 2 Promo Points = 6[/I] Winner: Nation[/b] As Nation celebrates, Gormy runs to the ring. She slides in and congratulates Nation on his win. As the two celebrate, Rocky appears on Zeroin.Rocky:[/b] Nation! We applaud you. You’ve earned your spot against us at Rage Rules. The fans cheer as Rocky continues.Rocky:[/b] However, this is not why we interrupted your celebration. It’s Gormy we wanted to address. A strange look appears on Gormy’s face.Rocky:[/b] Now, this is not something we normally do. But, you came to us with a request. Although we feel you’re request was mere suicide, we’ll agree. At Rage Rules, you will be in a number one contender’s match for the P2PW Women’s Title against Evil Unlimited’s Wench. Gormy sports a huge grin as the crowd cheers. Both Nation and Gormy leave the ring, celebrating together. We now take you to a pre-recorded segement.Total Coverage of Cactus‘s Trial [/b][/color] Kacey Garcia stands in front of the Court House with a surprised look on her face. She peers into the camera and address the fans.Kacey Garcia:[/b] I’m in total shock. We have learned that earlier this week, Cactus’s trial was ended early. For such a hideous act, a killer is now a free man. Cactus was found not guilty. The crowd in the arena boos.Kacey Garcia:[/b] I wasn’t able to interview Cactus himself as he and his lawyers left right after the final hearing. No word was given to us regarding their destination. That’s all the information I’ve received today.
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 17:42:45 GMT 1
Kacey shakes her head as Zeroin fades to black. The crowd boos as Cactus is now able to walk the streets. The lights in the arena fade as “For Whom the Bell Tolls” is heard once again. The crowd continues to boo as the P2PW World Champion, Soul Reaper, slowly makes his way to the ring. He enters the ring. Red sparks rain upon the champion. He snaps his head back revealing his face. Just as he does so, a huge clasp of fireworks explode above the ring. The lights slowly brighten as Soul Reaper calls for a microphone.Soul Reaper:[/b] Shinn’s Theory! Get your ass down here right now!! The crowd cheers waiting for Shinn’s to appear.Soul Reaper:[/b] I’ve got all day Shinn’s. I’ll stop your precious show. ”P.C.” hits as Shinn’s Theory appears on top of the ramp, holding a microphone. Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] You may be the World Champion, but I’m your boss! Reaper, whatever you have to say to me can wait. I want you, and everyone in the building to look up at Zeroin. A banner appears across the screen.The crowd looks up and begins to cheer. Shinn‘s smiles as he looks around the arena.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] That’s right. The OGIF has been bought out and we’re bringing you P2PW’s Blitz! The crowd’s cheers fill the arena.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] I will name a new General Manager for that weekly show. But not now. As for you Reaper, speak quick. Soul Reaper:[/b] First of all Shinn’s, I could care less about this new weekly show. I called you out for a reason, and the reason wasn’t for you to advertise Blitz. Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] This is my show Reaper. I can…. Soul Reaper interrupts Shinn’s.Soul Reaper:[/b] I’m the World Champion. I run the show. The crowd boos as Shinn’s Theory stares into the evil eyes of the World Champion.Soul Reaper:[/b] Good. Now since you’ve shut you’re mouth I’m calling you out. I want you in the ring right now. The crowd cheers as Shinn’s Theory takes off his jacket. He walks to the ring and enters. The two men stare down each other. The advance and are now nose to nose. Soul Reaper drops his microphone. Shinn’s Theory smiles and backs off.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] I see you’re anxious to fight. And, you will. Shinn’s begins to pace back and forth in the ring.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] I’ve been racking my brain for weeks now. I’ve been trying to find the perfect opponent for you at Rage Rules. Finally, I’ve come to a conclusion. The man you will be facing is hated by me, just as you are. So, I find it very benefiting, to me, to have 2 men that I despise fight at Rage Rules. And, I can guarantee that you both won’t walk away from the match unscarred. The crowd waits in anticipation as Shinn’s a about to make the announcement. Soul Reaper also waits for his opponent to be named.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] I’ll let him introduce himself. Shinn’s Theory drops the microphone and rolls out of the ring. He climbs the ramp and disappears into the back. The crowd stands at a hush as they wait. Soul Reaper stands in the center of the ring looking up towards the entrance. All of the sudden a deafening howl is heard followed by “Don’t Want to be an American Idiot” hit’s the speakers. Nobody recognizes the entrance. A minute goes by and then the figure appears on top of the ramp. This figure is Cactus.The crowd boos as Cactus marches to the ring. He steps in the ring and approaches Soul Reaper. The two stare at each other. Cactus picks up a microphone.Cactus:[/b] At Rage Rules, let’s hope there won’t be any unfortunate accidents. Soul Reaper immediately swings at Cactus. The two men begin to exchange blow after blow as the P2PW staff members and security guard rush the ring. They break the two men up for a short period of time. The World Champion is able to break free from security and staff, leaping towards Cactus, landing a few hard punches. Again, the two are separated. Cactus then breaks free and leaps towards Reaper. The two men are now rolling around on the mat, beating each other senseless. Finally, security and staff are able to break the two men apart. The two men continue to yell at one another as they are escorted to the back. We now take you backstage in the Decepticon‘s locker room.SoundScream:[/b] Well, it looks like you’ll be bringing the gold to us first, Venus. And after I put an end to Mastadon, I will be focusing on the P2PW International Title. With Trent now in our corner, this is failsafe. Venus:[/b] I can’t wait to get my hands on that Slurpee suckin’ bitch! Trent Acid:[/b] And since it appears that I am not booked in a match, I’ll be in your corner for that match. I have no doubt that you will bring that title to the Decepticons. Just as Trent finishes, Rocky walks in the locker room.Rocky:[/b] We couldn’t help but to overhear what you just said Trent. We just want to let you know something. If Wolverine can’t get the job done tonight, you will be next in line to take Da Man to hell. Rocky leaves as Trent begins to nod. The three look at one another, all smiling. We now take you back to ringside for our final match of the night.
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 17:43:40 GMT 1
”Fight” hit’s the speakers as the 6 foot 10 inch monster, Wolverine, makes his debut. He walks to the ring and steps onto the apron. He steps over the top rope and raises one fist. His music fades as we await his opponent.”The Wolfpac Theme” hits as the fans jump to their feet. Da Man appears and sprints down to the ring. He slides in and immediately attacks Wolverine. The referee calls for the bell.Main Event - The First Challenge of “The Rocky Road Through Hell” Outsider‘s Member - Da Man vs. Wolverine [/center] Da Man backs the big man into the corner. Wolverine quickly spins Da Man around, forcing him into the corner. Wolverine begins to strike Da Man and the face with some hard shots. Wolverine then leads Da Man to the center of the ring, delivering a back breaker. The big man lifts Da Man to his feet and applies a massive bear hug. Da Man quickly wiggles free and whips Wolverine off the ropes. He returns and Da Man attempts a shoulder block. Both men remain standing. Da Man then springs himself off of the ropes and tries another shoulder block. Again, both men remain on their feet. Wolverine whips Da Man off the ropes. Da Man returns with a hard running spear. Wolverine slams to the mat as the crowd jumps to their feet. Da Man singles for his finisher as he waits for Wolverine to stagger to his feet. Wolverine staggers to his feet and Da Man sets him up for The Outsider Info. He balances the big man in the air for almost 10 seconds before driving him to the mat. Da Man pins the newcomer….1.…….2.……3.…. An easy victory for Da Man and a sure advancement in “The Rocky Road Through Hell”. Da Man - 21 Votes + 4.725 Promo Points = 25.725 Wolverine - 4 Votes + 2 Promo Points = 6[/I] Winner: Da Man[/b] Da Man raises his hands in victory as “The Evolution Theme” hits. SoundScream appears, followed by Trent Acid and Venus. The threesome walk to the ring and enter. Da Man begins his defensive stance. He heads towards Trent Acid but Trent ducks out of the way. Da Man spears the ring corner and The Decepticons begin to pound away. Gormy and Nation then run down to help Da Man. Venus slides out of the ring. Her and Gormy fight as Nation slides into the ring. He swings SoundScream around but SoundScream quickly applies The Sound Off. Nation is now laid out. Mastadon runs to the ring as the crowd cheers. Mastadon slides into the ring and nails clotheslines SoundScream out of the ring. Da Man is does the same to Trent Acid. Gormy has gotten the better of Venus and The Decepticons retreat. Nation staggers to his feet. Gormy slides into the ring. This week’s TNT fades off the air with Nation, Da Man, Mastadon, and Gormy standing in the ring…Credits: Shinn’s Theory[/size]
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 17:47:26 GMT 1
Staff promo votes were as follows:
Shinn's Theory's Ratings:
Firefly - 3.5 (Seems to be hovering around the average type promo writing. He's done better....and will do better in the future. I love his character.) The Wench - 4.0 (Good shhhhtuff.)
Nation - 4.3 (Nice returning promo. I got right into it.. Just to let you know, the belts won't be unified at Rage Rules. We'll still have an International Title and a Rage Title. Someone will just hold both.) Chilly Willy - 2.0 (See Wolverine's critique.)
Da Man - 4.9 (That's how you keep your head in the game - by bringing up past P2PW events and writing promos like these.) Wolverine - 2.0 (The more you read other promos you'll begin to see a basic format most of the top writers use. But hey, it was your first attempt. It can only get better...)
UKG's Ratings:
Firefly - 3.5 ( For someone who was hovering around the Rage title picture, you can do better, on the plus side your character is growing on me. Keep it up) The Wench - 4.1 (Solid promo, the development of an all new heel Wench works, and works well)
Nation - 4.0 (The comeback promo, something being kept back me thinks??) Chilly Willy - 2.0 (1st promo, have a look in the construcive criticism thread for advice- either that or PM me, more than happy to help)
Da Man n/a Wolverine - 2.0 ( Read what I've put for Chilly bro. Without praising my own work too much, you had a tough match, for your first night out)
To the new guys, dont be downhearted, coz in Nation and myself, you got 2 guys who learnt the same way you did, and you will improve, so dont give up just coz you got a kicking in your first promo voting!
In all of the mods here, and if look through promos from past shows, you will see how characters develop, and you will pick up tips and ways around how to make your character work.
Always ask, coz you will find a load of help here, I promise.
The Wench's Ratings:
Firefly - 4.0 (I know you're still capable of better.) The Wench - ------
Nation - 4.2 (Nice promo with a nice flow to it.) Chilly Willy - 2 (Needs more work. Add more details and break it up better.)
Da Man - 4.7 (I agree. It helps to bring up past events.) Wolverine - 2 (You need to add more details to your promos. Pay attention to grammar as well.)
Rocky's Ratings:
Firefly - 3.5 (I liked this. You've made a nice transition from uber-heel to face. Well done.) The Wench - 4 (Nicely done. Humour, intensity and a plausible multi-character promo. Bravo)
Nation - 4.5 (Nation, if you can better that slightly at Rage Rules, I'll give you a 5. An excellent promo. Truly memorable.) Chilly Willy - 2 (seems to have a decent character in the making, but it wasn't a believable promo. I couldn't see it happening.There was no intensity or hook to draw us in, probably due to the length of it. You have a good base for a charcter. Work from there.)
Da Man - 4.5 (Yup, an excellent promo. Had everything in it. I loved the little in character digs towards Stare's character. Brilliant.) Wolverine - 2 (Wolverine, promos have to flow for us to believe what we are reading. By writing, "I am walking out of the door" we can't see the promo in our heads. Try to make it run like a little story. Link everything together. Make the narrative parts more dramatic. Also, get a charatcter clear in your head. If you develope a character, your promo will just roll off your tounge as you type it. Look over some other of the great promos we have here to give you a step in the right direction. But above all else, take this as constructive critisism.)
Soul Reaper's Ratings:
Firefly - 3.5 The Wench - 4
Nation - 4.3 Chilly Willy - 2
Da Man - 4.8 Wolverine - 2
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Post by spaz on Sept 15, 2004 17:58:38 GMT 1
that was a great show, probably because its the first ive read in a good month.
your writting, along with others has improved greatly. good stuff
im about to die from not promo'ing soon, so i'll give it a go
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*hugs reaper*
edit: i'll give the promo a go tomorrow, its 3:10 am now and it takes me nearly 2 hours to do a good promo. that, and im a little sleepy
so yeah, comming soon to this thread near you. i'll do my first promo in, oh shit, about 2 months...
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Post by Stare on Sept 15, 2004 18:01:03 GMT 1
Read it as it was posted, just like Spaz.
Great job Shinns. This show was filled with a lot of breakout fights showing that the P2PW can be a place of chaos, pretty cool.
And What is the deal with Blitz? Is this going to take the place of TNT, or is it a new show all together? I noticed it said weekly, so, are you going to be writing 2 shows at once, or alternate between the two every other week?
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Post by Hellspawn on Sept 15, 2004 18:03:56 GMT 1
Great show guys and Firefly sorry but buisness is buisness.
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 18:04:45 GMT 1
Haven't desided yet. Might have 2 shows a week, or alternate weeks between Blitz and TNT. 1 PPV a month still.
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Post by Nation on Sept 15, 2004 18:05:42 GMT 1
great show as always dude! it sets everything up nicely for rage rules. i for one cannot wait.
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Post by Stare on Sept 15, 2004 18:09:40 GMT 1
Rage Rules is going to be tizzight for shizzel. The Cactus vs. Reaper match will be crazy, but I'm writing Nation vs. Rocky down as match of the night. But the best thing about this is that it's all promo voting, so anything can happen. Cactus could win the belt. The worst thing about Rage Rules, is that I'm not on the card . . . *cries like a baby*
EDIT: Man, 2 shows a week? That would be greatness Shinns, when are you starting this?
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Post by shinnstheory on Sept 15, 2004 18:12:52 GMT 1
Not quite sure. Probably make more announcements about it at Rage Rules. Gives me a little time to decide.
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Post by stocko on Sept 15, 2004 18:13:26 GMT 1
very nice show bro!
whats with the bWo in the ring again, what could this mean, duh duh duuuuuuhhhh
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Post by spaz on Sept 15, 2004 18:16:16 GMT 1
Rage Rules is going to be tizzight for shizzel. i was about to say that! so i'll say, shizzle mia bizzle yo frizzle 2 shows a week sounds unachievable, but i'd like it to work. I would offer to even write a match here and there but i get lost in all the 'wrestling' part of e-feds. i find it more a creative writing competition on a hypethetical character, heh
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Post by Cactus on Sept 15, 2004 18:52:59 GMT 1
I got off ;D
Shinns great show,
Reaper, can you make mty name flash on the belt ? ;D
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Post by Wench on Sept 15, 2004 19:58:46 GMT 1
Awesome Show, guys...... Told ya I'd beat Firefly.
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Post by Reaper on Sept 15, 2004 20:22:42 GMT 1
Superb show. I can't wait for Rage Rules. I think it's going to eb the best PPV we've had to date.
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Post by LK on Sept 15, 2004 20:53:02 GMT 1
Awsome job. That's the way my first TNT sould be.
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Post by -JeNiFeR- on Sept 15, 2004 21:39:04 GMT 1
Great show! I just love thoes Rage Rules matches..
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Post by diddlysquat on Sept 15, 2004 22:49:50 GMT 1
Another excellent show. The storylines keep getting better and better!
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Post by soulreaper on Sept 15, 2004 22:54:31 GMT 1
What color of the name did you want cactus... I'll be making that ASAP since I can already imagine the score
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Post by Wench on Sept 16, 2004 0:12:15 GMT 1
And where were YOU when SHinns hit Wench with the Sweet Shinns Music, hmmmmmmm?? Yeah, Reaper. I'm talking to you!
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Sept 16, 2004 1:12:53 GMT 1
Killer show...I'm looking forward to facing Da Man....it's a match that I've wanted for a while....
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Post by Cactus on Sept 16, 2004 8:16:52 GMT 1
What color of the name did you want cactus... I'll be making that ASAP since I can already imagine the score Red will do. . .. But really mate hold off as its rage rules mate and you will probably hand me my ass
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