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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 28, 2004 2:59:08 GMT 1
”Don’t Want to be An American Idiot“ hits and Cactus appears on top of the ramp sporting the International Championship. He walks down the ramp and proceeds into the ring. He holds the title high in the air, with one hand. The crowd boos Cactus as he waves Nation’s belt towards the fans. Cactus smiles while looking at the title. “Come Out and Play” hits and Insanity member, and one half of the Tag Team Champions, Red Ninja, makes his appearance. The crowd cheers as Ninja walks to the ring. He exchanges a few hand shakes with the fans and then rolls into the ring. He unstraps the belt from around his waist, stretches, and tests the ropes. The referee then calls for the bell. Singles Match Red Ninja vs. Cactus
[/color][/center] The two men immediately lock up. Ninja is quick to take Cactus to the mat, via belly to belly suplex. Ninja quickly applies a headlock on Cactus. As Ninja weakens Cactus, Cactus is able to make it to his feet. After repeated elbows, Cactus breaks the headlock. He sends himself off of the ropes but Ninja greets Cactus with a Sleeper Hold. The crowd cheers as the Insanity member remains on the offence since the beginning of the match. Cactus drops to one knee and the referee is quick to lift the arm of Cactus. After dropping twice, Cactus is able to keep his arm raised on the third attempt. Cactus staggers to his feet and is able to deliver a Side Suplex to Ninja. Both men are down. The referee starts the 10 count, but Ninja is able to get up just before 5. Ninja approaches Cactus as he lies on the mat. Ninja drops and elbow but Cactus rolls out of the way. Cactus, with the help of the ropes, makes it to his feet. As Ninja rises, Cactus nails Ninja back to the mat with a devastating clothesline. Cactus then kneels next to Ninja and begins to pound away at Ninja’s forehead. The referee is able to stop the attack. Cactus intimidates the referee by jolting towards him. Cactus then drops a few elbows on one half of the Tag Team Champions. He goes for the cover, but Ninja is able to kick out. Just as Ninja kicks out, Nation appears on top of the stage. The crowd roars as Nation approaches the ring. Cactus notices Nation and slides out of the ring. He grabs the International Belt and tries to remain on the opposite side of the ring. Nation circles the ring as the referee tries to tell Nation to retreat to the back. Cactus slides into the ring, with the belt. Nation hops onto the apron. The referee, distracted by Nation, has his back turned on the action in the ring. Red Ninja is now on his feet. Ninja attempts an impressive Roadhouse Kick, but Cactus ducks. Still holding the belt in his hand, Cactus lays Ninja out with a deafening shot to the head, with the title. Cactus then climbs to the top rope and nails Ninja with a Flying Elbow. Cactus slides the title to the corner and goes for the cover. The referee turns around and see the cover. He counts...1....2.....3. Cactus - 4.3 Promo Points + 1.2 Voting Points - 5.5 Red Ninja - 4.2667 Promo Points + 1.1 Voting Points - 5.3667[/i] Winner: Cactus[/b] Cactus receives the win. Nation enters the ring but Cactus scrambles to grab the belt. He succeeds. Cactus rolls out of the ring and hops the barricade. He runs through the crowd. Nation remains in the ring watching Cactus retreat with his International Title. Nation then looks towards the ring announcer and asks for the microphone. The announcer hands the microphone to Nation. Nation speaks.Nation:[/b] I’ve had it! I have reached my boiling point. Not only am I the International Champion, I am also the Rage Champion. And, what do I have to show for it? Not a damn thing. Cactus has my International Championship Title, and SoL has my Rage Championship Title. This is bogus! Suddenly, SoL appears on Zeroin. He has the Rage Title draped over his shoulder. The crowd boos as SoL smirks, nodding his head.SoL:[/b] You know, this belt looks a hell of a lot better on me. There is really nothing you can do Nation. You can hunt for it all you want, but you’ll always end up at that, same ol’, dead end. There is no WAY you will ever see this title again. Nation stares at Zeroin as “P.C.” hits. The crowd jumps to their feet as Shinn’s Theory is shown walking to the ring, carrying a microphone. He walks up the ring steps and stands by the side of Nation. He then looks towards Zeroin, where SoL remains smiling.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] SoL.... There is only one technicality to your statement. First of all, the belt is not yours. Second of all, at Winter Frenzy, you will be in action and you WILL bring that belt to the ring. If you fail to do so, we’ll all have a nice farewell party for you and you’ll end up on the unemployment line. The crowd cheers as Shinn’s is about to continue. SoL speaks first.SoL:[/b] Big freakin’ deal. So, I’ll keep one eye on my opponent and one eye on the belt. What a terrible solution Shinn’s. Shinn’s Theory:[/b] One eye on the belt and one on your opponent huh? SoL:[/b] That’s right. Shinn’s begins to laugh.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Well, come Winter Frenzy, I hope you grow a third eye...Because you will actually be facing two opponents. The crowd cheers as the smile disappears from SoL’s face.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Both you and Cactus will be bringing Nation’s belts to the ring to face, Nation, in a Falls Count Anywhere, Triple Threat. The crowd cheers as Shinn’s continues.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] That’s not all. There will be two falls in this match. Whoever gets the first pin fall will be declared the International Champion. However is lucky enough to get the second fall will be declared the Rage Champion. If you are pinned during the first fall, this doesn’t mean you’re eliminated. It just means you have NO chance in winning the Internation Championship. However, you STILL have a chance in winning the Rage Title. The crowd erupts at this huge Winter Frenzy announcement. Shinn’s exits the ring and proceeds to the back. Nation stands in the ring staring back at Zeroin. SoL walks out of the shot and Nation proceeds to the back. We now take you back to Zeroin as Red Ninja has arrived in the Insanity locker room.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 28, 2004 2:59:51 GMT 1
Red Ninja:[/b] Rat bastard! I had him from the start! He had to use a damn foreign object to get the win. How god damn typical! Spaz:[/b] Yea man...Totally lame. But, I have some news for you. Red Ninja plops himself onto the couch and begins to unlace his boots.Red Ninja:[/b] I could care less right now man. I’m so ticked off about tonight’s match. Spaz:[/b] It was HeX. Not paying much attention to his Tag Team Partner, Red Ninja responds.Red Ninja:[/b] Who was HeX? Spaz:[/b] Addryd’s accomplice last week on Blitz! Ninja immediately stands.Red Ninja:[/b] HeX huh? I say we hunt that son of a bitch down tonight! Spaz:[/b] I’ve got something even better. I convinced Shinn’s Theory to sign a Tag Team Title match for Winter Frenzy. We will be defending the titles against Addryd and HeX! Red Ninja smiles as the two men smack fists. Diddly Squat then enters the frame. The crowd cheers as Diddly joins in.Diddly Squat:[/b] Looks like we’ll all have matches at Winter Frenzy. Mystery voice? Pfffft! Who does Essex think he’s fooling. I’m the most educated man this company has every seen! Winter Frenzy will be a night The Insanity will dominate. All three men nod as we now take you back to ringside.”Fight Music” hits as Blood Pack members, Aladdin “The Tiger”, and his partner, SIMZ, appears. They are welcomed by the P2PW fans with a mixed reaction. The two men jog to the ring and slide in. “Jesus Walks” hits as Blood Pack member, Bishop Pastor Deacon Dollar Bill, appears. He walks to the ring and enters. The three men all look around at one another. “Wake Up” hits and Stevo316 appears from behind the curtain. He removes his vest before entering the ring. He stomps up the ring steps and enters the ring. He immediately attacks SIMZ and the referee calls for the bell. Aladdin and Dollar Bill occupy their respective corners. Tag Team Match “The Blood Pack” - Aladdin “The Tiger” & Peter “SIMZ” Cinnamond vs. Stevo316 & Bishop Pastor Dollar Bill
[/color][/center] Stevo316 stomps SIMZ to the mat. He then backs off and nails SIMZ with a Falling Fist to the neck. Stevo316 mocks Aladdin who tries to enter the ring, but is held back by the referee. Stevo316 continues to attack SIMZ. Stevo316 drags SIMZ into his corner. Instead of tagging in his partner, Stevo316 climbs to the second rope and drops a knee on the head of SIMZ. Stevo316 picks SIMZ up and send his off of the ropes. SIMZ springs back, ducking a clothesline. SIMZ bounces back and lands a Flying Forearm to Stevo316. SIMZ then dives and tags in his partner. Aladdin enters the ring and drops a leg on Stevo316. He goes for the cover but is unsuccessful. He aids Stevo316 to his feat and nails him with a Arm Wrench to Heel Kick. Stevo316 hits the mat and Aladdin goes for another cover. Stevo316 kicks out, once again. Aladdin then leans back into the corner. He urges Stevo316 to make a tag to his partner. Stevo316 tags in Dollar Bill. Before Stevo316 can exit the ring, Dollar Bill sets his partner up for the Crucification. He nails the devastating move. The referee, looking very confused, has no call. Dollar Bill is now the legal man. SIMZ runs to the opposite side of the ring and tosses the announcer to the floor. He then slides into the ring with a steel chair. He places the chair over the head of Stevo316. Dollar Bill proceeds to the top rope and stomps on the chair. The referee doesn’t know how to call this match. Dollar Bill rolls Stevo316 out of the ring and demands the referee to count. The referee counts out Stevo316 and declares Aladdin and SIMZ the winners. The Blood Pack - Aladdin “The Tiger” & SIMZ - 6.1667 Promo Points + 1.5 Voting Points - 7.6667 Stevo316 - Bishop Pastor Dollar Bill - 6.2333 Promo Points + 0.8 Voting Points - 6.3133[/i] Winners: The Blood Pack - Aladdin “The Tiger” & SIMZ[/b] Dollar Bill grabs the microphone.Dollar Bill:[/b] Blood IS thicker than water. Nothing, and nobody will EVER come between the Blood Pack. Who’s the leader you ask? The “blood” leads us. We are one. SIMZ grabs the microphone.SMIZ:[/b] Stevo316 is just a small warning to all of those who step in our way. The Blood Pack will soon be at the top of every P2PW Marquee! SIMZ hands the microphone to Aladdin.Aladdin:[/b] But this is just the beginning. Soon, the Pack will grow in numbers. Keep your eyes open. The Blood Pack can and WILL not be screwed with. With that said, Aladdin drops the microphone and the three Blood Pack members head to the back. He now take you to Zeroin, where Shinn’s Theory is shown walking towards his office.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 28, 2004 3:01:13 GMT 1
Shinn’s rounds a corner and bumps into Soul Reaper, the current P2PW World Champion.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Getting anxious for tonight’s main event?
Soul Reaper:[/b] I could care less who wins. Either way, I’ll be walking out of Frenzy, the P2PW World Champion.
Shinn’s snickers.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] You know, over the last year you have made a lot of enemies. I gotta tell you, even some of the new guys despise you.
Soul Reaper:[/b] Well, I aim to please.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] So do I. That is why I am making the Main Event at Winter Frenzy a Lumberjack Match.
Shinn’s pats Reaper on the shoulder and walks off. Reaper watches Theory walk off. His expression is void. Reaper is emotionless.
Shinn’s Theory proceeds down the hall and into his office. He opens the door only to find SoundScream and Tyler Stone helping themselves to Theory’s private lounge. Without becoming enraged, Shinn’s walks over the sits behind his desk.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Enjoying the place I see.
SoundScream:[/b] Yep.
Shinn’s looks towards Tyler Stone.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Wow. Face to face with a man the likes to attack me from behind with chairs. Intersting...
Tyler continues to stare at Shinn’s Theory. Shinn’s smiles at Tyler then looks towards The Decepticons’ leader.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] So, what can I do for you?
SoundScream:[/b] I’m just here to make sure Tyler get’s what he wants.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] And what’s that?
SoundScream:[/b] A one on one match with you at Frenzy.
Shinn’s leans back in his seat and looks towards Tyler.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Is that something you really want?
SoundScream:[/b] It’s whatWE want.
Shinn’s looks towards SoundScream and cocks an eyebrow.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Does Tyler have some sort of embarrassing speech impediment or can he talk for himself?
SoundScream stands up and approaches Theory’s desk.
SoundScream:[/b] I am the damn leader of the Decepticons. I speak for us all.
Tyler immediately stands up and walks in front of SoundScream.
Tyler Stone:[/b] I want this match Shinn’s. I know you’ve been avoiding me. You’ve been avoiding me because you KNOW I am the best damn technical wrestler this federation has and WILL ever see.
Shinn’s stands up from behind his desk.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] I guess we’ll soon find out just how well your ability in the ring is compared to mine. Consider the match signed for Winter Frenzy.
Tyler smiles and begins to rub his hands. SoundScream nods and slaps Tyler on the back.
SoundScream:[/b] It’s done...Let’s go Stone.
As the two men walk out, Shinn’s reaches into his desk and grabs long copper pipe and shoves it down the back of his pants. He sneaks up behind Tyler and taps him on the shoulder. Tyler turns around.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] You know Tyler, you run your mouth about being the master of submission. I think I’ll brighten your day and make our match a Submission Only Match.
Tyler Stone begins to laugh. Be bends down in laughter. Shinn’s grabs the pipe from his pants and nails Tyler on the back of the head with it. Tyler is immediately knocked out. SoundScream looks as though he is about to pounce. Shinn’s dangles the pipe in his hand as he looks towards SoundScream. SoundScream backs down and walks away, leaving his Decepticon Member out cold.
Shinn’s is now shown heading to the staging area. He drops the pipe and walks out into the arena. The fans cheer as Shinn’s walks to the ring, without his theme playing. He enters the ring and is handed a microphone.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] You are ALL about to witness the biggest match in TNT history!
The crowd violently cheers as Shinn’s continues.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Before the match starts, I need to make a small, worthless, meaningless, contemptible, barren, unessential, unimportant, despicable, pointless announcement.
The crowd quiets down as they wait for the announcement.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] While I was trying to decide the Winter Frenzy card, Wench was high on my priority. After finally freed from her cage, she impressed some of the higher-ups in her first match back. Even with her arm in a cast, she won her first match back. So, I was think to myself: “Shinn’s? What should you do with Wench at Winter Frenzy?”. I gave it plenty of thought and was going to have Wench face Addryd. I really thought she would want to get her hands on the man who screwed with her for so long.
The crowd remains silent as Shinn’s Theory continues.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] After speaking to Wench about this, she disagreed. She wanted to align herself with Addryd. This was for obvious reasons. Wench knew Addryd would kick the holy hell out of her at Winter Frenzy. After whining for a few minutes, which felt like a lifetime, Wench has decided to take her ball and go home. Instead of, what I thought was going to be a decent push for her, she packed her things and walked out of the federation.
The crowd cheers as Shinn’s continues.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] At first, I thought this was a huge loss. But, now that I think about it, this is a huge gain. No more “pain in the ass requests” from a women who could barely pull her weight in the ring.
The crowd laughs as Theory continues.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] She didn’t get what she wanted, ONCE. So, she quit. That doesn’t surprise me. Ever since Apocalypse, I could see a side of her that was so weak, even I thought she would be driven into the ground at the drop of a feather. In any event, she left the P2PW and is now circulating a handful of different federations. I already feel sorry for the owners of these federations. I can hear her now: “I want this! I want that! Wahhh Wahhh!”. I can also see her stuck in the “mid-to-low” level of competition in all of these federations. So, in closing, I would like to wish Wench the best of luck. However, I want to wish better luck to her employers. Her employers are the people that will need the most luck, dealing with talent such as herself.
The crowd cheers as Shinn’s laughs to himself.
Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Now, with that said, lets get this Main Event started!!
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 28, 2004 3:03:20 GMT 1
”Pardon Me” hits and Stare appears. The crowd erupts as he walks down the ramp. Shinn’s Theory proceeds up the ring as Stare descends. The two men slap hands. Shinn’s disappears into the back. Stare enters the ring. The crowd is deafening as the General Manager of Blitz! occupies the ring. He poses in all four corners for the fans.”The Sweetness” hits and Starcrunch explodes from behind the curtain. The crowd remains deafening has Starcrunch jogs to the ring, smiling. She slides in and poses for her fans. Stare leans into a corner as Starcrunch continues to pose.”It’s So Easy” hits and Mastadon appears. The crowd cheers as he heads to the ring. He enters the ring and looks towards 2 of his opponents for the night. Without hesitation, Mastadon walks towards Stare and gives him a quick look. He does the same for Starcrunch. He then raises both fists and the crowd snaps pictures of the big man.The lights dim in the arena and “Evil Unlimited” flashes across Zeroin. Now, the only member of Evil Unlimited, besides the P2PW World Champion, appears. “Duality” echos throughout the arena as Hellspawn makes his way to the ring. He slowly enters the ring. The lights brighten and the referee is heard explaining the rules to all of the competitors. The four seem to be arguing. The referee leans out of the ring and demands something from one of the ringside P2PW Staff members. The staff member hands the referee a coin. The referee then pulls Starcrunch and Mastadon aside. He flips the coin while Mastadon calls. The coin hits the mat and Mastadon retreats into his respective corner. The referee then approaches Hellspawn and Stare. He flips the coin. Stare calls. Stare wins the toss and Hellspawn occupies his assigned corner. Stare and Starcrunch are declared the first two superstars who will start the match. The referee calls for the bell. Our Main Event is underway. Main Event - Fatal Four Way Elimination Match (Winner becomes number one contender for the World Title) Mastadon vs. Stare vs. Hellspawn vs. Starcrunch
[/color][/center] The two circle around the ring. They finally lock up. Stare quickly takes Starcrunch down with an Arm Drag. He wrenches her arm. She nips up and leaps onto the shoulder’s of Stare. He performs a Hurricanrana, sending Stare to the mat. The crowd “ooooooooo’s” as Starcrunch hops around the ring, anxious to continue the fight. Stare steps to his feet. Hellspawn reaches in and tags himself in. Stare, looking very upset, is forced to exit the ring. Hellspawn enters and eyeballs Starcrunch with an evil look. Hellspawn runs towards Starcrunch, but she takes him down with a quick leg sweep. He quickly gets up and sprints towards her once more. She takes Hellspawn down with a Mexican Arm Drag. The crowd cheers as Starcrunch is now dominating Hellspawn. Starcrunch looks towards Mastadon, who is eager to get involved. Starcrunch makes the tag. The crowd erupts as Mastadon enters the ring. Mastadon aids Hellspawn to his feet. He then tosses him into a massive bear hug. After a few moments, Mastadon rams Hellspawn into the turnbuckle. Hellspawn falls to the mat. Starcrunch reaches in and tags herself in. Mastadon does not look happy as he is forced to his corner. Starcrunch climbs to the top rope and performs a Swanton Bomb onto Hellspawn. The crowd cheers as she stalks Hellspawn. She backs herself up, signaling for the Crunch Cutter. The fans hop to their feet. Mastadon returns by tagging himself in. Starcrunch shoves Mastadon, but the big man doesn’t budge. He waits for Hellspawn to rise to his feet. Hellspawn staggers to his feet. Mastadon performs The Stampede and covers the Evil Unlimited member. He gets the pin fall and we are now down to three participants. Hellspawn has been Eliminated[/b] Stare enters the ring and locks up with Mastadon. Mastadon shoves Stare to the mat. Stare retaliates by approaching Mastadon tossing the big man into a Full Nelson. Amazingly enough, Stare turns the Full Nelson into a Full Nelson Suplex. The crowd is in awe as Stare shows serious strength. He goes for the cover but Mastadon kicks out. Stare aids Mastadon to his feet. He then Mastadon with a Tornado Punch. Mastadon doesn’t fall to the mat. Instead, he staggers into Starcrunch’s corner. She tags herself in. Now, Stare and Starcrunch will face off for the second time tonight. Stare and Starcrunch lock up. Stare sends her into the far corner and greets her with a running clothesline. Starcrunch staggers out of the corner. Stare nails a DDT and goes for the pin. We have a near fall. Starcrunch was able to kick out. Stare picks Starcrunch up by the hair and performs a long standing suplex. This is reversed into a roll up by Starcrunch. Stare kicks out just after the one count. Both superstars make it to their feet. Starcrunch runs towards Stare. Stare ducks a high knee. Starcrunch bounces off the ropes but Mastadon tags himself in. Stare nails Starcrunch with a Power Bomb and goes for the cover. The referee refuses to count as he saw the blind tag. Mastadon enters the ring and lays out Stare with a devastating shoulder block. Starcrunch rolls out of the ring. Mastadon stomps Stare. He then springs himself off of the ropes and hits a huge Splash. Stare is able to kick out just before the three count. Mastadon picks Stare up and tosses him over his shoulder. He performs a running Power Slam and goes for another cover. Stare is able to get a foot on the rope to break the count. Starcrunch is now in her corner. She leans in and tags Stare. Mastadon does not see this. Starcrunch climbs to the top rope and waits for Mastadon to turn around. As he does, she nails him with a Missel Drop Kick. Mastadon does not fall to the mat. Starcrunch then performs the StarKO to Mastadon. The referee counts to three and we are down to our final 2. Mastadon has been Eliminated[/b] Starcrunch notices that Stare is still feeling the effects of the Power Slam delivered by Mastadon earlier. She quickly runs over to Stare and attempts a cover. Stare kicks out just after 2. Starcrunch aids Stare to his feet. She sends him off the ropes and nails him with a Back Body Drop. She then pounces on Stare and begins to pound away. She stops the pounding just before the referee reaches the 5 count. Starcrunch aids Stare to his feet. She sends him off the ropes but is greeted by a Choke Slam. Starcrunch smacks the mat and Stare falls as well. The referee begins the ten count. Just after the 9 count, Stare is able to toss his hand over Starcrunch’s chest. The referee counts....1.....2......Starcrunch kicks out! Both competitors are now feeling the effects of the match. Breathless, both stand up. They slowly exchange blow after blow. Finally, Starcrunch ducks a right hand and nails Stare with a Reverse Neck Breaker. She covers the GM of Blitz! The referee counts.....1......2.........Stare kicks out. The fans are on their feet as this match has been a whirl win of excitement. Frustrated, Starcrunch aids Stare to his feet. She attempts a Crunch Cutter but Stare shoves her into the corner. She nails the turnbuckle, chest first. She staggers backwards. Stare performs a reverse Scoop Slam. Starcrunch’s face bounces off of the mat. He rolls her over and goes for the cover.....1......2.....2.5..2.6..2.7 (HA! I kill me).....Starcrunch kicks out! Stare, sporting a look of amazement, rises to his feet. He waits for Starcrunch to make it to her feet on her own. He tosses Starcrunch over his shoulders and performs The Staredown. The crowd cheers as he goes for the cover. 1.......2.........Foot on the rope! The crowd is deafening. Stare drags Starcrunch into the center of the ring and locks on the Floored. The crowd is on their feet as Starcrunch is about to tap out. She claws her way to the ropes, but Stare is able to drag her back to the center. Starcrunch has no option but to tap out. The referee calls for the bell. Starcrunch has been Eliminated[/b] Mastadon - 3.25 Promo Points + 0.8 Voting Points - 4.05 Stare - 4.85 Promo Points + 0.7 Voting Points - 5.55 Hellspawn - 0.0 Promo Points + 0.1 Voting Points - 0.1 Starcrunch - 4.3 Promo Points + 0.7 Voting Points - 5.0[/i] Winner - Stare[/b] The crowd jumps to their feet as Stare staggers around the ring, raising his hand, breathlessly. We now have out number one contender for the World Title. Stare then kneels next to Starcrunch. He helps her to her feet. She is very limp, but is able to lift an arm for the fans. The fans are applauding both superstars. Suddenly the lights go out and Zeroin is overtaken by the following message.[glow=red,2,300]Ashes to Ashes Dust to Dust You’ve Just Sealed Your Fate.... [/glow] The camera pans in on Stare, who is seen reading the cryptic message.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 28, 2004 3:03:46 GMT 1
Promo Ratings:[/b][/u]
Shinn’s Theory’s Ratings:[/b][/u]
Red Ninja - 4.4 (I liked this a lot. Nice concept. It’s always fun to read unique promos, and this was one of them.) Cactus - 4.2 (Liked how you covered a wide range of events. Your promos are always a good read.)
Aladdin - 3.0 (Not too bad. Same concept as Dollar Bill and SIMZ’ promos. I think once you become a “true clique” you all will find something unique to write about. Being original is key to writing a promo.) SIMZ - 2.5 (Tough read. I try not to deduct for grammar, but if you were to add more punctuation it would be flow together and would be easier to read. Just so you know, the P2PW interviewer is Kacey Garcia. That’s no big deal though. 2.5 is the middle of the road. I think, with time, you’ll get into the swing of things.) Stevo316 - 2.0 (I feel you didn’t put much thought into the promo at all. It’s obvious you read the other promos, regarding your match. That was the only thing that bumped this promo from a 1.5 to a 2.0) Bishop Pastor Deacon Dollar Bill - 4.1 (Nice work. Being your first promo in the P2PW, this was a very well written one. It makes it easier to establish yourself when your introduction is visible. Good stuff.)
Mastadon - 3.0 (Right to the point. You addressed all of your opponents and the match itself. Decent promo.) Stare - 4.9 (Excellent. Brilliant. Unique. The positive adjectives could go on and on. What more can I say? It was pure genius. I have no criticism.) Hellspawn - 0.0 (Man, I was hoping to read a great promo from you. Hopefully next time.) Starcrunch - 4.4 (Nice way to help the unification of the divisions. It’s obvious you’ll be a major player. I totally dug this promo.)
Stare’s Ratings:[/b][/u]
Red Ninja --- 4.2 (Solid promo. There were a couple of parts that needed to be re-worded due to spelling mistake, or words being left out It made a little of it hard to read. But, overall, it was good. Just proofread your promo after you write it, and you should catch those mistakes. Good job, adn good emphasis on the plot. Cactus --- 4.4 (Killer promo. You said everything that needed to be said that concerned you. You even kept yourself in the World Title hunt a bit, which I thought was excellently done. Your emphasis on being the nly man to pin Nation was great too. Awesome job!)
Aladdin --- 3.5 (you lost me in some of the narration. People switching back and forth with who they're fighting was way off course from anything realistic. But, overall, it was a well organize promo, and the dialogue was good. Keep it up)SIMZ --- 3.0 (couldn't read this for the most part. You need to work on your punctuation pronto! It was hard to understand anything you were saying, as the run-on sentences killed me. Defo use comma's better. They add feeling to a promo where pauses need to be, and they're more important than you think.) Stevo --- 3.0 (honestly not a bad promo. It was a little on the short side, but it's about quality and not quantity. I will look for more lengthy stuff as we go, but this short promo was to the point, and addressed what needed to be and left it at that. Good job) Dollar Bill --- 4.0 (good introduction to your character. Some funny spots, and really nothing needed to be changed from what I saw. Just need to add some more uniqueness, but being an introduction promo, it's hard to do that. Good job)
Mastadon --- N/A Stare --- N/A Hellspawn --- N/A Starcrunch --- N/A
Rocky’s Ratings:[/b][/u]
Red Ninja - 4.2 (I really enjoyed this. It started off light hearted and gradually became more and more intense. You used Diddly's character very well as a feed off for your own character. Me likes.) Cactus - 4.3 (Good promo. You rolled everything into one nicely, as well as brining back a little bit of history here and there. So many small topics covered in one, very well written promo gives it this score. Nice one.)
Aladdin - 3.5 (So, this group isn't happening then? Fair nuff. Nice promo. As long as you had permission from SIMZ and Bishop to attack them, then it's all good. Nicely written.) Simz - 3 (There is alot of potential in these. Watch the spelling mistakes as they were everywhere. As I said though, it has potential. Good job.) Stevo316 - 1.5 (There was nothing here to really give a good mark. Just like that *clicks fingers* it was over in a flash. This was a brief statement, not a competitive promo.) Bishop - 4.1 (Nice debut promo. Original for the most part and very entertaining. I like it.)
Mastadon - 3.5 (You really needed to write a better promo, as you are more than capable. It just felt reading it, you wrote it like a formality that you were going to lose. You seemed content with that.) Stare - 4.8 (Very nice. Definitely the best you've written since your return, IMO. I think the score speaks for itself.) Hellspawn - Starcrunch - 4.2 (Well done. I think you will make a big impact on the inter-gender scene if you continue on this good writing streak.)
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Post by Stare on Dec 28, 2004 3:30:01 GMT 1
nice show Shinns.
Worth the wait as always . . . when I had to wait, anyways.
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Dec 28, 2004 4:29:24 GMT 1
Nice.
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Post by Hercules on Dec 28, 2004 5:09:39 GMT 1
As always my good man, great show. Bravo, bravo.
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Post by LK on Dec 28, 2004 5:18:55 GMT 1
Good TNT, maybe the best yet.
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Post by spaz on Dec 28, 2004 9:37:39 GMT 1
good show, better luck next time ninj
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Post by stocko on Dec 28, 2004 14:59:31 GMT 1
good show peeps!
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Post by brockandsable on Dec 28, 2004 15:18:10 GMT 1
Good show Shinn's. I like the triple threat, two falls for both titles idea - much in line with a match at Wrestlemania 2000 involving Chris Jericho, Kurt Angle and Chris Benoit. And for a minute there, you had me thinking StarCrunch would compete for the World Title at Winter Frency. Again, good storytelling, keep it coming brotha.
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Post by Reaper on Dec 28, 2004 15:53:50 GMT 1
Great show, Shinn's. Nicely done.
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Post by Red Ninja on Dec 28, 2004 20:59:03 GMT 1
Im a little suprised about how close I was to winning.
Great show guys
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Post by Cactus on Dec 28, 2004 21:44:59 GMT 1
Nice show, and you used my idea for nations belts at WF, one question because it will be for the rage belt as well wil it only be on promos?
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 28, 2004 22:09:56 GMT 1
The idea was thought up before you posted it. It was Rocky or Stare's idea. I forget who.
Anyway, a match of that caliber will be based strictly on Promos. No voting on your match fellas!
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Dec 29, 2004 0:19:06 GMT 1
Is the full Frenzy card gonna come out at Blitz?
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Post by Reaper on Dec 29, 2004 0:53:11 GMT 1
Not to sound like a praise hog, but it was my idea. I also suggested that the fall for the IN title be taken on the people's votes and the RAGE title be decided on the promo scores.
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Post by Stare on Dec 29, 2004 4:56:23 GMT 1
I was about to make that post just now, but Rocky spelled it out.
And it was 100% Rocky's idea, but Shinn's has the memory of a 90 year old who keeps hitting himself with a bat in the head.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 29, 2004 5:59:51 GMT 1
^ That better be a good thing.
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Post by Drow on Dec 29, 2004 12:41:18 GMT 1
Great Show guys. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Cactus on Dec 29, 2004 14:10:50 GMT 1
Not to sound like a praise hog, but it was my idea. I also suggested that the fall for the IN title be taken on the people's votes and the RAGE title be decided on the promo scores. I like that idea I was thinking the same thing but great minds and all that
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 29, 2004 18:35:07 GMT 1
Is the full Frenzy card gonna come out at Blitz? By Blitz! all the matches will be announced.
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Post by Scream on Jan 21, 2005 21:40:01 GMT 1
I want my TNT!!!!!!
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Post by Hercules on Jan 21, 2005 21:54:12 GMT 1
Ditto.
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