P2PW's TNT (1/31) Results!

[shinnstheory]

The entire arena buzzes as "Battleflag" fades away. The crowd waits patiently for the opening match of the night. Zeroin flashes the TNT logo as staff members slide two stereo monitors into the ring. A microphone is placed in the center of the ring by a P2PW Stagehand. He exits the ring and the crowd waits in anticipation.

As the crowd becomes more and more tense, “Pardon Me” hits and the entire arena explodes. The fans are on their feet as P2PW’s new World Champion, Stare, emerges from behind the curtain with the title draped over his shoulder. He tightly grabs the title and walks to the right side of the stage. He holds the title high while the fans mark out. He then proceeds to the left side of the ramp, displaying the title in the same manner. The fans greet the new champion with one of the biggest ovations the P2PW has seen to date.

Stare walks down the ramp and up the ring steps. He enters the ring and immediately hits the far corner. He holds his title high as the camera flashes are blinding. He greets each corner as the fans continue to praise him. He advances to the center of the ring and picks up the microphone. “Pardon Me” fades as the arena is still loud as hell. Before speaking Stare tries to calm the crowd down. After a few moments, Stare speaks.

Stare:[/b] And once again, a long running P2PW Champion has fallen to me.

The crowd erupts.

Stare:[/b] This time... This time things will be different. I’m here to stay, and I am here to successfully defend MY World Championship Title!

The crowd pops as Stare smiles, looking over the jam-packed arena.

Stare:[/b] A lot has changed for me. Now that I am the World Champion, I am the hunted. I’m officially the P2PW Prey. On top of that, I still have to uphold my current position of General Manager of Blitz! That’s a lot on one plate. However, if there is any person more suited for this role, it is myself.

The crowd cheers and Stare continues.

Stare:[/b] Each and every superstar in the back will know that I am a fighting champion and a fair General Manager. On this week’s Blitz! I will prove that to everyone.

Stare pauses for a moment the begins to laugh to himself.

Stare:[/b] I read a recent article that brought tears of laughter to my eyes. WWE’s own, “Da Man”, has publically stated that the match was a fix. Because I hold some authority, here in the P2PW, he believes I was given a quick push to the top. He believes Shinn’s and I had this planned all along. The fact is, we didn’t. I earned this title on my own. I feel “Da Man’s” comments were just his way of moaning about authority always being given the breaks. I think that all stems back to Co-Owner, Shinn’s Theory, destroying Da Man’s chances at becoming World Champion by defeating him at last years Apocalypse Pay-Per-View. But hey, the past is the past. It’s now time to look ahead. In fact, even though I did hold this title before, this the first TNT I make my presence sporting this belt. So, I say... we make tonight a special night. Tonight we celebrate the victory of a true champion as well as the downfall of a, for lack of better words, lame champion. So, right here....right now... I say we ....

The lights go out in the arena. “For Whom the Bell Tolls” hits and the crowd begins to boo. Red sparks fall from the rafters into the ring, raining on our new World Champion. A darked hooded outline appears on top of the ramp. Former champion, Soul Reaper, slowly walks to the bottom of the ramp. His music stops and the lights come back on. Soul Reaper remains hooded, looking towards the floor.

Stare:[/b] Well, I should have know you’d come out.

Stare shakes his head as the crowd boos.

Stare:[/b] Have you come to ask for a rematch?

Soul Reaper remains silent, still looking at the floor.

Stare:[/b] No? Have you come to celebrate with the rest of us? Hell, the more the merrier.

Stare gets a few laughs from the crowd. Suddenly, the crowd is heard roaring. The hooded man at the bottom of the ramp snaps his head back. The man we thought was Soul Reaper is, in fact, P2PW’s newest trainee Black Twilight. Suddenly, the real Soul Reaper slides into the ring behind Stare and nails him with a chair shot to the back. The champion falls to the mat. Black Twilight makes his way to the back as the crowd boos.

In the ring, Stare makes it to his feet, stunned. Soul Reaper cracks him over the head with another chair shot. Stare is immediately busted open. Soul Reaper, sporting an evil grin, drops the chair to the mat. He then slides out of the ring. He removes the monitors from the announce table. He then whips the banner up, exposing what is under the ring. He pulls out a 15 foot ladder and sets it up on the outside. Soul Reaper then roles back into the ring.

Reaper grabs Stare and leads him out of the ring. Reaper then walks up the ladder, backwards, leading Stare with him. Reaper gets to the near top and tosses the bloody head of Stare in between his legs. The crowd boos as Soul Reaper looks around the arena. Reaper then performs a power bomb on Stare. Stare is thrown for the near top of the ladder through the announce table. The table smashes to pieces. Soul Reaper climbs down the ladder and stands over an unconscious Stare. “For Whom the Bell Tolls” hits. The crowd boos Reaper as he is about to leave. Before exiting, Reaper picks up one of the monitors and slams it down onto the head of our new World Champion. Soul Reaper exits as EMTs rush to the ring. The EMTs are shown carefully examining Stare. They notice how badly he is injured. They gently place a neck brace around Stare’s neck. The ETMs then carefully place Stare onto a hard board and lift him onto a stretcher. The fans cheer for Stare as he is wheeled out of the arena. Zeroin now takes us backstage. We see Stare being placed into an ambulance and rushed to the local emergency room. The arena is basically silent.

[shinnstheory]

The silence is broken by “My World”. The fans boo as Simz, and the rest of the Blood Pack, make their way to the ring. All four members enter the ring. Simz is handed a microphone. As the crowd boos, Simz speaks.

Simz:[/b] Well, here we all are, in person. The Blood Pack. It doesn’t get any better than us. But, for some reason I have been placed in a singles match against Starcrunch? I know you have to pay your dues to make it in this industry, but Starcrunch? Is Shinn’s serious? This is a step backwards for myself, and the Blood Pack. Rocky made this match into a mini-lumberjack match, which is cool. I’m cool with that. You guys?

Simz takes a glance towards the three other Blood Pack members. All three nod.

Simz[/b] I suppose I’ll just have to get this job done early, wipe my hands clean after this victory, and move on to better talent...

”The Sweetness” hits and to the surprise of the crowd, Shinn’s Theory appears on top of the ramp without Starcrunch. The crowd pops as Shinn’s Theory gives the classic “double point” towards the curtain. Starcrunch explodes from behind the and the crowd goes nuts. She walks down the ramp. Shinn’s Theory keeps his distance and walks behind her. Starcrunch gets to the bottom of the ramp. She looks up as all four members of the Blood Pack are taunting her to enter. Starcrunch looks back towards Shinn’s. Shinn’s shrugs. Showing no fear, Starcrunch enters the ring, alone. She walks through the entire Blood Pack and hits the far corner. The crowd cheers as Starcrunch poses for her fans. Her music fades away and Starcrunch is left standing in the ring with the rest of the Blood Pack.

The referee urges the Blood Pack to exit the ring. To much of the crowd’s surprise, they oblige. One one side of the ring, the Blood Pack stands. On the other side, Shinn’s Theory stands. The referee calls for the bell and this match his now underway.

Mini-Lumberjack Singles Match
Starcrunch vs. Blood Pack Member - SIMZ
(Lumberjacks will include Aladdin “The Tiger”, Bishop Pastor Deacon Dollar Bill, “The Tiger” Vegeta & Shinn’s Theory)

Starcrunch sets her sights on Simz. Simz strolls around the ring. He reaches out towards Starcrunch, slapping her hand as he continues to scroll around the ring. It appears Simz is toying with the her. Starcrunch jolts at Simz, who dodges. He continues to taunt Starcrunch. Finally, Starcrunch is able to trap Simz in a corner. She approaches him to lock up. Instead, Simz delivers a low knee. He then performs a bulldog on Starcrunch. After Starcrunch slams, head first, onto the mat Simz rolls her out of the ring and quickly distracts the referee. Dollar Bill and Vegeta begin to assault Starcrunch. Shinn’s jogs to their side of the ring but is met, half way, by Aladdin. They stare at one another. Dollar Bill rolls Starcrunch back into the ring. Shinn’s them steps back and occupies his side of the ring as Aladdin does the same..

Simz aids Starcrunch to her feet. He then props her onto the top rope. He climbs to the second rope. The then suplexs Starcrunch to the mat. Simz goes for the cover, but Starcrunch is able to kick out. Again, Simz aids Starcrunch to her feet. He sends her off of the ropes. Aladdin reaches in and grabs a hold of her leg. She slams to the mat and the referee warns Aladdin. Shinn’s Theory approaches Aladdin. The two have a few words then retreat to opposite sides of the ring.

Simz drops a few elbows on the back of Starcrunch’s neck. He then pulls her up by her hair. He performs a vertical suplex on her. He then lays on the mat and applies a tight leg scissors hold. Starcrunch tries to muscle out of the move but can not. The referee is in position to make the call, if Starcrunch were to forfeit. Starcrunch refuses. Instead, Starcrunch inches her way towards the ropes. She is inches away. Vegeta hops onto the ring apron to distract the referee. Shinn’s finds the opportunity to grab Starcrunch’s hand and pull her to the rope. She muckles onto the bottom rope. Shinn’s Theory holds her hand tightly on the rope, waiting for the referee to return. Vegeta still has the referee distracted. Dollar Bill is shown running around the ring. Just as he approaches Shinn’s, he is met with Sweet Shinn’s Music. Shinn’s has not taken his hand off of Starcrunch, still making sure her hand is on the rope. As Dollar Bill slams to the mats on the outside, Aladdin jogs around the ring, opposite of the side Dollar Bill had. Shinn’s, looking down at Dollar Bill and holding the hand of Starcrunch, is suddenly surprised as Aladdin reaches into his tights and straps on a set of brass knuckles. He lands a hard right to the left temple of Shinn’s, who immediately falls next to Dollar Bill.

With Shinn’s now out of the picture, and Dollar Bill still knocked out, it seems as though The Bloodpack has this match wrapped up. Aladdin looks towards Starcrunch’s hand, which is still muckled onto the rope. Simz still has her in a tight leg scissors. As Aladdin reaches up to free Starcrunch’s hand from the rope, Stevo316 hops over the barricade. He spins Aladdin around and deliver a Stunner to him. Stevo316 then slides into the ring. He breaks the scissor hold and stands Simz up. With one kick to the gut, another Stunner is performed. Stevo316 then slides out of the ring and jogs over to the opposite side. He pulls Vegeta off of the ring apron and the two men begin exchanging blow after blow.

In the ring, Starcrunch, very winded, makes it to her feet. She climbs to the top rope and lands a 5 Star Frog Splash on Simz. She goes for the cover but the referee is now on the outside trying to break Stevo316 and Vegeta up. Starcrunch then stands and climbs to the top rope. She looks to Vegeta on the outside. She then leaps off of the top rope and nails Vegeta with a Moonsault. On the opposite side of the ring, Dollar Bill has come to and is now staggering to his feet. Starcrunch then slides into the ring and waits for Simz to come to his feet. As he does, Starcrunch nails him with a StarKO. She goes for the pin. The referee slides into the ring and begins the count. 1.....2.....Simz is pulled out of the ring by Dollar Bill. Stevo316 then approaches Dollar Bill and performs a third Stunner. Shinn’s Theory and Aladdin both begin to stir about. Shinn’s makes it to his feet as Aladdin does the same. Aladdin takes another swing at Shinn’s with the brass knuckles still occupying his hand. Shinn’s ducks and Aladdin nails Stevo316, who was standing just behind Shinn’s Theory. Shinn’s Theory then kicks Aladdin in the gut and performs a Theory Driver on the outside.

The crowd goes nuts as Starcrunch has aided Simz to his feet, inside the ring. She performs the Star Cruncher on the Blood Pack member and attempts a pin. She gets the three count and the referee calls for the bell.

Starcrunch - 2.8333 Promo Points + 1.4 Voting Points - 4.2333
SIMZ - 2.8333 Promo Points + 0.9 Voting Points - 3.7333[/I]

Winner: Starcrunch[/b]

Shinn’s Theory slides into the ring to celebrate with Starcrunch. Starcrunch then explains to Shinn’s that Stevo316 helped lumberjack the match. Shinn’s Theory, showing signs of concern, rolls out of the ring. He tends to Stevo316. Steveo316 is able to make it to his feet. Both men enter the ring. Starcrunch thanks Stevo316 for all he has done. Shinn’s does the same. The three join hands and raise them in victory. Suddenly, Stevo316 kicks Shinn’s Theory in the gut and Stuns him. The crowd boos as Stevo316 smiles while looking down at Shinn’s Theory. Starcrunch looks very surprised. Steveo316 glances at her for a moment then proceeds to exit the ring. Stevo316 walks to the back as Starcrunch is shown tending to Shinn’s Theory. Zeroin now takes us backstage.

[shinnstheory]

Backstage, we see Rocky sitting in his office smirking at a television monitor. All of the sudden, he is taken back when a 7+ foot monster walks into his office. Rocky immediately stands up.

Rocky:[/b] Ummm.. Hey man. What can I do for you?

Rocky looks over the shoulder of the man, as if he is looking for security. The masked man stands in the doorway of Rocky’s office, speechless. Rocky points towards the television monitor.

Rocky:[/b] That Stevo316 is pretty impressive huh?... Yea... He sure is... Heh....ummm...

The man steps forwards and holds out his hand. In his hand he holds a contract, that has been written up by the board of directors. The man, along with Shinn’s Theory, has already signed the contract. There is a blank space next to Rocky’s name.

Rocky:[/b] Oh, the Darkness King. I heard you were in the works of signing with the P2PW. And, look at that. You need one more signature. In fact, that signature is mine.

The Darkness King slams the contract onto the desk. He grabs a pen and forces it into Rocky’s hand.

Rocky:[/b] Look guy... I have no problem signing this contract. But, let’s face it... You haven’t presented yourself very well to me. Intimidation isn’t going to make me sign this contract.

The man steps forward and Rocky quickly snatches the contract.

Rocky:[/b] Easy big fella! All I need from you is one thing. If you do me this one favor tonight, I’ll sign this contract.

Just before Rocky explains the favor he looks towards the camera and then peers back at Darkness King.

Rocky:[/b] Actually, make that two favors.

Rocky looks back towards the cameraman. He then looks up at Darkness King and nods. Darkness king immediately turns towards the cameraman. He grabs the camera lens with one hand and forces the cameraman out of the office. He closes the door behind him. We now take you back to ringside for our next match.

”Enemy” hits and “The Lady’s Man”, Chilly Willy, appears. The crowd jumps to their feet as fireworks explode above Zeroin. Chilly Willy makes his way to the ring slapping hands with many of the fans on the way in. He slides into the ring and poses in the center. The crowd cheers as Shilly Willy pumps them up.

”Get Back” hits and “Hollywood” SoundScream bursts through the curtain. SoundScream recieves pops from the ladies. However, they are mostly drowned out by the boos from the men. He walks down the ramp and hops onto the apron. He enters the ring. And approaches Chilly Willy. The two begin arguing. The crowd then dulls down and the two look towards the ramp. Jessica McDaniels makes her way to the ring, holding a clipboard. She takes a seat next to the ring announcer. She crosses her legs and waits for this match to start. The referee calls for the bell. The Super Kick vs. The Scream Kick has just begun.

Singles Match
SoundScream vs. Chilly Willy

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The two men lock up. Hollywood SoundScream overpowers Chilly Willy by shoving him to the mat. He then walks over to the side of the ring Jessica is sitting at. He smiles and stretches both hands out. Jessica smiles and nods and writes something down. Chilly sneaks up behind SoundScream and rolls him up for a cover. Chilly gets a one count. Hollywood quickly stands up looking frustrated. He looks over towards Jessica who is still writing something down. An angry SoundScream locks up with Chilly Willy. Chilly Willy applies a head lock. SoundScream attempts to push him into the ropes but Chilly has the lock on to tight. SoundScream counters with a side suplex and goes for a quick cover. Chilly easily kicks out.

SoundScream aids Chilly to his feet and goes for an early Sound Off but The Lady’s Man shoves SoundScream into the turnbuckle. SoundScream bounces back. As SoundScream stumbles backwards, Chilly Willy springs himself off of the seconds rope and drop kicks SoundScream to the mat. The crowd erupts as Chilly climbs to the top rope. He looks down at Jessica who smiles, nods, and begins writing. Chilly Willy leaps off of the ropes, attempting a flying elbow, but SoundScream rolls out of the way.

Both men are down and the referee begins to count. SoundScream and Chilly Willy stumble to their feet. SoundScream swings but Chilly ducks. He performs an Atomic Drop on SoundScream. Chilly does not let up on the offense. He then applies an Impaler. Chilly goes for another cover but SoundScream is able to kick out just before the three count. Chilly Willy grabs the legs of SoundScream, and sling-shoots him into the corner. SoundScream crashes against the turnbuckle. Chilly Willy then applies a neck breaker and goes for another cover. SoundScream is able to get a foot on the rope to break the count.

Frustrated, Chilly drags SoundScream to the center of the ring. Chilly Willy attempts a Rolling Thunder on SoundScream, but SoundScream is able to get his knees up. The Lady’s Man crashes, stomach-first, onto the knees of Hollywood. SoundScream then crawls to the ropes and helps himself up. He waits for Chilly Willy to make it to his feet. When he does, SoundScream bursts away from the ropes and attempts The Scream Kick. Chilly Willy ducks. Chilly then swings towards SoundScream, but SoundScream ducks. SoundScream then lands a Thumb-to-the-Eye and then The Sound Off. SoundScream goes for the cover. 1.....2.....3. The referee calls for the bell.

SoundScream - 4.0667 Promo Points + 1.5 Voting Points - 5.5667
Chilly Willy - 3.3333 Promo Points + 0.8 Voting Points - 4.1333[/I]

Winner: SoundScream[/b]

”Get Back” hits and a breathless SoundScream props himself up in the corner, with his arms spread wide. He looks down at Jessica who appears to be nodding. SoundScream smiles down at her. Jessica stands and proceeds to the back. SoundScream watches Jessica leave ringside before hoping back onto the mat. Zeroin now takes us backstage.

[shinnstheory]

Cactus is seen entering the building. He walks through The Insanity. Spaz stops him.

Spaz:[/b] Congratulations on become the International Champion. You’re lucky that I haven’t been book in this week’s Fatal Four Way number one Contender’s Match for your title, at Blitz!

Cactus smirks and responds.

Cactus:[/b] Actually, I think it’s you that is lucky. If you would have advanced, I would have taken you out in a matter of moments. That belt you hold means nothing to me. That is a team belt. It takes two to accomplish gaining that title. But not this title. I did this on my own, facing TWO guys.

Spaz:[/b] Just feel lucky that The Insanity has bigger things in store then your IN Title.

Cactus:[/b] Lucky? Say what you will Spaz. I am sure we’ll cross paths one day. But, as for the present, shouldn’t Diddly Squat be preparing for his match, which is next, rather then participating in a “see who can hold their breath longer” competition with Red Ninja?

Cactus points as both Red Ninja and Diddly Squat are holding their breath, turning quite red.

Spaz:[/b] Guys, quit it!!

Both men exhale. Cactus shakes his head and walks off.

Spaz:[/b] What the hell are you two doing?! You know how much I love that game. Never EVER play that without me again! Ok, on the count of three.... One, Two, THREE!

All three of The Insanity members begin to hold their breath as Zeroin takes us back to ringside for out final match of the night.

”Invisible Wounds” hits and HeX appears followed by a sea of boos from the crowd. He argues with fans on his way to the ring. He enters the ring. Angrily, he leans in the far corner. “People Hate Me” hits and the fans jump to their feet. “Sensational Shooter” Shane Montez makes his way to the ring. He is bandaged up in various places as a result of his match at Winter Frenzy, against Rocky. He works his way up the ring steps and enters the ring. The crowd cheers as he and HeX exchange a few words.

”TNT” hits and Insanity Member, Diddly Squat, makes his way to the ring. He immediately slides into the ring and poses for the fans. The three men all look each other over. The referee calls for the bell. This match is now underway.

Triple Threat Match
Diddly Squat vs. HeX vs. “Sensational Shooter” Shane Montez

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Diddly and Shane both look at one another. Immediately, they turn their attention towards HeX. Both men attack HeX. HeX is pounded down to the mat. Shane drops an elbow. Diddly drops an elbow. Shane nails HeX with a falling fist to the forehead. Diddly nails HeX with a falling fist to the forehead. Shane and Diddly look at one another and begin to laugh. Shane drops his knee on the head of HeX. Diddly drops his knee on the head of Hex. As Diddly stands, Shane Montez delivers a Clothesline From Hell to Diddly Squat. Diddly is thrown out of the ring due to the momentum of the move. Diddly is able to make it to his feet just in time, as Shane covers HeX. Before Shane can get the three count, Diddly slides HeX out of the ring. HeX falls limp to the mat and Diddly rolls back in the ring.

Diddly questions Shane’s actions. Shane seems to convince Diddly that it was an accident. It looks as though Diddly is about to exit the ring, along with Shane. However, Diddly spins around and delivers a Short-Armed Clothesline to the former World Champion. Diddly stomps away at Shane. Diddly then props himself onto the top turnbuckle. Shane staggers to his feet and Diddly Squat lands a Hurricanrana. Diddly goes for the cover but Shane kicks out. Diddly aids Shane to his feet. He performs various suplexs on him. Diddly goes for another cover. The cover is broken by a recuperating HeX. HeX whips Diddly off of the ropes and nails him with a big boot. HeX goes for the cover, but the Insanity genius is quick to kick out.

HeX pulls Diddly close to the ropes and props himself onto the top turnbuckle. He leaps of, performing a poweful spike DDT. HeX goes for another cover but Shane breaks the count. HeX makes it to his feet. Shane springs himself off of the ropes. He sprints towards HeX, who easily tosses Shane over the top rope. As the referee looks down at Shane, Diddly low-blows HeX. The crowd cheers as HeX flops to the mat. Diddly then applies the Sharp Shooter on HeX. The referee is in position to make the call. Before Hex is able to tap out, Shane slides the referee out of the ring. Shane immediately slides into the ring and clotheslines Diddly from behind, breaking the Sharp Shooter.

Shane then covers HeX, but the referee is still on the outside. Diddly stomps on the back of Shane’s head. Shane staggers to his feet. Diddly sweeps Shane to the mat and applies the Texas Cloverleaf on him. The referee slides back into the ring. He slides in position waiting for Shane to tap out. HeX breaks the hold. HeX then props Diddly over his shoulder, setting him up for a power slam. Diddly wiggles free, shoving HeX into the corner. By this time, Shane has made it to his feet. As HeX nails the turnbuckle, Shane is able to nail HeX with the Kotton Mouth Kick. HeX falls to the mat. Diddly sprints towards Shane who spins around and back body drops Diddly onto HeX. Shane climbs to the top rope. He lands the Simply Amazing on Diddly, how is still on top of HeX. Shane then pulls Diddly to the center of the ring. He looks towards HeX and also pulls him to the center of the ring. After peering down at the two men, Shane applies the Shooter’s Touch to HeX. HeX immediately taps out.

”Sensational Shooter” Shane Montez - 4.1333 Promo Points + 1.3 Voting Points = 5.4333
Diddly Squat - 3.9 Promo Points + 0.7 Voting Points - 4.6
HeX - 0.0 Promo Points + 0.3 Voting Points - 0.3[/I]

Winner: “Sensational Shooter” Shane Montez[/b]

”People Hate Me” hits and Shane’s hand is raised in victory. Suddenly, the lights dim. “Graveyard Symphony “ hits and the 7 foot monster, Darkness King, is shown walking down the ramp. Shane stands in the ring with an expression of confusion. The big man steps onto the apron and over the top rope. He approaches Diddly Squat and HeX, who are still laying the the center of the ring. He begins to stomp away at both men. Shane shrugs and joins in. The two men stomp away at the Insanity member and HeX. Suddenly, Darkness King grabs Shane Montex by the neck and tosses him into the corner. This was followed by a devastating clothesline. Shane flops to the mat. Darkness King then stands Shane up and props him over his shoulder. Darkness King climbs to the top rope and performs the Darkness Slam (F-5 from the top rope). The fans are in awe as Darkness King stands in the ring surrounded by three battered bodies. Rocky is shown walking out from behind the curtain. He applauds Darkness King as TNT goes off the air.

[shinnstheory]

Staff Promo Ratings:

Shinn's Theory's Ratings:[/u]

Simz - 2.5 (A little whacky. Still, not too bad. I suggest you always prewrite your promos and always check them over before you post thefinal project.)
Starcrunch - 2.5 (I know this was rushed and you can do 100X better. It was obvious when you mentioned me being the only person at ringside for the
match when, in fact, this match is a mini-lumberjack match and the 3 remaining Blood Pack members will be ringside as well. Average promo.)

SoundScream - 4.1 (Nice work. Good intensity.)
Chilly Willy - 3.5 (Not to shabby. The Decepticons are no more, incase you haven't caught on to that yet. Overall, nice job. Already numerous strides
ahead from when you first started.)

Diddly Squat - 4.2 (A perfect example of how a short promo can turn into a great one. Excellent.)
HeX - 0.0 (New character....no Promo?)
Shane Montez - 4.0 (Poor Rocky probably has the clap. Funny and entertaining as always.)

Stare's Ratings:[/b][/u]

ANNOUNCEMENT: I'm really going ot start cracking down on these things. Dont' be offended if you think it's less than you deserve, cause I'm going ot be brutally honest form here on in.

Starcrunch --- 3.0 (nothing out of the ordinary. Just a run-of-the-mill promo for you. Shinns comes off a bit gay in your promo sometimes, try to keep everyone in character)
SIMZ --- 3.5 (pretty decent promo, and a step up for you. It was original, and even a little funny. I didn't like the "to be continued . . . " ending though, I would stop that if I were you. Other than that, great job)

Soundscream --- 4.1 (Good job. You pushed Chilly Willy with this, which probably needed to be done. You hyped the match a lot, which I totally dug on. Great job)
Chilly Willy --- 3.0 (You're losing me man. You need to start to get into your promo's more, expecially when your'e in a big match situation like this. Work on your dialogue, try intensity if comedy isn't working for you)

Diddly --- 4.0 (I liked it. Emphasized your match, and expressed yoru desire for your character's direction. I think you're going to get better, judging by this promo)
HeX
Shane --- 4.2 (Your promo's work off your own storyline, which is awesome, I think. It's probably why I'm always into your promos. Great job Shane, and good reasoning on why you will win)

Rocky's Ratings:[/b][/u]

Starcrunch - 3.0 (Not your best promo. As you said, it was short. Nothing really happened in it, but the quality was still there to give it the score it deserves.)
SIMZ - 2.5 (I think if you had actully finished this promo, it would have been a higher score. It's still the best one you've done though.)

Soundscream - 4.0 (I enjoyed reading this. It didn't seem to be your normal style, but still a good read. I nearly choked on my noodles when I read Willy Wonka and I like how you tried to put Willy over with the superkick.)
Chilly Willy - 3.5 (Nice response. Perhaps you should have mentioned a little bit about the superkick you gave to Soundscream in his promo. It's always good to follow on from a promo.)

Diddly Squat - 3.5 (Nice promo, not your best, but nice none the less.)
HeX -
Shane Montez - 4.2 (Your little side storys always tie in brilliantly with the shows storylines. This was no exception. Good promo.)

[Simz]

Great show my man.

Loved the Luberjack match.

[Dickie Cha'mone]

ooc: quality show asways bigs ups,

i knew stare would start cracking down when he won the strap, very hhh (only joking champ)

ic: no comment

[Reaper]

Nice show man.

Perhaps Shane should just retire. I'm going to keep hurting him until he does...

[Gormy]

Good show ol' chap.

Cant wait to get back in the ring myself.

[KANEFAN666]

Great show, loved every minute of it. And WOOOOOOOOOOO! What a Debut for Darkness King.

[Cactus]

great show as alway fakie e-praise

[Darth Peccatus]

Good show. Well, as good as it can possibly be without me, anyway.

[Scream]

Nice work. Poor, poor Chilly Willy. Maybe next time you can bring your brother!

[ChadClassic]

Good show, Shinns, as always.

[Aladdin]

Great Work Shinns. I enjoy knocking you out with brass knucks.

[shinnstheory]

And I enjoyed laying you out with the Theory Driver.

[diddlysquat]

Damn you, Generic Tall Guy from Hell number 546359354749596754. You shall recieve the schooling of a lifetime for laying your hands on me.

Great show overall.

[KillerSundin (Formerly HBK)]

Good job everybody. Excellent job Soundscream!

[Stare]

Nice show, partner in crime.

I got my ass drilled . . . that sucked

[Hercules]

i gotta go with my fellow cohorts and give praises as well, very good show, worth the wait. (Even though Simz lost the match) Great show nonetheless.

[spaz]

I just want to make it clear that Cactus has nothing on me and that I won the holding your breath contest.

Nice show, fair enough with the results too, except Shane winning the match Diddly was in... it was crap.

[Drow]

Good show guys.

[Aladdin]

Hitting the owner of the company with a foreign object was more enjoyable, than you theory driving me. .

[Simz]

Getting beat up by a girl Ha! beat that.

[Hercules]

Well, hell, I got stunned by a guy I don't even think is in the company anymore, now beat that.