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Enemy
Jul 31, 2004 13:10:28 GMT 1
Post by evenflow on Jul 31, 2004 13:10:28 GMT 1
Enemy
Never knowing who you were Leaving me, the stranger from my birth Never to answer my cry’s in the night Nor to wipe the blood from my first fight Was there a reason, or pure fear? The only thing you gave me, was other children’s jeers
Sworn Enemy You are my Sworn Enemy The thought of you makes me sick You are the Enemy
Your untold reason stuck in my head For years salted lakes filled my bed Years of wondering, having no clue Years of suffering, not knowing you Betrayed by my creator You mother fucking traitor
Sworn Enemy You are my Sworn Enemy The thought of you makes me sick You are the Enemy
You I should of loved, Only hate is felt for you Severed are all feelings for you
Sworn Enemy You are my Sworn Enemy The thought of you makes me sick You are the Enemy
Some more lyrics i rote, tell me what you think please
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Enemy
Jul 31, 2004 19:25:46 GMT 1
Post by Wench on Jul 31, 2004 19:25:46 GMT 1
That's actually very sad (Crying sad, I mean.) So many children actually go through this.
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Enemy
Aug 1, 2004 13:45:23 GMT 1
Post by evenflow on Aug 1, 2004 13:45:23 GMT 1
Yes i was one of them, its hard to get through but you do in the end
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Enemy
Aug 1, 2004 23:03:43 GMT 1
Post by Cactus on Aug 1, 2004 23:03:43 GMT 1
Dont wish to pry but I sense a lot of anger in there, sorry if this touches a nerve
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Enemy
Aug 2, 2004 15:14:36 GMT 1
Post by evenflow on Aug 2, 2004 15:14:36 GMT 1
I do feel alot of anger for my biological father, i have never seen or heard of him, dont worry bout it
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Enemy
Aug 3, 2004 0:38:00 GMT 1
Post by Reaper on Aug 3, 2004 0:38:00 GMT 1
Very touching. I wrote something with a similar view when I was younger, about my father dying before I was born. Through time I learned to redirect that anger towards all the positives in my life.
But, as I said, this was very touching. Great stuff. You are very talented in this department.
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Enemy
Aug 3, 2004 2:54:58 GMT 1
Post by soulreaper on Aug 3, 2004 2:54:58 GMT 1
meh, If I wrote my feelings towards "dear ole Daddy" I'd be banned.... don't ask me how, just know that its possible.
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Enemy
Aug 3, 2004 13:26:39 GMT 1
Post by evenflow on Aug 3, 2004 13:26:39 GMT 1
Thanx rocky mate, im working on some other stuff, il post it when im done
its easy to reaper, i can write blantently, and get in trouble but i hide the anger in phrases and hint it, my early song lyrics were terrible just a bunch of swear words and threats but over time ive developed my techniques
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Enemy
May 16, 2005 0:42:27 GMT 1
Post by lockjaw on May 16, 2005 0:42:27 GMT 1
perfect song for feud for the outsiders
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Enemy
May 18, 2005 12:04:05 GMT 1
Post by "Black Label" Sean Patterson on May 18, 2005 12:04:05 GMT 1
But even better for when me and Flowster wanna 'fuck shit up' at band practice ;D
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