Post by Terrell Odom on Feb 6, 2006 4:22:58 GMT 1
Terrell Odom's Top Five TNT Role Players For 2/4/06
First off, good job to everyone; good luck for everyone on this weeks TNT. I hope you all enjoyed working with your rps, and such. Now, let me get down with the first article of Top Five Rpers for this week's TNT.
First off, good job to everyone; good luck for everyone on this weeks TNT. I hope you all enjoyed working with your rps, and such. Now, let me get down with the first article of Top Five Rpers for this week's TNT.
Number One
Terrell Odom
I shouldn't have included myself, sorry for being such an ego head. I am going to change this later on. If an explanation is needed, then I will go on and say it. I put a lot of effort in on this rp, and it shows. I know I have spoke with many, with them speaking on how I should include the arena, backstage and such of those things in my p2p rps for points, but if you don't like my style, then you are going to have to live with it. The part I liked, and I think the people that read it was "Sasha, Revisited".
Number Two
Tie
Shinns Theory/e2
First words to the first guy that posted his rp, e2. It was nice, I will say that. Nice plot, nice with the EXPLOSION thing and all, I just think the minor demerits were some grammar mistakes, and that was about it. The in-mind thing? Yeah, I have went that route in my career before.
Now, Shinns Theory...
Nice plot with entering the arena, getting all of those guys coming up to you and everything. I just think some words were spelled incorrectly, but thats ok. I did some mistakes with spelling, I am sure; all of those things can be changed if you have Microsoft word, though. I am seeing this being a tight match with you and e2 this week, good luck to the two of you.
Number Three
Aladdin
Nice...nice...nice...like the interview thing with the fans and all. That set up well, and I know you had the match in the bag from the get go with Firefly, even though I hate to put down people, but if you read what I am about to put in for him, then you will see why. I liked your rp as well as e2, and Shinns, but there were some grammar mistakes, and just a little more of a touch in with this could of got you up there on the two spot.
Number Four
Amie
Overall, nice job. I liked reading all of the egotistical, chick stuff at the beginning; Terrell Odom in your rp, and being made to look like junk? Nada, that is something you are going to have to learn is to touch the buttons right on your opponent, and to NOT use the superstar in your rp without permission. Oh my, it used to be that whenever that happened, that the owner would tear into the person that did that. It was all good though, and I think that you will get better with what you have been trying to do.
Number Five
Firefly
Terrell Odom
I shouldn't have included myself, sorry for being such an ego head. I am going to change this later on. If an explanation is needed, then I will go on and say it. I put a lot of effort in on this rp, and it shows. I know I have spoke with many, with them speaking on how I should include the arena, backstage and such of those things in my p2p rps for points, but if you don't like my style, then you are going to have to live with it. The part I liked, and I think the people that read it was "Sasha, Revisited".
Number Two
Tie
Shinns Theory/e2
First words to the first guy that posted his rp, e2. It was nice, I will say that. Nice plot, nice with the EXPLOSION thing and all, I just think the minor demerits were some grammar mistakes, and that was about it. The in-mind thing? Yeah, I have went that route in my career before.
Now, Shinns Theory...
Nice plot with entering the arena, getting all of those guys coming up to you and everything. I just think some words were spelled incorrectly, but thats ok. I did some mistakes with spelling, I am sure; all of those things can be changed if you have Microsoft word, though. I am seeing this being a tight match with you and e2 this week, good luck to the two of you.
Number Three
Aladdin
Nice...nice...nice...like the interview thing with the fans and all. That set up well, and I know you had the match in the bag from the get go with Firefly, even though I hate to put down people, but if you read what I am about to put in for him, then you will see why. I liked your rp as well as e2, and Shinns, but there were some grammar mistakes, and just a little more of a touch in with this could of got you up there on the two spot.
Number Four
Amie
Overall, nice job. I liked reading all of the egotistical, chick stuff at the beginning; Terrell Odom in your rp, and being made to look like junk? Nada, that is something you are going to have to learn is to touch the buttons right on your opponent, and to NOT use the superstar in your rp without permission. Oh my, it used to be that whenever that happened, that the owner would tear into the person that did that. It was all good though, and I think that you will get better with what you have been trying to do.
Number Five
Firefly
Ok, first thing is; you need to stop whining about that loss and such. Second, Aladdin did deserve to beat you on many occasions. You need to put LENGTH, and QUALITY in your rps, if you expect to get wins. Now, I am sure that a little bit of coaching can get you better, and you know everyone can improve their work. If you decide to stay, or not, or you get banned, just make sure that if you are going to improve your work, that you might want to try some minor league feds, that got your calibre in it.
You got my 2 cents, and if any criticism is wanting to be put in, go ahead and say it! I can't wait to see some Chad Classic and R-E-D cookin in on TNT; should be some fun! But for now, this is Terrell Odom, signing off.
AND THATS THE T.R.U TRUTH!
You got my 2 cents, and if any criticism is wanting to be put in, go ahead and say it! I can't wait to see some Chad Classic and R-E-D cookin in on TNT; should be some fun! But for now, this is Terrell Odom, signing off.
AND THATS THE T.R.U TRUTH!