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Post by shinnstheory on Jul 6, 2004 1:06:13 GMT 1
We kick off TNT this week with a huge Championship match up. Londonite’s entrance music hits as her pyrotechnics light up the crowd. The crowd jumps to their feet as Londonite appears from behind the curtain, instantly sprinting towards the ring. She slides into the ring and crowd remains on their feet. “The Sweetness” hits. Starcrunch is shown atop of the ramp. She smiles at the cheering crowd as she walks to the ring, sucking on a lollypop. She enters the ring. Her and Londonite exchange a short handshake. All of the sudden, the lights go out in the arena. “Evil Unlimited” appears on the Big Screen. “Let’s Get Rocked” blares throughout the arena and the P2PW’s Women’s Champion appears from behind a wall of fog. Red lights appear throughout the upper deck of the arena. They slowly move towards the center of the ring. Once the lights brighten the ring, a huge clasp of red sparks fall from the ceiling onto the ring. Londonite, Starcrunch, and the referee all duck as the sparks fall upon them.
The Wench heads to the ring, alone. Evil Unlimited has been banned from ringside tonight. With the belt draped over her shoulder, she crawls onto the apron, showing no fear. She hands the referee her belt as the lights slowly reappear. The Wench quickly tackles Londonite and referee calls for the bell. Triple Threat Match for the Women‘s Championship
[/u][/color] The Wench vs. Londonite vs. Starcrunch[/b][/center] As Wench pounds away at Londonite, Starcrunch sits back and smirks as she remains sucking on her lollypop. After a few moments, Starcrunch crawls out of the ring and graciously give a fan her lollypop. The fan is quick to suck on it. Starcrunch smirks then roles back into the ring. Starcrunch, nonchalantly, walks up behind Wench. She grabs the Women’s Champion by the hair and pulls her off of Londonite. Starcrunch goes for a quick jab, but Wench ducks. Wench then lands a neck breaker on Starcrunch. Londonite staggers to her feet. Wench quickly resumes her offense on Londonite by spearing her into the corner. Wench repeatedly spears Londonite in the corner. She then backs off and stomps away on Starcrunch. Wench pulls Starcrunch to her feet and delivers a standing dropkick. The dropkick sends Starcrunch out of the ring. Wench turns her attention back towards Londonite. She runs in for another spear but Londonite is able to dive out of the way. Wench slams, shoulder first, into the ring post. The crowd cheers at the site. On the outside, Starcrunch makes it to her feet. She staggers to the corner Wench is currently draped over. Starcrunch is able to get in a few quick jabs before Londonite pulls Wench towards the center of the ring. Londonite picks Wench up and delivers a short armed clothesline, laying out the Champion. Starcrunch grabs onto the bottom rope and hoists herself onto the apron, then into the ring. Starcrunch and Londonite begin to stomp away at the Women’s Champion. Londonite grabs Wench by the hair and aids her to her feet. She holds Wench’s arms behind her as Starcrunch begins to deliver closed fisted shots to the head. The referee quickly begins his 5 count. Starcrunch refuses to stop pounding away. The referee wiggles himself in between Starcrunch and The Wench. Starcrunch is quick to back off. Londonite lets the Wench go. Wench drops to the mat and Londonite goes for a pin. As Starcrunch and the referee argue, Londonite has the Champion’s leg hooked for far longer then count of three. Becoming frustrated, Londonite hops to her feet and swings the referee around. She then goes for another cover but Wench is quick to kick out. Starcrunch aids Wench to her feet and delivers a kick to the midsection. She then DDT’s Wench and goes for the cover. Londonite breaks the count by stomping on Starcrunch. Starcrunch hops to her feet and questions Londonite. The two exchange words which esculate into exchanging blows. As Londonite and Starcrunch pound away at each other, Wench is given some time to recuperate. Wench sneaks up behind Starcrunch and roles her up for the pin. The pin is broken by Londonite. Wench stands up. She cocks he fist back to hit Londonite but inadvertently elbows the referee in the eye. The referee falls to the mat. Londonite ducks Wench’s punch and quickly applies The Cross Face on the Women’s Champion. With the referee still down, Londonite continues to apply the pressure. The Wench begins to tap out, but the referee is still down. All of the sudden, from behind the curtain, GORMY APPEARS!!! Gormy sprints down to the ring, sliding in. She gets in the face of Wench as Wench remains tapping. Almost taunting Wench, Gormy reaches into her tights and pulls out a set of Brass Knuckles. The crowd goes crazy at the site!! Gormy winds up and NAILS Londonite in the forehead, busting her wide open. Noticing the referee is about to “come to” Gormy slides out of the ring. The referee looks around. He sees Londonite lying in a pool of her own blood. He sees Wench laying belly down on the mat. Starcrunch is now gaining strength in the corner, and Gormy is now on the outside of the ring. The crowd is still unsure if Gormy was aiming for Wench or Londonite. Starcrunch takes advatage of the situation and quickly runs over to cover Wench. The referee begins his count. 1.………..2.…………..Wench kicks out! Still very weak, the Wench remains on the mat. Starcrunch quickly slides over towards Londonite, who is still unconscious from the Brass Knuckle shot she suffered early by Gormy. Starcrunch goes for the cover. The referee counts….1.……2.…….3!!! Star crunch - 8 Votes + 4.25 Promo Points = 12.25 The Wench - 6 Votes + 0 Promo Points = 6 Londonite - 1 Vote + 0 Promo Points = 1[/I] Winner:[/b] StarcrunchAs we witness the crowning of a new P2PW Women’s Champion, the crowd goes nuts. Gormy slides into the ring, hovering over Wench. Wench staggers to her feet and begins to argue with Gormy. As Starcrunch continues to celebrate her victory, Wench points to her. Gormy slowly turns around and nails Starcrunch from behind. While the Wench shouts out orders to Gormy, Gormy continues to stomp away at the new Women’s Champion. The crowd is in a state of shock as it is now clear Gormy is taking orders from Wench. Wench pulls back Gormy. She yells something out. Gormy nods then applies the Muppeteer to Starcrunch. Officials run down to the ring and break up the women. Wench and Gormy role out of the ring leaving Starcrunch being tended to by officials. Wench and Gormy walk up the ramp together. Wench slowly shows signs of delight as she sees Starcrunch in pain. Gormy, still appearing emotionless, disappears behind the curtain with Wench. We now take you to the BWO locker room.Cactus:[/b] What the hell! Mastadon and Kaos remain staring at the screen in awe.Cactus:[/b] Do you mean to tell me that Gormy jumped ship? Still speechless, Mastadon and Kaos stare at the screen.Cactus:[/b] Did anyone know about this. Mastadon slow looks up.Mastadon:[/b] What……..the……….hell….. Kaos finally takes his eyes off of the screen/Kaos:[/b] Something’s not right. Did you see the look on her face? Did you see the way Wench hollered out orders? She wasn’t herself. Cactus:[/b] Bull shit! She new exactly what she was doing! She turned her back on us! Kaos:[/b] I don’t know man. Something is definitely not right here. Cactus:[/b] Are you blind? Were you not watching the same damn thing I was just watching? Kaos:[/b] Hey! I saw what I saw. And, what I saw WASN’T Gormy! Cactus:[/b] What the hell do you know! The two get in each other’s faces. Mastadon quickly breaks the two apart.Mastadon:[/b] Guys! Chill out! We need to think about this. I mean, really think about this. All three men step away from each other, leaning against separate walls. Kaos and Cactus remain staring at one another as Mastadon looks towards the ground, shaking his head. We now take you to our next commercial break.
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Post by shinnstheory on Jul 6, 2004 1:07:14 GMT 1
As TNT resumes, we now have word that Nation did, in fact, suffer a concussion at the hands of Mastadon earlier this evening. He is currently in stable condition at the local hospital. If all goes well, he will be released in the morning.Camera’s from ringside zoom up towards the skybox where Da Man and a few ladies are sitting. Da Man waves down as the crowd cheers for the Rage Champion. All of the sudden, an unfamiliar face appears behind Da Man. We now take you, live, in the skybox.Da Man:[/b] Um? Can I help you? Unknown:[/b] Actually, yes. I was wondering if you wouldn’t mind me sitting with you during this next match. Da Man:[/b] Who the hell are you? Unknown:[/b] Me? Why, I am Gym Carry. And this here is one of my many lovely escorts. Da Man looks Gym Carry up and down, then focuses on his beautiful escort. Da Man quickly kicks a sit out for Gym.Da Man:[/b] Take a seat brotha! Gym Carry hops into the seat next to Da Man and gets himself really comfortable.Gym Carry:[/b] LLLLLLLLLIKE A GLOVE! The crowd erupts with laughter as Da Man laughs along. Da Man:[/b] Wanna beer? Gym Carry:[/b] Sure! I’ll need something to wash these down with. Gym takes out a small bag of sunflower seeds and begins to eat them, spitting the shells out onto the desk. Da Man slides a beer across the table as we now take you to ringside.”TNT” hit’s the speakers and Diddly Squat makes his way to the ring. Once again, he is carrying his official “Diddly Squat Dictionary”. He climbs into the ring and calls for a microphone. He flips through a few pages and begins to read.Diddly Squat:[/b] Noun. One that fails to win. One who takes a loss in a specified way. One who fails constantly, especially a person with poor skills or bad luck. One that is bad in quality. Diddly slams his dictionary shut and places it on the apron, in the corner.Diddly Squat:[/b] For all of you who do not own a copy of my Dictionary, I just read you the official meaning of “My Opponent”. The origin of the word…. Before Diddly can speak another word, “In the Shadows” echoes throughout the arena. The crowd boos as the former Rage Champion, and current Co-Owner, of the P2PW makes his way to the ring. Rocky quickly roles into the ring and walks over to Diddly’s Dictionary. He looks down at it, then spits on it. He turns around to find Diddly approaching him. Without any hesitation, Rocky clotheslines Diddly Squat to the mat. The referee calls for the bell. This match is officially underway. Number One Contender‘s Match for the Rage Title (Rage Rules)
[/u] Rocky vs. Diddly Squat[/b][/center] Rocky drops a quick elbow then picks Diddly up. He whips Diddly into the corner. Diddly slams hard against the turnbuckles as Rocky runs in, only to be greet with an elbow to the face by Diddly. Diddly hops onto the second rope and crashes down upon Rocky with a double axe handle. Rocky drops to one knee as Diddly whips himself off the ropes. Diddly returns with a low dropkick but Rocky dodges the move. Diddly ends up sliding out of the ring. As Diddly makes his way back into the ring, Rocky is quick to stomp away at him. Rpcky help Diddly to his feet then performs a drop toe hold. Rocky then applies an arm bar to the fallen Diddly Squat. As he applies pressure, the referee asks Diddly if he wants to submit. After a few moments, Diddly is able to make it to his feet. He tries to reverse the arm bar but Rocky’s grip is too tight. After a few elbows to the face of Rocky, the hold is broken. Diddly springs of the ropes and shoulder blocks Rocky. Neither of the two men fall down. Diddly attempts another shoulder block. Again, neither superstar falls to the mat. As the two men size up each other, they lock horns. Rocky quickly applies another arm bar but Diddly Squat is quick to reverse it. Rocky wiggles free, pushing Diddly into the corner. Diddly staggers out of the corner and is met with a DDT. Rocky quickly kips up and looks towards the skybox. Da Man stands up, holding the Rage Title high in the air. Rocky signals towards Da Man that the belt will soon be his. Rocky stalks Diddly as he staggers to his feet. Rocky spears Diddly Squat. Rocky looks back towards the skybox, as he has just used one of the Rage Champions signature moves. Rocky points high towards the ceiling. He picks Diddly up by the hair and performs a Jackhammer. Da Man becomes furious at this point. Again, Rocky signals that the Rage Title will soon be his once again. Instead of going for the cover, Rocky helps a limp Diddly Squat up. He climbs to the top rope, taking Diddly with him. He performs the Rocky Roads on Diddly and covers him for the easy win. Rocky - 4.75 Promo Points Didly Squat - 3.6 Promo Points[/I] Winner:[/b] Rocky After the match, Rocky grabs the microphone.Rocky:[/b] Alright Mr. Skybox. You’re now looking at the number one contender for the Rage Championship. We’ll face each other in 2 weeks at P2PW’s next Pay-Per-View. But let me make one thing perfectly clear. I will reveal a special stipulation for our match next week. And, speaking of next week, you‘ll have yourself a match. This won’t be any old match. This will be no disqualification, falls count anywhere, match. I’ll name your opponent when I feel like it. Rocky slams the microphone down as EMTs rush to the aid of Diddly Squat. Rocky picks up Diddly’s Official Dictionary and tosses it into the crowd. He then walks up the ramp and disappears behind the curtain.
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Post by shinnstheory on Jul 6, 2004 1:08:31 GMT 1
We take you back to the skybox where Shinn’s Theory walks in.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] Don’t even ask. I know nothing about your match next week. So, let’s not even get into it. If I find anything out soon, you’ll be the first to know. The end. Shinn’s looks at the pile of sunflower seed shells that have accumulated on the table.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] Way to keep this room clean dude. Da Man:[/b] I know. Some Gym Carry guy came in to watch the number one contender for the Rage Title match with me. I offered him an ashtray, but he refused. He said something about not being a smoker. To tell you the truth bro, I don’t think that cat is all there. Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] I know. I met him this afternoon. He had me in stitches. Plus, did you see that chick he had with him? I had to sign him. Da Man:[/b] Woah! Wait a second. You signed that guy? Shinn’s cracks open a beer and lights a cigar.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] Like I said. He wanted a wrestling contract, so I signed him up. Both men begin to laughDa Man:[/b] Man, that guy is gonna get murdered here at the P2PW. Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] I think you may be right. But, never judge a book by it’s cover. What I am going to do is put him in a match. 2 weeks from now, at P2PW’s Overdose, Gaz makes his return. Da Man begins to laugh.Da Man:[/b] You’re going to put him in a match with a crazy son of a bitch like Gaz? Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] Damn straight. As the two men continue their conversation, they are interrupted by a huge clasp of red fireworks above the ring. “For Whom the Bell Tolls” echoes throughout the arena as Soul Reaper appears from behind the curtain. We slowly walks to the ring hiding his face beneath his hood. As he climbs the steps, flames appear atop of the ramp. He slowly steps into the ring. With a quick snap of his neck, his face is revealed and loud explosions of fireworks are seen throughout the arena. The crowd boos the Evil Unlimited member.
Everyone turns their attention towards the Big Screen, as a bright full moon appears, sporting the letters B.W.O. across it. A howl is heard and “Battery” hit’s the speakers. Cactus appears. The crowd erupts as he makes his way to the ring. Kaos follows him down the ramp as the two men step into the ring. Before Kaos can attack Reaper, Cactus holds him back, ordering him out of the ring. Kaos obliges and steps to his respective corner. Cactus taunts Reaper to lock up. The men finally lock up and the bell sounds. Handicapped Match
[/u] Soul Reaper vs. Kaos & Cactus[/b][/center] Cactus and Reaper lock up. Cactus quickly puts Reaper in a headlock but Reaper counters with a side suplex. Reaper stands up sporting an evil grin, staring down at Cactus. Cactus makes it to his feet. The two lock up again. This time Reaper tosses Cactus in a headlock. Cactus pushes Reaper against the ropes. Reaper springs back and greets Cactus with a spinning heel kick to the face. This forces Cactus to his corner where Kaos tags himself in. Kaos, being the bigger of the two men, calls for a lock up. The two men lock up. Kaos shoves Soul Reaper to the mat. Reaper quickly gets up and locks up with Kaos again. He quickly applies the Eternal Sleep to Kaos but Kaos backs him into a corner, crushing him into the turnbuckle. Kaos spins around and delivers a few hard lefts to Soul Reaper. Soul Reaper quickly grabs Kaos and turns the tide. He shove him into the corner and delivers a few hard lefts of his own. After taking a few blows, Kaos shoves Reaper to the mat. Reaper is quick to get up. Kaos swings towards Reaper but Reaper ducks. Surprisingly, Soul Reaper performs a long standing suplex to the giant BWO member. Kaos crashes to the mat. Cactus is able reach over the top rope and tag himself in. Cactus clotheslines Reaper to the mat. He then picks Reaper up and performs a double arm DDT. He goes for the cover, but the Evil Unlimited member kicks out, just short of three. Cactus picks Reaper up, then body slams him back down to the mat. He then slides out of the ring and grabs a steel chair. He folds it up and slides back into the ring. He raises it high above his head but the referee grabs it from him. Kaos enters the ring and takes the chair away from Cactus, telling him he doesn’t walk to risk a disqualification. Cactus grabs the chair from the referee and slams it over the head of Kaos. The crowd grows silent as Cactus continues to slam the chair upon his fellow BWO member. As he continues, Soul Reaper stumbles to his feet and backs himself into a corner. He grins as he watches the BWO dissolve right before his very eyes. Cactus continues his relentless attack on Kaos. The official is finally able to get the chair away from Cactus. Cactus snaps and pounces on Kaos, biting the open wounds on his forehead. The crowd begins to boo Cactus. Cactus stands up and flips the crowd off. Kaos, laying unconscious, is now being dragged to the BWO corner. Cactus shoves Kaos under the ropes, but still upon the apron. Cactusreaches over the ropes and tags Kaos, making Kaos the official man. Cactus then drags Kaos to the center of the ring. He looks towards Reaper. Pointing at Kaos, Cactus mouths the words “pin him”… Reaper pins Kaos for the 3 count. Soul Reaper - 10 Votes + 4.625 Promo Points = 14.625 Kaos & Cactus - 5 Votes + 4.1 Promo Points = 9.1[/I] Winner: Soul ReaperAfter the match, Cactus enters the ring. Just before he is able to do anymore damage to Kaos, Soul Reaper greets Cactus with the Rest in Peace. He covers Cactus and calls for the referee to count. The referee counts to three. Soul Reaper pinned both men.
As Soul Reaper roles out of the ring, EMTs rush to the aid of Kaos. After a few moments, Cactus stumbles to his feet, throwing numerous officials and EMTs out of the ring. He slides out of the ring, grabbing the ring bell. He slides the ring bell into the ring then roles back out. He grabs a 20 foot ladder from underneath the ring. He slides that into the ring as well. Cactus proceeds to set the ladder up. He grabs the ring bell and climbs the ladder to the very top. He leaps off and crushes the throat of Kaos with the ring bell. The crowd boos Cactus as he holds up the ring bell. He rips his BWO T-shirt off and throws it down upon Kaos. Cactus leaves the ring as the EMTs reenter.
The EMTs try their best to load Kaos onto a stretcher. One of them is heard saying “he’s not breathing”. Another is heard saying “his throat is crushed.”
This episode of TNT has been delayed due to the tragedy we have just witnessed.
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Post by shinnstheory on Jul 6, 2004 1:09:39 GMT 1
After the break, EMTs are still working on getting Kaos loaded into the ring. Various superstars, such as Mastadon, Rocky, Shinn’s Theory, Wench, Shane Montez, Doc Holliday, and Firefly, all try their best to help with this situation and remain out of character. They finally load the bloody Kaos onto the stretcher. As they wheel the stretcher up the ramp, one EMT is shown performing CPR on Kaos. You can hear various superstars telling the man to “hang in there” and “fight it Kaos!”… As they wheel Kaos to the back, the arena is dead silent.
Minutes seem like hours as time goes by. We still have tonight’s main event ahead of us, but the atmosphere in the building has deadened.
“P.C.” hits the speakers and Shinn’s Theory makes his way to the ring. Usually, the crowd would back Shinn’s, but tonight the crowd remains silent. Theory walks into the ring and immediately grabs a microphone.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] We’re all pulling for you Kaos! The crowd begins to applaud.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] As much as I would rather be there with you right now, I have a contract to oblige to. But I promise you Kaos, as soon as I am done with this match, I will be there for you. Again, the crowd applauds.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] Trent? Let’s go man. Let’s get this over with. ”Thuggish Ruggish Bone” hits as the 6 foot 7, 3 hundred and 16 pound Trent Acid appears from behind the curtain. He slowly walks to the ring. Shinn’s still has the microphone in his hand.Shinn‘s Theory:[/b] Let’s go man! Don’t take your time. I have an employee to worry about. Trent, showing no remorse, slows his stride down. Shinn’s Theory slides out of the ring and grabs Trent. Trent is quick to break Theory’s hold. Trent then shows his power, by press slamming Shinn’s Theory, over the top rope, and into the ring. The big man enters the ring and the referee calls for the bell. Singles Competition - With Special Stipulation
[/u] Shinn’s Theory vs. Trent Acid[/b][/center] Shinn’s makes it to his feet with a surprised look on his face. Standing at 6 foot 3 and weighing in at 2 hundred and 75 pounds, Theory looks shocked at how easily he was just man handled by the newcomer. The two lock up. Trent delivers a low knee to Shinn’s Theory. He quickly performs a power bomb to the former World Champion. Trent goes for the cover but Shinn’s kicks out, just before the three count. Trent picks Shinn’s up and performs a snap suplex. He goes for another quick cover but Shinn’s Theory is able to kick out. Trent aids Shinn’s to his feet and sends him into the corner. Trent sprints towards Shinn’s but Shinn’s moves. Unfazed, Trent turns his attention towards Shinn’s Theory. The two lock up. Shinn’s pushes Trent Acid away. Trent quickly lays out Shinn’s with a devastating clothesline. On the Big Screen, Da Man is shown leaving his skybox. As Trent pounds away at Shinn’s, Da Man appears atop of the ramp. He stands there, arms folded, watching the match. Trent turns his attention towards Da Man. They exchange words. Shinn’s Theory drop kicks Trent out of the ring. Trent lands on his feet and proceeds up the ramp towards Da Man. Da Man stands his ground as he is about to engage in a brawl with the newcomer. The referee begins to count to 10. Shinn’s grabs the referee and tells him to count faster. Just before Trent Acid approaches Da Man, Rocky appears from behind the curtain. He delivers a forearm to the back of Da Man’s head, sending him to the steel grate. Trent turns around and sees the referee his still counting. Trent jogs to the ring and slides in to avoid the count out. We are now 15 minutes into this match. Shinn’s Theory finally gets in a little offense. He delivers a few right hands to Trent. He then springs himself off of the ropes and delivers Sweet Shinn’s Music to Trent. Surprisingly, the monster did not fall. Shinn’s is now in awe. Trent, trying to shake the cobwebs away, is greeted by a kick to Trent's stomach. Shinn's then performs the Theory Driver to Trent. Shinn’s goes for the pin, but TRENT KICKS OUT! Confused and not sure how to handle the newcomer, Shinn’s Theory aids Trent to his feet. He delivers another Theory Driver to Trent. The referee counts…..1.……2.…….Rocky pulls the referee out of the ring. Da Man is shown staggering down the ramp. He slides into the ring and spears Trent Acid into the corner. Da Man and Shinn’s then perform a double Jackhammer to Trent. Da Man slides out of the ring. Shinn’s goes for the cover, but the referee is still on the outside arguing with Rocky. All of the sudden, Kacey Garcia is shown on the Big Screen. The match comes to a halt. Kacey Garcia:[/b] I am at the local hospital where Kaos was taken to. I am sorry to inform you this way, but I feel everybody has the right to know. Kaos passed away just moments ago. The crowd is totally silent. Shinn’s Theory backs away from Trent and leans himself in the corner, looking down at the mat. Rocky then signals Trent to leave the ring. Trent follows Rocky up the ramp as the two disappear behind the curtain. The referee hops into the ring and begins his 10 count. Shinn’s Theory approaches the referee as he counts. Shaking his head, Shinn’s Theory receives the win as Trent has been counted out.Shinn’s Theory - 9 Votes + 4.5 Promo Points = 13.5 Trent Acid - 6 Votes + 4.2 Promo Points = 10.2[/I] Winner: Shinn’s TheoryThe P2PW has lost another competitor. What will be the repercussions for Cactus? Hopefully, we’ll find out more next week. As for the time being, Kaos will be missed.
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Post by shinnstheory on Jul 6, 2004 1:13:16 GMT 1
This is how the staff voted this week:[/b]
ShinnsTheory's Votes:
The Wench Londonite Starcrunch - 4.0 (Love the humor is this gal)
Rocky - 5.0 (Diddly better be on top of his game) Diddly Squat - 3.5 (I've seen great promos before. I think he rushed this one.)
Soul Reaper - 4.5 Kaos Cactus - 4.0 (ooooooo...Beating on a Reaper fan! That means WAR!)
Shinn’s Theory - N/A - (7/0 for the "Saved by the Bell" reference. ) Trent Acid - 4.0 (It's tough to introduce yourself into a few eFed, while trying to write a promo about a match you have, in the same night. He did it, and he did it well.)
Rocky's Votes:
The Wench - Londonite - Starcrunch - 3.5 (hmm. A cheerleading, boob bouncing, evil fancying, slurpee drinking character in the P2PW? You wouldn't see that in the WWE! Good stuff, star.)
Rocky - N/A Diddly Squat - 4 ( i actually loved this. It's good that he takes his terrible losing streak in his stide. Loved the suplex onto the couch. Good stuff Diddly.)
Soul Reaper - 4.5 (nice promo. I really like this evil death character) Kaos - Cactus - 3.5 (it had a good structure to it, but I think the actual wording itself may have let it down a bit. There is a cross between American and US in your style Cactus. I feel that you should go with either one.)
Shinn’s Theory - 4.5 (good stuff. I like the Saved by The Bell reference. And who doesn't like Screech?) Trent Acid - 4.5 (really good promo. I have seen some of you stuff at other places. Now I am glad we have them here.)
The Wench's Votes:
The Wench------Can't vote on mine. Londonite Starcrunch
Rocky - 5.0 (Never fails to impress) Diddly Squat - 3.5 (I agree. I think he rushed this one. Probably because he's getting ready to go out of town.)
Soul Reaper - 4.5 (Reaper is getting to be as psychotic as Rocky.) Kaos Cactus --4.0 (Reaper's was a tad better)
Shinn’s Theory - 4.5 (Shinn's always does good work.) Trent Acid --4.0 (Trent does good work.)
UKgoldberg's Votes:
The Wench Londonite Starcrunch - 4.5 (One of her best ever, good job)
Rocky - 4.5 (Solid as always, sticks to the point) Diddly Squat - 3.5 (Not his best effort, I'm afraid. The fact he's gone on vacation may have contributed to this one)
Soul Reaper - 5 (The character is dark, mean and scary, Best of the week IMO) Kaos- Cactus - 4.5 (We have a good character here, and a good writing style)
Shinn’s Theory - 4.0 (Good return, I know "ring rust" is in this promo, and the top gear work is not too far away. Welcome back) Trent Acid - 4.5 ( I've heard the rumours, and they appear to be true. Hell of an opening)
Soul Reaper's Votes:
The Wench Londonite Starcrunch - 5.... by far exceeded every other promo she's done, damn funny too
Rocky - 4.5 (The ending would be cool to see in that promo) Diddly Squat - 3.5 (Not quite up to his usual par, some things just didn't click)
Soul Reaper --------------------- Kaos Cactus - 4.5 (was very interesting, nobody's gone after a heel's fan club before)
Shinn’s Theory - 5 (that was outstanding work, oh yes, outstanding indeed) Trent Acid - 4.0 (The Acidic one has shown that he is a very good promo-writing-type-guy..yeah)
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Jul 6, 2004 5:18:30 GMT 1
Great show...I'm glad to have found a good e-fed...it's not easy to find one...
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Post by soulreaper on Jul 6, 2004 6:29:49 GMT 1
Damn... Kaos died... and I along with my stable mates could be to blame in a psychological sense.
Smooth show. Liked it very much so.
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Post by stocko on Jul 6, 2004 10:41:26 GMT 1
loved the show, shinns, you da man
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Post by McKenna on Jul 6, 2004 15:13:01 GMT 1
Read, it, enjoyed it, loved it.
Hell of a show, as always brudda
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Post by Cactus on Jul 6, 2004 15:32:55 GMT 1
eerrrrr sorry koas Great show shinns really enjoyed it ( why have i not been arrested ? ) Bang! Bang!
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Post by frozenfoodmaster on Jul 6, 2004 17:44:37 GMT 1
That was pretty damn good. It's better than current WWE storylines and well written at that. Nice to see the drama of death in an e-fed once again.
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Post by Reaper on Jul 6, 2004 18:02:32 GMT 1
Wow. Great show Shinn's.
Damn, Cactus. Did you really have to do that to Kaos. They are dropping like flies just now.
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Post by Firefly on Jul 6, 2004 18:53:44 GMT 1
Damn, lot of crazy stuff going on! So, is the BWO kaput?
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Post by -JeNiFeR- on Jul 6, 2004 19:27:09 GMT 1
Woo hoo great show!!
Note: Reaper can you put the womens champ belt on my sig for me? Thanks babe!
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Post by Cactus on Jul 6, 2004 21:02:29 GMT 1
Damn, lot of crazy stuff going on! So, is the BWO kaput? Pardon the pun, but its safe to say the bWo is DEAD on its feet Bang! Bang!
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Post by soulreaper on Jul 6, 2004 21:14:48 GMT 1
and it was all because of me.... and MY Evil Unlimited
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Post by Cactus on Jul 6, 2004 21:17:55 GMT 1
might have been down to you but i am after your fans remember and also YOU ( evil laugh )
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Post by soulreaper on Jul 6, 2004 21:29:31 GMT 1
you may take my fans, but I will destroy you... as you can see, you are just like me now.
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Post by Cactus on Jul 6, 2004 21:52:21 GMT 1
How am I like you, you are evil but I dont think you have killed someone in the ring. . . . have you ?
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Post by stocko on Jul 7, 2004 9:02:26 GMT 1
i am still in the bWo, i am the lone member! haha
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Post by soulreaper on Jul 7, 2004 11:53:58 GMT 1
No, I didn't kill anyone in the ring, although I would like an up date on Weapon.
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Post by Wench on Jul 7, 2004 17:50:28 GMT 1
Very nice show. I think Shinns is becoming the sick puppy.
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Post by Gormy on Jul 7, 2004 21:41:26 GMT 1
That was fantastic Shinns
Well done tiger
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