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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 16:43:16 GMT 1
”Battleflag” hits the speakers and the place erupts. After an incredible debut of P2PW’s Blitz, Shinn’s has signed a match with the General Manager, Stare. Stare will be facing Decepticon member, Trent Acid, in tonight’s main event. The fans remain on their feet as pyrotechnics light the arena up in style. Also tonight, both Chadwick and Dickie Cha’Mone will debut here in the P2PW. As everyone knows this will be an exciting event, there are plenty of surprise. Zeroin tlickers on and we take you backstage. Here, we see newcomer, Dickie Cha’Mone, preparing for his match in his locker room. Co-Owner, Rocky opens quietly opens the door. Dickie Cha’Mone jumps to his feet and hugs the Co-Owner. Rocky seems taken back.Rocky:[/b] Ok Dickie. It’s ok. I know how excited you are. Dickie Cha’Mone:[/b] Rocky, I am so overwhelmed just to be standing in the same arena as you, let alone the same room! Thank you for such a great opportunity. Rocky nods.Rocky:[/b] We heard what you said earlier. Dickie Cha’Mone:[/b] What’s that? Rocky:[/b] About your “Peter Pan Parachute” entrance. We know one of the staff members said you couldn’t have such an elaborate entrance at such short notice. But, we......I mean, I rearranged a few things. Get your Peter Pan suit on Dickie. You’ll be making a grand entrance tonight. Dickie jumps around the locker room in excitement. Once again, he wraps his arms around Rocky.Dickie:[/b] Thank you so much! I’ve got to go back to my vehicle and get geared up! You won’t regret this! Toodles! Rocky watches on as Cha’Mone runs, anxiously, out of his locker room. Rocky whispers to himself.Rocky:[/b] Let’s just hope he doesn’t regret it... We now take you to ringside as “TNT”hits the speakers. “The Insanity” flashes across the screen as Diddly Squat appears from behind the curtain. He is greeted with a mixed reaction from the crowd. He makes his way to the ring, carrying his official dictionary. He enters the ring and extends his hand for a microphone. His wish is granted as he grips onto a microphone and addresses the fans.Diddly Squat:[/b] Looks like the most educated man in the P2PW has been chosen to “break in” some new talent here tonight. I hope Cha’Mone is ready for what this mind has in store for him. You see, I’ve been formerly introduced to Cha’Mone, sort a speak. He looks like an average joe to me. But, as I’ve learn, you should never judge a book by it’s cover unless it’s this book. Diddly Squat holds up his official dictionary.Diddly Squat:[/b] The name is right there. This is the one book you can judge by it’s cover. If it has my name on it, trust it. Believe in it. It will help all who read it. And I am pleased to announce that I have sold over 3 million copies thus far. The crowd applauds as some hold their official Diddly Squat Dictionary in the air. Diddly points to the fans that have their dictionaries held high.Diddly Squat:[/b] You see! I make an impact everywhere I go. And so does my literature. Learn it. Teach it. Use it. It’ll make your life one hundred times more understandable. But, back to this Cha’Mone character. I believe he was the one that bought the 3 millionth copy. What a sport that Cha’Mone is. He shows great potential just by making a mere purchase. If he has had a chance to study it, he’ll know what’s right, and what’s wrong. All of the sudden, the lights in the arena all turn to green. Zeroin shows Dickie Cha’Mone, dressed as Peter Pan, standing on top of the rafters. “Beat It” hits and Dickie Cha’Mone waves at the crowd. The crowd reacts with laughter and applause. Dickie leaps from the rafters and parachutes his way downward. The crowd watches as the spotlight follows Dickie’s drop. After floating around a bit, Dickie safely lands in the center of the ring. His parachute covers Diddly Squat and the referee. Dickie unstraps his parachute and climbs to the second turnbuckle. He waves to the crowd. The crowd applauds him.The referee and Diddly seem to be having a hard time untangling the parachute. Dickie hops off the ropes and helps Diddly and the referee out from underneath the parachute. Once they are freed, Cha’Mone waves at both of the men. Diddly seems a bit upset, but quickly begins to smile. Diddly raises the microphone to his mouth.Diddly Squat:[/b] Although, that wasn’t the smartest thing in the world to do, I must say you made a grand entrance. Diddly extends his hand. Dickie shakes it but Diddly is quick to put the newcomer in a head lock. P2PW Stagehand’s pull the parachute out of the ring as the referee calls for the bell.
Singles Match Dickie Cha’Mone vs. Diddly Squat
Dickie quickly breaks the hold sending Diddly off the ropes. As Diddly returns, Dickie applies a sleeper hold. This is countered by a side suplex from the Insanity member. Dickie makes it to one knee as Diddly nips up. Diddly points to his temple, implying that he’s using his brain to gain control of the match. Cha’Mone smiles and nods his head. The two men circle the inside of the ring and lock up. This time, Dickie applies a headlock to Squat. Diddly reverses the hold with an armbar. Dickie, tapping his own shoulder, shows the crowd that he can play a technical game as well. He drops to the mat and performs an arm drag to Diddly Squat. Dickie applies pressure to the arm of Diddly as the referee is in position to see if Diddly wants to submit. Diddly seems in pain as he makes it to his feet, still in the grips of an arm bar. He reverses the hold, twisting Cha’Mone’s arm. Cha’Mone quickly counters with a roll out. He stands as Diddly looks on. Both men are on their feet. Dickie smiles towards Diddly as Diddly expresses a look of concern. Diddly sprints towards Dickie. Dickie takes him down with a drop toe hold. He then hops to his feet. He walks a few strides away from the fallen Diddly Squat. Cha’Mone then turns his back on the Insanity member and moonwalks towards him. He then drops an elbow to the back of Diddly’s neck. The crowd laughs as they applause the charisma of the newcomer. Dickie rolls Diddly over and hooks the leg. He gets a two count. Cha’Mone picks Diddly up and sends him to the far corner. Diddly crashes into the turnbuckle and staggers out of the corner. Dickie nails Diddly Squat with a thunderous DDT. Again, he goes for another cover but is unsuccessful. Dickie then aids Diddly to his feet. He whips Diddly towards the ropes, but Diddly reverses. Dickie springs off of the ropes. Dickie attempts a running shoulder clothesline but Diddly ducks. Diddly Squat springs off the ropes. Dickie turns around and is greeted with a flying forearm by the Insanity member. Both men hit the mat. Out of breath, Diddly remains on the mat. Dickie, feeling the effects of the forearm, lies on the mat as well. The referee begins a 10 count. Finally, Dickie shows signs of life. He is able to stagger to his feet just short of an 8 count. Dickie walks towards Diddly Squat. He picks him up and performs a long standing suplex on the Insanity member. Dickie goes for the cover, but comes up short. Again, he picks Diddly up, but Diddly lands a thumb to the eye. The referee warns Diddly. Diddly pushes Dickie into the referee. The referee staggers backwards. Diddly drops to one knee and lands a low-blow. The referee is quick to recover, but did not see the illegal move. Diddly climbs to the top rope and nails Dickie with “The Honor Roll”. Diddly goes for the cover and receives the win. Diddly Squat - 4.0833 Promo Points Dickie Cha’Mone - 3.5833 Promo Points[/I] Winner: Diddly Squat[/b]
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 16:44:58 GMT 1
Diddly is declared the victor and the referee raises his hand. Receiving a mixed reaction from the fans, Diddly works his way to the back. After a few moments, Dickie makes it to his feet. The crowd cheers the newcomer’s first match. Dickie looks towards the crowd, confused. A sad expression of defeat is slowly transformed into a smile. Dickie holds his hands up as the crowd cheers. As Dickie continues to pose for the crowd, the lights black out in the arena. Bells toll as the crowd erupts in boos. “Evil Unlimited” flashes across the screen. Dickie escapes through the crowd as a dark figure is shown on top of the ramp. The hooded figure slowly walks to the ring as “For Whom the Bell Toss” echos throughout the arena. The P2PW World Champion enters the ring. He proceeds to the center. He stands there for a moment. He snaps his head back revealing his face. Just as he does this, he looks towards the ceiling. Red sparks fall from the ceiling. The sparks rain onto Soul Reaper. The lights finally come back on and Soul Reaper scans the crowd as they continue to boo him. He grabs a microphone.
Soul Reaper:[/b] Shane Montez?
The crowd erupts at the mention of the number one contender’s name.
Soul Reaper:[/b] After his timely absence, Shane Montez is declared the number one contender for my World Title. I have no problems with this. He’s come and gone. And after next month’s “Deserted” he will be gone once again. I’ve done exactly what I told everyone I would do. I became the World Champion of the P2PW.
The crowd’s boos become louder.
Soul Reaper:[/b] There is no one in this arena that can beat me. There is no one in this arena that dares to even attempt to take this title from me. People, like Shane, are forced into the position. I assure you, Shane doesn’t want to face me. Not in the least.
Soul Reaper smirks as he continues to be cursed by the fans.
Soul Reaper:[/b] There is nothing I won’t do to keep this title around my waist. There is nothing more important to me. However, there is something just as important to me..... Evil Unlimited. These are my people. I guide them. I protect them. But, as you all know, Wench has been abducted.
The crowd erupts with cheers.
Soul Reaper:[/b] I call to you all, the powers of a follower. I call Hellspawn.
”Duality” hits as Hellspawn makes his way to the ring. He enters and is handed a microphone by Soul Reaper.
Hellspawn:[/b] Addryd! This has gone on long enough. What ever type of match you want, you’ve got. Just remember, if anything happens to Wench, worse will happen to you. Bring back Evil Unlimited’s goddess or fear what Evil Unlimited will bring to you.
Suddenly, Zeroin flickers as we see a caged Wench, now gagged and with her arms tied behind her back. Faint laughter is heard in the background. The laughter comes from an off-camera Addryd. With the camera focusing on Wench, Addryd speaks.
Addryd:[/b] She was complaining too much. Now she’s gagged. Any tighter and it’ll be tough for her to even breath....Much like the ending of a hangman’s match. I’ll see you, Hellspawn, when I am ready. As for now, sit back wonder just what I’ll do to Wench next...
Again, laughter is heard as Zeroin slowly fades to black as Wench is seen struggling to get free. Soul Repear and Hellspawn climb out of the ring. The walk up the ramp sporting angry looks. Hellspawn is shown talking to the leader of Evil Unlimited. Soul Reaper’s response is nothing but furious nods.
Zeroin takes us backstage as Stare is shown sipping a cup of coffee. He stands by himself. Suddenly, there is a tap on his shoulder. The camera pans over to see a member of the Decepticons. This member is Venus.
Venus:[/b] Terrible addiction.
Stare looks at his cup of coffee then looks back towards Venus.
Stare:[/b] You’re right. You do have a terrible addiction. “Servicing” the male members of The Decepticons must be pretty fulfilling for a girl like yourself.
Venus quickly takes offense.
Venus:[/b] I know what you are trying to get at. It’s not like that. We are the most dominate force in this company. It’s a shame you are one of the many roadblocks we have to plow through to climb the ladder.
Stare:[/b] Yea, well... I refuse to go down without one hell of a fight. I can picture it already. Later tonight, I’ll be kicking the life out of Mr. Acid, while you and SoundScream plan your interference. You’re an open book. Your entire organization is transparent. In fact, I can see through you right now.
Venus:[/b] And what is it you see?
Stare:[/b] Not a damn thing. You’re hollow. You’re as empty as this here cup of coffee.
Stare finishes his cup and drops it at Venus’s feet.
Stare:[/b] Live and learn shallow one. Someday you are hoping to not be tied down by others. You want a singles run. With your position as it is, you’re empty. Trent is empty. SoundScream is using the both of you to get to the top. Well, sweetheart, service him all you want. It doesn’t make a damn difference to me. In the end, it will be The Decepticons that fail, and it will be me that takes down your fellow leader, leaving you and Trent to doubt his abilities. Trust me...
Stare walks away as Venus follows him with her eyes. We now take you back to ringside as another debuting superstar is about to make his mark here in the P2PW.
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 16:45:57 GMT 1
”High Roller” hits the speakers as newcomer, Chadwick, bursts through the curtain. He runs down the ramp and slides into the ring. He immediately hits a few corners, posing for the crowd. “Fight” hits as the crowd boos. Big man, Wolverine, strides to the ring. He steps onto the apron and over the top rope. He stares down at the newcomer as the referee calls for the bell.
Singles Match Wolverine vs. Chadwick
The two men lock up. Wloverine quickly shoves Chadwick to the mat. Chadwick get’s up and springs himself off the ropes. He runs towards Wolverine. Wolverine lifts his leg up for the big boot. Chadwick slides under Wolverine, avoiding the move. Wolverine turns around and is suddenly nailed with a huge standing dropkick by the newcomer. Wolverine falls to the mat. The crowd jumps to their feet, as this a look of surprise overtakes Wolverine’s face. Wolverine stands and approaches Chadwick. He swings towards Chadwick, but the newcomer ducks. Chadwick nails Wolverine with a German suplex and goes for a quick cover. Wolverine violently kicks out, sending Chadwick half way across the ring. However, Chadwick doesn’t lose a step. He sneaks up behind Wolverine as Wolverine makes it to his feet. Chadwick nails the big man with the “Chad Clutch”. Again, he goes for the cover but Wolverine kicks out. Chadwick waits for Wolverine to make it to his feet. He does. Chadwick runs in but Wolverine lays the newcomer out with a devastating clothesline. Wolverine takes this time ti catch his breath. A bit dazed, Chadwick staggers to his feet. Wolverine grips Chadwick by the neck signaling for a choke slam. Chadwick wiggles free and sets Wolverine up for the C-plex. Wolverine counters with a few hard blows to the mid-section of Chadwick. Wolverine springs himself off of the ropes but is greeted with Chadwick’s signature move, the Ka-Ching. Chadwick goes for the quick cover and comes up victorious in his debut match here on TNT. Chadwick - 3.75 Promo Points Wolverine - 2.8333 Promo Points[/I] Winner: Chadwick[/b] Chadwick gets a huge response from the crowd as he springs himself over the top rope and makes his way up the ramp. Chilly Willy is now seen working his way through the crowd. He hops over the barricade and slides into the ring. He pounces on to his brother and begins to pound away. The referee tries to stop Chilly Willy, but he can’t. The referee calls for help as Chilly Willy has now busted open his own brother. Staff runs to the ring and pries Chilly Willy off of Wolverine. Wolverine is now on his feet. The two men are restrained by staff, yelling at one another. “People Hate Me” hits the speakers as “Sensational Shooter” Shane Montez makes his first TNT appearance in months.The crowd goes nuts as Shane walks to the ring. He slides into the ring as staff is still holding back Wolverine and Chilly Willy. Shane calls for the microphone.Shane Montez:[/b] Easy guys. Easy! I have just the thing that will solve your family problems. Staff, please let them go. I’ll make sure they don’t attack one another. In fact, I’ll bring these two together. Reluctantly, staff lets Wolverine and Chilly Willy go. Staff leaves the ring. Amazingly, Wolverine and Chilly Willy do not attack one another. They are both angry, but Shane stands in the middle of the two brothers.Shane Montez:[/b] Well, it’s obvious we have a problem here. But, you guys are brothers. Brothers aren’t suppose to fight. So, I have a solution to your problem. Wolverine and Chilly Willy take their eyes off of one another and focus on Shane Montez.Shane Montez:[/b] Good! That’s good. You both are hearing me out. Now, the first thing you need to do is... Shane Montez lays Wolverine out with a Kottonmouth Kick. Wolverine falls to the mat, unconscious. Chilly Willy looks on. Shane looks towards Chilly Willy smiling. Chilly Willy smiles back and begins to laugh. Shane and Chilly Willy remain laughing.Shane Montez:[/b] See Chilly? That’s how you take care of family problems. Before Chilly Willy can respond, Shane nails Chilly with a Shanecutter. The crowd erupts as Shane address his actions.Shane Montez:[/b] Ok, now that those two are out of the way, I would like to address my number one contender status. The fans cheer as Shane nods.Shane Montez:[/b] After sitting back, at home, watching Evil Unlimited run TNT, and now try to take over Blitz! I got a little sick of it. So, I decided to approach the higher-ups and point out my number one contender stipulation. The crowd continues to go nuts.Shane Montez:[/b] That’s right. I’m back, and I am ready to regain control, no matter who steps in my way. Whether it be Evil Unlimited, The Deceptsomethings, Wolverine, Chilly Willy, Nation, Shinn’s Theory, or anyone else. I am back to take back what is mine. After Deserted, you’ll see the P2PW World Champion wrapped around this sensational waist. Shane drops the microphone as the crowd cheers. He makes his way to the back. Zeroin then flickers, as we see Evenflow entering the arena.Evenflow walks in and rounds a corner, bumping into Cactus.Cactus:[/b] Easy there killah! Evenflow:[/b] Shouldn’t I be saying that to you? Cactus:[/b] Aren’t you suspended? Evenflow:[/b] No. Weren’t you suspended? Cactus:[/b] Yes. Aren’t you The Hood? Evenflow:[/b] No. Weren’t you in the BWO? Cactus:[/b] Yes. Weren’t you The Hood? Evenflow:[/b] No. Didn’t you lose to Reaper at Rage Rules? Cactus:[/b] Yes. Didn’t you lose to Shinn’s Theory? Evenflow:[/b] No. Didn’t you kill Kaos? Cactus:[/b] Accidently. Doc Holliday:[/b] When are you both going to shut up? The camera pans over to see Doc Holliday standing there, with his cowbell dangling from a rope.Doc Holliday:[/b] Evenflow, or should I say “The Hood”, what type of shit are you trying to pull? You’re suspended. I know Shinn’s Theory isn’t the smartest guy in the world, but he’ll even agree with that. And, Cactus? All you do is whine about not given a title shot. Shut up already. If anyone deserves a title shit, it’s me. You had your chance. You blew it. Suck it up. Cactus becomes furious as Doc walks off. Evenflow also walks off. Cactus stands there, fuming, as Shinn’s Theory comes into the picture.Shinn’s Theory:[/b] You wanted to see me? Cactus:[/b] I deserve a title shot Shinn’s. You know that. Shinn’s Theory:[/b] You had your chance at Rage Rules. Cactus:[/b] Look. Let me put it to you this way. At Extinction, if it wasn’t for Trent Acid, I would have become World Champion, not Shane. I gave Soul Reaper one hell of a match at Rage Rules. Then, right after Rage Rules, I beat the Rage Champion and the International Champion. Now, Shane walks back after all of this time and is put right back into the spotlight? That’s bullshit Shinn’s. You know it is. Shinn’s Theory:[/b] I’m going to be honest with you here Cactus. I know you are worthy of a title shot. But the fact is, you are being forced to rebuild yourself here in the P2PW. I know what happened to Kaos was an accident, but many people believe it wasn’t. Take this time to start from scratch. Prove to everyone in the back that you are a great hardcore wrestler, and not a killer. After that, things will fall into place for you......I promise. Shinn’s walks off as Cactus stands there, thinking.
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 16:46:39 GMT 1
”Pardon Me” hits the speakers and Stare comes out to a huge ovation. The fans are on their feet as Stare is finally given the opportunity to wrestle in the P2PW once again. He works his way down to the ring, slapping the hands of a few fans. He enters the ring and holds both fists in the air. Fireworks explode throughout the arena as Stare poses for the crowd. His music fades as he scans the arena. The crowd is deafening. Stare smiles back at the crowd. Zeroin begins to flicker and “The Decepticons” flash across the screen.”Thuggish Ruggish Bone” hits as Trent Acid makes his way to the ring. Stare stretches as Trent enters the ring. Stare quickly pounces on Trent Acid, taking him down to the mat. He lands various punches to Trent as the referee calls for the bell.
Main Event - Singles Match Stare vs Trent Acid
[/color] [/center] Stare gets off of Trent and aids him to his feet. He nails Trent with a few loud chops, backing him into a corner. Stare then whips Trent into the opposite corner. Stare runs in and lands a high knee to Trent, who falls to the mat in the corner. Stare stops for a moment looking towards the deafening crowd. He then turns his attention back towards Trent. He approaches Trent and helps him up. He then performs an inverted atomic drop to the Decepticons member. Stare sweeps the leg of Trent. Trent falls to the mat and Stare drops next to him, applying a strong headlock to Trent. The fans continue to cheer for Stare as he continues to apply the headlock on Trent. Trent makes it to his feet. He shoves Stare against the ropes but Stare springs back and clutches a sleeper hold on Trent. Venus is now shown walking to the ring. The crowd boos as she makes her appearance. Stare sees Venus but refuses to break the hold. The referee waits for Trent to show signs of unconsciousness. Trent drops to one knee. The referee raises Trent’s arm and it falls to his side. The referee counts 1. Again, the referee raises the arm of Trent, and again it falls. The referee counts 2. Just before the referee raises Trent’s arm again, Venus hops onto the apron. The referee approaches her telling her to get off of the ring apron. As his back is turned, SoundScream is shown running through the crowd. He hops over the barricade and grabs a steel chair. He folds it up and enters the ring. Stare’s back is turned to SoundScream as he keeps the sleeper hold tight on Trent. SoundScream swings the chair, nailing Stare in the back. Stare breaks the hold and lays on the may, clutching his back in pain. SoundScream rolls out of the ring and Venus jumps off of the apron. The referee turns around as notices both men are down. He starts his 10 count. Stare is able to crawl over to Trent and make the cover. The referee begins to count but SoundScream pulls him out of the ring. The referee thenwarns SoundScream to not get involved again. The referee rolls back into the ring. Stare still has an arm over Trent. The referee counts but Trent is able to kick out just before the three count. SoundScream yells towards Trent, grabbing the referee’s attention. The referee warns SoundScream again not to get himself involved. With the referee’s attention on SoundScream, Venus makes her way to the opposite side of the ring. She folds up a steel chair and approaches Stare. Stare, using the ropes to help stand, is greeted with a hard chair shot to the head by Venus. This causes Starcrunch to bust through the curtain. She runs around the ring and catches up with Venus. Starcrunch and Venus exchange blows. The referee crawls out of the ring, trying to pry the two women apart. Seeing an opening, SoundScream crawls into the ring, again with a steel chair. He nails Stare in the leg with the chair. He then lays the chair down on the mat. He orders Trent to get to the top rope. When Trent makes it to the top rope, SoundScream picks Stare up. He props Stare up, into the arms of Trent. Trent sets Stare up for the Acid Bomb. Trent executes the move onto the chair, busting Stare open. Shinn’s Theory is shown running to the ring. SoundScream meets him at the bottom of the ramp. The two men exchange blows as the referee rolls back into the ring. Trent makers the cover and gains the victory. Trent Acid - 4.15 Promo Points Stare - 4.14 Promo Points[/I] Winner: Trent Acid[/b] On the outside, Starcrunch begins getting the better of Venus. SoundScream appears to be getting the better of Shinn’s Theory. Starcrunch tosses Venus over the barricade and onto the concrete floor. She then runs behind SoundScream and low-blows him. Shinn’s Theory shakes away the cob webs and sets SoundScream up for the Theory Driver. He plants SoundScream, head first, onto the steel grate.Shinn’s Theory and Starcrunch immediately slide into the ring and tend to an unconscious Stare. Shinn’s signals for help as EMTs and P2PW Staff rush to the ring. The EMT’s try to regain consciousness in Stare but are unsuccessful. They load him onto a stretcher. An Oxygen mask is placed over the mouth of Stare. Shinn’s and Starcrunch walk with the EMTs up the ramp as they roll Stare to the back. TNT goes off the air with the camera following the stretcher, approaching an awaiting ambulance.------------------------ Read what happened when TNT went off the air in the "P2PW TNT - Off-air Notes" section of the Official P2PW Website![/color][/b]
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 16:53:50 GMT 1
Staff Promo Ratings:
Shinn's Theory's Ratings:[/u] Dickie Cha’Mone - 3.5 (This guy did his homework. I can totally picture his character. He cracks me up and makes me wanna grab my crotch and yell "Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!". Good debuting promo. Should add some text effects to make it a smoother read.) Diddly Squat - 4.0 (Great as always. Excellent layout.)
Wolverine - 2.5 (Still need some work, but you're coming along. Remember, in order to attack someone in your promos you need their approval. I like how you are building a storyline between you and your brother. Sometimes you need to focus on the match at hand. You still get my praises though. Keep it up!) Chadwick - 3.5 (The ending confused me. I take it the ending was a typo? Even so, I thought Chadwick was a face. Slapping a P2PW Interviewer seems more heelish, or tweenerish. Besides that, the dubuting promo was excellent. I am anxious to see more from Chadwick.)
Floorstare - 4.0 (I almost had to rip you a new one until I read the end. Not much mentioned about the match. Sort of a "Backlash" from Blitz! In any event, you always write good promos. World up homeslice!) Trent Acid - 4.1 (Good intense promo. Trent gets better every week.)
Wench's Ratings:[/u] Dickie Cha’Mone -3.5 (I agree here. Adding italics or colored text would make it easier to read. Diddly Squat - 4 (Very good promo.)
Wolverine - 3 (Again, you need to make sure the reader can see what's happening since we really can't) Chadwick -4 (Very good start. I've seen your work elsewhere and its just as good here.)
Floorstare - 4.2 (Very good, Stare.) Trent Acid - 4.3 (I thought Yours was just a tad bit better. I like how the storyline is building.)
Stare's Ratings:[/u] Dickie Cha’Mone - 3.5 (One of the more impressive debut promo's I've seen. Built your character nicely. If you continues this, you should become a very valued addition to the roster) Diddly Squat - 4.2 (very comical, and said everything you needed to say. Spaz saying "Oi" made me laugh, but that's my own sick humor. I really like how you actually poked fun of your own character, and really showed your perspectice on the group's relationship. The Insanity is coming along nicely)
Wolverine - 2.5 (You really need to sit down and take a look at your promo's when writing them. Try to visualize what your'e writing actually happening on the screen in a show. This promo was very random, and put too much action in not enough length, which made it very cluttered) Chadwick - 3.5 (Another great promo. You've been doing promo's at other places, I guess. Very good promo, I liked how you talked about who you were and your future)
STARE:- Trent Acid - 4 (You don't scare me! Seriously though, good promo. Reacted off the recent happenings at Blitz! nicely, and hyped the match up well. Good job)
Rocky's Ratings:[/u] Dickie Cha’Mone - 4 (very good stuff. A great character. Funny at times and, even though the ending was humerous, it still came off serious. Well done on your debut promo) Diddly Squat - 4.3 (funny stuff again. But that's what I've come to expect. You seem to always get the balance between humour correct and never go too far with anything. Nice one)
Wolverine - 2.5 (there was no flow to it. Even though it was a lengthy promo, it felt very rushed. Take your time with it and think it out in advance before you write it.) Chadwick - 4 (Good promo. The transition between talking to the crowd and being interviewd was seemless. It was well detailed and you amnaged to cover a range of topics in one good piece of writing)
Floorstare - 4.2 (a good return promo. These two were different styles, but there's nothing between them in my opinion. There was a nice, funny ending to it, which contrasted well with the seriousness throughout the rest of it. Nice.) Trent Acid - 4.3 (Excellent. Keeping it short and to the point and the subject and match at hand often beats long, detailed promos. This was one of those short and to the point promos.)
Shane Montez's Ratings:[/u] Dickie Cha'Mone - 3.5 Diddly Squat - 4.0
Wolverine - 3.0 Chadwick - 3.5
Floorstare - 4.2 Trent Acid - 4.1
Soul Reaper's Ratings:[/u] Dickie Cha'Mone - 3.5 Diddly Squat - 4.0
Wolverine - 3.5 Chadwick - 4
Floorstare - 4.1 Trent Acid - 4.1
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Post by Stare on Oct 24, 2004 17:00:47 GMT 1
nice job Shinns.
The Decepticons will pay, oh yes, they will pay!
I love Dickie Cha'mone!
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Post by soulreaper on Oct 24, 2004 17:01:53 GMT 1
HA! my favorite part is
Cactus: "I deserve a title shit."
Now thats classic
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Post by Stare on Oct 24, 2004 17:04:08 GMT 1
Ha! I noticed that too, but I chose to not say anything.
Since Ihave no program to spellcheck, I'm sure you'll be making fun of my shows non-stop, Reaper
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 17:14:27 GMT 1
Bastard! And I thought you didn't read much of the shows. Besides, I have no idea what you both are talking about.
Walks away with hands in pockets, looking at the ceiling, whistling.
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Post by Reaper on Oct 24, 2004 17:27:41 GMT 1
lol
Great show Shinn's. Again.
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Post by Wench on Oct 24, 2004 17:47:45 GMT 1
Very NIce job once again, Shinns/.
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Post by ChadClassic on Oct 24, 2004 18:05:18 GMT 1
Good job all. Loved my debut match, good job to you as well Wolverine for putting up a good fight!
Chadwick is now 1-0 at P2PW!!! ;D
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Post by diddlysquat on Oct 24, 2004 19:27:07 GMT 1
Another great show!
I got a win! I got a win! ;D
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 24, 2004 19:34:58 GMT 1
HA! my favorite part is Cactus: "I deserve a title shit." Now thats classic You think that's funny? I also had Diddly place Dickie in a "Heard Lock". Ha! I just saw that.
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Post by Scream on Oct 24, 2004 20:38:17 GMT 1
Great job Shinn's. I'm enjoying our little feud.
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Post by stocko on Oct 24, 2004 23:46:18 GMT 1
quality show peeps!
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Post by spaz on Oct 25, 2004 7:59:55 GMT 1
very nice show stare, and shinns
well done diddly, representa
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Post by Cactus on Oct 25, 2004 8:04:24 GMT 1
Nice show althou a "title shit" ? ? ? WTF
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Post by Gormy on Oct 25, 2004 14:05:32 GMT 1
Good stuff as always
I dont know why I bother commenting though, because I always say the same thing!
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Post by Cactus on Oct 25, 2004 15:55:45 GMT 1
you comment to up your whore post count like the rest of us english peeps
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Post by Nation on Oct 25, 2004 18:35:18 GMT 1
great show as always dude.
cactus must have some hamstrings on him though to get from my house to the arena in record time. you speedy devil you!
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Post by Dickie Cha'mone on Oct 25, 2004 19:31:24 GMT 1
Quality show, thought my debut match was great
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Post by LK on Oct 25, 2004 21:53:40 GMT 1
It was very good, but I haven't won a match since I've got on this, and I've been in like 6 matches, but just a thought.
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Post by shinnstheory on Oct 25, 2004 22:58:36 GMT 1
Work on your promos a bit more buddy. People start off slow and climb the ladder sooner or later. You'll do fine once you get use to it. It takes time.
EDIT: Remember, most of the people in the P2PW have been in many other e-feds over the years. They have a good jump on you. Just don't give up bro.
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Post by Nation on Oct 25, 2004 23:27:29 GMT 1
just keep at it, dude. take note of the promo feedback left after the show. also try and define your character a bit more. give him a purpose and definition of his personality. who is he? why is he here? what does he hope to achieve? the victories will come but you just have to keep at it. take a look at other people's promos as well in terms of structure etc. hell, there might be one little nugget in someone else's work that triggers something inside you. also try and find someone that you can team up or feud with. work out what you want. it is a matter of give and take. but it'll be good for you and the other person if done right no matter who comes out on top.
and the main thing is to have fun. that's what it's all about.
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