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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 14, 2005 19:36:31 GMT 1
 Single’s Match
Rage Rules Tournament - Qualifying Match One
“The Assassin” Tyler Stone vs. Wolverine
(Written By: Cactus) [/b][/center] Wolverine stands in the middle of the ring, he is glaring around the arena and small flecks of spit are flying out of his mouth as he snarls in and out. Tyler steps into the ring carefully and completes a circle around the monster, making sure that he never gets in reach. Wolverine acts like he does not see him, but listens to his manager James shouting out instructions from the outside. Tyler stops in front of the bigger man and darts in for a lock up, Wolverine pushes him backwards with such force that Tyler falls between the bottom and middle rope. The referee quickly runs over to that side of the ring to make sure that Wolverines manager stays away. The camera cuts to shot of Tyler sitting up on the floor with a look of disbelief in his eyes, and then back to the monster in the ring, who it appears has not moved. Tyler slowly gets back to his feet and climbs onto the apron. He is hesitant to get in the ring, buts he ducks slowly under the top rope and gets back in. He then explodes out and clotheslines the bigger man but Wolverine barely moves. Tyler backs up to the ropes and tries again, this time Wolverine waves him in, instead of a clothesline Tyler darts behind the bigger man and goes for a german suplex. Wolverine does not move, then starts to back slowly in to the corner, trapping Tyler behind him. Wolverine brings his body forward and forces it backwards, crushing all the air out of Tyler’s lungs. Instead of beating on the stunned Tyler Wolverine takes a step back then lifts his leg into the throat of Tyler. With no air in his lungs Tyler tries to shake the boot of but to no avail. The ref. starts his count and Wolverine takes to the count of 4 before dropping his foot. Tyler gasps for air as Wolverine backs off, he raises his foot again, this time instead of going for another choke Wolverine tries to kick Tyler’s head of. The smaller man ducks under the massive kick and wolverine half crotches himself on the turnbuckle. The assassin sees this as his opening and begins to kick the quad of the bigger man. Wolverine begins to shout in pain, then his leg gives out and he falls to the floor. The assassin takes the already damaged leg and drapes it over the bottom rope. He slides out and whips the leg into the steel pole that supports the turnbuckle, Wolverine howls in pain so Tyler tries it again. This time wolverine powers out of it using his leg strength and sends Tyler head first into the steel. Tyler’s eyebrow immediately spays blood. Sensing victory is near wolverine limps out of the ring and gorilla presses Tyler over the top rope back into the ring. He climbs back in to the ring and picks Tyler up into the powerbomb position. He walks over to the corner and runs out and drops a bloody Tyler head and neck first into the facing turnbuckles. Tyler falls limp to the mat as Wolverine looks on with a sadistic smile on his face, he goes for a weak cover and the ref. gets up to a 2 count then stops, he points to Tyler’s leg on the bottom rope. James McIntyre jumps on the apron to confront the ref. and Wolverine joins him claiming that it does not matter that his foot was on the ropes, Tyler has lost a lot of blood and is out and Wolverine claims he is the winner. The crowd let out a mighty roar and Wolverine thinks that the crowd are behind him, but we see a returning Firefly sprinting down the ramp and sliding headfirst into the ring as Tyler begins to get to his feet. Firefly salutes the crowd then spins round and grabs Tyler and performs his finisher, a flipping stunner he calls The Purple Haze. The crowd mark out as Firefly rolls out of the ring and starts to back up the ramp. Wolverine turns round and is amazed to see a crimson masked Tyler out in the centre of the ring, he pushes his own manager to the floor and spins the ref. around. Wolverine roughly hooks both legs as the ref. counts the 1 .......2........ 3. Wolverine - 3.5 Promo Points + 0.4 Voting Points = 3.9
"The Assassin" Tyler Stone - 0.0 Promo Points + 0.7 Voting Points = 0.7 [/u] Winner: Wolverine[/b] The referee raises Wolverine's hand in victory. Wolverine quickly snaps his hand away, looking down at Tyler. Wolverine chuckles a bit before exiting his ring. He walks up the ramp, along with James, and disappears into the back. EMTs rush the ring to tend to Tyler. After trying to help him up, Tyler shoves the EMTs away. He stares towards the back, blood dripping from his head. Tyler looks furious as Zeroin shows the following image. (CLICK TO ENLARGE) [/b] Yea, it's a bit different but I'm getting use to it. Red Ninja:[/b] I hear ya. Red Ninja pauses for a minute.Red Ninja:[/b] I was going to ask you something... Red Ninja scratches his chin as he looks towards the floor.Red Ninja:[/b] Oh! I remember now. Who is the guy in the skybox? Summer Annesley:[/b] I believe people call him Lord High Warlock. Red Ninja:[/b] Did the P2PW sign him? Summer Annesley:[/b] I believe it is a short term contract. Red Ninja:[/b] Will he be signed to TNT or Blitz? Summer Annesley:[/b] Actually, he isn't signed as a wrestler. TNT signed him to do a little graphic marketing. He's a techie. Red Ninja:[/b] Ahhh... Suddenly, Firefly is shown walking by. Summer quickly turns her attention towards him.Summer Annesley:[/b] Firefly! A quick word? Firefly looks towards Summer.Firefly:[/b] And who the hell are you? Summer Annesley:[/b] I'm one of TNT's interviewers. Firefly looks at her breifly. He then begins to walk off.Summer Annesley:[/b] Why did you attack Tyler Stone! Firefly stops in his tracks. Without turning around, he answers.Firefly:[/b] The same reason I'll attack the next guy...and the next after him. Firefly then walks off and disappears around a corner. Summer looks towards Red Ninja.Red Ninja:[/b] Furi-Ku. Summer Annesley:[/b] Yep...He's definately a freak. Teh crowd laughs at the expression on Red Ninja's confused face.Red Ninja:[/b] You know Japanese? Summer Annesley:[/b] I was required to study the language. Shinn's Theory told me you often speak a word or two in Japanese. Red Ninja shakes his head and walks off, mumbling.Red Ninja:[/b] Kadamono... Summer Annesley:[/b] Hey! I'm not a fruit! Summer stomps off as Red Ninja walks into his locker room. We now take you back to ringside. Zeroin shows the following. |
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 14, 2005 19:39:49 GMT 1
"California Love" hits. The Executioner appears. The crowd boos the big man as he makes his way to the ring. The Executioner is not phased by the crowd. He enters the ring and waits for his opponent. "Never Let Me Down" hits. The crowd ljumps to their feet as "The Tiger" Aladdin appears. Aladdin looks around the sold out arena, smiling. Aladdin then jogs to the ring and slides in. He quickly hops to his feet and looks up at The Executioner. Aladdin backs away and hits the corner, posing for the crowd. The camera flashes brighten the arena. He hops back onto the apron as the referee calls for the bell.Single’s Match
Rage Rules Tournament - Qualifying Match Two
“The Tiger”Aladdin vs. The Executioner
(Written By: Rocky) [/B][/color][/center] The two men circle each other in the ring, as the referee motions for the bell to sound. As it does, Aladdin and The Executioner continue to circle each other, each man watching the other's every move. The two competitors are almost evenly matched in height, but The Executioner has a noticeable weight advantage. The two men draw closer to each other and, after a few tentative attempts, eventually join hands for a test of strength. With little difference, Aladdin puts his foreheads to his opponents, to gain some momentum, briefly doing so. The Executioner, with a burst of strength, shoves Aladdin's head back with his and, in turn, forces his hands down, driving Aladdin to his knees. Falling onto his back, Aladdin brings his feet up to the abdomen of The Executioner and pushes him into the air, and onto his back. Still with hands locked, both men turn onto their stomaches. The Executioner takes advantage, breaking the hold and snapping a rear headlock on Aladdin. Spinning trough, Aladdin gets to his knees, forcing The Executioner to do the same, before locking in a hammer lock almost immediately. The Executioner then spins behind Aladdin, as both men get to their feet, shoving him in the back. This sends Aladdin to wards the ropes. Bouncing off them, Aladdin rebounds to wards The Executioner, who attempts a clothesline. Aladdin ducks and comes off the rope at the other side. Again he rebounds to wards his opponent and attempts a clothesline of his own. This time it's The Executioner who ducks. Aladdin turns around in a hurry, as both men stand firm, ready to fight. The crowd jump to their feet wildly, appreciating the fast and exciting beginning to the match. Both men stare at each other, exchanging nods and impressed facial expressions in respect. The crowd applaud this, before calming down. The two men in the ring then step to wards each other once more. The Executioner raises his hands for another test of strength, inviting Aladdin to do the same. He does so, but, as they are about to connect, The Executioner slams his knee into the midsection of The Tiger. As the fans boo, Joe takes advantage and sends several right hand shots crashing down on the temple of Aladdin. Staggering Aladdin, turns to grab the rope to regain his balance. Moments later he turns to face The Executioner again, but is picked up and thrown to the mat with a strong powerslam. The Executioner then makes the first cover of the match, but Aladdin kicks out just on the two. The Executioner raises his opponent to his feet and launches him into the corner. He take a few steps back, before running and lunging his shoulder into the abdomen of Aladdin. After doing it again, The Executioner pulls The Tiger from the corner and hits a snap suplex. Quickly to his feet, The Executioner lands a legdrop across the face of Aladdin before attempting a second cover. Again, Aladdin kicks out. Still well in control, The Executioner raises Aladdin to his feet again. This time, he positions himself behind him and hits a back breaker. Without letting Aladdin fall to the mat, Joe lifts him straight up and hits a backdrop. Again, Joe goes for the cover and, again, Aladdin kicks out. For a third time, The Executioner goes to raise Aladdin to his feet, but this time The Tiger ties him up with a small package pin attempt. The crowd count as the referee does, but just as the hand was coming down for the three, Joe kicks out. Stunned, The Executioner looks at the referee, turning his back on Aladdin, allowing Aladdin to go for the schoolboy rollup. Again, the referee makes the count and again, The Executioner just manages to kick out. The crowd cheer wildly for Aladdin who is the first to his feet this time. The Executioner gets to his feet too and, as he does so, Aladdin knocks his straight back down with a clothesline. Again, Joe gets to his feet, but again Aladdin lands a hard clothesline across the face of his opponent. For a third time, The Executioner gets to his feet. Aladdin this time kicks him in the midsection and goes for a DDT. But, with the referee positioned behind Aladdin, The Executioner hits a low blow. The crowd boo as Aladdin falls to the mat in pain. The Executioner then climbs the turnbuckle, laughing all the way. Once up top, he dives off, trying to connect with an elbow drop, but Aladdin rolls out of the way, sending Joe crashing to the mat. It takes both men to the count of five before they manage to get to their feet. As soon as they do, they trade hard right hand shots. Having hurt his elbow on the missed assault from the turnbuckle, The Executioner begins feeling the pain with every shot, allowing Aladdin to take the momentum. He forces The Executioner to the ropes, before Irish Whipping him to the other side. As Joe rebounds to wards Aladdin, The Tiger kicks his opponent in the abdomen and hits the DDT he tried before. As his opponents head bounces off the canvas, Aladdin makes the cover, but Joe kicks out on the two. Aladdin gets to his feet, before dropping an elbow onto the face of The Executioner. Aladdin lifts his opponent to his feet and carries him drags him over to the corner, throwing him in. After sending three brutal chops to the chest of The Executioner, Aladdin lifts him up onto the top turnbuckle, before jumping up himself and hitting a picture perfect Dragonrana. As the Executioner's back hits the mat hard, Aladdin springs to his feet, runs to wards the rope, before jumping off the middle one and hitting a lionsault. Staying in place for the cover, the referee counts, but somehow The Executioner kicks out just as the hand was approaching the mat for the three. Aladdin then raises The Executioner up, before hitting his finisher, The Predation. Again making the cover, the referee begins the count, but Aladdin raises The Executioners head after the two. Aladdin shakes his head and smiles. The referee questions what he's doing, but Aladdin gently brushes him aside. Nodding to the crowd, Aladdin grabs the legs of The Executioner and locks in the Caged Animal. Within seconds, The Executioner is tapping out. The referee sounds for the bell, but trying to get some revenge for the low blow received earlier, Aladdin holds the submission move in for a while longer. Eventually satisfied, Aladdin releases his hold. Aladdin raises his hands in victory as the crowd cheer ecstatically. "The Tiger" Aladdin - 4.7333 Promo Points + 0.7 Voting Points = 5.4333
The Executioner - 3.8333 Promo Points + 0.4 Voting Points = 4.2333[/i] Winner: "The Tiger" Aladdin[/b] Never Let Me Down" hits as the crowd continue to erupt. Aladdin look towards Zeroin as it shows the following.  (CLICK TO ENLARGE) [/b] One down! The rest to go! The crowd roars as Aladdin drops the microphone and hops out of the ring. He walks up the ramp and disappears into the back. We now take you backstage. Shinn's Theory is shown on the phone.Shinn's Theory:[/b] I knew he was taking personal time off, but I didn't expect it to be so soon. Theory listens.Shinn's Theory:[/b] No, I understand. It may actually work out. I had MVP-Don booked to face E2, but E2 is injured. Theory listens.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Oh well, what can ya do? And, speaking of E2....I have a little footage I need to have the dinks in the production truck run. I'll get back to you later. Shinn's Theory snaps the phone shut and looks towards the camera.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Run it dinks! E2 Hospital Room Scene - Recorded Earlier This Week [/size] (Written By: E2 & Shinn's Theory)[/b][/color][/center] The scene begins in a cold, quiet hospital room. Hatred and isolation mar the room; it’s contents a bed, some medical equipment and a tall lone figure. Standing with his back turned to the camera is E2, the One Man
Killing Machine, peers coldly out his room window. The One Man Killing Machine's right shoulder is heavily bandaged, from the top. The pain he is suffering doesn’t show on his face, which is stone cold with anger. The bandages cover the area that includes his right shoulder, trapezoid, under his arm and around his peck. E2 stands with his hands behind his back and slowly turns to face the camera. Red eyed and angry, E2 addresses the situation. E2: You want to know what hell is like? Well here is some footage to give you an idea... Cut to footage of an emergency room. A voice over from one, Dr. Alexander Wettensworth, district surgeon, addresses the fans as the footage rolls.Dr. Wettensworth (VO): Mr. Edwards has suffered what is referred to in the medical industry as subacromial impingement syndrome. In other words, his rotator cuff was damaged. Dr. Wettensworth (VO): It's an injury many athletes experience at some point in their careers, particularly professional wrestlers and body builders who rely heavy on the bench press for shaping and strengthening their upper body. Dr. Wettensworth: (VO) Mr. Edwards had to have surgery, otherwise his wrestling career would have been over. This injury is similar to the one former WWE Champion Bret Hart faced in late 1994 when Bob Backlund refused to release the crossface chicken wing. Dr. Wettensworth: (VO): A medium-sized metal rod has been placed inside Mr. Edwards' shoulder to insure stability. And for the time being, Mr. Edwards will be required to wear a metal plate over his right shoulder, which, depending on some points of view, may actually be used as a weapon for his professional wrestling career. But that is for his employer to decide. BACK to E2. The lack of proper lighting in the room casts a shadow over the right side of his face.E2: Mr. Tyler Stone, I bet you’re thinking that I am going to stand here and verbally blast you. E2 wears a sadistic, sarcastic smile. E2: I bet you think— The One Man Killing Machine abruptly looks to the ceiling and shouts:E2: E.D.D.I.E.!!! E2 looks back to the camera.E2: You must be thinking that I am going to hold you in mind until I am released from the hospital, eh? E.D.D.I.E!!! But don’t worry about that. The sarcasm in E2’s voice becomes more and more evident.E2: I’m not going out like that playa. You took me to the mat and made me tap. You won. You’re the better man—E.D.D.I.E.!!!! This injury could have happened to anyone, so let bygones be—E.D.D.I.E.!!!! Suddenly, two nurses dressed in full hospital garb, pop into the room and throw on the light switches. As the room brightens, we see that E2 is holding a small, toy doll in his right hand.Nurse 1: Is everything all right in here. E2 swings around to face the ladies, revealing his doll.E2: Everything is just fine ladies. I was just having a friendly conversation with my pal E.D.D.I.E. here. The two nurses look at each other oddly and then slowly begin to back away from E2 and head out the door. Before they can shut the door, Shinn's Theory barges in. The nurse look on as E2's eye widen. Shinn's Theory looks towards E2 and begins to laugh.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Dude! Is that a little doll? Is THAT Eddie? E2 looks towards the dolls. As Shinn's continues to laugh.Shinn's Theory:[/b] And you call yourself the One Man Killing Machine? Holy shit man, you truly are a freak. Theory bends down, laughing hysterically. E2's heart rate can be heard increasing. The crowd within the arena can be heard laughing.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Wow...this is priceless. Ok... Theory semi-regains his composure.Shinn's Theory:[/b] I came here because I am your employer and it is my job to make sure everything you have here is up to par. Shinn's begins to look around E2's hospital bed.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Ok, everything seems to be in working order. Theory taps on E2's metal plated shoulder.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Wait a second here. This thing seems to be a bit loose. Theory looks around the room for a bit before focussing back on the metal plate.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Does that plate take flat of phillips head screws? E2 squints as he looks towards his plate.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Meh....screw it. Theory begins to pry at the metal plate, revealing the wound. E2 drops his doll and tries to fight Theory off with one arm. He is unsuccessful as the plate has been removed. Theory pounds away at the wound as E2 screams in pain. Doctors run in and pry Theory off of E2. E2 grabs his shoulder in pain as Theory looks on, sporting a furious grin. Theory shakes the doctors off. He bends down and grabs Eddie. He tosses the doll under his arm and walks towards the door. Theory turns towards E2 before exiting.Shinn's Theory:[/b] I'll take GOOD care of Eddie while you undergo further surgery. See you in.... Theory looks towards a doctor.Shinn's Theory:[/b] What do you think Doc? 6-8 months out? The doctor looks on, shocked. Theory waves goodbye to E2 and exits. E2 can be heard, screaming in pain. The camera follows Theory. Shinn's approaches an elevator and presses the lobby button. He then looks towards the camera as the doors open.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Check out my Ace Ventera - Pet Detective impression. Theory backs into the elevator, which is crammed with people. He holds Eddie in front of him. The doors begin to close but are stopped as Eddie's head is in the way. The doors open back up and try to close again. Again, Eddie's head is in the way. Theory looks down and acts surprised and embarassed. He looks around at the other people in the elevator, blushing. The crowd laughs as Zeroin fades to black. More action is now about to take place.
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 14, 2005 19:41:40 GMT 1
Red ninja walks through the curtain to the sound of his music, “Mama Said Knock You Out”. The crowd cheer him on as he walks steadily towards the ring. The self proclaimed Canadian Saviour of Wrestling walks by the side of the ramp, slapping the hands of all the fans, before sliding into the ring. He climbs to the second rope in the corner and poses quickly for the crowd. “Seek and Destroy” hits the arena as Cole Slocum makes his way out to a mixed reaction. The majority of the crowd stay on the seat, while a few others cheer and boo him, as they don’t know what he’s all about. Cole walks slowly to the ring, climbs the steel steps and enters the ring through the middle and top rope. Cole walks over to the ring announcer and passes him his sunglasses and his jacket. He then walks back over to the middle of the ring opposite Red Ninja as the referee rings the bell.Single’s Match
Rage Rules Tournament - Qualifying Match Three
Red Ninja vs. Cole Slocum
(Written By: Aladdin) [/B][/center] The two circle each other for a few seconds. Ninja loosens his wrist as Cole clicks his knuckle. They move in close together and quickly shake each others hands before moving back out. The two encircle each other again before charging at each other, locking up in the middle. Cole with the slight size advantage, pushes Ninja back towards the ropes, but Ninja puts on the breaks and then starts to regain his ground pushing Cole back into his side of the ring. Cole pushes Ninja back into the middle and the two break away in a stalemate. They nod their heads in respect and go back into the position again. Once more they break it in a stalemate. For the third time the two of them move forward into the position but Cole fakes and decks Ninja with a right hook. Ninja, shocked by the punch, falls onto his back. Ninja nips up and runs at Cole hitting him with a quick flurry of kicks to the legs and mid-section. Ninja ensues with quick fire punches all over Cole, not giving his opponent anytime to block or protect himself. Ninja backs Cole into the ropes and irish whips him to the other side. Ninja springs off the ropes himself and hits Cole with a 720 degrees head scissors. The momentum takes Cole all the way to the ropes and Cole then rolls himself out of the ring, which receives a chorus of boos from the crowd. Cole leans against the ring and the ropes, facing the crowd, trying to catch his breath. Ninja runs towards the opposite side ropes, bounces off them and runs towards Cole. Ninja goes for a 613, his version of the 619, on Cole, hitting him face first on the outside. Cole rebounds off the ring and the ropes further away from the ring. Ninja jumps onto the second rope and springs off it with a moonsault nailing Cole. Ninja lands in his feet but the momentum takes him into the rail. He leans on it for a while before walking back over to Cole. Ninja picks Cole up and irish whips him towards the rail, but Cole manages to counter and sends Ninja into the steel rail. Ninja hits it back first and falls to his knees. Cole amble towards him and picks up Ninja. He irish whips him into the steel steps with so much velocity the he falls to the floor himself. Ninja goes crashing into the steel steps back first and flips over it landing on his head. Cole walks over to him, lifts Ninja up and throws him into the ring. Cole slides back in. He goes straight for Ninja, picking him up and irish whipping him into the ropes. On Ninja’s way back Cole hits him with a tilt-a-whirl back breaker and hold his back down on his knee, pushing down on his legs and face. Cole keeps Ninja in the submission hold for a few seconds before picking him up from the position into a sidewalk slam position. Cole drops Ninja back down onto his knee, and Ninja bounces off onto the mat. Cole then bounces off the ropes and hits a knee drop to Ninja’s back. Cole remains on Ninja’s back with his knee, and lifts up Ninja from his legs and head. Cole them rolls around onto his back with Ninja still on his knee. Cole pulls down on Ninja’s legs and head, grinding his back into his knee. Cole then uses his hand to try and rip apart Ninja’s face, causing the referee to make him break the hold. Cole reluctantly relinquishes the hold, causing Ninja to fall face first into the mat. Cole gets up and kick Ninja repeatedly in the back, before picking him up. Cole hits him with a few punches. Ninja blocks a punch and retaliates with a couple of his own. He runs into the ropes and bounces off with a cross body. Cole catches Ninja in the air, and walks closer to the ropes. He goes for a fallaway slam but Ninja reverses the move in mid-air into a crucifix pin. The ref counts 1…2…but Cole kicks out. Cole quickly gets up from the pin attempt and goes for a clothesline but Ninja ducks it and springs off the ropes. Cole catches Ninja on the way back and hits him with an Arn Anderson spinebuster. Cole then picks Ninja up and places him in between his legs. Cole hooks his arms and picks him up in a tigerbomb like move but drops him down onto his knee. Cole then climbs to the top rope in the corner but gets distracted by boos from the crowd. Cole argues with them for a while, forgetting about his opponent. Ninja gets up, runs up the ropes and hits a round house kick on Cole, dazing him but not knocking him off. Ninja then walks back up to the top rope. He hooks Cole’s arm over his neck and lifts him up over his head. Ninja drops down hard to the mat, driving Cole’s head into the mat with a super brainbuster. Ninja clutches his back as Cole does the same for his head. Ninja gets up first and walks over to the ring apron behind the ropes. Cole gets up slowly as Ninja jumps to the top rope and goes for a springboard 720 DDT. Ninja twists around in the air and catches Col by his head, but Cole reverses the move using Ninja’s momentum to hit a black hole slam. Cole then quickly gets up and pulls Ninja into the middle of the ring. Cole prepares him for The 3 Pointer finisher. He bounces of the ropes and goes for a field goal kick to the head of Ninja, but Ninja manages to nip up in time and as Cole goes for the kick, Ninja side steps him and spinning heel kick. Ninja places Cole just next to the turnbuckle and then goes to climb to the top rope. Cole manages to get up before Ninja reaches the top and runs up to the top himself but Ninja just pushes him back. Cole then runs back to the top rope and the two of them ensue to brawl at the top. Ninja manages to get the advantage and bashes Cole’s head into the turnbuckle. Ninja then places Cole in between his legs and lifts him up into a cradle piledriver position. Ninja jumps off the turnbuckle and hits his The Red Bread Winner finisher. Ninja cover Cole…1…2….3! Red Ninja - 4.3667 Promo Points + 0.8 Voting Points = 5.1667
Cole Slocum - 4.333 Promo Points + 0.3 Voting Points = 4.633[/i] Winner: Red Ninja[/b]  (CLICK TO ENLARGE) [/b] Firefly is a dead man! When I get my hands on him, he'll regret fuckin' with us! Tyler pays no attention as he flips one boot off.ChadClassic:[/b] I hope that son of a bitch is still here! I'll go out right now and.... "The Assassin" Tyler Stone:[/b] And what!! Do absolutely nothing? Do actually what you did when I was getting jumped by Firefly? Sit on your ass and just......watch? ChadClassic looks as though he is about to speak. However, Tyler continues."The Assassin" Tyler Stone:[/b] Save your breath Chad! Tyler puts on his regular walking shoes. He ties them, grabs his travel bag, and walks out of the room, slamming the door behind him. ChadClassic is left standing there, looking at a closed door. We now take you back to ringside. Another image appears on Zeroin.
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 14, 2005 19:43:22 GMT 1
"Don't You Wish You Were Me" hits. Simz walks out from behind the curtain. He walks towards the ring. Simz enters. As he tests the ropes, "P.C." hits. The crowd jumps to their feet as Shinn's Theory appears. Shinn's walks to the ring and enters. He calls for a microphone. A P2PW Staff member tosses a microphone to Theory. Theory catches it. Simz advaces towards Theory, but Theory holds out his hand.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Easy there. Simz stops advancing.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Simz, I have good and bad news for you. Which would you like first? Simz leans in to speak but is cut off.Shinn's Theory:[/b] The bad? Ok. Well, you're match against Amie will not take place tonight. The crowd boos heavily. Simz seems to be questioning Theory in the ring.Shinn's Theory:[/b] The thing is, Amie took her ball and went home. We are still not sure why, but she quit the P2PW this morning. The crowd boos.Shinn's Theory:[/b] However...Simz...the good news is, you just advanced in the tournament. Take a look at Zeroin!  (CLICK TO ENLARGE) [/b] That's right Simz. You'll be facing your good ol' buddy, Aladdin next. Simz smiles as he continues to look up towards Zeroin.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Ok, with that said, be gone. Simz looks towards Theory sporting a bit of anger. He walks passed Shinn's, nudging him before exiting the ring and walking to the back. Shinn's shakes his head as Simz disappears.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Simz totally dissed me again..... The crowd laughs as Theory shakes his head. Suddenly "Whiskey in a Jar" hits. The crowd jumps to their feet as the TNT Rage Champion, Gormy, appears. She walks to the ring. He belt is buckled around her waist and she is carrying a microphone. She walks up the ring steps. Theory walks towards the ropes and opens them for her. She enters and nods towards Theory. The crowd explodes as Gormy hits all four corners. Gormy:[/b] You know, Mr. Theory, it's great to know that I'm not the only one in the locker room that recognizes that Rage Title is the biggest thing on TNT today. Theory, relucantly nods.Gormy:[/b] I mean, it's a fact that I'm the best damn thing that has ever happed to TNT. Without me, TNT would be nothing more than...Superstar Sunday. Theory looks on, a bit confused. Teh crowd begins to boo.Gormy:[/b] Look around at these people Shinn's. They are here to see me, and only me. The rest of the locker room are so far below me. I mean, look at what just happened? Amie quit the minute she found out that she was in this tournament. She didn't want to advance and perhaps face an athlete...One of my callibor. The crowd boos.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Gormy, with all due respect, I believe you are one of our top superstars here...And, the Rage Title is a HUGE title on TNT. And yes, your in-ring abilities are off the hook. But, your recent attitude is a bit......how can I put this.... hard headed? Gormy smiles at Theory.Gormy:[/b] Theory, you know...for well over a year, I've respected you. Shinn's Theory:[/b] Respected? As in, past tense? Gormy:[/b] That's right tiger. Ever since I have won this Rage Title, it's obvious that you, and everyone else in the back, are no challenge for me. Why should I respect you, or anyone else for that matter? Shinn's Theory:[/b] Maybe because I sign your paycheck? Gormy:[/b] Yeah, with the money I soley make for this company. So, with that said, I am calling the shots, here on TNT, from here on in. Shinn's Theory looks towards the roof of the arena.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Gormy? Are you up there? If so, please come back down to reality! Theory then approaches Gormy.Shinn's Theory:[/b] There is only ONE person on TNT that can call the shots, and that's.... "Hysteria" hits. The fans begin to boo as Rocky makes his way to the ring. He enters the ring and stands next to Gormy. Gormy hands Rocky the microphone.Rocky:[/b] So, you STILL think you're the only one that can call the shots here? Well, just as I told you earlier, next week on TNT, I call the shots. Gormy is shown laughing as Theory shakes his head.Rocky:[/b] This little power struggle between us has just come to an end, Shinn's. You see, Gormy and myself had a little talk backstage. The fact is, me and Gormy.....we have a lot in common. And, with Gormy having the biggest title on TNT, we're taking over. So, if I were you, Shinn's, I would walk to the back, pack up your little office, and hit the road. The crowd begins to boo. Shinn's backs up and steps under the bottom rope. He proceeds down the stairs. Rocky and Gormy are shown laughing to each other in the ring. Suddenly, Theory stops and slaps himself in the forehead.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Oh man! I almost forgot... Theory turns around and climbs back up the ring steps. He re-enters the ring and stands in front of Rocky and Gormy.Shinn's Theory:[/b] I think I may have "accidently" forgot to send the two of you the memo. Gormy and Rocky look towards each other, confused.Shinn's Theory:[/b] I had a feeling something like this would happen, sooner or later. So, I took it upon myself to hire a Commission for Tuesday Night Turmoil. Rocky begins to shake his head, mouthing the words "you can't do that".Shinn's Theory:[/b] Rocky, I can....and did. So, without further ado, please let me itroduce you to TNT's new Commissioner.... Theory takes a long pause. He smiles at Rocky, than towards Gormy.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Anthony Mckenna! The crowd erupts, blowing the roof off of the arena. Mckenna appears from behind the curtain. He stops at the top of the ramp and looks around the arena. The fans are going nuts! Mckenna makes his way to the ring. He enters the ring and stands next to Shinn's Theory.Shinn's Theory:[/b] Rocky, I think this power struggle has just shifted gears...once again. Rocky is shown staring down Shinn's Theory. Anthony Mckenna steps into Rocky's gaze. Now, Mckenna's eyes are focussed on Rockys'. Theory smiles towards Gormy. He gives her a little wave before slapping Mckenna on the back. Mckenna smiles towards Rocky before turning around and exiting the ring with Shinn's. The two men backpedal their way up the ramp, smiling towards Rocky and Gormy. Shinn's Theory and Anthony Mckenna make it to the top of the ramp and stop. The two men continue to smile towards Rocky and Gormy. Both Rocky and Gormy appear quite angry as TNT goes off the air...
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 14, 2005 19:44:04 GMT 1
Shinn's Theory's Ratings:[/b][/u] “The Assassin” Tyler Stone - 0.0 (Doh!) Wolverine - 3.5 (Good addition to your character. Much like Rocky said, it's not quite a 4.0...However, I see your promos will now grow, due to a solid gimmick.) Amie - 4.2 (Definately an asset. You have great writing skills. Can't wait to see more!) Simz - 4.0 (Your promos have come a long way. Your character is really developing nicely. Nice work.) Red Ninja - 4.4 (Always liked your promos. You do seem to stick with a simliar writing style for the most part. That helps keep a good strong gimmick. Word up homie!) Cole Slocum - 4.4 (Wowsa! Its a bummer you had to take a few months off. I have a feeling you'd be holding gold by now....promos like these are proof.) The Executioner - 4.0 (A little rough around the edges, but your point was made. A LOT better than some of your other promos. And, with the storyline we're planning, I think your writing will only get better. PS. proof read.) “The Tiger” Aladdin - 4.7 (Best promo of the entire show. Very visual. There is not much for me to say. Other than, keep it up!) Stare's Ratings:[/b][/u] “The Assassin” Tyler Stone - 0 (I believe this is what they call an upset) Wolverine --- 3.5 (your promo should've ended here "James: Thanks. ; The camera goes to go black". I understand the point you wanted to make with the rest of the promo, but it totally lost my interest, and I found myself not understanding what was going on. Had it not been for the rest of the promo, this probably would've been a 4, I just didnt understand what happened, and even read it twice. Good job though) Amie --- 4.2 (Good read. I thought the promo was very well-organized. It seemed to fall back a little with the phone call, but it was still well done. Great job, you'll go far) Simz --- 4 (Good promo. Some things don't make sense form a character point of view, but I know you're just trying to find what fits. I think this gave you a good deal of character, and I think you'll improve it in the future. Good job) Red Ninja --- 4.4 (Great promo. The ending was hilarious cause it was out of nowhere. I liked the environment you had, and you ran down the list well. "Wolverine……well that’s the name of a Super Hero I like. I’ll leave it at that little tidbit" --- HAHAHAHA!) Cole Slocum --- 4.1 (The description was great, and the starting line ""There's some people around here who need to be taught a lesson." set a great mood. It could've gone on a bit longer, as I feel you really didnt make a point or even put any emphasis on your match with Ninja at all. Eitehr way, I see tons of potential in you) The Executioner --- 4 (I really liked this. Besides a few sentence flaws (like using that space bar  ), this promo was very good. Mainly for the fact that alot of different things happened in it. I didnt know you and Aladdin had history, and it kind've threw off the beginning a bit, but that's the only thing that I think was seriously wrong with this, besides the fact that you'll improve. By the way, this "You Tony the tiger wannabe" had me rolling, good job) “The Tiger” Aladdin --- 4.9 (absolutly outstanding! This may be the best strictly in-ring promo I have ever read. It was so real, and I could envision it, and you described it perfectly. Outstanding job!) Rocky's Ratings:[/b][/u] “The Assassin” Tyler Stone - Wolverine - 3.5 (If I could have given you a 3.8, I would have, but, I didn't think it was a 4, so 3.5 it is. Decent enough promo. I like the interaction you have with James. You make your promos seem comic book like, which is different. As I said, decent enough promo.) Amie - 4.2 (A simple promo. Nothing complex about it, but I think it worked well. You always make the interaction with other character work well. I like that.) Simz - 4.0 (I like where you are going with this. Your promos are going from strength to strength Red Ninja - 4.3 (Classic Red Ninja stuff. You keep your promos to a minimal, yet perfectly balanced level. This has the right mix of humour and serious tone. And, most importantly, where the hell do I get a WWIAFTM from? Good stuff.) Cole Slocum - 4.5 (Again, as with Ninja, the length if the promo is much shorter than most people go for, but it's always been about quility over quantity. And this oozes with quality. The visual narrative parts are well done, as are the brief vocal parts. Well done.) The Executioner - 3.5 (You're building up a character, that's good. But it's still not quiet where it should be by now. Re-read your promos, just to make sure they are running smoothly. This one was a bit stop-startish throughout.) “The Tiger” Aladdin - 4.6(Very good promo. You took in a whole range of things and moved nicely between them. Your character and future is shaping up nicely. I don't know, but you may have dragged it out just a tiny bit too much. It wouldn't take away from the score though, but it' just an observation.)
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Post by stocko on Nov 14, 2005 19:55:29 GMT 1
excellent show gents  |
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Post by Aladdin on Nov 14, 2005 20:01:40 GMT 1
Great Show Shinns-o and all the writers.
Thanks a lot for the ratings guys, especially Stare. 4.9!
Well done Lockjaw. I'll see you Simz soon enough.
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Post by Simz on Nov 14, 2005 20:14:27 GMT 1
Man, I'm sooooo excited about our match. I am really going to enjoy it, I can't wait. Holy shit, McKenna is Commissioner. That had to be the best bit of the show. It totally took me off guard!
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Post by McKenna on Nov 14, 2005 20:23:13 GMT 1
The BEAST bit eh?
Let the good times roll. Shinns Theory and McKenna stopping every path Rocky and Gormy take.
TNT is about to get very, very interesting
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Post by Gormy on Nov 14, 2005 20:34:10 GMT 1
Dont get too cocky tiger, you may be around every move myself and Rocky make, but dont forget, we are gonna be there to kick yours and Shinns arse on a weekly basis!
Oh by the way, very good show ol chaps
Ive missed it loads
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Nov 14, 2005 21:12:41 GMT 1
Solid.
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Post by Cole Slocum on Nov 14, 2005 21:46:13 GMT 1
Unbelievable job guys! Aladdin - great job on the Cole/Red Ninja match. Cripes, it had me literally cheering them on as I read it!
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Post by Aladdin on Nov 14, 2005 22:02:48 GMT 1
No prob dude.
the E2 segment was hilarious.
E.D.D.I.E where are you? E.D.D.I.E?.....oh right.....you're banned. Later E.D.D.I.E.
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Post by Reaper on Nov 14, 2005 23:09:44 GMT 1
Nice show. Very nice.
Gormy, it's you and I against the world. But first of all, let's fuck up TNT!
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Post by Stare on Nov 15, 2005 3:32:56 GMT 1
Very cool stuff
The ending was great.
Good job all
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Post by Cactus on Nov 15, 2005 8:45:58 GMT 1
Great start to the new TnT
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Post by lockjaw on Nov 15, 2005 17:08:37 GMT 1
Great show. Nice promo Aladdin. Definately a hard fought victory but you got the job done. Shinn's I'm going to work on the promo's tryin to convince my mum to buy microsoft word. for it's grammer/spell check and then i can write little by little.
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 15, 2005 17:36:53 GMT 1
I'm surprised you never got Word or Works with your PC. I'm sure you can download it free somewhere.
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Post by Firefly on Nov 15, 2005 18:00:38 GMT 1
With all due respect, this guy is gonna be the one to fuck up TNT.
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Post by lockjaw on Nov 16, 2005 1:37:59 GMT 1
I can invision the name and gimmick for the first TNT PPV i'll send ya a pm shinn's.
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Post by Cactus on Nov 17, 2005 12:57:34 GMT 1
With all due respect, this guy is gonna be the one to fuck up TNT. <--------- ;D Well you and Rocky have raised hell before in Apocalypse but then again so have you and shinns, ooohhh you are on your own, I still back you thou, I want you to win some gold so I can take it back of you  |
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), this promo was very good. Mainly for the fact that alot of different things happened in it. I didnt know you and Aladdin had history, and it kind've threw off the beginning a bit, but that's the only thing that I think was seriously wrong with this, besides the fact that you'll improve. By the way, this "You Tony the tiger wannabe" had me rolling, good job)
