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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 24, 2005 2:20:24 GMT 1
"Adrenaline" hits and the crowd jumps to their feet. The last TNT before the first TNT Pay Per View, Plethora, is now underway. TNT's theme is immediately interupted by "Enter Sandman". The crowd boos as The Eye of the Storm makes his way to the ring. He enters the ring, stepping over the top rope. "Don't You Wish you Were Me" hits. Simz jogs to the ring and slides in. He immediately stands and tells the referee to ring the bell. The referee signals for the bell and this match is underway.Single’s Match - Management Watches Simz vs. The Eye of the Storm (Written By: Anthony McKenna) [/b][/center] The bell rings, and both men circle each other before hooking up, dead centre of the ring. After some back and forth, they unlock, circle and go in again. Simz backs Storm up into the corner, and waits for the ref to make a 4 count, before slowly unhooking the hold, and backing away, hands outstretched. A third time they hook up in a collar and elbow tie up, this time Storm getting the upper hand, and again they head into a corner, again the 4 count breaks the hold, but Storm delivers a stiff punch to the face of Simz, sending him back, Storm following up the cheap shot with several more punches and knife edge chops. The ref finally gets between the two, but Simz, over the top of the ref jabs a finger into a finger into Storm's eye, and goes on the offensive. He delivers a knife edge chop of his own, and follows it up with knees to the stomach. With his opponent in pain, he tires to sinch in the Simz Killer, but its too early and Storm manages to break free and roll out of the ring, to the disgust of the fans. Frustrated, Storm walks round the ring, while the ref starts, and continues his count. Simz, knowing management is watching from the skyboxes, stops the ref's count, but stands annoyed as Storm starts back towards the Zeroin. Simz, wanting to end this in the ring, follows him outside. As he reaches his foe, Storm spins round, and a cloud of dust emerges from his right hand, but somehow, with a roll up the ramp, Simz was wise to this, and in one fluid move, stands up and stiff punches Storm in the face. Storm reels back, and is met with a kick to the gut, and is then locked in a suplex. With nowhere to go, Simz delivers a textbook standing suplex, with Storm taking the full impact on the steel walkway. Storm arches in pain as Simz, sensing the swing in momentum, picks him up, and delivers a second suplex, bringing Storm closer to the ring. He does this a third time, landing Storm on the ring mats. To the cheers of the crowd, Simz rolls Storm into the ring, and as Storm backs off, Simz is confused as Storm pulls the ref in between the two. As Simz moves the ref out of the way, this gives Storm the time he needs to go into his other pocket, and slip something onto his knuckles. The punch connects, and Simz stands stunned for a second, before falling flat, and hard onto the mat. The ref looks, first at the fallen Simz, then the protesting Storm. The ref begins to question Storm, asking how one shot could do that much damage, but the protests of Storm continue. Storm pushes the ref away, and goes to cover Simz. The ref counts 1............2................ Simz lifts his left arm off the canvas, the ref shows the crowd the two, who cheer. Storm is stunned, and beings to harrass the zebra, who confirms the two, and points back to Simz, who still has his left arm in the air. Storm heads back to Simz, and picks him up, before throwing him, hard, into the corner. Storm tells the ref to check on Simz, before heading to the opposite corner, and removing the turnbuckle padding. He then heads across to Simz, who is dropping in the corner. Storm starts to Irish Whip Simz into the corner, who reverses the move, sending Storm towards it. Storm stops himself, turing round to be met with a standing dropkick. Simz gets up, seeing Storm on his knees, groggy, and runs off the ropes, and drives a second, low dropkick to Storm. As Storm his the floor, Simz, heads to the corner, and up the ropes to the top. Once Simz knows Storm is not moving, he raises his arms in the air, Macho Man style, and delivers and elbow Randy Savage would be proud of. He goes for the cover, but on 2, Storm just, only just makes his way out of the pinning cover. Simz, seeing the momentum is with him, picks Storm up, and throws him into the ropes, delivering an impressive moving belly to back suplex. Picking Storm back up, he sends him into the corner, the one with the top turnbuckle pad removed. Barely able to move, Simz runs behind him, gets onto the middle rope, and drives Storm's head to the canvas, with a bulldog. Simz motions to the crowd, but he doesnt really need to, they are into this huge, and they cheer the roof down, as Simz stalks his prey. Storm makes his way to his feet, just barely, Simz turns him round, and quick as a flash, delivers the Simz Sity. Storm looks unconcious, even before the spike DDT lands, the far leg is hooked, 1.........2...............3! Simz hand is raised, as he looks towards the lights in the skyboxes. Simz has made his name heard here tonight. Simz - 4.4 Promo Points + 0.5 Voting Points = 4.5 The Eye of the Storm - 0.0 Promo Points + 0.1 Voting Points = 0.1 [/i] Winner: Simz[/b] "Adrenaline" hits. Mary Lindsay is shown on Zeroin, applauding Simz' performance. Simz grabs the microhone from the ring announcer.Simz:[/b] Can I help you? Mary Lindsay: Yes, yes you can. I'm here to let you know that TNT management have been watching your match tonight, and we are more than impressed with your performance. Simz nods his head in appreciation.Mary Lindsay:[/b] Now, I need to to come back stage, immedately. Simz looks a bit confused. However, he steps out of the ring and heads up the ramp. The camera follows Simz as he exits through the curtain. Mary Lindsay is right there, waiting.Mary Lindsay:[/b] As a reward for your hard fought victory tonight, and to show you that your climb up towards the higher echelons of TNT, we would like to present you with this. An envelope changes hands, Simz rips it open, and looks amazed at the papersMary Lindsay:[/b] It's a contract, entitling you, to a shot at the P2PW Heavyweight Championship at our next blockbuster Pay Per View, Plethora. It's a Triple Threat match. In it will be yourself, "The Assassin" Tyler Stone, and a third party, who will be revealed at the Pay Per View. So, good luck, and I'm sure I will see you, with the contract signed... As Mary leaves, Simz punches the air....
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 24, 2005 2:21:47 GMT 1
Backstage, John McKay is shown standing by with Tyler Stone.John McKay:[/b] Tyler Stone, it has just been announced that you will be facing Simz, along with another superstar, at Plethora in a Triple Threat Match for the P2PW Heavyweight Championship. What are your thoughts? Tyler Stone snatches the microphone from McKay and pushes him out of the camera's eye.Tyler Stone:[/b] This match is getting better by the minute. Simz doesn't have a clue what is in store for him at Plethora. Yea, management may have high hopes for this guy, but they have higher hopes for me. Why do you think I was the first person to be named as a contender for the Heavyweight Title? Because I am the best TNT has. I am the best TNT ever had. And I am the best TNT will ever have. Let the record show, come Plethora, you're looking at the first ever P2PW Heavyweight Champion. Tyler Stone walks off. We now take you back to ringside where the set of The Chopping Block is in place.The Chopping Block Guest: Finalist for the Rage Title - Firefly (Written By: Shinn's Theory & Firefly) [/color] [/center] "Californa Love" hits and The Executioner walks down the ramp and enters the ring. He immediately grabs the microphone.The Executioner:[/b] After what happened to me last week on The Chopping Block, you can bet your ass I won't let Cole strike again. The Executioner looks around the arena.The Executioner:[/b] So, let's get started. Tonight, my guest is the first man to become a Rage Championship Finalist. Tonight, The Chopping Block welcomes, Firefly! The lights dim in the arena. Red flames appear on each side of the rampway. They slowly burn from top to bottom. "More Human Than Human" hits. The crowd pops the evil alumni as he makes his way to the ring. Firefly climbs into the ring and grabs a microphone.Firefly:[/b] I don't have all night. Let's get right to it. The Executioner:[/b] Fine...You were a dominant force here in the P2PW at one time. What made you come back to the federation? Firefly:[/b] Well, it was really that they gave me a call to be at WrestleFever. When I left, I was working 3 feds and felt like I just wasn't getting any opportunity. But, in my time away from P2P, I've still performing and I think I've polished quite a bit from when I left. So, I thought I'd come back and just see where I was at. The Executioner:[/b] Is there any person, backstage, that you interact with? Firefly:[/b] Well, as of right now, not really. I'm part of the old school P2P and most of the guys I know pretty well are on Blitz and I haven't really had enough time to get to know the new guys. The Executioner looks around, keeping an eye out for Cole Slocum.The Executioner:[/b] What are your thoughts on the Rage Tournament in general? Firefly:[/b] I love it! I believe that this has been the one thing really seperating TNT from Blitz. They've had Battle Royals and such but there's not one person in the entire P2P that wouldn't love to have been in this tournament. The Rage title is probably the most elite title in P2P. Possibly even more so than the world title. The Executioner:[/b] What are your thoughts about Tyler Stone and the fact that he has been placed in the Triple Threat Match, for the P2PW Heavyweight Championship at Plethora. Firefly:[/b]I have mixed feeling about that. As I said before, I am extremely pleased to be in the Rage Tourney and to make it to the final match. And I also said that the Rage Title could be more prestigeous than the Heavyweight Title. But a part me gets to thinking that I personally took out him and his buddy Chad within two weeks. He comes back and boom, Heavyweight Title Shot. That bothers me a little. At the end of the day, though, when I win the Rage Title at Plethora, it won't matter who is Heavyweight Champ. Because I plan to make the Rage Title ELITE once again. The Executioner:[/b] Before I continue, it has been made clear that Tyler Stone has been given this shot due to the fact that he is a current World Tag Team Holder. And, since the Tag Team Division has been put to an end, he gets first crack at the title. Firefly looks at The Executioner with a blank stare.The Executioner:[/b] Ok then...On Superstar Sunday, the Rage Champion herself called you a push over. How does that sit with you? Firelfly:[/b] That doesn't sit well with me at all! Gormy is the one who's alligned herself with Rocky so she can make sure she stays on top. But she's scared. She has to be. But what burns me most is that a female is actually the Rage Champion. Seriously! Look, I wouldn't have any problem if she were tag champs or even had that worthless strap Shinn's carries around, but the Rage title? In first stint at P2P, that was THE title. Nobody even got a shot at it unless you were really high up there. That'll all change though. Mr. Fantastic will bring back cred to the Rage Title. The Executioner:[/b] Speaking of Superstar Sunday. Why don't we do a little "Done in 60 Seconds" right here, right now. I'll name off some names/words and you tell me the first thing that comes to mind. Firefly:[/b] Tuesday Night Turmoil A: Firefly! Apocalypse A: Firefly! TNT's Commissioner, Anthony McKenna A:Da Man Gormy A: NEXT. Tyler Stone A: Punk TNT's Plethora PPV A: My Show Aladdin A: We'll see Blitz A: Competition Red Ninja A: great performer Wolverine A: X-Men? The Executioner:[/b] Rocky took himself out of the Rage Championship Tournament earlier tonight, giving you a bye to the finals to face the winner of tonight's main event between Red Ninja and Aladdin. What are your thoughts on Rocky and who would you like to face at Plethora. Firefly:[/b] I was pretty surprised Rocky took himself out of the tournament. He went through all that trouble to give himself a bye all the way to the Final 4 and then backs out? To me, and probably everyone else, it looks like he's ducking me. Maybe he has some greater plan none of us know about but fact is, him backing out just put me one step closer to stepping in the ring with his girl Gormy. And when that happens, I plan to REALLY enjoy myself. (evil laughter) The Executioner:[/b] If you win the tournament, you'll be facing Gormy the following night on TNT. Does Firefly have have a strategy? Firefly:[/b]Absolutely. I'm going to play the sickest, darkest mind games on her the likes of which won't ever been seen again. My goal will be to freak her out so much she won't even want to have the match but instead just hand the title over to me. This is a new Firefly sweetcakes. So I won't holding anything back. (grins) Well, I may have to hold SOMETHING back.... (laughs) The Executioner:[/b] Firefly, thank you for being my second guest on The Chopping Block. Good luck with... The light dim, once again. Red flames ignite at the bottom of the ramp. Firefly springs himself out of the ramp and jogs up the rampway. The flames follow him from bottom to top. Firefly disappears behind the curtain.The Executioner tosses his microphone out of the ring and into the hands of a P2PW Staff Member. "California Love plays" as he works his way out of the ring and up the rampway. He looks behind him, looking for any signs of Cole Slocum. Seeing as Cole appears to be no where in the arena, The Executioner turns and smiles towards the crowd. Suddenly, Cole Slocum bursts from behind the curtain, carrying a metal pipe. He nails The Executioner in the back of the head. The Executioner falls forwards. Blood is seen, almost immedaitely. Instead of continuing the beating, Cole tosses the pipe to the side and stands over The Executioner. The crowd boos as Cole looks down at the unconscious man. Cole begins to laugh at the crowd's smites. Zeroin now takes us backstage.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 24, 2005 2:22:47 GMT 1
Aladdin is shown lacing up his boots. McKenna walks into the frame. Aladdin looks up at TNT's commissioner.Anthony McKenna:[/b] Hey kid. Aladdin stands.Aladdin:[/b] Kid? McKenna laughs.Anthony McKenna:[/b] I call everyone that... don't feel bad. Aladdin stares back at McKenna.Anthony McKenna:[/b] Actually, I just came here to wish you luck tonight. You see, I've kept a close eye on you since you were one half of the P2PW Tag Champions. You're an impressive athlete. I wish you only the best... Aladdin:[/b] You know, coming from a man who pathed the way for many of us in this business, that means a lot. Thank you Mr. McKenna. Anthony McKenna:[/b] Call me Ant. Anthony McKenna slaps Aladdin on the shoulder and walks off. The camera pans in on Aladdin's face. He is grinning. Aladdin sits back down and continues to lace up his boots. We now take you back to ringside."Fight" hits. Wolverine enters the picture. The crowd boos as he makes his way to the ring. He steps onto the ring apron and enters the ring. He holds one fist in the air. The crowd continues to boo as he looks around the arena."P.C" hits and the crowd jumps to their feet. Shinn's Theory walks through the curtain. The Undisputed Internet Title is wrapped around his waist. He looks towards the crowd, who remains on their feet. Theory begins down the ramp. Suddenly, Anthony McKenna is shown following behind Theory. The crowd errupts even more. Theory enters the ring and poses, with his title, for the fans. McKenna circles the ring before finding a spot to stand. "P.C." fades. Wolverine approaches Shinn's Theory. Wolverine begins to point at the title. He then makes the "belt around the waist" gesture. Theory laughs as he unstraps his belt. He holds it up. Wolverine nods, still making the gesture. Theory laughs. Suddenly, Theory drops the belt and lands a hard right to the side of Wolverine's head. The referee calls for the bell. Theory pounds Wolverine into the corner. The referee is shown handing the belt to an outside staff member.Single’s Match - Non-Title Shinn’s Theory vs. Wolverine (Written By: Shinn's Theory) [/b][/center] Wolverine easily turns the tides, grabbing Shinn's Theory by the neck and spinning him into the corner. He pounds away at the champion. He whips Shinn's into the far corner. Wolverine runs in and levels Theory with a stiff clothesline. McKenna is shown on the outside, pacing. McKenna keeps looking up towards the ramp, making sure no one interferes in this match. Wolverine continues his offence. He props Theory up onto the top turnbuckle. He drapes one of Theory's arms over his shoulder, setiing him up for a suplex. Wolverine begins to climb the ropes, turning this into a superplex. As he lifts Shinn's above his head, Theory quickly reverses the move, turning it into a falling DDT. The crowd cheers as Theory lays on the mat, catching his breath. Suddenly the crowd begins to boo as Gormy is shown walking towards the ring, down the ramp. McKenna looks up, locking eyes with Gormy. Without an hesitation, Gormy continues her way to the ring. She simply walks by Anthony and begins to circle the ring. McKenna is shown, verbally warning her not to interfere. Back in the ring, Theory turns over and attempts a pin. Wolverine gets a shoulder up, breaking the count. Theory aids Wolverine to his feet. He bodyslams him back to the mat. He springs himself off of the ropes and drops a knee to the forehead of Wolverine. Again, the crowd begins to boo. McKenna looks up the rampway and spots Rocky. Rocky makes his way to the ring. Again, McKenna is shown warning Rocky. Theory stands and leans over the rope towards McKenna. He begins to question McKenna. McKenna shrugs. Gormy is shown stepping onto the apron. McKenna spots her. He jogs to that side of the ring. However, Gormy is now arguing with the referee. McKenna and the referee begin to argue with the Rage Champion. Rocky is shown sliding a steel chair into the ring as the commissioner and referee's backs are turned. Wolverine reaches for the chair, but Theory quickly intercepts. Theory raises the chair above his head and cracks Wolverine wide open. Theory walks over towards the side of the ring Rocky is on. He pitches the chair at Rocky, who moves out of the way. Theory walks to the opposite side of the ring and taps the shoulder of the referee. He then pins Wolverine for the easy win. Shinn’s Theory - 4.4 Promo Points + 0.5 Voting Points = 4.9 Wolverine - 0.0 Promo Points + 0.1 Voting Points = 0.1[/i] Winner: Shinn’s Theory[/b] McKenna slides into the ring and raises Theory's hand in victory. Gormy is shown folding up a chair and sliding in behind the two. She cranks McKenna in the back with the chair. Theory then turns around and is greeted with a steel chair to the face. Rocky is shown sliding into the ring. Gormy and Rocky stomp away at Theory and McKenna. The crowd boos heavily.
All of the sudden, "Cross Da' Line" hits! The crowd jumps to their feet as MVP-Don appears! He is shown jogging to the ring. Rocky and Gormy watch the big man work his way down to the ring. They are sporting a confused look on their faces. MVP-Don climbs the ring steps and enters the ring. He walks over to Rocky and Gormy, who are still quite confused. He looks down at McKenna and Theory and begins to laugh. Gormy and Rocky laugh along with MVP-Don. In the blink of an eye, MVP-Don stops his laughter and delivers the Stampede to the Rage Champion, Gormy.
Rocky is shown backing off as MVP-Don stands. A sadistic look comes over his face. He slowly backs Rocky into a corner. Rocky is quick to drop to the mat and roll out of the ring. Rocky is shown walking backwards up the ramp, cussing MVP-Don. MVP-Don gives Rocky a cocky wave before turning back towards Theory and Mckenna. He aids the two men up. Even though both are a bit stunned by the chair shots, they pat MVP-Don on the back and grin. McKenna is shown mouthing the words "glad you could make it". Theory is shown mouthing the words "things are about to change".
MVP-Don raises both men's hands up. The crowd cheers as "Cross Da' Line" hits. All three men leave the ring and exit to the back. Gormy is shown, out cold, in the middle of the ring. We now take you to the parking area.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 24, 2005 2:24:03 GMT 1
Simz is heading towards his rental car, reading the contract again. The smile has not left his face since the visit for Mary Lindsay. As he opens the car door, not looking up, it is slammed shut. He looks up, and sees Tyler Stone, right up close in his face. The two men are nose to nose.Simz:[/b] Something to say to me? Tyler Stone:[/b] So, they give you one of those as well? This place will hand anyone a title shot these days. Simz:[/b]Tell me about it. Wonder what you did to get your place at Plethora... Tyler Stone:[/b] Simple. I earned it, I worked my ass off for this shot, and now I gotta share it with you. I'll put this in words you will understand. At Plethora, you will see, first hand, why you cannot hang with me. You will be one of two witnesses to the dawning of the new era. The era of The Assassin. See you soon.................. boy. Tyler walks away, Simz snarling back at the cocky fellow challenger.
We are now back in the arena gearing up for our main event. Before the competitors are announced, Zeroin flickers the following. "Makai Club's Theme" hits. Red Ninja makes his way to the ring. The crowd cheers the long time P2PW superstar. He slides into the ring and poses for his fans. "Never Let Me Down" hits. "The Tiger" Aladdin is shown making his way through the curtain. The crowd's cheers are deafening. Aladdin stops at the top of the ramp. He looks around at the crowd. Their fists are in the air. Aladdin smiles. He raises one fist in the air before heading to the ring. He walks down the rampway and up the ring steps. He enters the ring. As he makes his way to the far corner, Red Ninja extends his fist. Aladdin taps Ninja's fist with his own. Aladdin then hits the far corner and poses for the fans. The camera flashes are blinding. Finally, Aladdin hops back onto the apron. Aladdin then leaves the ring. He approaches someone who is sitting ringside. A small hug is exchanged. It is now known that Aladdin has family in the audience. Aladdin circles the ring as Ninja follows him around, their eyes never leaving each other, Aladdin tried to get on the apron but Ninja flicks out a high kick just missing his face. Aladdin drops back down and again carries on circling the ring. He tries to get in again, and again Ninja lazily flicks out a kick, this time Aladdin leans back and uses the top rope like a slingshot and catapults himself into the ring, he spins in mid-air and lands a hurricanrana on the startled Ninja. The ref calls for the bell and we are underway. Finalist Match - Winner Becomes Rage Title Finalist Red Ninja vs. “The Tiger” Aladdin (Written By: Cactus) Ninja rolls through and is up on his feet as the two men glare at each other, but no one seems to want to make the first move. They move to the centre of the ring, the respect between them appears to have gone out of the window as they stand toe to toe. Aladdin throws the fist punch but Ninja slips under it and as Aladdin turns round he is greeted with a knife-edge chop across the chest. As if on cue the crowd lets off a huge WOOOOOOO. As Aladdin stumbles back Ninja follows up with a stiff kick to the gut, as Al is bent double Ninja double underhooks him and drops him across his knee. Al is grounded as Ninja pulls him to the centre of the ring, he climbs the top rope and dives off in a corkscrew moonsault. He lands flush on the chest of the tiger and we have the first pin of the match, a close 2 count. Frustrated Ninja helps Aladdin to his feet but Aladdin counters and reverses the hold into an arm wrench and follows it up with a standing hook kick to the face. Ninja staggers back as Aladdin advances. He grabs ninja in the suplex position but instead of dropping him on his back he turns it into a neck breaker. He goes for a cover and this time Aladdin gets a close 2. He slaps the mat in frustration and gets in the refs face giving Ninja time to get back to a vertical base. Seeing Aladdin has his back to him Ninja superkicks Aladdin in the back of the head, Aladdin falls with his head and neck over the middle rope, Ninja see’s his window of opportunity, he runs at the ropes on the opposite side and bounces off gathering speed, the swings through the ropes and nails Aladdin with a 613. Aladdin fly’s backwards and lays in the centre of the ring. Ninja jumps over the ropes, lands on the middle rope and springs off with an Asai moonsault. Aladdin gets his knees up at the last minute and Ninja lands chest first and knocks the wind out of himself. Aladdin kips up and aids Ninja to his feet, he whips Ninja towards the ropes and catches him with a massive spinebuster winding Ninja even more. He picks Ninja up and nails him with a bastard bomb and stands over him, he runs at the ropes and drops a very exaggerated elbow to the chest, he then goes for a cocky cover placing a foot on Ninja’s chest. This does not even get a 1 count as Ninja shrugs him off. Aladdin makes the cutthroat signal across his throat, picks Ninja up, he goes for the uncaged but Ninja wriggles out and lands desperation axe kick on Aladdin. Both men are down, but its Aladdin who gets to his feet first. He looks at Ninja who is still struggling to get the air back in his lungs, he picks him up again in his finisher, Uncaged. He drives Ninja down, hooks the leg, and picks up the 1 2 3. ”The Tiger”Aladdin - 4.6333 Promo Points + 0.5 Voting Points = 5.1333 Red Ninja - 3.0 Promo Points + 0.1 Voting Points = 3.01[/i] Winner: AladdinAladdin's hand is raised in victory. TNT goes off the air, but not before showing the following image.(CLICK TO ENLARGE) Credits: Shinn's Theory, McKenna, Firefly, & Cactus.
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 24, 2005 2:26:16 GMT 1
Shinn’s Theory’s Ratings[/b][/u] Simz - 4.4 (Very good job here. I love how far your character has come. You deserve to be in the title match at Plethora. Congrats and good luck.) The Eye of the Storm - 0.0 (Thanks for the explanation. Hope you get your promo in on time for your next match.) Shinn’s Theory - N/A Wolverine - N/A Red Ninja - 2.5 (Average, but explained why. Hope you’re feeling better. I still think Red Ninja WILL lead this company to greatness, as you stated.) “The Tiger” Aladdin - 4.5 (Congrats man. Next step, Firefly.”Green Ninja”...crafty I say! Nice way to incorporate all three competitors into your promo. Nice job. I know it couldn’t have been to easy to promo for each and every TNT in a row, yet...you did, and did it well. Good luck at Plethora.) Anthony McKenna’s Ratings[/b][/u] Simz 4.5 - (I've said already, I have watched your style develop, and this makes you worthy of your push. Good storytelling, and good descriptions. Great Job) The Eye of the Storm n/a (Hmmm) Shinn’s Theory 4.3 - The pictures were funny as hell, and a unique promo beginning. You didnt need to bust out a 5th gear promo, and this has done the trick. Wolverine n/a (ah well, even Shinns wrote you into his promo) Red Ninja 3.5 - Dude, you showed up and wrote a promo, and that's the main thing. Not good enough this time, but I know your talent of old, and I know the real Red Ninja will be back. "The Tiger" Aladdin 4.8 - Wow, this captured my from first word to last. Definately the future of TNT here. Great promo, fantastic writing and style. One hell of a job. Stare’s Ratings[/b][/u] Simz --- 4.3 (I have one word to describe this promo, and that's "BELIEVABLE". I envisioned this whole thing happening, and it was like watching a low-mid-carder cutting a promo, and proving to everyone that he would one day reach main event status. It was very well done, and I saw it with my eyes as I read it. There were a couple of pieces at the beginning that didn't make sense, but I still thought this was awesome) Eye of the Storm --- 0 (I see good things in your future . . . wait) Shinn's Theory --- 4.5 (Good promo. I thought the beginning was funny, not needed, but funny never-the-less. Getting the hand of photoshot, are ya? Really, this was just an average promo, for you at least. The only thing that really threw me off was the presence of Rocky in the promo. It just seemed to serve no purpose, and considering the rivalry you guys are having, I think something was needed. Besides that, great job, and the interaction with Wolverine was great. You are at your highest potential as a writer when you are hyping the guy you're facing.) Wolverine --- 0 (I think I'll take the high road) Red Ninja --- 3 (Apology accepted, but I have to say, for a short promo, you said a whole lot. I'd love to see more promos from you like this, where you almost have a bit of a serious tone. I'm not saying abandon the comedy permanently, but maybe ever-so-often. I liked the points you made about being the future, and both coming in at the same time. For a short promo, it was well done) Aladdin --- 4.6 (Excellent promo, as usual. It got a little hard to stay into it towards the end, and then you brought it all back around and caught me once again when you focused on Gormy. You ran down anyone that you have something going on with, and you did it well. The fact that you challenged Rocky, and told him you'd give him a shot at the title if . . . I mean "when" you won spoke volumes about your confidence, not cockiness Great promo)
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 24, 2005 2:30:04 GMT 1
Again, this is my last TNT as a writer. I'll still hang around (for the time being) as an active wrestler. I met a lot of coolio people over the passed 2 years doing this. That, I am grateful for. It was fun (for the most part). Now, it's time for someone else to take, what I now call a headache, over. Peace.
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Post by Cactus on Dec 24, 2005 9:25:50 GMT 1
Fancy a trade to Blitz, and Cactus will take over TnT ?
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Post by Simz on Dec 24, 2005 10:35:10 GMT 1
Great as always. Great Job Shinns and Co.!
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Post by Aladdin on Dec 24, 2005 12:08:43 GMT 1
Great last show Shinns. Your writing skills will be missed but i understand why you're leaving, since it isn't fun for you anymore. You've been awesome.
Good Luck Simz!
Come Plethora that'll be four consecutive promos. Thanks for the ratings peeps.
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Post by Simz on Dec 24, 2005 15:13:52 GMT 1
^Thank you! ;D
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Post by Scream on Dec 24, 2005 19:16:05 GMT 1
Shinn's nice work man. Since I came here you busted your ass and I have enjoyed every show you have written. Good luck.
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Post by KillerSundin (Formerly HBK) on Dec 24, 2005 20:53:05 GMT 1
Nice show Shinn's! You were the best writer.
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Dec 25, 2005 1:51:37 GMT 1
Good show my brotha...
tis a shame your leaving the writing end of it, if you don't mind me asking, who is taking over?
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Post by shinnstheory on Dec 25, 2005 3:09:02 GMT 1
Thanks Scream/Chilly/Trent. The show wasn't all that good, due to my lack of...well... interest, at this point. At least people will be able to look back and read some of the shit I wrote, and like it/laugh at it.
Trent I haven't picked anyone, definate, yet.
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Post by lockjaw on Dec 25, 2005 23:00:25 GMT 1
Great Show gents. Cole be prepared because nobody messes with me you hear me. Revenge will be sweet when i make the arena flow with your blood.
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Post by Firefly on Dec 26, 2005 18:41:51 GMT 1
Hey, I nominate Cactus! Screw Blitz, let's steal him. ;D
Not that I'm bias or anything...
(Hey, Cactus, we're still gonna do that double champion thing we talked about if I could get you writing job, right?)
LOL
Seriously, sucks ya gotta go Shinn's but I think you'll start having fun again as just the talent.
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Post by stocko on Dec 27, 2005 14:24:17 GMT 1
the show was cool, i am sure shinns will pick someone who he thinks has the talent to do as well, if not better, than him.
oh gormy, did it hurt? haha
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