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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 20:50:47 GMT 1
 Live from the KEMPER ARENA in Kansas City, Missouri.One on One with E2
Guest: (Written by E2) E2: Wassup, playas?! The entire crowd begins scream again, indicating that they are on the same page as the One Man Killing Machine. They have his back.E2: ( with more emotion) I said, Wassup, playas?!! The crowd cheers again, but the cheers do not last long as E2 goes from jovial to serious. A look of pure seriousness spreads across his face. There is something the One Man Killing Machine needs to say.
E2: I would like to take this opportunity to welcome all y’all to One on One starring me, E2, the One Man Killing Machine. I am honored to be doing the debut segment from right here, at the Kemper Arena in Kansas City, Missouri!!!
The crowd cheers at the cheap hometown pop.
E2: Now unlike some other wrestling segments that we’re all familiar with, this show will be more simplified. There are no fancy chairs or podiums in the ring. There are no blow-up palm trees or cabanas on the side. It’s just me (pointing to his chest) and you (pointing to the crowd).
The audience cheers at the sign of respect that E2 has just shown them. After the cheering dies out again, the One Man Killing Machine again raises the mic.
E2: Now as you all know, the One Man Killing Machine has been down and out for awhile. I had to spend some time away from the P2PW and spend time away from all y’all…..(brief pause)……thank God.
A mixed reaction emanates from the crowd. Some people not believing their ears and others doing a double-take as if to say “No, he did not just say that!”
E2: Wait, wait, wait playas. That came out all wrong. What I meant was, I have been out rehabbing my surgically repaired shoulder. I had to work hard day and night, night and day, to get myself back into shape.
E2 takes off the Aladdin T-shirt and reveals his upper body. Judging by the looks of things, it is obvious that E2 has spent some extra time in the weight room while away.
E2: I had to keep myself in top shape…..(brief pause)…..unlike you people.
The mixed reaction that once was has now become a chorus of boos. Looking a bit frustrated, but wearing a small smirk at the same time, E2 walks a big circle in the ring and once again tries to explain himself.
E2: Wait, wait, I apologize for that last one. I am in no means insinuating that you people don’t work hard. You people work very hard. I mean, just look at that guy right there in the front row. He’s as healthy and as hard working as a horse!!
E2 points to a man seated in the front row. The camera gets a close up of a short, pudgy, unhealthy looking fellow, too fat for the shirt he’s wearing. In one hand he has a jumbo foot long hot dog with a side of super-sized nachos, and in the other hand a huge soda, in the likeness of a Big Gulp.
E2: You can’t get any healthier than that!! That man right there is a representation of all of you people. You work hard and get money and then you spend it all on junk food and entertainment, all the while your faces and asses get fatter and fatter, ha, ha.
The crowd lets the One Man Killing Machine have it by showering him with a chorus of boos loud enough to lift the ceiling off the Kemper Arena. E2 spreads his arms and embraces the jeering with open arms. To add insult to injury, the One Man Killing Machine takes the BEWARE, THE TIGER!! T-shirt and gestures as if he’s wiping his ass with it.
Then he towel-cleans his groin area, and then wipes his ass with the T-shirt one more time. Finally, the One Man Killing Machine tosses the abused article of clothing to the fat man in with the hot dog.
E2: Ah, yes. That is more like it. That is music to my ears. Now…….on to business. (Almost shouting so he can be heard over the “Asshole!” chants.) This segment would not be complete without my partner in crime. Behind every good Killing Machine, there is an even better bitch. Allow me to introduce to you, the one, the only, my boo---Amie!!!!
”Slave For You” blasts over the speaker system just as two members of the event staff come out and roll out the red carpet. Then, the the paparazzi appear from the curtain area with their cameras and camcorders in hand. Their main focus: Amie who appears, looking as stunning as ever in white T-shirt, skimpy little red skirt and white cowboy boots. Her little fan club snap pictures of her as she makes her way down the aisle. E2 leans on the rope nearest to the aisle, all the while wearing a demonic smile on his face. Amie returns that same demonic expression, and as she climbs the steel steps, E2 sits on the middle rope and holds the top and rope open for her to step inside the squared circle. As she enters, Amie bends over, nice and slowly, giving some members of the audience their money’s worth.
E2: Now that’s what I’m talking about.
Amie acknowledges E2’s gesture, by blowing him a small kiss. She then turns to acknowledge the crowd with a big wave and a kiss. The crowd is not happy.
E2: How’s my Babyboo, tonight?
Amie gives E2 a wink.
E2: Word. Now tonight, my first guest will be a playa who made an impact a few years ago, here in the P2PW. Then after a short hiatus, this man returned to action in the RAGE title tournament and then made his mark by making it all the way to the finals. Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, children of all ages, allow me to introduce to you………..FIREFLY!!!!
”More Human Than Human” plays over the loud speakers and Firefly appears at the entrance area---and he has a referee with him. He does not look happy at all. The crowd showers the X-Division style wrestler with boos, showing absolutely no love. But as guessed, Firefly does not care and continues to approach the squared-circle. As he climbs the steel steps and enters the ring, E2 steps toward him. The referee that accompanies Firefly waits outside the squared circle.
E2: (With enthusiasm) Welcome, welcome, playa. Good to have you on the show.
Firefly nods his head.
E2: Now before I hand over the stick, I know that you have a little problem with “The Tiger” Aladdin. And I know you are here to address those issues. I can understand playa, I don’t exactly have much love for the playa myself. And since I am not your typical “interviewing” host, I am simply going to hand this mic over to you, so you can get it all out of your system, playa. The floor is yours…..
E2 cordially hands over the mic to Firefly. Amie wears an evil grin as the Firefly puts the microphone to his mouth.
Firefly: Now I am not one to bitch and rant and complain about how unfair it all is. No, just the opposite. I am a man who stands strong, and do all of my talking in the ring.
The crowd begins to boo again.
Firefly: I’m simply here to set the record straight. I’m here to let everyone know that Aladdin beat me at Plethora!
The crowd cheers.
Firefly: But he did it, by cheating his way to victory.
Those cheers emanating from the audience once again become jeers, as Firefly continues to rub the crowd the wrong way.
Firefly: I knowing that people from Missouri aren’t exactly that bright to begin with, I have brought along with me some footage. This footage is from Plethora and it will illustrate how much of sneaky, lowdown, dirty cheat that “The Tiger” Aladdin really is. Now, all I ask is that you people turn your attention to Zeroin, and watch as I provide the proof that the whole world needs to see. Roll it….
Firefly points to Zeroin and footage from TNT’s Plethora PPV begins to air…A frustrated Firefly aids Aladdin to his feet. He sets him up for the Purple Haze and amazingly, he lands the move. McKenna slides into place to make the count. However, Firefly remains seated in the ring, smiling. Firefly stands and gloats for a few moments. He finally goes for the cover....1......2...Gormy yanks McKenna out of the ring just as Aladdin barely gets his shoulder up. Gormy, now wearing a set of brass knuckles, nails McKenna between the eyes. Gormy then slides back into the ring. Firefly covers Aladdin again....1....2...Aladdin kicks out!! The crowd is shocked. Gormy and Firefly are shown looking down at Aladdin. The Tiger begins to make it to his feet. He staggers, face to face, with Firefly. Both men are bleeding from the forehead. Firefly swings towards Aladdin. Aladdin ducks and performs an atomic drop. As Firefly presses his, already injured, tailbone, Aladdin spins him around and sets him up for the Predation. He lands the move! The crowd cheers. However, Aladdin is still very weak. Both men are down and Gormy begins another ten count. Aladdin slowly turns over and crawls towards Firefly. He drapes his arm across Firefly’s chest....1......2.....Firefly gets a shoulder up! The arena is in total amazement, showing respect for both athletes. Aladdin quickly catches his second wind. He pulls Firefly to the center of the ring and performs the Caged Animal, once again. Aladdin pulls tight. Firefly screams in pain as he tries to make it to the ropes. He inches his way closer and closer. Just before he can grip the bottom rope, Aladdin pulls him to the center of the ring and applies the move again. The pressure is much more intense this time. Firefly tries to make it to the ropes. Each second seems like a lifetime, but Firefly is, indeed, making it closer to the ropes. Firefly stops, just 12 inches away from the bottom rope. Firefly has no choice but to tap out. Instead of Gormy calling for the bell, she steps over and gets in the face of Aladdin, demanding him to break the hold. McKenna is shown making it to his feet. The bridge of his nose has been cut open. McKenna sees Firefly tapping out and signals for the bell. The bell is rung and this tournament is now over.
(BACK TO THE RING)
Firefly: Did you see that?! Did you see that injustice right there? Did you see me get robbed by Commissioner McKenna?!?
E2 and Amie both nod their heads in agreement. The crowd boos in disagreement.
Firefly: Gormy called for the hold to be broken, and Aladdin blatantly disobeyed her order. The Commissioner had no business calling for the bell when he did, because the legit referee, Gormy, who was in the center of the ring at the time, called for the hold to be broken. Now I am not one to bitch and complain about anything, but the fact of the matter is, I was robbed of my RAGE title shot. I was robbed of my chance at glory. I was robbed of my opportunity to face and defeat Gormy and becaome the new P2PW RAGE Champion.
The boos from the capacity crowd have become deafening as they have had enough of this constant rambling. The have had enough—and apparently, so has Aladdin. “Never Let Me Down” hits over the loud speakers, and those boos quickly become cheers and ”The Tiger” Aladdin appears and methodically makes his way down to the squared circle. He’s carrying a mic in his right hand and something else in his left. The intense look on his face suggests he’s serious and ready for some action. However, Aladdin stops short of the squared circle and ventures over to the fat man E2 had teased earlier and hands him a brand new ”BEWARE, THE TIGER!!!” T-shirt. The man is overwhelmed with joy. However, Aladdin asks for the one E2 gave him, and the man picks it up from the floor and hands it to Aladdin by two fingers, as if he were holding a soiled baby’s diaper. Aladdin takes the shirt and look to E2, who is still in the ring.
The One Man Killing Machine returns the glare.
Aladdin: (Keeping his eyes on E2) Firefly, if you feel as if you were robbed of your RAGE title opportunity at Plethora, (Aladdin finally looks at Firefly), then maybe we should settle the matter, right here and right now.
The crowd goes crazy at the announcement, as they want Aladdin to shut this man up. In a flash, E2 motions to Amie to come with him, and the two slide out of the squared circle, like a couple of desert serpents who are up to no good.
Aladdin: And seeing that you took it upon yourself to bring a referee to the ring, I take it you had the same thing in mind!
Firefly: Damn right I did!! So why don’t we stop the chitchat, and get this party started right now!! Put your RAGE title shot on the line, right here, right now!!
Aladdin begins to climb the ropes, but before he can enter, E2 sneaks him from behind, punching him in the back of the neck, temporarily wounding The Tiger. Amie pleads with E2 to let it end there, as he must reserve some energy for the dance with Shinns Theory, later in the show. Disregarding his Amie’s request, as well as Aladdin’s pain, the One Man Killing Machine picks Aladdin up and delivers a vicious sit-down powerbomb, right there on the concrete floor. The crowd is angry and Aladdin looks to be seriously hurt. E2 picks Aladdin up and tosses him into the ring, beneath the bottom rope. The striped-shirt referee slides into the ring, the bell rings and the match is underway.
Rage Rules
Rage Tournament Final Rematch
Firefly Vs. "The Tiger" Aladdin
(Written by E2)
Firely immediately tries to take advantage of the damage E2 has inflicted on his opponent. He goes to pick Aladdin up by the head to get him ready. However, in split second, Aladdin grabs Firefly and rolls him up into a small package. The ref hits the canvas…..1……2…….3!!! And signals for the bell. Aladdin immediately rolls out of the ring, still holding his neck. Firefly is in absolute disbelief as well as shock. The ref joins The Tiger outside of the ring and raises his arms in victory. E2 and Amie are still hanging around the entrance area, like two people who are up to no good. Firefly grabs a stick.
Firefly: Wait a minute!! Wait just one friggin’ minute. Now I am not one to bitch and complain about anything, but I was not ready. I was completely unprepared for the
attack that I just suffered. Now I demand that you get back in this ring, and let’s restart that match and do it the right way!!!
The crowd boos Firefly’s request, but Aladdin is game. He has regained that championship look in his eyes and asks the ref to accompany him back to the squared circle. E2 and Amie disappear behind the curtains. The ref slides into the ring and Aladdin shows us some agility by hopping over the top rope. The ref waits for the two men to get in fair position and then calls for the bell.
Rage Rules
Rage Tournament Final Rematch
Firefly Vs. "The Tiger" Aladdin
(Written by E2)
The bells rings and once again, folks, we are under way. The level of interest from the crowd has gone up, because although The Tiger has two legit victories over the Firefly, he is taking a chance by giving him another shot—a shot at the RAGE title. As the two men, circle each other, Aldddin goes in first and confines Firefly to a headlock. Firefly then sends Aladdin to the ropes to free himself of the hold. Aladdin off the ropes, Firefly goes for a nasty clothesline but misses when Aladdin ducks under and comes off the opposite ropes with a flying clothesline that sends Firefly to the canvas. Aladdin recuperates, grabs Firefly and hits a devastating Dominator!!! The crowd is apeshit. The ref is in position as Aladdin covers for the…..1………..2……….3!!! The ref calls for the bell and that is all. Aladdin once again slides out of the ring and raises his arms in victory. The crowd is completely behind Aladdin. In the ring, the referee tends to Firely, but the Division X-style wrestler simply shoves the ref away from him and demands the stick.
Firefly: Wait a minute!! Wait just one friggin’-riggin’ minute. Now I am not one to bitch and complain about anything, but I was not ready and I was caught off gurad. That was an injustice, and I demand that you get back in the ring Aladdin and give me the fair match that I deserve. I promise this time, to stomp a mudhole in that ass!!!
Now at this point the crowd has a mixed reaction: Some want The Tiger to kick his ass agian, others are calling for Aladdin to simple go back and get ready for his RAGE title shot, as he now has three victories over Firefly. But being the fighting man that he is, Aladdin whispers something into the referee’s ear and gets back into the squared circle for…..
Rage Rules
Rage Tournament Final Rematch
Firefly Vs. "The Tiger" Aladdin
(Written by E2)
The ref is in; the bell is sounded; and our match begins. This time, Firefly comes in with a series of rights and lefts, however, The Tiger is able to dodge them using his quickness. As Firefly keeps swinging, Aladdin sees a small opening and catches Firefly with a karate jab to the throat. Firefly hunches over and Aladdin immediately goes for his legs, rolls him over and applies his patented Caged Animal with extreme force. Firefly howls in extreme pain and begins tapping the mat repeatedly. However, the referee does not sound the bell. Instead, the scrawny little man grabs a microphone and lies belly first on the canvas in front of Firefly.
Ref: What do you say?
Firefly: (Ref hold mic to his mouth) I give, I give!!! Break the hold!
Firefly continues to tap relentlessly.
Ref: What?!
Firefly: I quit!! I quit----ahhhhhh!!!!
Aladdin is showing no mercy as he continues to apply the Caged Animal to his opponent. Firefly is pounding the canvas, hoping, praying that Aladdin will release the hold.
Ref: Are you sure? No more bitching and complaining.
Firefly: (Screaming into the mic) I quiiiiittt!!!!
The referee calls for the bell and there it is. The Tiger breaks the hold and raises his arms in victory. Firefly is left a crumpled mess, lying face first on the mat.
“The Tiger” Aladdin - 4.5 promo points
Firefly – 2.9 promo points
Ring Announcer: Ladies & Gentlemen, your winner by submission, the winner of the Rage Tournament and the number one contender for the Rage Championship……“The Tiger” Aladdin!
The crowd cheers the victor. The ref is cheering Aladdin. The fat man in the front row is cheering Aladdin. Aladdin stands victorious and steps out of the squared circle, leaving behind him a crumpled, sorry man.
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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 20:54:26 GMT 1
We are taken backstage as the man who promised he would be here tonight, The Executioner, is seen pacing down the corridors. He walks with a purpose, visibly angered by his suspension. The camera turns to see his view. They go through all the different halls, and finally stop in front of a door. On the door, the writing “Anthony McKenna” is seen. The Executioner literally kicks opens the door, which flies open, slamming against the wall behind it. McKenna and Shinn’s Theory are seen jolting around, to see what the noise was. The Executioner walks in and goes right upto McKenna.The Executioner: You’ve got a lot of nerve, suspending me. Where the hell did you get the idea of doing that. I’m Mr. Freaking TNT! I cannot be taken off TV. I was just doing me job. McKenna: What!? So almost ending the man’s career should be something everyone does? You stepped over the line, Joe. You could have ended the man’s life. You need to be punished for that. The Executioner looks away for a second, in anger and then suddenly looks back at him, fuming.The Executioner: Look at my face! The Executioner turns his face to the side, again, and shows McKenna his huge scars running down his cheek. The Executioner runs his hand down it in an almost possessed manner.The Executioner: Slocum did this to me. He got what was coming to him. He didn’t get a fine. He didn’t get suspended. Just because I can withstand a beating, I get suspended. That’s crazy. McKenna: Look I understand where you’re coming from. But you can’t really compare what you did to him, to what he did to you. But I’ll take away the suspension. The executioner smiles. Thinking he’s gotten what he came for, he turns around and walks just outside the door. McKenna, however, continues to talk, and Executioner stops. He listens, but doesn’t turn around.McKenna: But you won’t be an active wrestler. Oh no. The Executioner turns his head, and his face shrivels up in anger.McKenna: You’ll be TNT’s newest member of the interviewing team. The Executioner turn around slowly and looks as if he is about to explode. He is about to charge forward, back into McKenna’s office but Shinns comes out of nowhere and slams the door shut. He holds the handle, not allowing The Executioner back in. After a while Shinns lets go, and the owner and commissioner laugh.---------------------------------------- We are taken to a Tyler “The Assassin” Stone’s locker room. He is seen unpacking his bags into locker. He reaches into his bag and takes out his discontinued Tag Team Title Belt. He stares at the title, marvelled by it. He uses the sleeve of his shirt to clean the title and places it down on his knees. There is a knock on the door and Tyler shouts for the person to come in. The door opens slowly, and Tyler looks up at the person in the doorway, and puts on an unimpressed expression on his face. The camera pans around to show the returning ChadClassic, with a huge smile on his face walking over to Tyler. Tyler puts the title belt in the bench next to him, and stands up.Tyler “The Assassin” Stone: Been a while since I’ve seen you. ChadClassic: Well you didn’t exactly keep in contact either. Chad goes over to Tyler and extends his hand. Tyler accepts it and the two shake hand, but are both uneasy about it. Chad looks down at the bench where Tyler was sitting and sees the title belt.ChadClassic: You’re still holding on to that thing. Let it go man. I sent mine back to P2PW headquarters ages ago. Tyler “The Assassin” Stone: Well, I never lost my title. As far as I’m concerned, you got injured and therefore I had to forfeit the title. I never lost it though. So why should I let go of it? ChadClassic: Hey, calm down Tyler. I was just asking. We are tag partners after all. Tyler “The Assassin” Stone: We’re not tag partners anymore. We’re no longer tag champs. ChadClassic: Exactly. So you should get rid of that title then. You know, since we’re no longer tag champs. Makes sense doesn’t it? Tyler gets in Chad’s face.Tyler “The Assassin” Stone: Look, if you’ve got something to say, say it. Otherwise get out. We’re no longer partners, so I’ve got no problem in kicking your ass. Chad looks sternly into Tyler’s eyes for a few seconds, before backing off.ChadClassic: We ain’t got no beef, bro. I just wanted to check up on my homey. I’ll go then. ChadClassic nods at Tyler, signalling that he’s going. He turns around and ambles out of Tyler’s locker room. He stops at the door and starts to speak.ChadClassic: Shame about your title match, Tyler. I guess you do need me after all. The camera pans around to Chad’s face, showing a very cocky smile. Tyler is seen over Chad’s shoulder looking up at Chad with a pissed off look on his face. Chad leaves his locker room as we go to ringside.--------------------------------------------- “Real Muthaphukkin G’s” hits and a confident looking Terrel Odom makes his way out to the ring. He slaps hands with members of the crowd, before sliding into the ring and posing on the second rope. Ready for his P2PW debut, he awaits his opponent, Amie.
Moments later, “Slave for You” erupts over the PA system and Amie makes her way out to a chorus of boos. The crowd seem to really dislike her for walking out of the company when E2 was injured .
Both competitors come together as the referee tells them to wait for the bell. A lack of respect for the newcomer is solidified by a slap to the face of T.O.
The bell then sounds, starting the match.Singles Match
Terrell Odom Vs. Amie
(Written by Micko) Amie stands in the centre of the ring staring at her opponent, ready to go, T.O just glares right at her. He then returns the slap to Amie, she falls to the floor, standing back up almost immediately, she runs at T.O but is caught with a monstrous clothesline, T.O picks up Amie and shoots her off the ropes and hits her with a standing dropkick, Amie rolls out of the ring to escape more of a beating. Amie struggles to her feet as T.O vaults over the top rope and attempts a cross body, but Amie ducks this as her opponent hit’s the concrete floor outside of the ring. Sensing she could be in with the chance of a quick win, she slides back to the ring and demands the ref start the 10 count. The ref reaches 6 as the newcomer makes it back to the ring, only to be met with vicious kicks to the back of his head, Amie grabs her opponent by his head and backs him into the corner, she hits T.O with a series of blows to his face, she heads to the opposite corner and waits for her opponent to stagger out of the corner. Amie then charges towards T.O and hits him with a flying knee, T.O staggers back and falls to the mat, Amie jumps and the chance of the pin, but only gets a two count before T.O kicks out. Amie, frustrated, shouts at the ref, T.O notices this and gets to his feet, he gets to Amie and hits her with a german suplex, he keeps his fingers locked and hits another one, this time letting her fly across the ring. T.O stands over his fallen opponent and viciously kicks her to the face. Amie rolls over on to her back and get hit with an elbow drop. He picks her up and whips her to the ropes, she springs back at him and he catches her in a power slam. T.O gets to his feet and grabs the hair of his opponent, he attempts a suplex, but it is blocked by the leg of Amie, he attempts it again, but once again, it is blocked. He lets go of her head and picks her up for a body slam, Amie keeps hold of him and rolls him up into a small package, once again, T.O kicks out at 2. T.O shows his anger by shaking the ropes, he turns round to face Amie and is met with a dropkick, stagged by this, he leans against the ropes as Amie runs at him, He catches her and hit’s a huge spine buster, Amie seems to be out cold after that move, but instead of pinning her, T.O plays up to the crowd and gets out of the ring to grab a microphone Terrell Odom: I told everyone at Plethora I would make and impact, I told that big bastard Mastadon too, he was too scared to face me tonight so I have to face a woman, as you can see, I don’t care who I face, I am the Elite Impact Player. That’s the T-R-U Truth! T.O gets back in the ring and continues his onslaught to Amie but is stopped by a thumb to the eye, T.O steps back to the corner and Amie charges at him, T.O grabs the ref in the way and Amie clatters into the ref, knocking him out. Sensing an opportunity to end this battle, T.O again exit’s the ring, this time to get a chair for his patented finisher, The Buzz. He slides back in with the chair and positions himself to end it, he steadies himself and attempts the move, but Amie ducks and the chairs bounces back of the ropes and hits T.O in the face. Amie throws the chair out of the ring as the ref recovers, T.O is out of it so Amie makes her way to the top rope and hit’s a perfect shooting star press, she makes the cover and the ref counts, 1.……….2.……….3. Amie – 4.43 promo points + 0.4 votes = 4.83
Terrell Odom – 4.3 promo points + 0.5 votes = 4.8Ring Announcer: Ladies & Gentlemen, your winner by pinfall…..Amie! The ref helps Amie to her feet and raises her hand. Amie, instinctively, pushes the ref away and raises her arms on her own. She walks over to the corner and raises her arms, posing for the crowd. She looks down on the debutant, Terrell Odom, who was supposed to be the favourite coming into the match and smirks having won her first match back. She exits the ring and starts to walk up the ramp, as Terrell gets up. He looks out towards the crowd and then at Amie, as if he has just failed. He is visibly very upset, holding his face in his hands. TNT goes to commercial as Terrell jumps out of the ring and heads to the back.---------------------------------------------------- We are taken backstage to see Eye of the Storm and Stevo316 talking, seemingly infuriated at each other.Stevo316: What were you doing at Plethora? Eye of the Storm: He ducked, I couldn’t help it. It was an accident. Stevo316: An accident! Well it didn’t feel very accidental. Eye of the Storm: Fucking hell Stevo! What have I got to say to you? I didn’t mean to hit you in our match against Mastadon. I didn’t do it on purpose. If I did do it on purpose, you would know. Stevo316: Oh, so I would know. Eye of the Storm: Yes you would. And if you don’t back off, you’ll find out sooner rather than later. Stevo316: So you don’t like it when I get in your face, like this. Stevo316 walks right upto Eye of the Storm, so that the two of them are nose to nose. Eye of the Storm, the larger of the two, looks down on Stevo, who looks straight back up with intensity. Eye of the Storm: I guess you just don’t have any luck when it comes to tag team partners do you. Your luck has just run out once aga… Stevo316 cuts off Eye of the Storm by pushing him back. Eye of the Storm is forced back a few steps, and just stands there in shock. Eye of the Storm looks back at Stevo and suddenly charge forward and pushes him back. Stevo flies backwards, further than Eye of the Storm went. Eye of the Storm then runs at Stevo316 and goes for a clothesline. Stevo316 ducks the clothesline and tackles Eye of the Storm from behind. He pushes Eye of the Storm all the way to the wall, and starts to throw some wild punches at Eye of the Storm. Eye of the Storm overpowers Stevo, pushing him to the floor. He backs away from the wall. Stevo jumps back up and goes back after Eye of the Storm. He quickly jumps on him and starts to punch away. Eye of the Storm puts his hands up, trying to block the punches. He pushes Stevo away once more. Eye of the Storm runs over to Stevo and this and STO, taking him to the floor. Eye of the Storm stand over him and starts to punch away at him. Stevo316 covers his face, stopping Eye of the Storm from making contact with his face. Eye of the Storm gets impatient because he can’t hit Stevo and so he grabs a hold of Stevo’s arms and tries to remove them from his face. Stevo, however, uses this time to turn Eye of the Storms over so that he is on top. Just as Stevo goes for a punch, out of nowhere, someone grabs his hand. The camera zooms out to show that it is none other than the TNT commissioner. McKenna pulls Stevo up, which allowed Eye of the Storm to jump up himself. He charges at Stevo but McKenna gets in-between the two of them, trying to separate them.McKenna: What in the hell is going on here?! You two want to fight so badly? Do it in the ring! Next week you two will square off. Now I don’t want to see you two go at it again like this. McKenna pushes them apart once more, and heads off towards the ring. Both Stevo and Eye of the Storm stare at each other as we go to commercial.
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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 20:56:10 GMT 1
We come back from commercial to see Ninja coming out from his changing room. He shuts the door and heads towards the ring, waiting to be presented with the P2PW Heavyweight Title. On the way to the ring he is congratulated by the officials and TNT roster. He nears the curtain, where he has been told to wait until Mary Lindsey and McKenna finish what they have to say and then introduce him. He stand still, not wavered by anything. Out of nowhere, a hand is seen grabbing a hold of Ninja’s arm. Ninja turns around to see who it is, but doesn’t seem too bothered when he realizes who the person is. Ninja tries to turn back around, but the person grabs a hold of him again and turns him all the way around. The camera pans around to see that Simz is the person in front of Ninja.Simz: I’m not done with you yet Ninja. In fact we’ve only just begun. Red Ninja:What’s that supposed to mean? Simz: You know full well that I should have been the first ever P2PW Heavyweight Champion. You shouldn’t have even been in the match. I’m more deserving than you. You’re just a tag team wrestler who got lucky. Pinning me, even though it was fucked up, was the biggest thing you’ve done in your career. Red Ninja: ……… Simz: Don’t ignore me. That title is mine. I should be the one to be presented with the title. Red Ninja: The fact is, Simz, just like you said, I pinned you. It’s as simple as that. I beat your ass right in the middle of the ring. You have no reasoning behind your whining. Simz: You screwed me! Red Ninja: How exactly? It seems every time you get beat, you got screwed. Which mean you’ve been screwed a hell of a lot. Simz starts to go red, with anger. He starts to fume, but restrains himself.Simz: At Night of the Champions, I will make sure that I’m your opponent. And, I guarantee you will go down in history as a one hit wonder, once I beat your ass for my title. Red Ninja: Do what you gotta do. But, if it’s okay with you, I’d like to go out and be presented with my title. You know, if it’s okay with you. Red Ninja pokes fun at the fact that he’s the champ, insulting Simz, which causes Simz to leave. Soon Anthony McKenna walks over to Red Ninja, who is followed by Mary Lindsey. McKenna checks that Red Ninja is ready, but Red Ninja pays no attention to him. McKenna leaves him alone, thinking that Ninja is just nervous. McKenna’s music hits, “Before I Forget”, and we are taken to ringside.----------------------------------- P2PW Heavyweight Championship Presentation for:
Red Ninja (c)[/center][/b][/color] McKenna soon comes walking out to the sound of his music. Wearing a suit, and with a mic in hand he heads straight for the ring. He climbs the steel steps and squeezes through the middle and top rope to enter the ring. Red carpet has been placed on top of the ring mat and balloons have been tied to the ring posts as well as other decorations. The main focal point of the ring, however, is the P2PW Heavyweight Championship Belt which is positioned in the exact centre of the ring, concealed in a glass podium with a velvet cushion for the title to sit on. McKenna walks right over to the belt and starts to talk.McKenna: If you haven’t guessed already, it’s time for the P2PW Heavyweight Title presentation. This is something that I’ve been waiting for so long to do, and I’m going to have to wait just a bit longer. Before we begin the festivities, I thought it would be a good time to announce the matches for Night of the Champions. The crowd start up a “Red Ninja” chant as they are waiting desperately for him to be presented the belt and be officially named the champion of TNT.McKenna: I know, I know. I can’t wait too. The sooner I finish the what I have to say about Night of the Champs, the sooner we can get to that. So let me finish. Deal? The crowd all shout, signalling that they accept McKenna’s proposition.McKenna: So, the Internet Title match has already been announced. It’ll be the second match in the series and the title can change hands. The second match that has been revealed is the winner of the Rage Tournament, Aladdin, facing off against the current Rage Champion, Gormy. Obviously this match will be Rage Rules. Now, as I said there will also be a number one contendership match for the P2PW Heavyweight Title. The winner of this match will face off against the champion at our next pay-per-view. But this won’t be any normal match, oh no. This will be a gauntlet match, featuring 10 lucky TNT superstars who will be selected at random. The rules of this match are simple. Two people start off the match. These two will face off as usual with the aim of eliminating their opponent by pinfall of submission. There will be no count outs or disqualifications. Once one person has been pinned or has submitted the next competitor will come out and so on and so on. The winner will be the person who has not been pinned. It doesn’t matter if you come out first or last, or if you’ve eliminated 8 people or only one. The last man not to be eliminated will win. The crowd cheer at the match, as they haven’t come across it before.McKenna: I’m glad you like it. Now, the main event. I could, simply, arrange a rematch from Plethora but as I said at that particular show. I want to challenge Blitz. And in order for me to do that, I can’t repeat that title match. The internet title match is different, because the two of them are so evenly matched. So, next week, there will be a qualifying match. The two competitors will, however, be the people who lost at Plethora, Simz and Tyler “The Assassin” Stone. The crowd give off a mixed reaction, as they are excited about the match but aren’t too happy about the two competitiors.McKenna: I’m done then but Mary Lindsey has something to say. So come one out. The TNT theme song, “Battleflag” hits and Mary Lindsey come out from behind the curtain to a nice reaction from the crowd. She has a stern look on her face as she is coming out to address the situation with Rocky. She walks up the steel steps and enters the ring, through the ropes which McKenna widens for her. She says thank you to him and immediately starts to talk.Mary Lindsey: Before we start the presentation, I have to address the situation with Rocky. Last Sunday at the pay-per-view, Rocky was found lying motionless outside in the parking lot. No-one, not even Rocky himself, knows who did this to him, which worries us even more. Rocky was brutally attacked and has sustained many injuries; a broken leg, internal bleeding, severe neurological damage which causes unconsciousness at random occasions, and nerve damage. No attacks are condoned in P2PW but this type is just taking things to a new level. This will not be tolerated; the perpetrator or perpetrators will be punished severely. I would like to ask Gormy to come out, just so that we can see if she knows anything about this. She was the last person to be seen with Rocky and so she must know who the attacker was. Mary Lindsey, McKenna and the crowd are forced to wait for a while, before “Whiskey In A Bottle” hits and Gormy comes out. With a mic in hand, the Rage Champion stops at the top of the stage and talks from there.Gormy: Look Mary. I don’t know if you trying to insinuate that I did that to Rocky. But I didn’t. Mary looks surprised, not having meant to come off like that. She puts the mic to her mouth.Mary Lindsey: No, no. I never said that. I just wanted to know if you knew anything about it. Gormy: I don’t know a thing. If you didn’t see his match, he started pushing me around. I didn’t take to well to that and so, backstage, we exchanged a few words and then I left him. I wish I had stayed with him now, but I didn’t. I didn’t see him after that. Mary Lindsey: Okay then. Thank you Gormy. That’s all I need from you. Gormy: I’m not finished yet. I visited Rocky at the hospital and he’d like to inform everyone that in two weeks time he will make an appearance from the hospital via a satellite connection. So I guess Night of the Champions just got that much better. Gormy looks around here, towards the crowd, seeing them all cheer for the announcement of Rocky’s appearance. She seem surprised that the fans care so much, but she doesn’t make much of it, just turning around and heading back to her changing rooms. McKenna starts to speak, which causes Gormy to stop.McKenna: Speaking of Night of the Champions; Gormy, that will be your first title defense. In fact that will be your first match since WrestleFever 2. Gormy turns her head and stares at McKenna, who stares right back.McKenna: I think you need a warm up match. So next week you will be in action against…..hmmmm, who on this roster can go toe to toe with you? I got it. Your opponent will be none other than the man who returned tonight. No, not E2. ChadClassic! Gormy bites sighs, seemingly annoyed by the match announcement. She drops her head onto her chest and continues back to her changing room. The camera then pans back to the ring, where Mary Lindsey and McKenna are now standing on either side of the glass podium, holding the title belt. Mary Lindsey puts the mic to her mouth and starts to speak.Mary Lindsey: Now I believe there is nothing else to do but get on with what we came out here to do. McKenna: Oh yeah! Mary Lindsey: Ladies and Gentlemen, please get to your feet and welcome the man who defeated two other men at the Plethora pay-per-view to become the first man to become the P2PW Heavyweight Champion. The man who has been with P2PW from day one. The man whose name is known all across the world. The man who has definitely paid his dues. Please give the warmest welcome you can to… RED NINJA! “Makai Club Theme” hits the arena and the capacity crowd erupt. Every member of the audience is now on their feet, jumping up and down waiting for the newly crowned champion. The buzz around the arena is at an all time high, and the noise that these people are giving off is deafening, which is seemingly nothing compared what the level of noise will be when Red Ninja comes out. After almost a verse of his theme music, Red Ninja has not come out. The crowd start a “NINJA” chant in hopes that he’ll come out. After hearing this chant, Ninja comes out from the behind the curtain. The crowd go absolutely crazy when they see him, giving him one of the biggest pops in P2PW history. Ninja is in amazement because of the reaction he is getting. He pauses at the top of the ramp to soak in the moment. He looks across the whole arena and is astonished. After about a minute, he starts to walk down the ramp, slapping the hands of the fans as he walks down the ramp. He goes all the way around the ring, so that all his fans can slap his hand. After going around the ring, he goes back up the ramp, so that the other side of the ramp also get to slap his hand. He goes all the way up the ramp, and once he’s finished he walks down the middle of the ramp and heads to the ring. Wearing a suit, he walks up the steel steps, instead of sliding underneath the rope. He enters the ring, to see McKenna applauding him. Ninja walks over to McKenna and extends his hand. McKenna accepts it but pulls Ninja closer and hugs him. McKenna is visibly ecstatic about the whole occasion, as he has a large smile on his face. Ninja then walks over to Mary Lindsey and shakes her hand too. Ninja back off a bit, allowing Mary to talk.Mary Lindsey: Congratulations Red Ninja. As you can see your name has been engraved on the plate which has been screwed onto the title. The camera zooms in on the title, which sits on the velvet cushion. The beautiful title belt, clearly has Red Ninja’s name engraved at the bottom on a gold plate. The camera then pans out to show Mary Lindsey.Mary Lindsey: It is now my pleasure to present this title belt to the champion. Mary Lindsey carefully picks up the belt, using both hands. She unbuckles it and turns it so that the writing it upside down from her view but normal from Red Ninja’s, who is now standing directly opposite her. She carries it so that it is perfectly symmetrical in her hands. The crowd are all clapping at this touching moment. Mary hands the belt over to Ninja, as the crowd start to cheer even more. Ninja stares intently at the belt.Mary Lindsey: On behalf of the board of directors, TNT and P2PW, I announce Red Ninja as the first ever official P2PW Heavyweight Champion! The crowd erupt once more with cheers, and start a “Let’s Go Ninja!” chant. Ninja is all choked up by the reception. He slings the belt over his shoulder, as McKenna is seen clapping his heart out. Mary Lindsey hands her over her mic. The crowd start to shout “Speech!” over and over again. Ninja puts the mic to his mouth, but is seemingly overwhelmed by the crowd response that he is unable to start talking. His arm drops down and Ninja takes a few moments to compose himself. He puts the mic to his mouth once again and this time is able to talk.Red Ninja: Tonight, is the greatest moment of my life, bar none. Tonight, after what felt like a life time, I finally ascend up the company ladder. There was a time I'll admit when I believed that I’d always be a lower ranked guy here in P2PW. But now I can say that my stock in this company has just gone up. I’m now apart of history; I’m the first ever P2PW Heavyweight Champion. I feel as if I’m the best man on TNT. It took some time, but now that I’m here I finally get to say what I've wanted to say for a long time. So Anthony McKenna, P2PW and the fans in this arena and watching at home I have to something to say.....Fuck each and every one of you! The once loud crowd, are stunned and are now so silent that you could hear a pin dropping. After a few seconds the Ninja’s comments have sunk in and the crowd start to question whether they heard him right or not. A state of confusion is sense all around the arena. The camera pans around to see McKenna totally shocked, and speechless. He stand motionless, like a statue with a pale look on his face.Red Ninja: That’s right. I don’t owe anyone of you a fucking thing. For months, you shunned me; you looked down on me; you treated me like a second class wrestler. You gave chances to any average Joe who could piece together a few sentences. Look at the guys you wasted your time on....Shane Montez, Doc Holiday, Nation...with all that you blew on those jackasses you could have pushed a guy who wouldn’t buckle under pressure and then high tail it the fuck out of this second rate fed. There was a time that I cared about this company, but what did I get out of it? I got to carry two joke wrestlers, and then I got to sit back and watch as you guys piss your pants over guys who can talk but when they get into the ring they fuck up. Or better yet why not get your backstage favorites to constantly be in the main event. For too long, the politics and the backstage games that have gone on here have held guys like me down. Let me tell you a little something, you know that the jackasses in the front office wanted to put Mastadon or whatever the fuck he's called in my spot. That guy isn’t good enough to hold my jock strap. That’s just one example of the games that are played here. But that’s all going to change now. I’m the champ now and so I also get the power that comes with this belt. Ninja takes the belt of his shoulder and lifts it up in his right hand. The crowd, who are still in shock, let out a few boos, which get louder as the time goes on. McKenna’s facial expression now goes from one of surprise to one of anger. The veins on his head start to pulsate and become more and more prominent. He loosens his tie and unbuckles the top button on his shirt. He then takes off his sports jacket and tosses it over the ring ropes. McKenna roles up his sleeves, as if he is about to get into a fight. Ninja lowers his arm and places the title over his shoulder again. Mary Lindsey is still in a state of shock and keeps out of the way of the other two in the ring. Ninja puts the mic to his mouth once more.Red Ninja: Anthony McKenna, tonight begins a new direction of TNT. Tonight the Red Ninja era begins. You don’t like it, there’s the door, take your ass to Blitz. I’m in control now. And I owe it all to you. Ninja drops the mic on the mat. He starts to laugh in an evil manner. McKenna however takes exception to Ninja’s last comment and approaches him. Ninja doesn’t back down. McKenna is now fuming, and his muscles are seemingly bulging through his shirt He starts to breath heavily and sweat starts to trickle down his head. Ninja, on the other hand, is totally calm. Ninja backs away from McKenna, which gets a bad reaction from the crowd. Ninja, keeping his eyes on McKenna exits the ring, and jumps off the ring apron to the floor. He walks backwards, up the ramp, looking at McKenna for a few second and then at the crowd. He starts to curse at the crowd, who give him shit back. Ninja reaches the top of the ramp and lifts up his title once more. He drapes it back over his shoulder. Before leaving, he puts the icing on the cake by giving the crowd the middle finger, and then McKenna and Mary Lindsey. McKenna is livid in the ring. He starts to go crazy, kicking the ropes and punching the turnbuckle. Mary Lindsey tires to calm him down to no avail. McKenna charges over to the middle of the ring and eyes the glass podium. He picks up the velvet cushion, sitting on top of it, and throws it out to the crowd. McKenna then lifts up the glass podium all the way over his head. Mary Lindsey tries to stop him from throwing it down, but McKenna doesn’t listen. Realizing that McKenna isn’t going to budge, Mary slides out of the ring, and walks up the ramp, so that she is safe. She watches from the ramp as McKenna slams the podium down into the mat. The glass podium shatters into a million pieces as the pieces flying everywhere. McKenna stands still in the ring, trying to calm himself down. He takes his sports jacket from the ropes and exits the ring, not making eye contact with any member of the crowd. The crowd is silent as McKenna heads up the ramp. He passes Mary Lindsey but does not notice. She follows him up the ramp, keeping her distance. As the two of them disappear through the curtain the ring crew, quickly, rush out and start to clean the ring of the glass, so that it is not a danger for any of the competitors. They also remove the red carpet from the ring as we are taken backstage.
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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 20:58:05 GMT 1
Aladdin is seen backstage walking through the halls with an ice pack, which he is holding, on his back. He walks through the corridor for a few seconds, until he reaches his changing room. He opens the door and walks in. He stops for a second, as if he has just seen somebody. A smile appears on his face and he walks forward.Aladdin: I wasn’t expecting visitors. The camera pans around to show the newly signed, New Dare and the returning Dan “Dragon” Taylor. The two of them are seen sitting on Aladdin’s sofa. They both get up and walk over to Aladdin. Aladdin hugs both of them and then starts to talk again.Aladdin: I’m glad you came back Dan. P2PW is the place to be. I made sure that Ant signed you to TNT. You gonna stick around this time? Dan “Dragon” Taylor: Yeah. Definitely. I’m pretty keen on staying here this time. It seems this is the place to be. I saw Plethora, and thought it was just an amazing show and so I knew I had to make an effort to get back. Aladdin, now, turns his focus around to New Dare.Aladdin: And I’m glad I finally convinced you to sign with TNT, Rob. New Dare: It’s New Dare now, Al. But I guess you can call me Rob. Aladdin: New Dare! I’ll stick with Rob. The three of them sit down on Aladdin’s sofas and chat for a while. After catching up, they start to get down to business.Aladdin: So, I take it you’ve been watching the show. So you know everyone on the roster. New Dare: Of course. TNT’s got a decent bunch of people. The champions on this show are at such a high level. You’ll have a tough time at Night of the Champs. DDT: Yeah. Gormy is one tough chick. Aladdin: Yeah, make sure she doesn’t catch you calling her that. The three of them laugh.Aladdin: I can get Ant to book you both in a match next week, if you’d like. New Dare: Great. Can’t wait. DDT: Actually. I won’t be able to next week. I’ve got to fly back to England for some family stuff. But tell him I’d love to be apart of the gauntlet match at Night of the Champs. Aladdin: Cool. The guys for the gauntlet match will be selected at random so I can’t really do anything about that. DDT: Oh. Well, I’ll have to wait and see then. Aladdin: Yep. So guys, why don’t we go get something to eat and bring it back here. I want to watch the main event. I’m interested to see how E2 fairs against Shinns. I’ll just get changed and we’ll go. Aladdin gets up and goes over to his bag and takes out his casual clothes. DDT and New Dare are seen still sitting down. Aladdin stares at them.Aladdin: Can I have a bit of privacy guys? New Dare and DDT quickly get up and run out of the room.New Dare: Sorry. We’ll wait outside. Aladdin starts to change as we are taken to another scene somewhere else.------------------------------------------------ The scene opens up with Shinns closing his changing room door in his wrestling attire with the Internet Title draped over his shoulder. He turns around and heads to the ring for his match which is up next. As he nears the curtain he bumps into Wolverine. Wolverine stops him and the two of them start to talk.Wolverine: I’m here. Shinns replies in a sarcastic mannerShinn’s Theory: You’re here. Great! Wolverine takes exception to Shinns’s comment.Wolverine: What’s that supposed to mean? Shinn’s Theory: You’re here. So what? Guess what, the rest of the active roster is here too. Wolverine: You wanted me to turn up, and now you’re give me stick. Shinns: Heh! Giving you stick. But anyway, just because you turned up to the show, is that supposed to impress me? You turn up from time to time anyway, why don’t you come every week now. Instead of when you feel like it. It’s not that hard. I know you live in Canada, but there is this invention called an aeroplane which allows you to go to different places in little time at all. You see, I may understand your situation if there was no such thing. You’re not a real wolverine. You’re not an animal. You don’t have to go everywhere on foot. You’re allowed in public places, including aeroplanes. Wolverine seems angry, and frustrated.Shinn’s Theory: Calm down. It was just a joke. But I truly am not impressed. You want to get booked higher up the card? Do something to impress me. Make an impact. You’re a freaking giant. You stand out. It can’t be too hard. Once you do something like that, I’ll start taking you a bit more seriously and make sure you got booked appropriately. Okay? Wolverine: ……….. Shinn’s Theory: I said, okay? Wolverine: ………… Shinn’s Theory: I’ll take that as a yes. Now I’ve got a match to go to, so I hope to see more of you soon. Shinn’s Theory walks off in the same direction as Wolverine stand still, watching him leave as we go to ringside.---------------------------------------- The opening strains of “Headsprung” from L.L sounded out; causing the crowd to erupt with a mixed reaction at the notion that e2 would be making himself known. After a few seconds, e2 had come storming out from behind the curtain, his face a mask of thinly veiled anger. Pausing at the top of the ramp, e2 glared down at the ring, giving the fans a moment to accept him. He then heads down the ramp and slides into the ring-before posing on the ropes as his music fades into the volume of intensity in the arena.
Multi-colored pyro go off around the stage and ramp when “P.C” by Testament hits. The music plays for a while and soon the Internet Champion, Shinn’s Theory walks out onto the ramp, his belt strapped around his waist. He stands on the ramp for a few seconds, staring down at E2, who is awaiting Shinn’s to make it to the ring. It is quite known that e2 is waiting to beat the living hell out of Shinn’s Theory, knowing that this victory in the best of five series would give him a great advantage to prove that he is better than Shinn’s Theory. Shinn’s then walks down the ramp, ignoring the fans heat that he is given, and cocks some sort of smile on his way into the ring. Taking his sprawled hands up the ropes, and climbing onto the apron, he takes a big step over the ropes, before entering the ring with e2. As Shinn’s gets a stare down from e2, he takes off the Internet Championship from around his waist, and he makes his way up the right turnbuckle, raising his arm, and the Internet Championship high in the air for a camera shoot from the arena’s beloved fans. As the music has faded into the crowd’s hollering, and chants of “e2 got screwed”, Shinn’s looks down at the other corner of the ring of where e2 stands.
The belt is then taken by the referee, who raises it high into the air to contest that this is one of the five matches that will be for the Internet Championship. Bringing it back to the waist level area, he hands it to the ring announcer to hold. The ref calls for the bell and the match is underway.Match 1 in the Best of Five Series
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Shinn's Theory (c) Vs. E2
(Written by Terrell Odom) Now in the ring; Shinn’s Theory and e2 are standing tall over one another. Both big men nearly three feet away from each other, their eyes locked on one another. Shinn’s makes a step toward e2, and e2 takes a step forward. The intensity in the air at this time has risen to a high, to what looks to be like the most intense of matches in quite awhile, in Person to Person Wrestling. E2 is now in the face of Shinn’s Theory, and both still haven’t spoke a word, or have taken any action towards one another. It is then that Shinn’s Theory actually has the audacity to extend his arm out, for e2 to shake. Looking down at Shinn’s hand that is extended, e2 pushes Shinn’s Theory square off of his feet, leaving the crowd and Shinn’s in shock. E2 is now exhaling heavily; Shinn’s is picking himself off of the canvas, as Shinn’s immediately charges at the monster, e2, and gets hit with a punch, and the bell rings. E2 trying to level Shinn’s to his knees, but Shinn’s comes back with a punch to the abdomen, and then to the head, as e2 falls back. Shinn’s then charges towards e2 again, but is thrown over the ropes, and out of the ring, as e2 ducks. Shinn’s is now holding his shoulder, as he seems to have landed on it; e2 is now making his way out of the ring. E2 now walks over to Shinn’s and picks him up, throwing him into the barricade. Shinn’s is now holding his ribs after the impact he had received off of the collision, as e2 lifts him up again, and backs him, and Shinn’s Theory to about a twenty feet radius from the barricade, goes to throw him into it again. With the velocity on the swing, Shinn’s hits the wall so hard; it nearly looks to have broken it in half! E2 then walks back over to Shinn’s limp body, as he seems to be cleaning house up on him tonight. Shinn’s is trying to get up, but e2 is there, and brings him back into the ring, before an apparent 10 count that the referee had taken to a slow pace. Shinn’s is now getting up, believe it or not after the collision that looked to have broken him and the barricade in half, before e2 can make it to his feet when sliding into the ring. He stomps on e2, until he knows he is capable of taking control of him again. Shinn’s then lays a double ax handle drop onto e2, and then starts kicking the right heel of e2. Shinn’s looks to be full of rage, as he continues to stomp furiously into the right leg of e2, as e2 begins to try to escape from Shinn’s kicks. Shinn’s is now picking e2 up, as he sets his angle to throw him off of the rope, but it is inverted by e2, as he swings Shinn’s off of the rope, who with his size; Shinn’s leaps off into a springboard splash onto e2! Both men are down, and the legs are locked, as Shinn’s goes for the count, but he seems to have forgotten that this is a submission only match, and Shinn’s drops the shoulders, and begins to get back into a stance on his feet. Now, Shinn’s has lifted e2 back up, and has his head locked, looking to lift the big man up for a suplex. E2 though, keeps his balance before Shinn does get him up, and lifts Shinn’s into the air, and drops him with an out-of-nowhere brain buster! E2 now has locked on the shoulder of Shinn’s and is trying to get him to submit at will. Straining on the shoulder bar he has Shinn’s in, Shinn’s is able to crawl to the ropes in a matter of time. Shinn’s is now clutching at his arm, in some severe pain, as e2 walks up to hurt, lying body of Shinn’s Theory. Mocking Shinn’s, e2 slaps the long hair of Shinn’s, signaling for him to get up, as he puts a drop toehold on Shinn’s, e2 gets back up, and sets his knees into the shoulder area of Shinn’s dropping his knees right into the shoulders, and repeats the style once more, and then another time, before Shinn’s begins to clutch at his shoulders. It is the early going, yet Shinn’s has already been beaten severely by e2. Shinn’s is attempting to get up, as e2 charges at him, but Shinn’s catches him by the arm, swinging him chest first into the turnbuckle. E2 bounces back, and is met with a back body drop from Shinn’s. Falling to the ropes, Shinn’s tries to get his air back, as he crawls back up to the top rope, and heads back towards e2 again. E2 is now grabbing onto the tights of Shinn’s but Shinn’s delivers some blows to the head of e2; no effect. E2 continues to get up, but Shinn’s keeps leveling right fists into the head of e2, but e2 finally gets up, and screams with a violent roar into the face of Shinn’s Theory, and begins to punch him. The two large men continue to punch each other, as Shinn’s punches begin to get weaker by the moment, as he begins to lose the rest of his stamina. E2 kicks Shinn’s and sets him in DDT form, but begins to knee Shinn’s into the abdominal area, as he falls to the ground. E2 then goes for a Boston Crab, but Shinn’s is able to kick e2 out of the submission hold, as both men have came back to their feet. The two men now circle each other before e2 charges in and begin throwing several punches to the head of Shinn’s, and after a few kicks continue to stun Shinn’s. e2 goes behind Shinn’s and tries to go for a German Suplex but is unable to lift Shinn’s up into the air despite a few tries to move him, with that injured shoulder seeming to give out on him. Shinn’s then responds with an elbow to the back of the head before he Irish Whips e2 into the corner and charges in with a huge splash! E2 starts to come out before Shinn’s tosses him back into the corner and begins driving the shoulder into his chest and ribs repeatedly before Shinn’s grabs him out of the corner and hits a big Sidewalk Slam! Shinn’s now goes puts his arms into the form of a cross arm bar on the injured shoulder of e2, and starts thrusting all of his energy into the arm of e2. E2 is now screaming in pain, as his arm is pulled all the way back, inflicting all of the possible pain onto the upper area of e2’s arm. After e2 looks like he is about to tap, he then finds energy somehow in his left arm, to throw Shinn’s over his other shoulder. E2 tries throwing several more punches trying to break up Shinn’s further attempt as e2 finally connects with a huge DDT! E2 is holding his arm/shoulder area now as he moves out of the ring and onto the apron as he goes for a Springboard Moonsault onto Shinn’s! What a move from the big man, as he goes for the leg again. Now, e2 has an STF locked onto Shinn’s, and Theory starts to attempt his way to the ropes. Shinn’s is about another five long feet away from the ropes, and e2 is keeping the submission locked in as tight as possible. As Shinn’s starts to crawl slowly, and the redness on the face of Shinn’s starts to turn to a sudden purple, he looks to be giving out on the submission. He looks to be another three feet away from the rope, as he starts to move slower towards the ropes, and it looks like Shinn’s could be passing out. As e2 starts yelling the words “Tap!” from his mouth, Shinn’s doesn’t even look to have the energy to raise his arm.
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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 21:02:47 GMT 1
Shinn’s has now passed out, and the ref goes over to check in on Shinn’s. Raising the arm, we get the arm to drop one. The referee then goes for another raise of the arm, and it drops yet again. This is the last drop for Shinn’s, as the ref begins to raise the arm, it drops…but Shinn’s gets the arm up in the nick of time! As he looks to be getting the energy back, some of the area in the front row of the fan area begin to intensify and get behind Shinn’s Theory, as he is trying to release from the hold of e2…moving another two inches, he extends his long arms, trying as much as possible to get to the ropes. It is finally that he rises from the ground, and has the three hundred and seventeen pound monster on his back, and clutches at e2’s neck, driving him hard into the mat!
Shinn’s start to stomp away on e2’s injured shoulder for a bit, before he starts wrenching hard on it again, which causes e2 to roll toward the ropes for a break in the hold. Shinn’s allows e2 to get up to his feet as they finally lock up and Shinn’s gets e2 into a side headlock. However e2 quickly sends him into the ropes and Shinn’s goes down as he runs right into a shoulder block from Shinn’s. e2 gets up quickly and goes in for a spear, but Shinn’s is able to move out of the way, forcing e2’s shoulder to drive right into the cold steel of the ring post. Shinn’s looks back at e2, cocking a smile on his face, as he sees e2 in the severity of pain; he walks over to him, taking him out of the position of where he was lying at.
Now Shinn’s rolls out of the ring, taking e2 with him, as he looks to be doing the worst of a situation, from the view of the fans. As e2 is still clutching at his shoulder, and the loud screams can be heard, Shinn’s gets back on the end of the ring, jumping down hard, sending his boots right into the shoulder area of e2! With the weight, and the downward point of where Shinn’s had dropped onto e2’s shoulder, the most of the pain has been inflicted. E2 is trying to get up, but can’t use his shoulder to. Shinn’s gives him the lift, but grabs him by the waist area, and grabs a hold of his shoulder, and is able to place him over his right shoulder, as he carries e2. He has e2 pointing towards the turnbuckle post, his shoulder that is, and starts to charge at it, sending his shoulder flying straight into the ring post! E2 is now letting out the loudest decibel of a scream we have ever heard from him probably, as Shinn’s tries to get his breath back, and revitalize his strength. Shinn’s now lifts e2 back up, and sends him into the ring. Shinn’s is now bringing e2 back into the turnbuckle, as he lifts him to a stance, and begins to drive his shoulder into the chest area of e2.
Shinn’s then drops e2 to the mat, and begins to expose the turnbuckle post, as the referee tries to get him away from the post. Shinn’s then pushes the ref out of the way, as he un-straps the leather “p2p” logo post, and throws it on the body of e2. He then lifts him back up, and sets e2 up into the area of the turnbuckle post, and drives his shoulder into the cold steel post! Like we haven’t heard the wailing before, e2 is starting to scream out in more pain, and e2 continues to laugh along, as he resembles e2 crying like a little “mentally unstable bitch”. He then brings e2 back to his feet, and drives his back into the turnbuckle…
Shinn’s throws more punches to e2 before he bounces into the ropes and hits a body press which finally does take e2 back down! Shinn’s goes for the submission on the injured arm of e2, but e2 quickly gets out of the submission hold which surprises the p2p veteran. Shinn’s though is there, as e2 tries to crawl over to the ropes, but is met with a flying elbow drop, and then Shinn’s quickly lifts e2 back up, and brings him back to his shoulders, sending a back body drop to e2! Shinn’s gets back to his feet, And now he looks up to the top rope as he moves, and the fans all start cheering as they wonder what he will try to do, however e2 quickly gets up, and takes Shinn’s off the top rope, his groin area hitting the exposed turnbuckle post!
For most of the night, Shinn’s Theory and e2 had taken advantage of each other through the periods of times. E2 looks to take advantage again, as he sees Shinn’s fall to the mat, after landing hard on the turnbuckle posts…possibly Shinn’s busting his balls on that exposed turnbuckle. E2 now looks back down at Shinn’s and begins to lift him up. Here e2 brings the advantage back to him, as he quickly throws Shinn’s into the turnbuckle post with authority chest first, as Shinn’s grabs at his chest, and e2 turns in a reverse neck breaker with his “not injured” left arm. E2 then brings Shinn’s back to his feet, and throws him back out of the ring, looking to set his vengeance in on the man that has spoken of “screwing him out” of the match they had only months before.
Shinn’s crawls onto the apron-as e2 tries to suplex him in but Shinn’s lands on his feet and goes behind with a go behind of his own. Shinn’s reverses-but e2 delivers a series of back elbows-sending Shinn’s into the corner-and then across the ring into the corner. He runs at him and hits a stinger splash into the chest of Shinn’s-causing him to stumble out and take a huge bulldog by e2-who takes both of the arms of Shinn’s, and attempts a surfboard submission!
Shinn’s is straining, trying to get out of the hold, as e2 is still hurt in the left arm, and does not quite have the energy to keep the hold locked in. Feeling too intense of pain, he is forced to release the hold, and goes back to nursing his injured shoulder. Shinn’s then finds the advantage to take control of e2 again, and goes towards him.
Shinn’s picks up e2 and throws him into the ropes-and telegraphs a backdrop-causing e2 to kick him in the stomach and drop him with a huge DDT! He picks him back up and throws him out to the floor before climbing up on the top rope. As Shinn’s gets up, e2 leaps off and takes Sizemore down. He plays to the crowd before picking up Shinn’s and trying for another DDT-but Shinn’s throws him off. E2 hopes onto the apron and goes for a double ax handle off the apron-missing Shinn’s but landing on his feet. He kicks at Shinn’s-who catches his leg. He goes for an Enziguri-but Shinn’s ducks-and then flips him over to where e2 had his back to Shinn’s. Shinn’s then hits a standing dropkick to the back of the head-then drops an elbow across the back of The One Man Killing Machine’s head. He picks up e2 and slides him back into the ring and climbs to the top rope. He goes for a big splash-but e2 rolls out of the way. He delivers a standing chop-and shoots Shinn’s into the far corner-only to deliver a splash. He makes it across the ring and goes for The Gold Digger-but Shinn’s, pushes e2 under him, and leaps over him sending him into the corner with the unexposed turnbuckle-he pulls out of the corner and rocks him with a bridging Tiger Suplex, in which he brings it into an ankle lock! E2 rolls out of it and bridges Shinn’s up into a reverse DDT position. He hits a quick X-Factor type move before climbing the top rope and diving off with a HUGE Moonsault.
Crowd – This Is Awesome *clap* *clap* *clap* *clap* This Is Awesome!
He gets up as Shinn’s starts to stir. He walks to the opposing side of the ring and calls for the The Gold Digger yet again. E2 lifts him up onto his shoulders. He goes for the move-but Shinn’s lands to his feet, and tries to drop e2 down in shoulder bar position, but e2 fights out of it.
Shinn’s then goes at e2, diving his elbow right into the shoulder blade of e2. Shinn’s picks him up and nails a few right hands-before e2 tries a clothesline. Shinn’s ducks and locks in a Half Nelson. He drops e2 back-first across his knee, and keeps the arm hook for a huge Double Under hook Power bomb. E2 counters it into a huge DDT. He then goes for a move that resembles of the Crippler Crossface, and Shinn’s tries as much as possible to get to the ropes. The crowd are yelling at Shinn’s to tap, as Shinn’s is screaming out in pain, as his neck is driven nearly all the way back by e2, who too is trying to fight the pain in his right shoulder.
Shinn’s is making his way to the ropes quickly, and finally does. E2 is forced to release the hold, after he holds it in for another three seconds, and drops the hold. He picks up Shinn’s and rings his left arm-before dropping him face first with a Stroke. He then turns him over and goes to the nearest turnbuckle and climbs up-diving off with a huge moonsault-but Shinn’s manages to get the knee's up. E2 catches this and reverses it into the Sharpshooter!
Shinn’s starts to bridge up-using his leg strength to counter the Sharpshooter. He counters it with a Toe and Chin lock; a modified STF! After a few moments, he floats around and locks in a face lock under hook. E2 fights to his knees-only to take a knee to the face. Shinn’s locks in a Double Under hook, and gets to his feet. He drives e2 down head first with a massive Double Under hook pile driver. He then gets up and drags his arm across his throat-signaling for the end. He grabs e2 and locks in a sharpshooter of his own! The tides looked to have changed on e2 again, as he screams out in more pain! E2 then tries his best to get to the ropes, as he limps his arms together trying to get there; the strength of Shinn’s though has e2 unable to make a single move towards t the ropes.
E2 looks to be nearly out of this match, and he is starting to raise his arm. It could only be a matter of a time before he gives up, but he is only about another three inches away from the rope. He extends his arm, and jumps with all of the energy he has left, and grabs onto the ropes! E2 had grabbed onto the ropes with the rest of his power, and Shinn’s releases the hold, exhaling. Under his lips you can tell that he is questioning himself, asking “What am I going to do, to make this guy tap?” Shinn’s then goes back over to e2, and begins to bring him back to his feet.
E2 now has awoken, and brings the energy back to push Shinn’s away from him. Shinn’s is starting to look at e2 in shock, as he shakes both of his arms, signaling that he is ready for Shinn’s Theory. They begin locking up once more. Shinn’s locks in another side headlock-but e2 tries to shoot him off. Shinn’s blocks it and holds on-taking the former Internet Champ to a knee. He wrenches on the neck-before bringing e2 to his feet-and going behind him and taking him down at the legs-before floating over into a front face lock-and wrenching on the neck of the former champion. E2 fights up-and breaks the hold-only to take a dropkick to the face. The move sends e2 reeling into the corner-allowing Shinn’s to deliver a hard enziguri kick in the corner-only to lift him up onto the top rope. He starts climbing-until e2 pushes him off onto the mat. He then jumps off the second rope with a Matt Hardy leg drop as the crowd begin to get behind e2.
In the ring-e2 lifts him up and delivers a trio of hard Uppercuts to the head of Shinn’s-before shooting him into the ropes and catching him with a power slam. He then picks him up and drapes him front down over the top rope-and then goes for the Yakuza kick-only for Shinn’s to drop down and pull the rope down-racking e2 on the top rope. He climbs the top rope and delivers a missile dropkick to the face of The One Man Killing Machine, e2. He takes him off the ropes-and goes for a Spike DDT-but e2 counters it with an atomic drop-followed by a boot to the face. He lifts him up and throws him into the turnbuckle. He delivers a hard back elbow-then climbs up for the 10 count punch series. He poses for a moment-allowing Shinn’s to run him out of the corner and drop him with a spine buster. He rolls him up into a half Boston Crab, and e2 looks like he could give up at any moment…yet again. It is then that e2, kicks Shinn’s off of him, as he is sent out of the ring!
Shinn’s has become furious, as he looks to be fumbling something out of underneath the ring. E2 doesn’t become weary of it, but Shinn’s has grabbed what looks like a steel chair, and looks to take the risk of disqualifying himself, e2 is charging at Shinn’s though; BASEBALL SLIDE WITH THE CHAIR GOING INTO SHINNS THEORY’S FACE! Shinn’s Theory got hit so hard, that he had fallen back, flipping over barricade!
E2 chants have fulfilled the arena, and the fans are getting behind the man that they too think got screwed over in these men’s last bout at the Internet Championship. Looking at Shinn’s Theory, he looks to have gotten back to his feet, and some blood can be seen coming from the nose area; possibly he had broken his nose after the baseball slide hit he had just taken. Coming back over the barricade, getting the fans away from him, he looks to go back into the ring, and e2 is there stomping on his back. Shinn’s is trying his best to get up, and you can tell the wear that both of these men had taken, as he is limp from about the fifth stomp taken in by e2. E2 looks to get his breath back, as he circles the ring.
e2 sighs as he lifts up Shinn’s-and tries to shoot him into the ropes-only for Shinn’s to reverse it and throw him over the top rope with a belly to belly suplex. The fans boo as Shinn’s follows e2 to the floor-and rains down some boots for good measure. He lifts him up and drops him face first across the guard rail. He smirks and does it again-this time sending e2 reeling. Shinn’s smirks before lifting him onto his shoulder-and tries to throw him into the ring post yet again. E2 drops down and shoves Shinn’s into the post, which could of even made Shinn’s plastic surgery bill even more expensive, busting his face wide open now. As Shinn’s drops, his nose spurted with blood rushing like a faucet out of his nose, and the large cut over his forehead. Shinn’s is now back to his feet. E2 runs at him-but gets a back elbow-and then a ginger toss into the steel ring post by Shinn’s. He throws e2 back in the ring and grabs a pair of steel chairs-before tossing them into the ring. He poses for the crowd and slides back in-only to DDT e2 back onto the mat. He smirks before setting up one of the chairs. He grabs the other and plays to the crowd-as e2 gets up. Shinn’s turns around and gets a drop toe hold onto the open chair as the crowd goes insane. This, of course, would only have been a disqualification in e2’s favor, if he had used the chair.
In the ring again, e2 now has Shinn’s Theory back up, and looks to go for the end here, as he signals for Shinn’s to get up, with his arms held high; Shinn’s starts to get up, as e2 is facing his back, and has him in the full nelson! Shinn’s is trying to break the hold, but e2 has him locked in with all of his power. E2 is starting to swing Shinn’s, trying to set in more pain that he is inflicting onto Theory, as Theory’s face starts to bring blood, snot, and the most of it running out of his nose; the blood running clear out of his busted forehead. It is then that e2 looks to have a flinch of pain hit his arm, as he screams out in another blood curling scream, and Shinn’s feels the leverage loosen, and throws e2 over his shoulders!
The fans erupt as Shinn’s breaks the hold. Shinn’s sighs and lifts him up-but e2 blocks it and knees him in the stomach. After catching his breath-he puts e2’s head between his legs-and goes for a power bomb-but e2 counters with a low blow-and then lifts him up and drops him head first with a Judgment Slam!
e2 falls to the ground, and looks to have lost the most of his energy. Both men are down, and it looks like these two have had the most that they could take during tonight’s match. Shinn’s Theory shows life, and e2 starts to show some too. Shinn’s then goes over to e2, who stumbles near the exposed turnbuckle post. Shinn’s sighs and picks him up-and gingerly shoves him into the corner and delivers a knife edge chop. He moves him to the ropes-and delivers 2 more chops before trying to shoot him across the ring. E2 reverses it and goes for a clothesline-but Shinn’s ducks the move and goes for a Crucifix. Shinn’s bends over-but e2 flips him over with a Crucifix Pile driver as the crowd erupts! E2 though taking the legs of Shinn’s Theory….SHARPSHOOTER!
The fans erupt again, and e2 is has the sharpshooter locked in hard on Shinn’s Theory; his body, this time, looks to refuse any pain, as he has the hold locked in the dead center of the ring. Shinn’s looks to crawl forward, into the right end of the ropes. Shinn’s lifts up, and more and more blood starts pouring out, making it quite unbelievable that he has not passed out with the amount of blood that he has shed over the ring.
Shinns tries to desperately to reach the ropes, scratching and clawing at the mat. He lets out a scream and with his last drop of energy starts to pull E2 towards the mat. Shinns strength is overwhelming and E2 is soon forced closer to the ropes. Shinns is now within two inches of the ropes. He lifts his hand high up and drops it down. E2 tries to pull forward but is unable to, and Shinns manages to get the ropes. E2 is forced to release the hold, but as soon as he does a rejuvenated E2 takes hold of Shinns’s legs and pulls quickly into the middle of the ring. E2 turns Shinns into a bosten crab and bends as far back as possible, trying to break the back of Shinns, which is where E2 has been working at during the course of the match. Shinns, now totally worn out, passes out due to the pain. The ref lifts up his arm. He holds it up for a second and then lets it go. The ref does it once more with the same result. The ref raises it for the last time. Shinns’s arm is released but it stays in the air for what seems like an eternity before dropping down to the mat. The ref calls for the bell as E2 is announced the winner.
E2 – 4.76 promo points + 0.7 votes = 5.46
Shinn’s Theory – 4.8 promo points + 0.3 votes = 5.1
Ring Announcer: Ladies & Gentlemen your winner of the submission match, and the person who is now up one to nothing in the best of five series for the Internet Title… “The One Man Killing Machine” E2!
E2 doesn’t relinquish the hold, as he is unaware of all of his senses. The goes over to him and starts pushing and pulling him, trying to get him to relinquish the hold. E2 does, but falls flat on his face in exhaustion. The crowd is going nuts at this point. As the referee jumps out of the ring to get the Internet Title belt, E2 tries to gain his composure and manages to make it to his knees. He raises his hands in victory. The ref slides back into the ring with the belt in hand, which catches E2’s eye. As the ref passes the One Man Killing Machine, the belt is snatched away from him. E2 pushes the ref away as he tries to take it back. E2 stares into the belt, knowing that he is one step closer to his goal. He looks back at Shinns, who is still passed out. The victor looks over the champion and then at the title belt. He drops the belt next to Shinn and tries to make it to his feet. However, still obviously exhausted, E2 drops back down to one knee. Knowing that he can’t quite make it to the back, E2 crawls over to the corner and leans against the ropes. TNT goes off the air with E2 staring at Shinn’s Theory with a new found respect after the hellacious battle.
CREDIT: Aladdin, E2, Terrell Odom, Micko & Red Ninja[/size]
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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 21:03:44 GMT 1
Promo Ratings Stare’s Ratings[/u][/size] Firefly --- 1.5 (Well, the dialogue was good, but are you kidding me? Did you think this would get it done? You want to be a main eventer? Start acting like one) Aladdin --- 4.3 (Great promo, and interesting setting. The only thing that I really didn't like about it was the lack of focus on your's and Firefly's rematch. Coming from a stoyrline point of view, that should've been your main focus considering it's a rematch from the main event a couple of nights ago (efed time-wise). Regardless, good job, I liked the setting) Odom --- 4.4 (It felt more like I was reading a book instead of a wrestling promo/segment. It's the number one thing I hate, when someone writes a wrestling promo/segment that would never be seen on a wrestling show, or at least doenst give off a vibe. It's hard to rate a wrestling promo when you can't see it accuring in front of you. This was a great piece and a great read, but yeah. It was TOO LONG. I know you're not going to change that, but I lost interest a couple of times due to length, not lack of creativity (it had plenty of that). I can't spend 20 minutes reading a promo, no offense, I just can't stay interested in one thing for that long. Good job never-the-less) Amie --- 4.2 (good job. This was a nice solid peace. I'm glad that you're back, you're an excellent writer. I look forward to the day that you face an opponent whose character you actually know, as TO is still new.) Shinns --- 4.8 (I loved this. To be honest, I thought you had been lacking for a while. Maybe it was the "loss of interest" due to everything piling up, and you just needed to let that go. Either way, this is the Shinns I used to love from months back. The Wolverine encounter was priceless, it was a just a good character builder for you. Great job) E2 --- 4.7 (Excellent. This was a great way to start out your promos. It was a nice sum-up of the history of you and Shinns with a unique twist. I think we'll get all 5 matches out of this. Good job) Cactus’s Ratings[/u][/size] FireFly - 4.3 Short, sweet, and to the point. Aladdin - 4.7 Very good, good concept, flowed well and what seemed to be a bit of a shoot in the middle. T.O. - 4.0 Why is this on a different site? Rambles on quite a bit and did not really hold my attention at all as I found myself re-reading the same lines over and over again. Amie - 4.6 Very good, held my attention all the way through, it was like I was watching it all unfold. Shinn's Theory - 4.8 Brilliant, seems like you have the weight of the world on your shoulders but you are just keeping your head above the water. “Shane's kitten got your tongue” HA! E2 - 4.8 Intense as hell, we are only in February but with promo's like this all the way through, this best of 5 series will be awesome. Aladdin’s Ratings[/u][/size] Terrell Odom – 4.5 ( I know you’ll be disappointed with the scores you’ve gotten. But what you wrote was excellent. It just wasn’t right for this. As Stare said it wasn’t something you would see on a wrestling show. It was overly long. Spackle’s average promo is the longest one should be. I appreciate the effort you put in. You wrote an excellent main event match as well.) Amie – 4.5 (Yeah, I really liked this. It was kinda the opposite of Terrell’s because I could definitely see this in a wrestling show. My only criticism is that you didn’t use Terrell’s character well. It was unfair to him for you to humiliate him like that. If you use someone else in your promo, you have to make sure you write them so that they are totally like their character would be on the show. But overall it was a great promo, and I’m glad you’re back. ) Shinn’s Theory – 4.8 (Excellent. 3 appearances! Nice. I like how you’re adapting to be the sole owner of the company. Good job, as expected “!”©-Micko) E2 – 4.8 (I’m soooo glad you’re back. You’re such a good writer. It was unique, which I love. As Stare said, it was a good recap and you added some more as well, which helped it. The pictures are a nice touch, I really thought it helped with the effect. Excellent job.) VotesTerrell Odom - 5 Amie - 4 Shinn’s Theory - 2 E2 - 7 |
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Feb 13, 2006 21:31:14 GMT 1
Red Ninja: BEST Heel Turn EVER.
Nice virgin show, Al.
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Post by Aladdin on Feb 13, 2006 21:35:30 GMT 1
I have indeed now lost my show virginity.
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Post by brockandsable on Feb 13, 2006 21:41:18 GMT 1
The PositivesFirst of all, much respect due to all who participated, especially Terrell Odom. That was one hell of a main event you put together. I couldn't stop reading the match and I like how you had both Shinns and E2 utilize most of their move sets. This was truly a masterpiece. I hope you write all of the matches for the best of 5 series as well as the main event for Wrestlefever 3Amie - Good job, I knew you could do it. Your promos seem to possess a certain qulaity that all the judges are looking for. Aladdin - That show seemed to fit better than I thought it would. I think it's safe to say that the pressure is now on Stare to keep up with you.  Good job and I'm glad you've earned this position. Thank you again for the opportunity to be a part of p2pw history. Shinns - I have a new found respect for the character. This is going to be one nice best of five. The NegativesThere are no "negatives per say, but I'm not quite sure what to make of the situation with Chad and Tyler, but meh.... The heel Red Ninja may be a more believable World Champion, than the face, but that's just my big nosed opinion. Overall, bloody good show, mate. Bloody good show.
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Post by shinnstheory on Feb 13, 2006 21:47:54 GMT 1
Nice write up Aladdin. Good job to all involved in writing. Congrats to Aladdin, Amie and E2. E2, busting out a moonsault! Impressive for a 7 foot, 300+ pound power wrestler. Congrats my man. See ya in a few weeks for round duce! |
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Post by Amie on Feb 13, 2006 21:55:42 GMT 1
GREAT SHOW! Congrats to Aladdin and great writing by everyone!
And thanks to everyone for the comments! ;D
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Post by ChadClassic on Feb 13, 2006 23:02:45 GMT 1
E2 shouldn't have won. Shinns was robbed. And yes I did vote for E2.
Ninja as a heel is one helluva nice idea, good change for once. Interesting storyline for me and Tyler, but anyone and their baby mama could've predicted we'd be fueding.
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Post by _the j-man on Feb 14, 2006 0:44:00 GMT 1
Excellent show, the Main Event was great. Good job to T.O. who wrote a tremendous main event. I'm shocked Amie won the match, but the judges gave an excellent description as to why she won. Really I have to say that was a Major Upset, I expected Odom to take that match. Anyways, I have a Fanatic Title to win. Though I don't want it.  |
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Post by Terrell Odom on Feb 14, 2006 1:57:19 GMT 1
BRAVO JUDGES. Man, you guys need to go to X-NET, WR, judge for them! Maybe you will be able to get all the jobbers that only rp 2 fuckin lines to be on the X-Net Top 10, and all the good writers to not even be mentioned, because this is the worst judgement in a match that I have ever seen. Chad told me you guys are odd; never been out in the real world of e-feds, and hell DON PROVED THAT TO ME. He hasn't seen a layout before? Lmfao, you wondered why this was on another site, I'll tell you why: I recieved a layout like HUNDREDS of other e-fedders do by some layout makers. Too long? Ok, too long, atleast you saw quality in Sasha, Revisited and you saw the perfect pieces unfold in the other parts. Tell me some quality that my rp lacks? Now Amie's rp, where is the quality? All I see is being in an arena, and yapping about how she is going to win, THE END! Damn, how many times have I seen that? Obviously, this fed has many judges that vote for "Underdogs", and such. If Amie's rp beat me, she should be on damn WR or something. This was just a test though; got my match, and I saw how you guys work. So I'm done. I did my match for you, and I helped out this week, got your guys thanks, but hey lets screw Terrell Odom over, because we didn't feel like a WEEK AND A HALF was long enough for us to read his rp. I was thinking about leaving because of the variety of feds I am in, but after you guys try to humiliate me, I figured that I might as well say good bye. Oh and judges, Cactus, Stare, and Aladdin, look for these the next time you judge: Creativity Dialouge Prolouge Inner Thoughts and the big word : QUALITY! But hey, ban me, I'm out..embarrassing loss, you guys got what you wanted. Tips, need tips? I got a tip for ol' Cactus: Stick your head out in an efed environment pal, because obviously if you havent seen anybody use a layout for an rp, then you are new. So why are you judging my rps? Stare? Buddy, I don't even know if the reason you made me lose was because of how you got downed in the T-R-U Truth chat room or what, but hey, just to let you know that you played me very well "Oh wow, these rps are nice...blah blah blah." But Cactus, next time you judge me, read the rp all the way through. I did not ramble on about the same thing over and over. Hey but thanks, why should I even rp, if I cannot win in p2p? It seems like you guys got the best of Terrell Odom. Quality, fuck quality..FAVORITES IS WHO WE PLAY! Think about that motto p2p, it fits the fed very well. PEACE! ( And if you didn't kno by now, I QUIT! Reasons why are too many feds, and of course, you guys need some help in judgement. First time in 7 years something THIS BAD has happened, so bravo P2P. You wanted me gone, ya got me gone. I just better not come back, seeing you guys use my character in any way.) |
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Post by Scream on Feb 14, 2006 2:17:51 GMT 1
You know dude I gave you the benefit of the doubt but I'm sorry, YOU'RE A DICKHEAD. Boo Hoo you lost a fucking match. You know what there were plenty of times that I lost a match and didn't agree with the judges but I shut my mouth and carried on. You are a tremendous writer and it is a shame that you're leaving because you lost a match. You are great at dishing criticism but you can't take it. All the judges did was tell you that your promo was too long. I understand that your mad you lost due to the time and effort you put into that promo but I never pegged you to be the whining, bitching type. I'm happy you're leaving b/c I'm sick of listening to your shit.
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Post by ChadClassic on Feb 14, 2006 2:25:39 GMT 1
Terrell man, I think you take this shit wayyyy too seriously.
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Post by Terrell Odom on Feb 14, 2006 2:28:14 GMT 1
Nah, I am just stating a fact.
p2p thinks they are all star judges, so I state back that wow; I would never of thought Amie would beat me, but you guys showed up on me.
And to Soundscream, I QUIT BECAUSE OF TOO MANY feds. The loss adds on to that, but I dont really see myself winning anymore if I lost this match. But hey, you wanna be a bitch, then fine, be a bitch.
Oh yeah, and next time that you read an rp, Chris Griffin will tell you how good they are...he had beef with me until eventually he READ the rp, unlike most of you did. But hey, fine, too long of an rp is what made me lost...then I can see you people depend on dialouge, and no quality to win a match.
Peace, I'm out. End of story.
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Post by shinnstheory on Feb 14, 2006 2:34:25 GMT 1
Hey Odom, you want your fucking wish douchebag? You got it. The P2P and P2PW can sit back, relax, and say goodbye to the biggest fucking ego in e-fed history. Take a final bow, and another pat on the back... AND, we are ALL going to get a seriously good laugh when I post each and every one of your PMs regarding how great your are in a thread titled "Odom Loves Himself"....that will be featured in the Discussion Forum.
Anywho, nighty night dudette. Each and every one of us has you "Quality" hangin'... Bitchtits.
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Post by ChadClassic on Feb 14, 2006 2:35:09 GMT 1
No one said that man. You just assumed that because you didn't win, and the votes were very close, P2PW is automatically the worst fed ever and no one likes you. Its not "Out to get Terrell Odom", and if it is you make you seem that way with your constant bitching about how things get done and how you believe everyone is out to get you.
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Post by Stare on Feb 14, 2006 2:38:59 GMT 1
First off, Fuck you, you self-centered, egotistical, holier than thou motherfucker . . . I give myself a warning.
Second of all, I sent the promo ratings to Aladdin WAY before last night's chat. And, I saw no ownage of myself or anything. I saw many hilarious, funny, comedic jokes by yourself. It takes a really witty guy to reinvent _the j-man's name, and call him such classic as _the j-woman, _the j-whore, _the j-slut . . . you are one funny guy! No really! I'm serious! No really!
You can complain all you want. Amie wrote a very good promo. It wasn't outstanidng, it wasn't phenomenal, it was very good. You wrote a very good promo. It was a bit long, and being that long, it made it get tiresome trying to get through it. Sure, I thought it edged out Amie, but hey, Cactus and Aladdin didnt share my opinion. But, guess what? That's why more than one person rates promos, cause everyone looks for and likes different things.
I hope nobody here gets drug into the type of efed's you live for. I'd hate to have to rate 20 page promo's for 3 or 4 hours, that would really blow. And, I can tell by the way you're thread spoke of the promos here, and from our IM chat's, that those feds you speak of really pressure you to be better and better and better, and overall, make it less and less fun.
We constructively criticize what people write. I know you don't know how to do that, but here it is. Sometimes, we might ask for more length, but that's if there's jsut a single paragraph. Most of the time, we offer ways to make what they wrote better, so that they can apply it next time. WE dont say "oooh . . . looks like you could use 19 more pages."
Did you read that last word? It's QUALITY, not quantity. I dont care if Amie's promo was 1/8 the size of yours, the QUALITY was better.
Get over it, you lost! You were rated fairly, judged fairly, and you lost fairly. People lose fairly in this fed all the time.
I think the FUNNIEST THING about your post would have to be the fact that you created a whole thread critiquing people, and when people got angry about it, you bitched and moaned about the fact that they were doing so.
And look at you know? You're a hypocrite. We gave our thoughts on your promo, and you bitched and moaned.
So, don't let the door hit you on the ass on the way out. Seeing as your attitude is the way it is, I feel very sorry for any fed that ever gives you a loss, cause they'll probably have to endure this.
Say goodbye everyone, the P2PW just isn't good enough to meet Terrell's standards. I wish our fed was better, but hey, what can you do? I guess we'll just have to go on, day by day, and hope that one day, we can all write 20 page promos and create threads to give people constructive criticism . . . by placing ourselves at the top of that list.
OH! Great show Aladdin. You're an awesome writer, and this was an awesome read. Terrell, you wrote one HELL of a main event. One of the best I've ever read. E2, I liked your show, good stuff. Red Ninja going heel was inevitable. It gave him the much needed push he wanted. Overall, this was top-notch stuff.
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Post by shinnstheory on Feb 14, 2006 2:47:36 GMT 1
^ QUALITY
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Post by KillerSundin (Formerly HBK) on Feb 14, 2006 3:03:12 GMT 1
Odom. I liked you but you took this way to seriously. I just hope you can see that this isn't life or death. Everyone has missed shows due to personal problems because real life>internet life.
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Post by Scream on Feb 14, 2006 3:13:06 GMT 1
Nah, I am just stating a fact. p2p thinks they are all star judges, so I state back that wow; I would never of thought Amie would beat me, but you guys showed up on me. And to Soundscream, I QUIT BECAUSE OF TOO MANY feds. The loss adds on to that, but I dont really see myself winning anymore if I lost this match. But hey, you wanna be a bitch, then fine, be a bitch. Oh yeah, and next time that you read an rp, Chris Griffin will tell you how good they are...he had beef with me until eventually he READ the rp, unlike most of you did. But hey, fine, too long of an rp is what made me lost...then I can see you people depend on dialouge, and no quality to win a match. Peace, I'm out. End of story. ^ excuse me? Did you call me the bitch? Dude I gave you props from the get go. Even when you were "bitching" about being "attacked" I gave you props. You quit b/c of to many e-feds? No you quit cause you lost. Face it. If you won you would have still been here. And you would be bitching that you deserve a title shot b/c of the titles you won in ABC, XYZ, SOS or whatever other feds you are in. Like Stare said that match you wrote was phenomonal. Too bad your attitude doesn't go along with your writing skills. See ya dude. PS- T.O. lost to a girl. HAHAHAHHAHHAHA |
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Post by Stare on Feb 14, 2006 3:19:01 GMT 1
^HA! That's our world Champ ;D
Anyways, can people please give feedback or thoughts & opinions on the show? I understand the reason for everyone wanting to voice their opinion, so I'm not going to ask that you stop doing so, as I think it's uplifting to see how many people are standing up against what Terrell has said . . . considering he thinks this place is beneath him.
The reason I ask for you to also comment on the show is to avoid hearing "stay on topic", and because, I'm sure Aladdin woudl like this to stay as TNT Discussion based.
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Post by Spackle on Feb 14, 2006 3:54:29 GMT 1
Huh. That was gay.
Cool show Al, and the even though he's acting like a great big walking vagina, the match Odom wrote was cool.
Oh, and I didn't read his promo because it was too long. Nothing against him, but goddamn.
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Good job and I'm glad you've earned this position. Thank you again for the opportunity to be a part of p2pw history.
