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Post by Stare on Nov 3, 2005 17:29:51 GMT 1
This area can be used to continue off of your storylines/promos in the Preview Thread.
Feel free to use promo's as means of buidling your character, adding some characteristics to him/her, and letting people know what's on your mind about what's happening with your character (in your character's words of course)
Have fun!
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Post by Cactus on Nov 3, 2005 17:37:16 GMT 1
See this is the difference between blitz and TNT, we start off with a proper bang, 2 titles and both champs in matches, not a single champ in action on TNT.
Best of all it was Shinns who made both cards and made ours better as he knows it the better brand
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Post by The Great JT on Nov 3, 2005 18:57:25 GMT 1
Promo up. Trying to start fued. Being pissed for the sake of pissed. Impossible to talk normal.
(Translation: My promo is up. Thoughts?)
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Post by Cactus on Nov 3, 2005 21:21:02 GMT 1
Your rating will be at the end of the full write up as it always is
As I dont "rate" promo's I will share a couple of pointers, dont post the first thing that comes to mind. Take a day or two to think about it and jot some idea's down and see what meshes, if it was up to me I would rate that a 3.5, its a little rushed with a few typo's as well, I would write it up in word first and spell check it before posting.
Also think about who you are facing, why you dont like them, use stuff from past shows, go back read if need be you have on average 5 days to get a promo up so take your time on it and let it flow, rather than it all coming out in a big rush.
This is not a rant at you, you asked for feedback so I am giving it to you.
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 3, 2005 22:08:39 GMT 1
You'll get my full review when the time comes....But, Cactus did say something a lot of us have been saying. You seem to want to rush and get your promo up ASAP. Take your time.
For example... Let's say you wrote the promo above and you want to stick with it. How about not posting the promo right off that bat. Write it. Sleep on it. Wake up the next day and reread it. Add another paragraph or two in. Add some more description. Just a thought...
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Post by Simz on Nov 3, 2005 22:11:24 GMT 1
Who are the promo raters now?
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Post by shinnstheory on Nov 3, 2005 22:15:48 GMT 1
Same as always.
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Post by Cactus on Nov 3, 2005 23:12:23 GMT 1
Althou there are 2 shows, Stare, Rocky and Shinns are the voters, most of the writing will be done by Stare and Shinns with the writing team helping with matches etc.
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Post by soulreaper on Nov 3, 2005 23:44:41 GMT 1
Don't listen to them JT, My promos 9 times out of 10 are like "OH SHIT ITS THE LAST DAY" and then the magic happens. Everybody gets better... Aladdin and Chilly Willy come to mind.. Theres a lot more depth with time and character building.
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Post by Cactus on Nov 3, 2005 23:55:56 GMT 1
In fairness though Reaper you are an "old hat" when it comes to promoing ( no dissrespect ) you have been in e-feds for a couple of years now so the "magic" can happen quite easy for you, JT is still new to it ( here anyways ) so taking a little time can only be benifical for him.
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Post by soulreaper on Nov 3, 2005 23:57:50 GMT 1
yeah, but I've always did my promos that way.
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Post by Cactus on Nov 3, 2005 23:59:47 GMT 1
But, no dissrespect to JT, but is your average 3.5 for promoing ? ?
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Post by The Great JT on Nov 5, 2005 17:01:46 GMT 1
Ok, forget I mentioned it.
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Post by Cactus on Nov 8, 2005 13:05:25 GMT 1
No its good to get feedback from your peers, believe it or not we are trying to help you.
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Post by Aladdin on Nov 9, 2005 0:09:58 GMT 1
When i first looked at ^^that post, i thought it said "It's good to get feedback from your penis"
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Post by Cactus on Nov 9, 2005 12:31:53 GMT 1
oooohhh Reaper did not promo  |
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Post by KillerSundin (Formerly HBK) on Nov 9, 2005 12:35:47 GMT 1
Yes I know. It would've been a huge honour for me. But he had some things going on so I can't blame him at all.
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Post by stocko on Nov 9, 2005 13:57:45 GMT 1
^translation
i am the new champ, i am the new champ ;D
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Post by Scream on Nov 9, 2005 17:57:16 GMT 1
Damn, we could be looking at the shortest title reign of all. Can David beat Goliath???
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Post by Cactus on Nov 9, 2005 20:09:14 GMT 1
yeah course he can you beat me did'nt you |
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Post by Scream on Nov 9, 2005 20:55:06 GMT 1
Ha, that's right I did beat you.  |
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Post by Cactus on Nov 10, 2005 15:33:17 GMT 1
But then I beat you |
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Post by Scream on Nov 10, 2005 18:26:29 GMT 1
Actually- E-2 covered me so no you didn't. Until you can pin me I OWN YOU!
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Post by Cactus on Nov 10, 2005 18:29:46 GMT 1
We will see at genisis dood
(ooc its good to see you back man, you were missed)
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