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Post by Stare on Dec 15, 2005 4:31:08 GMT 1
(written by: SoundScream) [/b][/center] "Get back" plays as fireworks spray from the top of the MCI center in Washington D.C. SoundScream steps from under the Zeroin with the World Title draped over his shoulder. The crowd goes crazy as the champ walks his way to the ring. He climbs into the ring and holds his championship high as the crowd begins to chant his name.SoundScream Washington. Are you ready to scream? The crowd goes nutsSoundScream The first stop on the Scream World Tour starts tonight in the nation's capital. And we're going to party like Washington D.C. can party. Again the crowd eruptsSoundScream Now that I got that out of the way I want to get a few things off my chest. Last week I walked into the Blitz Breakdown match and went through 10 of Blitz's best to become World Champion. But alas there are few out there you can't face the fact that I won and they lost. They say I won by luck. Crowd boos as SoundScream shrugs his shoulders.SoundScream Well if luck means tossing 10 monkeys over these ropes then you can call me the luckiest person in Washington D.C. Crowd again eruptsSoundScream You see I told you from the beginning that I would walk out of that match as World Champ. Every single one of you had the opportunity to eliminate me from that match but you failed to do so. And I took the opportunity when you all failed. Look at me now dammit. I did what I had to do and now I stand here the World Champ. But now I have another road block ahead of me. Psssst. Cactus. Can you hear me? That's right. Looks like all you bitches who want to be number one contender can wait cause Cactus' number has been chosen. Cactus, first I took your International title, then I took your chance at the World Championship, next I take your heart. You wanted this, you got it. And for all the rest in the back....keep bitching about last week. Keep crying that it wasn't fair cause the fact of the matter is I'd toss each one of you fruit roll ups over those ropes again. Good luck tonight gentlemen. I'll be sure to stay tuned. With that SoundScream drapes his title over his shoulder and exits the ring----------------------------------------------------- We see Vegeta backstage. He is walking through a backstage lobby talking on his cell phoneVegeta: So, wait, where are you again? Vegeta listens onVegeta: No, were in Washington D.C., not Chicago! Who told you to go to Chicago? Vegeta listens onVegeta: No, my notice said Washington D.C. I mean, you're the only one not here, J.T.! This is two weeks in a row you've missed shows! I mean, last week, you didnt get in the buidling on time and you were locked out, and now you go to the wrong arena!? Vegeta listens onVegeta: Well, I don't understand why Barry would send you to the wrong arena, it makes no sense. Look, I gotta go, but I'll talk to you later! He hangs up as he passes by Chilly Willy signing autographs. Chilly Willy notices Vegeta and quickly exits himself from the crowd and approaches Vegeta. Vegeta gives a nod to Chilly as they walk together.Chilly Willy: Whew! Man! I never knew being a champion would be so exhausting! Was it like that for you? Vegeta looks up at Chilly Willy with a blank look, and then brushes away the look with a smirkVegeta: Ahh man! Are you kidding? When me and Aladdin were champs, we had sold out autograph signings, and anywhere we showed up to do a press event, it was packed! Ha! Like, this one time, me and Aladdin had just gotten off a plane, and there were loads of people. Me and Aladdin got separated, and couldn't even find each other cause it was sooo packed with people who wanted to see us! Chilly Willy: Woah! Really!? Vegeta is looking up with a smile, and then turns and gives Chilly Willy a sarcastic lookVegeta: No, not really. You see, Willy, being a champion was never about the publicity to me, it was about representing the company, and doing your best to present a respectful atmosphere. Now, Aladdin, that was a different story, he was just like you. He bought into the crowd rave, and loved it. When did this sport become all about what the media thinks of you, maybe you need to think about what YOU think of you. Chilly Willy stops as Vegeta stops with him. Chilly scratches his chin and thinks for a minuteChilly Willy: Well, I happen to think I can manage the best of both worlds. I got my fans on one side, and I think I do give this belt a respectful presence. Vegeta: Heh . . . yeah, Aladdin said things like that too. Vegeta begins to walk offChilly Willy: You know, it sounds to me like you were a little jealous of him. Vegeta stops as the camera focuses on him as he bites his bottom lip. He looks up, as if he's on the verge of turning around. He shakes his head and walks on----------------------------------------------------- JUST CLOSE YOUR EYES Blasts over the P.A. system, we hear the crowd boo loudly as we watch Ecos, the Chosen One walk out by himself. He climbs up the Apron and steps into the ring.
ROCK STAR hits the P.A. system and the fans go crazy. He runs down the aisle and slides into the ring as he gets face to face with Ecos.SINGLES MATCH SoL vs. Ecos (Written By: _the j-man) [/color][/center] DING DING DING SoL quickly gets a hold as Ecos. He puts him into and a side headlock. Ecos whips SoL into the ropes, SoL ducks Ecos' clothesline comes back with a clothesline of his own. SoL pulls Ecos up by his hair and nails a release belly to belly suplex! SoL stands up as he walks over to Ecos as he grabs him by the hair and throws him over the top rope! SoL goes to the outside as he picks up Ecos and throws him face first into the steel post! Ecos falls to the ground as he tries pulling himself up on the guard rail he looks around as blood trickles down his face. The crowd screams as they cheer on SoL! We watch SoL hold onto Ecos then irish whips him into the steel steps! “BOOM!” the crowd explodes as Ecos looks hurt. SoL picks up Ecos and goes for a suplex, but we see Ecos wiggle out of it, he nails a few forearms into the temple of SoL, he whips him into the ropes then nails a Super Kick on Ecos! The crowd boos as Ecos tries for a quick cover but only gets a 2 count. Ecos gets up quickly and bounces off the ropes and dropkicks the back of SoL's head! Ecos then climbs to the top rope as he waits for SoL to get up as he does Ecos jumps from the top rope and nails a Flying Clothesline! Ecos whips SoL back into the ropes but would miss his clothesline and SoL would nail him with his own! SoL places an armbar onto Ecos. He clinches it in as Ecos moves towards the ropes and gets his foot on the rope. The referee breaks the hold up as Ecos gets back up he stares at SoL. He goes for another right handed punch but it’s blocked then SoL nails a combination of punches on Ecos. Ecos looks shocked as he claps his hands together, wondering why the count was “slow”. SoL whips Ecos into the ropes he goes for a clothesline but he ducks, SoL comes back with a flying forearm but Ecos ducks! Ecos points to his head, he signals the match is over. He puts SoL into a Power Bomb position. He lifts up SoL but SoL counters the Power Bomb into Front Face Buster. Ecos holds his mouth as he gets up slowly. SoL waits for him looking at him to get closer to Ecos and nails The Final SoL-Lution! SoL makes the cover on Ecos, 1... 2... 3... DING DING DING Ecos --- 4.43 promo + .1 voting = 4.53 SoL --- 4.53 promo + 1.1 voting = 5.63WINNER: SoLSoL stands up victorious over "The Chosen One" as he looks down, shaking his head. He holds his hand up as people cheer him on. He kicks Ecos one more time for measure and then walks out as the fans continue cheering------------------------------------------------ Mary Lindsay is seen backstage with some medical staff as everyone is surrounding Soundscream. He is laying on the floor, and is barely conscious as he is busted open and holding his head. Mary walks over and picks up a barbed wire bat and looks at it. Her face gets angry as she turns around and is face to face with Cactus. She looks on at him as he slowly cracks a smile and begins laughingCactus: Tell you what, when Soundscream comes too, why don't you ask him who he wants to dance with come Genesis, eh? Mary Lindsay: Let me explain something to you . . . Mary looks on as Soul Reaper walks up from behind. He looks at Cactus as Cactus turns around and looks at themSoul Reaper: If thats' the way a title shot is earned around here, then I guess all I have to do is place each of my hands on both sides of your head, and proceed to break your neck! I guess that would make me the #1 contender? Cactus turns around and faced Soul Reaper as both men glare at one anotherCactus: Do you really want to become my next victim? Soul Reaper looks at Cactus and slowly begins laughingSoul Reaper: Do you want to become The Weapon's paralyzed friend? Mary quickly steps inMary Lindsay: Alright, let's get something straight! Cactus, first of all, attacking someone in, what I would assume, is from behind with a bat isn't going to be rewarded. Soul Reaper, threats don't work either. So, let me spell it out. You two and _the j-man are a team tonight, and if you three really want to impress me, you better stop this shit and save your impact for the ring. Let's see how bad you want to get a title shot tonight, who knows, I might just be basing my decision on which one of you, if any, get the pin tonight and the win for your team. But, there's the keyword for tonight, "team", so I suggest you both learn to deal with each other, because if you can't co-exist tonight, I have a feeling that none of you will win a chance at the title! Mary Lindsay walks back to Soundscream and the EMT's as Cactus and Soul Reaper both glare at each other. They both walk off in separate directions as we fade out-------------------------------------------------- We see SteveTKO walking out of Barry Bryant's office furious. He rounds the corner as Miss Aleah pushes herself off of the wall and follows him. They continue walking for a moment as she finally speaksMiss Aleah: So, what'd they say? Steve TKO: I'm going to be fined for what I did to the referee last week. It's bullshit, I can't help it that he was standing in the wrong place at the wrong time. They round a corner as Miss Aleah continuesMiss Aleah: Well, what do you do from here? Steve TKO: Well, to be honest, I come back and I've got 2 losses to my record now. I was injured at WrestleFever, and that cost me the match there. I finally get cleared from my doctor, and I step into the ring, accidentally hit a ref, and now I've got that loss to my record and a fine. Miss Aleah: Hmm, I thought hitting rock bottom would've made a louder noise. Steve has a slight laugh come out as he gets to his locker room doorSteve TKO: You know what I don't understand? This place use to be a lot more friendly. I mean, I used to always look ahead and concentrate on where I was heading. But now, I'm too busy watching my back to get anywhere. There are very few friends, and everyone's into the politics of who's better than who. It's a bit sickening, in all honesty. I just want to have a wrestling match, and something will probably screw me over again, next time that happens. Oh well. Steve opens his locker room door and walks in as Aleah looks on and finally walks in as we cut
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Post by Stare on Dec 15, 2005 4:32:47 GMT 1
Pull Harder On The Strings plays as Fizz steps under the Zeroin. She gives a couple quick jabs and a roundhouse kick before walking down the rampway. The fans cheer the newcomer as she slides in the ring. "One Step Closer" interrupts her as Vegeta walks down the ramp with a purpose. There is a mixed reaction for Vegeta who jaws with some of the fans in the front. Vegeta slides in the ring and asks for a mic.Vegeta For those who have been paying attention to Blitzline you might have heard that I'm a little hot under the collar. You're damn right I am. Since the Blood Pack management has decided to push the likes of NIN and Spackle. But what about me? Tonight I should be facing the likes of Cactus or Reaper but instead I get the Gizz? With that Fizz attacks Vegeta as the match is underwaySingles Match Vegeta vs Fizz (Written By: Soundscream) [/color][/center] Fizz delivers a series of quick jabs to the jaw of Vegeta. Vegeta stumbles back into the corner and rubs his jaw. Without hesitation Fizz delivers a swift quick to the head of Vegeta. She then mounts him in the corner and begins to land stiff punches to his head. The crowd starts to count. 1...2..3..4..5..6..7..8 On the eighth count Vegeta carries Fizz to the center of the ring and delivers a knee to the groin. Fizz looks at her groin and then shakes her finger at Vegeta and slaps both of her hands on the side of his head. Vegeta falls to a knee as Fizz delivers a standing drop kick to his face. Vegeta flops to the mat and Fizz goes for a quick cover. Vegeta kicks out. As Vegeta stirs, Fizz lifts her hands up to the crowd. The crowd cheers as Fizz points to a few fans. As she turns around Vegeta springs to his feet and delivers a powerful clothesline to Fizz. She holds her neck as the ref checks on her. She nods and the ref signals to continue. Vegeta then takes advantage of Fizz's neck. He lifts her up and again delivers a powerful clothesline followed by a quick elbow. Fizz covers her neck as she kicks her leg in pain. Vegeta grabs her leg and pulls her to the center of the ring. He goes to put her in a figure four but she kicks out. Fizz gets to her feet as Vegeta charges her. He attempts another clothesline but Fizz ducks and as Vegeta passes she grabs the back of his head and delivers a neck breaker. As Vegeta lie on the mat Fizz quickly climbs the turnbuckle. As she is about to leap off the turnbuckle Vegeta leaps to his feet. Fizz dives towards him and Vegeta catches her with a Tiger Press. The crowd goes crazy as Fizz lie motionless on the mat. Vegeta taps his head as he looks down on Fizz. He picks her up and delivers another Tiger Press in the middle of the ring. Fizz immediatley grasps her neck. The ref goes to check as Vegeta grabs her legs and puts her in the Tiger Shooter. Without hesitation Fizz taps the mat. Vegeta lets go and raises his hands in victory. Vegeta --- 3.57 promo + 1.1 voting = 4.67 Fizz --- 3.17 promo + .2 voting = 3.37WINNER: "The Tiger" Vegeta[/color] The Fizz slams the mat, frustrated as Vegeta leaves the ring and proceeds to the back--------------------------------------------- We go backstage as we see a limo pull up. The fans speculate on who it is as the door open. There is a brief moment before the individual's feet hit the ground. Out steps Rocky as the audience quickly boos. Rocky looks around with a look of disgust as he makes his way into the arena. "Hysteria" plays as we go out to ringside as the fans quickly boo. Zeroin stays on as Rocky continues to make his way to the ring. He throws a black curtain out of the way on the screen and then walks out as the fans quickly boo. Rocky looks around with an annoyed look as he walks towards the ringside. He walks up the steps and gets in the ring and looks around. His music cuts as he is given a microphone. He surveys the crowd as he removes his glasses. He brings the mic to his mouth as the fans die downRocky: So, I get a call from The P2PW Board, and they tell me that we're having some problems on Blitz! Now, I've kept a close eye on things, and I know all about the World Title controversy, but I thought Stare & Barry Bryant could handle it. But, apparently, they could not. Now, I'm not out here to critique how Stare is doing his job, everyone knows I think he's doing a shitty job! The fans slightly cheer the comment as Rocky pausesRocky: I'm out here to let everyone know how we are going to resolve this situation. You see, next week, Stare, myself, Shinn's Theory, and Mary Lindsay will all be sitting down with the 3 men that claim they deserve a title shot, Soul Reaper, _the j-man, and Cactus. Each of these men will tell us why they think they should get a shot at the championship, and we will give the final say by the end of the night. The fans boo as Rocky continuesRocky: I know, I am absolutely disgusted that I have to be taken away from my busy schedule on the "A Show" because the people in charge here can't handle things themself! So, next week, we're going to settle this shit, and hopefully it'll be the last time you have to see me in a Blitz! ring! "Hysteria" hits as Rocky exits the ring. He steps outside and puts his glasses on as his music cuts. He stops for a moment, and takes a moment, and then ignores what has happened as he continues to walk back up the ramp. He gets halfway up as a huge explosion goes off at the top of the ramp. Rocky takes a step back from the fireworks as there is a moment of silence. Rocky looks around as "Jesus Walks" hits. The fans immediately jump to their feet as Bishop Pastor Deacon Dollar Bill walks out. The audience jumps to their feet to see him return as he holds his arms up. Rocky looks on as Bishop approaches him and walks by him. Rocky looks back in confusion as Bishop heads to the ring. He walks up the steps and steps through the ropes and struts to the middle of the ring. He stands in the center of the ring for a moment as he slowly bends down to pick the mic that Rocky dropped up. A "Bishop" chant goes up as he smilesBishop: Ladies and Gentlemen . . . CHHHHHHUURRRCCCCHHHHH is once again in session! The audience cheers loudly as Bishop looks on with a smileBishop: I've been sitting at home for almost a month now, and I've had my eyes glued to the tube every Thursday Night & Tuesday Night to watch the P2PW programming of both shows. And, I have to say, Rocky, Blitz! was an EAASSSSYYYY decision! Rocky looks on as the audience erupts in cheers with a "Blitz!" chant. He shakes his head as he turns and walks outBishop: And the reason I chose Blitz was simple . . . Bishop pauses for a moment as the audience quietensBishop: AND IT'S BECAUSE PUTTING A SHOW THIS BAD ON TELEVISION SHOULD BE CONSIDERED A SIN!!!! The audience quickly begins to boo as Bishop looks on with intensityBishop: And being a pastor, a bishop, and a deacon, I felt a moral and spiritual obligation to come here and give this show a little class! So, as I said . . . Church is back in session! Amen, bitches!!! Bishop drops the mic as the fans quickly boo as "Jesus Walks" hits. Rocky walks up the ramp and exits as Bishop isn't too far behind, as he continues to badger the crowd--------------------------------------------------------- Kacey Garcia is standing backstage, alongside Trent Acid. She begins to speakKacey Garcia: I'm standing here with Trent Acid. Now, Trent, you asked for the interview time, so I assume you have something that you want to say? Trent grabs the mic from Kacey as she looks on. He turns towards the camera and slowly raises the mic to his mouthTrent Acid: That's what I don't understand. Kacey says that I have "something" that I want to talk about? Why in the Hell are people acting like they have no idea what's been getting under my skin? Is it a touchy subject cause it involves everyone's boss? Well, here you go, Kacey, I'll break the silence barrier! Stare! Stare! Stare! Stare! Stare! That is the "something" that I want to talk about! Trent looks down at Kacey as he turns back to the cameraTrent Acid: You see, for weeks now, it seems that he's wanted to try and send me a message. I mean, on the debut Blitz!, he interrupted a match I had with Vegeta, and proceeded to stick his nose in my business, and gave me a Staredown! Well, Stare, the message was heard loud and clear! But, it seems like you really wanted to drive the point across, so last week, you interfered in MY match and you eliminated me from the Blitz! Breakdown match, costing me the World Title that I would be holding right now if it hadn't been for him! Trent is becoming very outraged as Kacey seems to be a bit on edge standing with himTretn Acid: So, Stare, let me take the time to introduce myself, I am Trent Acid! I am the monster of the P2PW! And if you want a fight, you don't have to do a bunch of sneak attacks to get it, all you gotta do is ask! Kacey quickly slides the mic to herKacey Garcia: So, wait, Trent, are you challenging Stare to a match? Trent Acid laughs as he answersTrent Acid: No, Kacey, I'm not challenging him to a match. You see, Stare always talks about how he can "see it in our eyes" Well, all I see in Stare's eyes is fear. He can't get over me defeating him when he first returned. People are still talking about it. Stare fears Trent Acid, so, am I challenging Stare to a match? No. I'm just challenging him. I'm challenging him to publicly, flat out say that he is challenging me to a match, cause I want people to see how scared he is, and how much he fears me and my Acid Bomb! Cause, Kacey, I'll be REEEAALLLL surprised is he does it. Trent laughs as he walks off
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Post by Stare on Dec 15, 2005 4:33:27 GMT 1
We go ringside as an International Title logo is shown on the screen as "The Nameless" hits. The fans boo loudly as Starcrunch comes out. Pink fireworks explode over head as she makes her way to the ring. She poses for the crowd as they boo her on. She rolls her eyes as her music cuts. Their is some silence until a loud bang goes off and "Dead Horse" hits. The fans jump to their feet as The Canadian Icon walks out. He pans the arena, looking at everyone there as he holds the belt up. They cheer as he makes his way to the ring. He gets in and hands his belt to the ref and stretches in the corner. His music cuts as the bell rings. Starcrunch approaches Chilly as Chilly shoots a hand up, asking her to wait. He walks to the other corner and grabs a microphoneChilly Willy: Look, I've been thinking about this, and you know what? Whatever problems we have, surely we can work it out. You know, maybe I don't go by the moniker anymore, but I am still a "ladies man" So, Star, I know we had our problems. I mean, I know I could be a bit dominant, and I apologize, and you . . .well, you could be a bit of a bitch, not to mention a slut, a whore, and I'm sure you had some form of sexually transmitted disease . . . anyways, I think we need to put that behind us, what do you say? INTERNATIONAL TITLE MATCH Chilly Willy vs. Starcrunch (Written By: Cactus) [/b][/color][/center] The Canadian Icon walks over to Star and offer her his hand, she goes to shake it but fakes and begins to nail Chilly with forearms to the face. She backs him up to the corner and goes for an irish whip but Chilly shows his strength and refuses to budge out of the corner. She tries again this time Chilly drags her back in with force and takes her down with a short arm clothesline. Star goes down hard and Chilly goes for the quick win by pinning her but he has both legs on the middle turnbuckle, the ref refuses to count and Chilly gets off her. Star gets to her feet looking at the Canadian icon, when he makes no move towards her she gets up and shakes the cobwebs loose. They go nose to nose and to prove she is not a pushover Star holds her hands up for a test of strength. Chilly obliges but as soon as they lock one hand Star slips under with an armbar. Quick to counter Chilly reverses the hold and drops Star with a neck breaker. Again he goes for a cover but before the ref is down Star pushes him off and gets to her feet. The crowd seem to be torn on whom to cheer for so it is quiet in the arena. They lock up again this time Chilly irish whips Star and drops to his face for the return, but he telegraphs the move and Star springboards of the middle rope and lands a moonsault on the downed Chilly. The crowd erupt as Star lands and goes for the cover, she gets a one count before Chilly pushes here straight up in the air. She rolls through and comes up on her feet at the same time Chilly does and the fans applaud for both superstars. They lock up again this time Star manages to catch Chilly unawares and whips him into the ropes, as Chilly comes back he goes for another clothesline but Star bridges back and Chilly misses here. He his the opposite ropes and when he comes back she kicks out of the bridge into a handstand and turns it into a head scissor take down. Chilly rolls out and slides under the bottom rope to catch his breath but Star follows it up with a twisting plancha over the top rope. The crowd goes wild at what they just saw and a small StarCrunch chant breaks out. Star gets to her feet first and helps Chilly up. She drives Chilly back first into the ring apron and lets him crumble to the floor. She rolls under the bottom rope then out again to break the count knowing that she can’t win the title via a count out. As she hits the floor she is greeted by a hard shot to the gut Chilly he maneuvers Chilly to the steps, double underhooks her and plants her face first into the steel steps with an impaler. The begin to boo the former ladies man, but that stops as we get a look at Crunch’s face, she had a large gash across her forehead and blood flows freely from it, rather than being rattled by it, it seems to have made her angry and she lands a huge chick kick to the face of Chilly. Both superstars go down as the ref starts his count. He reaches seven before Chilly gets to his feet and rolls under the bottom rope breaking the count. Star follows close behind. Chilly is in one corner, Star is in the other corner. Star runs out of the corner going for a spear but Chilly catches her and performs one of his finishing moves “the Chill Factor”. Star’s face bounces of the canvas leaving a bright red pool of blood on the floor. Chilly roughly hooks a leg as the ref counts the three. Chilly --- 3.93 promo + 1 voting = 4.93 Star --- 3.9 promo + .3 voting = 4.2WINNER: "The Canadian Icon" Chilly WillyChilly gets up over Starcrunch and is given his title belt. He shrugs his shoulders and holds the belt up as the fans cheer. He gets out of the ring and begins to make his way to the back------------------------------------------- We see Brittany Keller being followed by a camera as she walks down the hallways, looking back at the camera while she's talking oftenBrittany Keller: Hey Fans! I have been informed that Soundscream is being checked out backstage, and is more than likely going to have to be admitted to a hospital nearby. So, I, Brittany Keller, P2PW'S Sleuth! I'm going to attempt to get a word with all three men who will be teaming up tonight! _the j-man, Cactus, and Soul Reaper have all been in the middle of a controversy since all men want a shot at the World Title, and are presenting valid cases. We're going to attempt to get a word with them one by one, as I, the P2PW Sleuth, am all about giving the fans the inside scoop! And here we are, first stop . . . Brittany looks up to read "Soul Reaper" on a door. She looks at it for a moment and turns back to the cameraBrittany Keller: . . . nevermind. Let's go down this way! The camera follows Brittany as she stops at another doorBrittany Keller: Here we are, now we'll get a definite word! She looks up to read "Cactus". She looks back at the camera a little fussy as she puts her hand up to knock. She quickly jerks it back as she turns back to the cameraBrittany Keller: Well, considering how dangerous these two men are, I think I'll go ahead and find the j . . . Brittany stops as she looks up from her short stature to see _the j-man and Smokey towering over her. She looks on for a minute, and quickly regains her composure as she slams the microphone up into her faceBrittany Keller: So, _the j-man, your thoughts on teaming with Soul Reaper and Cactus tonight? She puts the microphone in _the j-man's face. He doesn't speak for a minute as he gives a blank stare to Brittany. He finally snatches the mic and bends down, getting into her face_the j-man: Now then, did I just here that you blew off your interview time with Soul Reaper and Cactus because those men are "dangerous"? But, you have no problem shooting that mic in my face? So, what are you trying to say, Brittany? _the j-man gets right in Brittany's face as there is just enough room between them for him to put the mic up to his mouth_the j-man: You don't think I'm dangerous? Just cause I didn't get involved in their little bitchfest earlier!? Brittany looks on as she begins to speakBrittany Keller: Well, no, that's not it, you see . . . _the j-man begins the mic back up as he stands straight up, ignoring Brittany_the j-man: If I had taken Soundscream out, it would've been for good. Cactus, Soul Reaper, whoever, they just can't get he job done it seems. Now, I want the whole World to listen up! I am sick and tired of hearing the same shit over and over about how dangerous Soul Reaper & Cactus are! Cactus, yeah, he killed a guy, but who cares? I mean, has he killed anyone since then? No! What a pussy! Who kills just one person, and then leaves it at that!? I mean, Jason didn't do that, Freddy didn't do that, Myers didn't do that, they killed one guy and then killed dozens and dozens more! Those guys were dangerous! Cactus, you're just a guy who had that experience, and then figured you'd use it to try and push yourself to the top of the company! You're not a killer! You're a fraud! _the j-man glares at the camera as his voice quietens_the j-man: And then you have Soul Reaper. Now, I'm sorry, but I keep hearing the same thing over and over. About how Soul Reaper will steal my soul, and about how he is Satan himself in the ring. Well, that's all good, I guess, but I just have a hard time believing that from a guy who hasn't been able to come up with anything interesting to say since day one, so he just decided to repeat himself over and over and over and over . . . and over again! "Ashes to Ashes, Dust to Dust, Your soul is mine and there is no escape!" I mean, what the Hell is that nigga trying to say!? That he is the rightful owner of everyone's soul? That he's going to somehow reach into our bodies and take it from us? Since I've been here, nobody's soul has been taken. In fact, I dont remember anyone laying down a claim that Soul Reaper took their soul! I think Soul Reaper is in the same league as Cactus, and he is nothing more than a fraud! _the j-man looks down at Brittany as he bends down towards her_the j-man: Now me, I'm not a fraud. I tell it like it is everytime I go out there. When I say that "It's Because I'm a Black man!", it's the stone cold truth! The title shot that is dangling above everyone's head is rightfully mine, and the fact that it is so evidently mine, and I'm still not getting a title shot was the whip that broke the black man's back! That is why the P2PW is being sued! That is why _the j-man has been so irate lately! I'm going to get what's mine, the P2PW is going to give me my reparation money! _the j-man looks on with intensity as he smirks and looks back down at Brittany, and then turns to the camera_the j-man: . . . and then they're going to give me a World Title Shot!!! _the j-man storms off as Smokey looks on. He turns back to Brittany, and stares at her for a moment. Both remain silent as Smokey suddenly screamSmokey: CAUSE HE'S A BLACK MAN!!! Smokey smiles as Brittany jumps. He adjusts his collar and walks off as Brittany looks on----------------------------------------------------------- We are taken to Zeroin as we see The Fizz walking down the hallway. She is looking very upset as she rounds a corner. She runs into someone as she falls back a bit. She looks up in anger, and then slowly looks on, as if in awe. The camera pans to see Shinn's Theory smiling at her.Shinn's Theory: Where are you going with that angry face? The Fizz: Well, Matt. I mean, Shinns! I . . .I mean Mr. Theory! Shinn's Theory: Woah woah woah! Shinns is fine, you can use that. The fizz calms herself, as Shinns speaksShinn's Theory: Now, what's got you so upset, babe? Shinns puts his arm around The Fizz as he starts walking down the hallway with herThe Fizz: Well, I just came from Stare's office, and it seems that I've not been impressing him as of late. To tell you the truth, I'm starting to get very very pissed with him! Shinn's Theory: You're not the only one! The Fizz stops and looks at ShinnsThe Fizz: You're pissed at Stare too? Shinn's Theory: Well . . . yeah. Everyone is! I mean, the guy is a dick for starters, and he runs a crappy show. He's got a big head and all he talks about is how great he is. I mean, nobody likes the guy, so yeah, you're not alone. The Fizz: Well, I'm getting tired of this place fast. Shinns nods and walks with her a couple more steps. He smirks to himself as he stopsShinn's Theory: You know, Fizz, if this place ever got that bad for you, there is always an alternative. The fizz looks at Shinns in questionThe Fizz: Like what? Shinn's Theory: Oh, I dont know . . . maybe, you could come to work for me on TNT? Shinns looks over at The Fiss with a smile as she looks onThe Fizz: Wait, aren't I under a contract? Shinn's Theory: Well, sort of, but that's just paperwork. But, you know what, let's not talk about this too much now, but I think next time you talk to Stare, you should make it very clear to him how much you dislike Blitz!, and how appealing TNT is. Can you do that? The Fizz: That's not a bad idea, Shinns! I think it might shape him up a little. Shinn's Theory: Yeah! Shape him up! That's sooo why I was suggesting you say that! It didn't have anything to do with making him furious! The Fizz looks on at Shinns as he looks over to the side, avoiding eye contactThe Fizz: Well, thanks for the offer, and the idea. I'll definitely have to try that one out if he gives me any more crap next week! Shinn's Theory: Way to go kid! He pats her on the back as she walks off. He smiles for a minute and then cups his hand next to his mouth and yells at herShinn's Theory: And make sure that you tell him that Shinns offered you a contract! Actually! Say Mr. Theory offered you it! Shinns smiles and laughs to himself as he look on
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Post by Stare on Dec 15, 2005 4:35:41 GMT 1
We go ringside as the fans are cheering wildly. The lights suddenly go out as "Down" hits. The fans look on for a minute, not recognizing the music, as Soul Reaper walks out. They quickly begin to boo as he begins to walk down the ramp. A wall of fire shoots up behind him and then shoots up the side along the ramp as he walks towards the ring. He reaches the bottom as he walks over to the steps. He looks around as he slowly walks up the steps. He steps into the ring as the lights slowly come back on and his music dies down. The fans are still booing as "Of Wolf & Man" hit. Cactus walks out with almost no expression, as he looks around, surveying the people that hate him. He smirks to himself and makes his way to the ring, and rolls under the bottom rope. He looks at Soul Reaper as both men keep their eyes locked on each other. Cactus's music hits as "U Got a problem?" hits. The fans boo loudly as _the j-man slowly walks out. Smokey walks out shortly after him as him and _the j-man converse down the ramp. _the j-man looks in the ring at Cactus and Soul Reaper, and gets a knee up on the apron. He looks on at both men as he slowly steps in between the ropes. He looks on at both men as he climbs to the top rope and holds an arm up, and turns around again, obviously not trusting either man. He looks down on them as his music cuts.
There is brief silence until "Energy" hits. The fans continue their habitual booing as Stare slowly walks out. He looks around with a smirk on his face. He slowly removes his glasses and looks around, and then places his glasses back on and begins to walk to the ring. He jerks his arm away from fans who try to touch him as he approaches the ring. He begins to get in and then looks at the three opponents on the inside. He takes a step back as all three men are keeping an eye on him and each other. His music cuts as the audience awaits the next competitor. "Somethin Wicked This Way Comes" breaks the silence as the fans look on as Spackle struts out. He look around and paces his way towards the ring. He stops and jumps on the barricade, arguing with the fans. He looks around and jumps down, as he approaches Stare. He looks in the ring and smacks Stare on the back. Stare gives him a glare as Spackle's music cuts. "Kryptonite" hits as NIN Horror walks out almost immediately. He doesn’t even take a look around as his eyes are set on the ring, as the foul mood that he is in is evident. He ignores the fans' chants and walks right past Stare and Spackle and slides in the ring. _the j-man quickly attacks him as Soul Reaper and Cactus eventually join in.
Stare and Spackle hit the ring as Cactus quickly catches Stare with a hard kick, sending him falling between the ropes to the outside. Cactus follows him out as Spackle makes it to his feet and nails a shot on Soul Reaper. Soul Reaper quickly stops the offense with a knee and shoves Spackle into the corner, and begins to nail some quick, devastating kicks. On the outside, Cactus picks Stare up and send him into the steps. He makes his way around the ring and to his corner, climbing up on the apron. He looks on as Soul Reaper nails a clothesline on Spackle, sending him to the outside. Soul Reaper goes to his corner as _the j-man continues to throw shots at NIN as the bell soundsMAIN EVENT 6-MAN TAG MATCH Soul Reaper, _the j-man, & Cactus vs. NIN Horror, Stare, & Spackle (Written By: Stare) _the j-man continues the onslaught as he grabs NIN Horror in a chinlock on the mat. NIN Horror quickly maneuvers his way around and grabs the ropes. _the j-man is forced to break the hold as NIN immediately nails a shot to the mid-section. NIN nails an uppercut shot and buries a knee into the mid-section. He hooks _the j-man and nails a snap suplex. He gets up and drops an elbow as NIN seems focused and out to prove a point. _the j-man props himself up, holding his chest, as NIN nails another kick. He picks _the j-man up and sends him to the rope, and catches him in a backbreaker coming back. He goes for an early cover, but only gets a 1 count. NIN tags in Spackle as Spackle comes in. NIN steps on the back of the head of _the j-man, and holds his arm up. Spackle hits the ropes and comes off with a low dropkick, right to the joint of _the j-man. _the j-man rolls away, holding his arm, as NIN exits the ring. Spackle grabs _the j-man's arm and wraps it around his leg and then drives his knee down into the joint again. _the j-man reaches out for the rope, but is inches away. Spackle again drives the knee. _the j-man quickly maneuvers his way to the ropes. Spackle lets go and then kicks _the j-man in the face. J holds his chin as Spackle is warned by the referee. Spackle holds his arms up, claiming innocence, as he goes for _the j-man. _the j-man nails an elbow and begins to fight his way up. He knocks Spackle down with a hard shot. He reaches out a hand to tag Cactus, as Cactus ignores _the j-man. _the j-man looks at him for a moment as Spackle charges for _the j-man. _the j-man catches glimpse in the nick of time and buries a knee into Spackle's mid-section. He then turns and smacks Cactus across the face. The audience is taken by surprise as they give off an "ooooh!" _the j-man claps his hands in the air once, signifying that he tagged Cactus and gets on the apron. Cactus is looking at _the j-man with his eyes as wide as they can be. Spackle quickly grabs Cactus and jerks him in the ring over the top rope while Cactus is distracted. He picks Cactus up and pushes him into the corner and nails a hard shot. He nails a couple more before Cactus reverses the hold and begins to wail away with fast, hard punches. He beats him down in the corner and then walks away, and run back, driving a knee into Spackle's head. Cactus grabs Spackle, and drags him back to the center of the ring. He goes for a cover, but only gets a two count. Cactus picks Spackle up and nails a couple hard knees to the face. He hooks Spackle up for a double-armed ddt, but Spackle quickly backs off and scoots his way under the bottom ropes. Cactus looks on as Spackle turns to the audience, tapping his head. Cactus reaches over the top rope and grabs Spackle by his pink dreads. He jerks him up onto the apron, but Spackle quickly snaps the neck of Cactus off the top rope. NIN then runs along the apron and clotheslines Cactus down. The ref admonishes NIN as he ignores him and grabs his tag rope. Spackle gets up on the apron and springboards himself off the top rope and drops a leg on Cactus. He covers Cactus and is able to get a very close 2 count. Spackle picks Cactus up and tags in Stare. The fans boo as Stare comes in and climbs to the second rope. Cactus makes it up as Stare nails a double-axe handle. He covers Cactus quickly, but only gets a two. Stare picks Cactus up and whips him off the ropes. He catches Cactus coming back with a hard spinebuster. He makes the cover as the ref counts another close 2. Stare looks at the ref in anger as he picks Cactus up. He nails a hard kick and puts him over his shoulder for the Staredown as the audience boo's loudly. Cactus tries to fight his way out of it with hard fists. He finally gets down and catches Stare in a standing Dragon Sleeper when he falls off his shoulders. He locks in the first half of his finisher, The Cactus Killah, as Stare is frantically waving his arms, looking for anything. Cactus uses his leverage to lead Stare away from ropes as Stare is pacing around quickly. He finally is able to grab a rope as Cactus holds on. The ref begins a 5 count as Cactus finally lets it go. Stare falls down immediately as Cactus towers over him and nails a hard kick. Cactus looks down at Stare and laughs, and he is then hit on the shoulder. We see the ref signal a tag as Soul Reaper walks in. Cactus looks at Soul Reaper in anger as Soul Reaper gives him a quick smirk. Cactus attempts to attack Soul Reaper, but the ref quickly holds him back. Cactus maintains his cool as he steps out onto the apron. He looks at _the j-man who cracks a smile. The men begin to exchange words as Soul Reaper slowly approaches Stare who is holding his neck. He grabs Stare by the back of the back as Stare's jaw drops wide open as Soul Reaper leads him to a vertical base. He grabs him around the stomach and lifts him up, and drops him with what can only be described as a reverse chokeslam. Stare's face slams the mat as the fans cheer the move. Soul Reaper again grabs Stare and pulls him up. He pushes him into the corner and grabs his chin and begins to give a peace of his mind to the GM. He then buries a knee into the mid-section as Stare falls to his knees. Stare gets up as Soul Reaper nails a hard chop. He then whips him to the ropes and catches him with a devastating clothesline, turning Stare inside out. Soul Reaper appears to be on his game as he is dominating so far. He makes the cover on Stare, but only gets a two count as the ref is approaches by Soul Reaper quickly. The ref jumps out of the ring to avoid him as he laughs and walks back towards Stare. He picks Stare up and lifts him up into a Torture Rack position. He holds him up with one arm and drags his finger across his throat and then hooks him with both arms and drives him down with his new finisher, The Reaper's Requiem, a version of the Burning Hammer. The audience gasps at the move as Stare lands right on the upper part of his torso. Soul Reaper rolls Stare over and covers him, but Spackle runs in. Reaper catches him with a martial arts stiff kick. NIN runs in as Soul Reaper shoots another kick out, but NIN knocks his foot to the side and barrels him over with a clothesline. The ref quickly tries to restrain the men as _the j-man and Cactus run in and attack NIN and Spackle. NIN is knocked into the ropes by Cactus, as Cactus goes for a clothesline, but NIN back drops him over the ropes. _the j-man goes after Spackle, but Spackle fights back as the two exchange blows. NIN grabs _the j-man from behind and picks him up into a back suplex, and then sits him on Spackle's shoulders, as Spackle nails a powerbomb. The ref is trying to regain control as Soul Reaper grabs NIN Spackle from behind and throws him over the top rope. He then grabs NIN from behind and locks in The Eternal Sleep. NIN quickly tries to get out, but is unable too as Reaper holds it on. NIN begins to lean back, and start to pass out as Stare nails a low blow on Soul Reaper from behind. Soul Reaper holds on in pain as Stare turns him around and lifts him up over his shoulders and proceeds to hit The Staredown. He slowly covers Soul Reaper as the ref counts. 1. . . 2 . . . Cactus jerks Stare out of the ring by the foot and nails a kick, and delivers a double-armed ddt onto the mat on the outside. Cactus the goes and grabs a chair and brings it into the ring. He grabs the dazed NIN and delivers a hard shot. He sits the chair up near the ropes and picks NIN up. He throws him to the ropes and then runs towards the chair, and jumps off it, and then off of the top rope, and springboards himself backwards, nailing a reverse elbow on NIN. Spackle and _the j-man are fighting on the outside. _the j-man delivers a kick, and goes for a ddt, but Spackle reverses out of it and nails _the j-man with a kick, followed by a quick neckbreaker. Spackle then gets up and looks in the ring. He slides in as Cactus is stomping away at NIN. Spackle grabs him from behind and nails a reverses ddt. Soul Reaper begins to get up as Spackle quickly grabs the chair. He folds it up as the referee quickly grabs it, and tries to yank it away. Spackle pushes it into the referee, releasing the ref's grasp of it and turns around, and is elevated by Soul Reaper, who tries to nail a hangman across the top rope, but Spackle holds onto the chair as the chair hits the ropes and Spackle's face slams into it. Spackle stumbles back and falls down. Soul Reaper looks around for a bit. He looks to the outside and walks out. He leans over and grabs the legal man, Stare. He rolls him back in the ring and gets back in. He stands over Stare for a moment and then signals that it's the end. _the j-man gets in as Cactus stands up. Stare begins to get up as Soul Reaper brings the chair back. Stare quickly ducks as Soul Reaper quickly stops his swing, only coming inches away from nailing _the j-man, who quickly falls back in fear of getting hit. Stare quickly slides out of the ring and waves off the ring. He begins to walk to the back in frustration and probably fear. Spackle and NIN quickly slide in as NIN nails _the j-man with a hard shot from behind. Spackle nails a shot on Cactus as well, as Cactus falls into the corner. Soul Reaper awaits the men to turn around with a chair in his hands as a low whistle is heard, follows by a huge explosion at the end of the rampway, right in front of Stare. The volume of the explosion startles everyone as Stare falls back. Trent Acid suddenly walks out as he looks down at Stare who has a look of pure fear. The crowd is going nuts as Trent Acid walks towards him as Stare crawls backwards, pleading with Trent. Trent grabs Stare by the throat with both hands and jerks him up to his feet and then picks him up. He holds Stare's face into his own and says something as he walks with Stare a bit. He holds Stare over the edge of the stage as Stare is almost pleading with Trent. Trent looks to the audience as they cheer and looks back at Stare. Trent Acid then slowly lets Stare down to his feet. The audience boos as Trent laughs at Stare as Stare looks on. Trent nods and says something else as he begins to walk away. Stare gets up and charges at Trent, but Trent turns around and nails a hard shot. He bends Stare backwards as the audience cheers as he sets him up for The Acid Bomb. He holds him up and throws him like a javelin off the stage as Stare falls through tables below. The audience cheer like crazy as Trent Acid looks down as Stare with a smile. He looks up at the audience and yells as they are cheering him like crazy. The bell begins to ring in the ring as the audience almost don't seem to notice as they are still cheering. Ringside Announcer: Ladies and Gentlemen, the referee has stopped this match due to a disqualification on Soul Reaper, _the j-man, and Cactus for an interference. Therefore, your winners: Spackle, Stare, and "The New Horror Show" NIN Horror! Soul Reaper (1), _the j-man (2), Cactus (3) --- 4.55 promo (1) + 4.7 promo (2) + 4.35 promo (3) + .7 voting = 14.3 Stare (1), NIN (2), Spackle (3) --- 4.75 promo (1) + 4.65 promo (2) + 4.55 promo (3) + .6 voting = 14.55WINNERS: NIN Horror, Spackle, & StareThe EMT's are checking on Stare as Soul Reaper stands in the ring. He holds NIN and Spackle off with the chair as both men are trying to get back in the ring. _the j-man and Cactus then get in as Soul Reaper begins to look at both men. _the j-man and Cactus begin mouthing off at one another as Soul Reaper begins talking trash to both men. Suddenly, "Get Back" hits. The crowd goes nuts as Soundscream walks out. His eyes are wide as a bandage is over his head. There is still a slight red coloring from the blood that covered his face as he looks on in the ring with intensity. The camera pans down to see a baseball bat wrapped in barb wire in his hand. He walks down to the ring and tries to get in, but Soul Reaper, Cactus, and _the j-man almost work together to hold him off. The audience is looking on as Soundscream looks on. NIN and Spackle are on the opposite side of the ring, almost not knowing what to make of it as Soundscream looks at the 3 men laying claim to his World Title.
He looks at the men with an angry look and then nods as he reaches down under the apron. The audience look on as he pulls on a gasoline can. They cheer wildly as he pops it open and pours it over his bat. He grabs a lighter out of his pocket and looks on at Soul Reaper, Cactus, and _the j-man as he lights it. It goes ablaze as the audience screams wildly as he walks over to the steps. He walks towards the ropes as all three men begin to back off. Soundscream quickly walks through the ropes and goes right for Cactus, as he quickly gets out of the ring. _the j-man and Soul Reaper both get out too as Soundscream clears the ring as the audience is cheering like crazy. Soul Reaper, Cactus, and _the j-man all begin to walk backwards down the isle, all looking back at Soundscream, as he is almost begging them to get in the ring with him and his bat. They look on as "Get Back" hits. All three reach the curtain as they go through it as Soundscream holds the bat up high. The audience cheers until Soundscream turns around and is speared by NIN Horror and Spackle. They both begin stomping Soundscream as the audience boos loudly.
They do a number on him as NIN grabs the bat set on fire. NIN Horror looks on as Spackle picks Soundscream up to his knees. He holds the bat in his hand as he measures Soundscream. The security quickly runs out with fire extinguishers in hand. At least 10 men slide in the ring as they quickly stop NIN. He holds them off with the bat as a couple of security guys put out the mat where it was set on fire by the bat. NIN Horror holds off all the men as he then turns his attention back to Soundscream. He takes the bat and nails Soundscream in the face with it. The audience gasps as Soundscream falls back as Security quickly gets in and checks on Soundscream as NIN drops the bat and backs off laughing. The security with the extinguishers' quickly put out the bat as NIN is given a microphone by SpackleNIN Horror: Well well well. Mary, I know you're listening, and you told three men that you wanted them to make an impact tonight and it would help you make your decision as to which one of them would be named the #1 contender, and you told me that I didn't deserve a title shot. Well, allow me to sum this up in 10 words. . . . There's your impact, where's my title shot, you stupid bitch!? NIN slams the mic down and looks on at Soundscream laughing as he is checked out by security. Their is an ambulance loading Stare up near the back as a couple EMT's from that begin to make their way to the ring as NIN and Spackle both roll out of the ring. The camera focuses in on NIN and Spackle looking back in the ring at the damage as Blitz! goes off the air--------------------------------------------- CREDITS: Soundscream, Cactus, _the j-man, Stare[/size]
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Post by Stare on Dec 15, 2005 4:36:05 GMT 1
STARE'S RATINGS[/u]
Vegeta --- 3.5 (This didn't really do anything for me like your promos usually do. Though, it's nice ot know a promo form you that doenst do anything for me still gets a 3.5. You're an excellent writer, and I stand by my belief that you are the "undiscovered potential" in this fed. I think you'll turn some head eventually. This promo had some weird dialogue that was a bit OOC from your original promos. It was a bit random and rushed, it seemed, but still a good feel none-the-less) The Fizz --- 2.5] (You tried, and this was better than your last promo definetly. You went to the fans, showing that you are brainstorming. You need to re-read every one of your promos, and put comma's and other punctuation where you see it is needed, and work on your usage of words. There were a couple of parts that made no sense cause of the way you worded it. Also, as I told you before, you need ot visualize it as you write it. Watch the promo and you write it. I coudl see evidence of that a couple of times, but you never really got that impact. Keep working, it'll come to you, I promise)
Chilly Willy --- 4.2 (Good promo. I liked the introduction of your own belt, I believe it knocked this promo up a notch. It was very well described, and you are slowly becoming better and better. The best advice I can give anyone and you is this, "visualize your character, as a wrestler, in the ring as you write it. Hear what he is saying, and write it down. You can get your character's full effect that way". Good promo) Starcrunch --- 4.1 (awesome hype promo for what's to come of you, and one of your best in a while. I thought this was very well done, and I think a change is what you needed, and being a heel will help you in writing promos and rediscovering the success you once had. I just hope you stick around, as I havent seen you in the last two matches, and for this character to be great, you have to take advantage. Good job, and good luck, and thank God the slurpee's are gone)
Ecos --- 4.5 (I really liked this promo, and am growing more and more impressed with you. I like your character, as he has a lot of emotions it seems. He was funny, then serious, then almost came off scared in an HBK-heel sort of way. I think you have a great foundation coming in here, and I see you becoming a serious force eventually) SoL --- 4.6 (Great promo. The dialogue was outstanding because it was believable as a wrestler. Awesome job, you hyped your character, his future, and your match with Ethos . . . I mean Ecos)
Soul Reaper --- n/a Cactus --- n/a _the j-man --- n/a NIN Horror --- n/a Spackle --- n/a Stare --- n/a
ROCKY'S RATINGS[/u]
Vegeta - 3.0 (This didn't run together well. You lost the momentum of the promo after you threw the fan out of the ring. From there, it didn't have any rhythm to it. Still decent in its content, but you've done better.) The Fizz - 3.0 (This was better than the last one, but it lacks any depth. It doesn't flow well togethetr, because the dialogue is patchy. You're on the right lines, though. A little more work will see you through.)
Chilly Willy - 3.5 (Good stuff. There's still something missing. The Canadian Icon thing is going well, but there's just that spark missing that makes you a champion, instead of a contender.) Starcrunch - 3.5 (This was your best promo in a long time. Continue with this character, because, in developing it, you'll get back to where you were before.)
Ecos - 4.3 (I like the character you're buildsing. It's uniqe in the sense that it has many sides to it, but still that character manages to remain consistent throughout the promo. Nice job.) SoL - 4.4 (Nice promo. I enjoted the classic heel city slurs. The summing up of the roster was good too. Overall, it's good to have you back.)
Soul Reaper - 4.5 (Good promo. It was a little different than what you usually do and, if you are changing your character a little, it may take a couple more promos to get where you want to be. It lacked the greatness of some of your previous promos, but it was still damn good.) Cactus - 4.3 (Nice classic Cactus promo. You ran through the other participants in the match well. Good stuff.) _the j-man - 4.8 (Absolutley brilliant. The interaction between Smokey and yourself was flawless. The whole thing about the law suit was entertaining as hell too. This whole promo ran as smoothly as it possibly could. Brilliant. NIN Horror - 4.6 (True World champ material. Some people pull off the longer promos without making the reader lose interest. You can. You summarized your opponents and partners well. The beginning of the promo was great. Overall, a great promo.) Spackle - 4.5 (Good stuff Spackle. While funny, I'm not sure that the extended beginning was really needed. It just seemed like a waste of time. Once you actually got down to the interview part, it was very well done, though.) Stare - 4.7 (Good stuff Stare. You gave a detailed response to counter the claims of those demanding a title shot. You're really growing in this heel role. And the ending was nicely done too.)
SHINNS' RATINGS[/u]
Vegeta - 4.2 ("I like Pie Better. Ha!...That made me laugh. Good altercation you had. Decent promo, but I've seen better from you.) The Fizz - 4.0 (You did a little homework. You worked the crowd. Excellent promo. Your a great addition to Blitz! I see good things coming your way.)
"The Canadian Icon" Chilly Willy - 4.1 (I love this storyline. It dates back for quite some time. This was a decent promo. However, being a champion means you need to try and write 5.0s every single time your in a match. That's what kept Reaper World Champion for so long. On the flipside, you did write a decent promo. That's why you're far above the average.) Starcrunch - 4.1 (Damn fucking straight! Being a heel brings out the best in you. I think you can do better, as you must think the same. BUT, this may be one of the best promos you have written in a while. Why couldn't you write something like this when we were sucking down slurpees together? OH, I can answer that. Because your character is more driven being heel. One step up the ladder you go..)
Ecos - 4.5 (Damn. You are showing me more and more as we go along here. Nothing short of a 4.5 rating, which is great in our book.) SoL - 4.6 (Glad your back...and this promo is one of the reasons why.)
Soul Reaper - 4.6 (Not too long, nor too short. Yes, you are one of the most dominant people in this fed. And promos like this prove it.) Cactus - 4.4 (You hit em all. Nice work. I expect nothing less from you, however, I've seen more from you. Either way, you're top talent because you can write a promo, on a bad day, and still keep my attention.) _the j-man - 4.6 (I wonder if people still think you're really a black man. Ha! Loved this write up. People, take note. You are looking at a top guy on Blitz! The promo speaks for itself.) "The New Horror Show" NIN Horror - 4.7 (Semi-Long (that's what she said), but kept my attention. A lot of the time I have a hard time following your promos, as you bring up things I get lost reading....Yea, call me dumb...but, this time you didn't. Best Promo I've read so far, for this event.) Spackle - 4.6 (Yep...you tweeked your writing ever since Stare and I said we liked more "wrestling type promos". Only a few points off from perfect score. Spackle is a man to fear, Blitz!) Stare - 4.8 (Even though Stare is currently not a champion, he still writes promos as if he was. He never skimps. Bad ass write up Stare. I expected nothing less. In addition, way to totally cover the match AND to add in a little something that I can see boiling in the future.)
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Post by Stare on Dec 15, 2005 4:37:37 GMT 1
I apologize for the time this took. I had a very hectic weekend, as some of you may know, and I honestly didnt feel like doing much of anything for a coupel of days.
If some of the show doenst make sense, I apologize, I was out of my head during some of it.
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Post by _the j-man on Dec 15, 2005 5:28:10 GMT 1
Good show! ;D Congratulations to Chilly Willy retaining his title, people said that he wouldn't last a week. Well he did it! Good tag match too, Trent Acid that cheatin' bastard! Oh well, everyone knows the Black Man is going to get what is rightfully his!
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Post by Spackle on Dec 15, 2005 5:36:44 GMT 1
Super Stare, just super. Great show, and I don't mind the wait.
And Shinn's, Stare, don't flatter yourselves. I don't change for no man or woman, I just started writing more serious promos because I ran out of funny things to say. You should have seen me back in my BCW days. Spelling and grammar errors everywhere, and a gay or ethnic joke every sentence. I even decapitated a man with a water gun, and had dynamite shoved down my pants. I even wrote Ninny's first promo, back when I called him Moppy, and I made him slice some bitches up and cook them over a fire. And eat them. Whoo, wacky days those were.
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Post by stocko on Dec 15, 2005 10:35:56 GMT 1
very cool show gents! trent rules
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Post by KillerSundin (Formerly HBK) on Dec 15, 2005 13:36:44 GMT 1
Great show guys. Another excellent job!
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Post by Cactus on Dec 15, 2005 13:47:58 GMT 1
great show, NiN, gimick infringement, the barbed wire bat is my friend, not yours
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SoL
Junior
^scurrry^
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Post by SoL on Dec 15, 2005 19:40:03 GMT 1
good job stare, excepet you got my intro music wrong...i changed it, remember?
nice try ethos
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Post by Cactus on Dec 15, 2005 19:50:33 GMT 1
so good to have the new breed back, wanna dance again soon SoL ?
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Post by Faster Pussycat! on Dec 15, 2005 23:25:11 GMT 1
Cool Beans Stare.
"NIN Spackle" = Blitz!
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SoL
Junior
^scurrry^
Posts: 152
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Post by SoL on Dec 16, 2005 5:24:11 GMT 1
cactus, i got my dancin' shoes shined up, you just put on the record and i'm there.
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Dec 20, 2005 8:57:38 GMT 1
IC: Man that felt good!! Your ass is mine come Genesis.
OOC: Great show.
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Post by Cactus on Dec 20, 2005 12:44:47 GMT 1
IC: Man that felt good!! Your ass is mine come Genesis. err this is wrestling no froot camp SoL anytime, anyplace, you know this, it will be a pleasure
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Post by Stare on Dec 20, 2005 21:16:22 GMT 1
new show will be up tonight, and for those of you with a time difference, it'll be about 5 hours
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