P2PW's TNT (11/2) Results!

[shinnstheory]

”Battleflag” erupts and the crowd jumps to their feet. The turnout for the last TNT before Deserted is huge. The camera quickly pans around the arena catching glimpses of anxious fans holding their signs. “Battleflag” fades and the crowd waits in anticipation. Suddenly, Zeroin shows signs of life. We see Wench inside a dark room. She seems to be trying to break free from the cage she is in. Her hands are chained to the top. She tries to quietly wiggle out of the chains. A demonic looking women appears behind Wench. She pulls a Tazer out of her long coat. She reaches into the cage and shocks Wench. Wench screams in pain, then falls unconscious, hanging by the chains wrapped around her wrists. Zeroin then flickers the words:

[glow=red,2,300]From the Inner Recesses of Your Mind[/glow]

”Therapy Scares Me” hits as Wench’s abductor, Addryd, appears from behind the curtain. He slowly walks to the ring and enters. Without hesitation, Addryd grabs the microphone from the ring announcer.

Addryd:[/b] Unbalanced and Insane: two words quite similar. Both can be sensed by smell. Both can be sensed by sight. Both can be sensed by sound. And, in Wench’s case, both can be sensed by taste.

The crowd remains silent as Addryd smiles an evil grin.

Addryd:[/b] I’ve tasted the blood of Wench. It told me plenty. I tasted the blood of the woman before she was caged. She was balanced and sane. I’ve tasted her blood after being caged. She is now unbalanced and insane. It’s a wonder what I can do to strain one’s mind. Precious Wench will be useless to Evil Unlimited once I free her, if I chose to free her. Tonight, there is no chance of her being freed. Although I am not guarding her, she is still guarded. Any attempts to rescue her will be shot down. Any attempts to lash out at me will result in high voltage handshakes to Evil Unlimited’s princess herself.

Addryd turns towards the camera.

Addryd:[/b] Hellspawn. I know what you seek. And, I know...

Addryd is interrupted by “High Roller”. Addryd’s head snaps towards the ramp. The crowd jumps to their feet as Chadwick quickly walks to the ring. His eyes are set on Addryd. He climbs the steps. With no intimidation, Chadwick enters the ring. Addryd tosses the microphone over his shoulder and out of the ring. He walks towards Chadwick. Chadwick meets Addryd half way and the two lock up. The referee calls for the bell.

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Singles Match - Non Title
Chadwick vs. Addryd

HIGHLIGHTS:
- After the lock up, Chadwick gained quick control.
- Being the bigger of the two, Chadwick landed a variety of Power Moves on Addryd.
- Chadwick was able to put Addryd into the C-Lock early in the match.
- Addryd was able to make it to the ropes to break the hold.
- A small referee bump lead to a low blow by Addryd to Chadwick.
- Once on the offense, Addryd performed many Ariel Moves.
- Hellspawn appeared at the top of the ramp.
- Addryd acknowledged Hellspawn’s presence but kept his focus on Chadwick.
- Addryd laid out Chadwick with a brutal Bone Rattler.
- Hellspawn approached ringside.
- Instead of going for the cover, Addryd taunted Hellspawn to enter the ring.
- Pictures of Wench and the guards appeared on Zeroin.
- Hellspawn refused to enter the ring.
- Chadwick regains strength and rolls up Addryd for the pin.
- Addryd is able to kick out.
- Addryd tosses Chadwick out of the ring.
- Addryd climbs to the top rope, leaping off and hitting Chadwick with a 360 Leg Drop.
- The referee begins a ten count but quickly exits the ring when Hellspawn approaches Addryd.
- The referee demands Hellspawn to leave the ring.
- With the referee’s back turned, Addryd cracks Chadwick over the head with the ringbell.
- Addryd rolls Chadwick into the ring.
- Hellspawn walks, backwards, up the ramp.
- Addryd climbs to the top rope and performs the Wings of the Crow.
- The referee slides in and makes the three count.

Addryd - 4.6833 Promo Points.
Chadwick - 4.1167 Promo Points.[/I]

Winner: Addryd[/b]

After the match, Hellspawn remains at the top of the ramp. Addryd rolls out of the ring and stands at the bottom of the ramp. The two men stare each other down. Hellspawn slowly backs his way through the curtain. A wall of fire rises at the top of the ramp. Addryd slowly walks up the ramp towards the fire. He begins to laugh. Still laughing, he slowly walks through the fire. Again, Zeroin sports the following:

[glow=red,2,300]From the Inner Recesses of Your Mind[/glow]

The fire disappears. Addryd has disappeared along with it. We now take you backstage.

Starcrunch is shown walking into Mastadon’s locker room. She sits beside him.

Starcrunch:[/b] Shinn’s and I have a little proposition for you.

Mastadon looks towards Starcrunch, confused.

Mastadon:[/b] For me?

Starcrunch nods.

Mastadon:[/b] And what is it?

Starcrunch hops to her feet and grabs Mastadon’s hand.

Starcrunch:[/b] Let’s go!

Starcrunch leads Mastadon down a long hallway, by the hand. They end up in front of Shinn’s Theory’s office door. Starcrunch looks back at Mastadon and grins. She opens the door and leads Mastadon into the office. Shinn’s is shown sitting behind his desk, feet up, smoking a cigar.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Let me know what you think.

Shinn’s slides a contract in front of Mastadon. Mastadon reads through the contract. Mastadon cracks a huge grin and begins to laugh. He grabs a pen from off of Shinn’s desk and signs the contract. Shinn’s stands up and the two men shake hands, and begin to laugh.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] It’s done. All four signatures are on there bro. At Deserted, it’s you and me verses Tyler Stone and Trent Acid. Once and for all, we’ll get the Decepticons out of our hair.

Mastadon cocks and eyebrow at Shinn’s. Shinn’s laughs as he rubs the top of Mastadon’s bald head.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] You know what I meant...

The three laugh. Starcrunch takes a seat on the couch. Mastadon begins to leave. He stops and turns around. Looking towards Shinn’s, he asks:

Mastadon:[/b] What about that other one dick? Soundscream.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Oh, don’t worry about him. I’ve got something planned for him. Actually, what are you doing for the rest of the night?

Mastadon:[/b] Nothing, really...

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Why don’t you hang here tonight. Take a seat next to Starcrunch. Help yourself to my Humidor and Mini-Bar. If you stick around long enough, you’ll witness what I have in store for SoundScream at Deserted.

Mastadon shrugs and sits next to Starcrunch. He lights himself a Rumrunner and kicks back. Starcrunch looks over towards Shinn’s and begins to nod. He smiles back as he props his feet upon his desk.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Come Deserted, the Decepticons are in for a long night.

The scene fades as Mastadon, Shinn’s Theory, and Starcrunch all begin to laugh. We take you to ringside.

[shinnstheory]

In Ring Interview: Gormy

Kacey Garcia climbs into the ring. As she does so the crowd begin to cheer. Finally they will hear the interview they have been waiting for. She smiles and waves to them all. She has a mic in her right hand and waves with her left.

Kacey Garcia:[/b] Good evening all P2PW fans. I have a very special interview for you tonight. The lady I am going to interview is someone very special and I have been looking forward to it for a while now. With no further delay, I give you GORMY!

"As if" by magic Gormy appears at the top of the ramp. She is dressed in her usual red velvet catsuit. On her head perches a red velvet trilby with a black rose on the front. She stands for a minute, arms outstretched, savouring the crowds cheers. They have gone wild since the moment Gormy first appeared on the runway. Chanting her name over and over, like some over zealous religious crowd, they go on and on. Finally they begin to subside with the chants, giving way to cheers and whistles as Gormy makes her way down to the ring and to her interviewer.

Gormy walks slowly, taking her time, enjoying the attention from the crowd. She mounts the steps, turns for a moment, arms outstretched, giving the crowd one last chance to go crazy before the interview. They oblige and begin chanting her name again and again. She turns her attention back to the ring and climbs in. Gormy picks up the mic that is waiting for her and smiles at Kacey. Gormy then stands in the middle of the ring along side Kacey, turns 360 degrees trying to hush the crowd.

Eventually they quieten the chanting. The cheers become a little quieter too. They are ready for the interview. They have waited for it a long time and here it is almost ready to begin.

Kacey Garcia:[/b] Hello Gormy and thankyou for allowing us to interview you. I know you have taken time out of your busy schedule to talk to us.

Gormy:[/b] Hi Kacey, thanks for having me.

Kacey Garcia:[/b] You look very good. We haven't seen much of you in the last few weeks but it looks as though you have made good use of your free time.

Gormy:[/b] Thanks Kacey. I needed the time off to recharge my batteries. As you can see, I have been working out very hard. But as you can also see, it wasn't all work and no play. I did manage to get away to top up the tan!

A few wolfwhistles fly around from the arena, along with a few male cheers. Gormy smiles to the crowd. She runs her hands down her waist, showing off her improved figure.

Kacey Garcia:[/b] Looks like your in good shape physically and mentally for Deserted. How do you feel being in one of the main events for Deserted?

Gormy:[/b] I am really looking forward to it, if I'm honest with you Kacey. I have had my ups and downs over the last few months and now I feel I am ready for the main event status. I have earned my dues and worked hard here in the Fed. I am prepared and have been for a while. It's about time the management saw me for what I really am. I am a damn good wrestler who is good enough to take some of the so called 'men' on. I can pull the crowds and entertain them. Not just by being eye candy, but by being good at my job. Finally they have noticed that and taken it on board. I am ready physically and mentally to finally become what I should have been a long time ago.......that is a CHAMPION!!!

The crowd erupt again. They are also ready to see Gormy with what is rightfully hers...GOLD. Again, Gormy does a 360 degree turn, encouring the crowd to quieten down. She wants them to enjoy the interview. She wants to enjoy the interview. Although she loves the attention of the crowd, Gormy is a professional and wants everyone to hear what she has to say, even the people sat up in the rafters.

Kacey Garcia:[/b] Can I ask, do you feel that you have been treated fairly in the P2PW?

Gormy:[/b] Hmm. If I had to be truthful, then I would have to say no. I feel that I have given my all to this fed. I have worked hard, week after week. In the meantime, I have seen other people pass me by. I have seen both Wench and Starcrunch fight like squabbling schoolgirls over the women's title. I have had matches with both of them for the belt and each time I have been beaten. Unfairly in my opinion. If you take any of the non-title matches I have had with them both, you will see that I will most of the time. For me not to win when it is a title match smacks of bullshit. I AM a better wrestler than both of them. I have shown it again and again. And I will show you all one last time at Deserted.
As for Venus. Well, in my book she is a non-entity. Now take that last title match. Venus v's Starcrunch? What the hell was that all about. Venus had been here for a total of five minutes and there she is MAIN EVENT! The only way she earned that match was by offering little 'extras' shall we say to certain members higher up than myself. As you can see, I have the looks and if I was that trashy would have held the belt long before now. But I dont. The reason for that is I work hard and laying on my back, or sucking dick is not working hard in my book. Sweating in the ring, not bouncing on the bookers dick is the way I have done it.
I do feel that justice is being done, however small it may be. Wench is now in a position I myself found myself in not too long ago. And it was at her hands that I found myself in that position. I hope she is having as much fun as I did. What is that little saying Kacey? Oh yeah, thats it, what goes around, comes around. In this case, never a truer word spoken.

The crowd, which were still generally cheering Gormy on, fall silent during the last answer. The arena is almost deathly quiet. They hang onto every word that Gormy says, as if were gospel. Gormy looks hard into Kacey's eyes, almost taunting her to disagree with what she has just said. Kacey looks a little shell shocked. This is not the usual Gormy. There is a harder edge there. It has been seen before, but not outside of a match. She clears her throat and gathers her composure once more, a true professional.

Kacey Garcia:[/b]If you win at Deserted, you will become the last Women's Champion. But, the next night at TNT, you will be given a new belt and announced as the first ever title holder of this belt. What are your thoughts on that?

Gormy:[/b] If I win? Dont you mean WHEN I win? It would be fitting for me to hold the old and the new title. It would put me in the records as something rather special. Everyone will remember Deserted and will remember the phoenix rising from the Women's title ashes. They will remember watching it evolve into something better. The title holder deserves to be something special. That special person is me. Any one of the other women are good, but they lack something. They lack determination and strength. Only I am left with those features and they will show at Deserted.

Kacey Garcia:[/b] You certainly fired up for Deserted, we can all see that. I want to thank you again for taking the time out to come and talk to us. I for one will be looking forward to your match. I want to wish you all the best of luck in your match.

Gormy:[/b] Thanks Kacey. I will see you all at Deserted.

Gormy hands the mic to Kacey and does one last lap of the ring. The crowd are no longer silent. They are again showing their adoration for Gormy as she parades around the ring, her arms above her, waving to the crowd. Gormy climbs out between the ropes and slowly makes her way up the ramp towards backstage, the sound of her name being chanted again and again ringing in her ears.

[shinnstheory]

Backstage, we see Soul Reaper entering Rocky’s office. Rocky seems a bit dazed.

Soul Reaper:[/b] Give me a match.

Rocky shakes his head. He rubs his temple has his eyes begin to roll back into his head.

Soul Reaper:[/b] Tonight.

Rocky closes his eyes. He reopens them and looks up towards Soul Reaper.

Rocky:[/b] Ok. Tonight you’ll face Kaos.

Soul Reaper squints as he leans in towards Rocky. Rocky, still rubbing his temples, begins to shake. Again, his eyes roll back into his head. Rocky shakes his head. Rocky lets out a brief scream. Soul Reaper continues to watch as Rocky has an episode. Rocky falls out of his chair, still holding his temples.

Soul Reaper:[/b] Rocky?

Soul Reaper looks down towards Rocky. He then turns and begins to leave Rocky’s office. Stare is shown walking by. He peaks into Rocky’s office and finds him on the floor, rolling around in pain. Stare walks into the office before Reaper can exit.

Stare:[/b] What the hell did you do to him?

Soul Reaper:[/b] Nothing. He just started to freak out. What the hell is it of your concern anyway?

Stare calls out for EMTs and then approaches Reaper. The two stand eye-to-eye

Stare:[/b] It was you, wasn’t it.

Soul Reaper:[/b] Believe what you want, just get out of my face.

Stare doesn’t flinch as EMTs rush into Rocky’s office. Soul Reaper looks deep into Stare’s eyes.

Soul Reaper:[/b] ....Just get out of my face.

Stare keeps his head. He looks towards Rocky, who is now being tended to by EMTs. Stare looks back up. Soul Reaper is gone.... We now take you to ringside.

”Cowboy” hits as Doc Holliday approaches the ring. He enters the ring swinging his cowbell over his head. The crowd boos Holliday as “Don’t Want to Be an American Idiot” hits. Cactus comes out to a mixed reaction. He runs to the ring and slides in. The referee immediately calls for the bell. This match is now underway.

Singles Match
Cactus vs. Doc Holliday

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HIGHLIGHTS:[/u]
- Doc is first to land a punch, gaining quick control.
- Doc nails Cactus with various knees and elbows.
- Cactus is backed into a corner.
- Doc stomps Cactus to the mat.
- Doc turns his attention towards the booing crowd.
- Holliday taunts the crowd.
- Evenflow appears in the crowd.
- Doc spots Evenflow making his way through the fans.
- Cactus recovers and spins Doc around, landing a Double Armed DDT.
- Cactus picks Holliday up performs a Quick Pulling Piledriver.
- Evenflow hops over the barricade and onto the apron.
- Cactus knocks him off of the apron with a running knee.
- Cactus turns his attention back towards Doc Holliday.
- He picks Doc up and nails him with a clothesline.
- Holliday falls out of the ring.
- Cactus nails a hard Head and Neck Suplex to Doc on the outside.
- Cactus rolls back into the ring. The referee starts his 10 count on Doc.
- Cactus taunts Evenflow to enter the ring.
- The referee calls for the bell after reaching his ten count.
- Cactus wins via Count Out.

Cactus - 4.05 Promo Points.
Doc Holliday - 0 Promo Points.[/I]

Winner: Cactus[/b]

After the match, Evenflow climbs into the ring. Cactus and Evenflow begin to exchange punches. Doc Holliday begins to “come to”. As Cactus and Evenflow brawl, Doc grabs his cowbell and slides into the ring. He nails Cactus in the back of the head with it. Cactus hits the mat. A small trickle of blood runs from his head. Evenflow then looks at Doc and smiles. Doc smiles back. Holliday turns his back and begins to exit the ring, but Evenflow nails him with a reverse RKO. The crowd cheers as Evenflow stands. He then begins to stomp Cactus, which gets him a mixed reaction. Shinn’s Theory suddenly appears on Zeroin.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] I know Rocky had something planned for each and every one of you. But, unfortunately, Rocky has been escorted out of the building, leaving me to announce your match at Deserted. So, Evenflow will face Doc Holliday in a Boiler Room Brawl.

The crowd erupts as Evenflow nods with acceptance.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Oh yea. I almost forgot. I want to spice this match up a bit. So, I’ll toss in the king of hardcore himself, Cactus!

The crowd goes nuts as Evenflow’s face drops. We now take you backstage. The camera pans in as Mastadon finishes his Cigar.

Mastadon:[/b] Wow Shinn’s, that’s a pretty bad ass triple threat match you just made.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] I have one more match to sign and my work here is done.

Dickie Cha’Mone walks into Shinn’s office.

Dickie Cha’Mone:[/b] Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Starcrunch, Shinn’s Theory, and Mastadon (including myself as I write this) all bust out in laughter.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Dickie! My man! Do it for us!

Dickie grabs his crotch and points to the ceiling.

Dickie Cha’Mone:[/b] Hoooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Everyone begins to laugh. Mastadon actually rolls onto the floor laughing. Shinn’s tries to ask what Dickie wants but he can’t. Shinn’s just can’t stop laughing. After a while Shinn’s take a deep breath.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Wow. Ok, what can I.....

Shinn’s can’t control himself. He begins to laugh again. Starcrunch runs out of the office yelling:

Starcrunch:[/b] I’m gonna piss myself!

Mastadon and Shinn’s finally are able to control themselves.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Ok. What can I do for you?

Dickie Cha’Mone:[/b] Just wondering if I have a place on the Deserted Card?

Shinn’s, still chuckling a bit, thumbs through the current card.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Damn. I got nothin’.... Wait, let me think.

Shinn’s thumbs through a stack of papers. He then smiles.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Well, since I’ve been impressed with both of you, how about you facing Chadwick at Deserted.

Dickie smiles.

Dickie Cha’Mone:[/b] Sweet! Cha’Mone! Heeeeee!

Dickie moonwalks out of Shinn’s office. Mastadon and Shinn’s begin to laugh once again. Starcrunch enters wearing a different pair of pants. Mastadon looks down and is about to speak.

Starcrunch:[/b] Don’t even go there Mastadon.

[shinnstheory]

Mastadon refrains from speaking as Stare enters Shinn’s office.

Stare:[/b] You wanted to see me?

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Here you go. Signed, sealed, and delivered.

Shinn’s holds out an envelop. Stare grabs it and tears it open.


Stare:[/b] I knew this would pan out.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] And I’m glad it did. It’s the match I’ve been waiting to see since your return.

Stare:[/b] Thanks Shinn’s.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Don’t thank me. Thank SoundScream for signing that contract. He pretty much signed a Death Warrant.

Stare cracks a smile then proceeds to leave.

Shinn’s Theory:[/b] Stare. Why don’t you stick around and watch the main event with us in here. It should be an interesting match.

Stare turns around and shrugs. He sits in between Mastadon and Starcrunch. He looks towards Starcrunch, then looks towards her pants.

Stare:[/b] Hey. Didn’t I see you with a different pair of....

Starcrunch:[/b] Shut it.

We now take you to ringside for tonight’s main event.

”Lost Control” echos throughout the building. The Insanity symbol appears on Zeroin. Spaz makes his way to the ring. He his greet with a decent reaction from the fans. Spaz springs himself onto the apron and over the top rope. He tests the ropes as he waits for his opponent.

The Decepticon’s symbol appears on Zeroin. “Lost Control” is quickly taken over by “You Start the Fire”. Tyler Stone “The Assassin” appears. The crowd boos as he walks to the ring. He enters the ring and Spaz quickly attacks.

Main Event - Singles Match
Spaz vs. Tyler Stone “The Assissin”<br>

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HIGHLIGHTS:[/u]
- Spaz starts off like a bolt of lightening.
- Tyler is on the receiving end of many hard kicks and punches.
- Trent immediately appears at ringside.
- Trent cheers his teammate on.
- Spaz continues the offense.
- Spaz nails Tyler with a spinning DDT.
- He goes for the cover but Trent pulls the referee out of the ring.
- Spaz slides out of the ring and nails Trent with Sweet Chin Music.
- Spaz slides back into the ring only to be greeted with a spear by Tyler.
- Tyler applies a Boston Crab to Spaz.
- Red Ninja then makes his way to the ring.
- Red Ninja pulls Spaz’s hand towards the ropes.
- Spaz grabs onto the bottom rope.
- The referee forces Tyler to break the hold.
- This send SoundScream to the ring.
- Tyler picks up Spaz and nails him with a side suplex.
- Tyler then tosses Spaz into an Ankle Hold.
- Spaz reaches for the ropes but Red Ninja hops onto the apron, distracting the referee.
- Spaz begins to tap out but the referee’s back is turned.
- Diddly runs down and slides into the ring, breaking the hold.
- SoundScream hops off the apron and approaches Diddly Squat.
- The two exchange words.
- The referee slides out of the ring to regain control.
- Trent enters the ring and nails Spaz with the Acid Drop.
- Red Ninja hops onto the apron but Trent knocks him off.
- Trent hops out of the ring and begins to beat down Ninja.
- Tyler goes for the cover.
- The referee slides in and counts to three.

Tyler Stone “The Assassin” - 4.15 Promo Points
Spaz - 3.8667 Promo Points.[/I]

Winner: Tyler Stone “The Assassin”[/b]

After the match, there is an all out brawl between The Insanity and The Decepticons. Zeroin flickers and we see Soul Reaper in the Evil Unlimited locker room.

Soul Reaper:[/b] Well Hellspawn, if I don’t get a match, at least I’ll be able to beat the shit out of someone tonight. Let’s go.

Soul Reaper and Hellspawn are shown running throughout the halls on Zeroin. They suddenly bust through the curtain and run to the ring. They immediately aid The Decepticons by attacking Spaz and Red Ninja. Evil Unlimited and The Decepticons get the better of The Insanity. Venus also runs out and aids The Decepticons. It is now 6 on 3. Zeroin flickers once again. We take you to Shinn’s Theory’s office. Mastadon, Shinn’s Theory, Starcrunch, and Stare are watching the monitor.

Stare:[/b] Hmmmm....

Stare stands up and jogs out of the office. The other three shrug and follow him. Stare, followed by Shinn’s Theory, Mastadon, and Starcrunch burst through the curtain. The fans jump to their feet as these four quickly come to the aid of The Insanity. We now have 13 people in and outside of the ring, all fighting one another. As this week’s TNT goes off the air we see Stare and SoundScream exchanging blows, Spaz and Soul Reaper going toe-to-toe, Venus and Starcrunch engaging in a fight, Tyler Stone and Shinn’s Theory eye-to-eye, Mastadon and Trent Acid beating one another, and Red Ninja and Diddly Squat beating down Hellspawn.

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REMEMBER - There is only one more show before the next PPV. Don’t forget to check out Blitz! this week!

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Credit for the Gormy Interview: Gormy herself.

[shinnstheory]

Let me know what you think of this type of format for the TNT shows.[/b]

Staff Promo Ratings:[/b][/u]

Shinn’s Theory’s Ratings:

Chadwick - 4.4 (Like the variety. Good humor. Nice transaction into his promo. Wasn't quite as good as Addryd's promo, but I can still see Chadwick as a major, MAJOR, player in the P2PW.)
Addryd - 4.8 (The future of the P2PW. Obviously keeping up with storylines. "Got Wench?" LOL! Talked a little about his match. Hyped his match at Deserted. Hyped Deserted period.)

Cactus - 4.0 (Good stuff Cactus. Bringing back the hardcore character and trying to win back the fans. Addressed the match.)
Doc Holliday -
Spaz - 3.5 (A bit away from the norm. I had to re-read it a few times to understand it. Still, good stuff.)
Tyler Stone “The Assissin” - 4.0 (Ran on a bit, but kept me interested. Knows Spaz's character. Continues to bring up our feud. Reminded readers of his relationship with The Decepticons. I liked it.)

Stare’s Ratings:

Chadwick - 4.1(Good promo, I really enjoyed the play along with Aaron, it was something different. Good promo, and great way to build up your character. GAve the impression that you know your not the greatest, but the amount of heart you have is about to enabel you to run through the roster.)
Addryd - 4.6 (Great Promo! Incorporated everything you needed to. You talked about Hellspawn, Wench being abducted, used a storyline and played off of it, and talked about your hangman's match. Very character, with a guy making jokes, to a sick demented freak, which makes you pull off a tweener perfectly)

Cactus - 4.0 (Good job Cactus! As Shinns said, you're getting everything done you want to get done. Great character development)
Doc Holliday -

Spaz - 4.2 (Erm . . . that was different. I liked it a lot, and it was very unique. The only thing that threw me off was mentioning the board. Nothing wrong with it at all, but I was intrigued by what you would say next to you sitting looking at the board, but you just left it at that. Just kind of throwing your promo off-track. Luckily, it was good enough to overlook that, for the most part)
Tyler Stone “The Assassin” - 4.3 (I'm very impressed with how well you knew Spaz's character, having not been here long. I feel like you said more than you had to, and you lost my interest for a bit, but it was too good of a promo to let that set you back a whole lot. Good job!)

Soul Reaper’s Ratings:

Chadwick - 4.3 (I thought it was funny that he incorporated a "rival" company video game)
Addryd - 4.9...nah fuck it, it was damn good.. Thats a 5
yeah thats right a 5

Cactus - 4.3 very interesting... I may have to up my ante if I plan on keeping my belt with the way a lot of you guys are doing
Doc Holliday -

Spaz - 4
Tyler Stone “The Assassin” - 4.3

Rocky’s Ratings:

Chadwick - 4.2 (After Addryd's promo, you had to do something really special. Although this was very good, it wasn't as good as Addryd's, IMO. Still though, you are building up a very cool, calm and collected character and it's working brilliantly.)
Addryd - 5.0 (wow, that was awesome. It had every single one of the credentials bar none to make it a 5 pointer in my book. The humour was there. The intensity was there. The match relevance was there....I could go on all day stating all the good points, but I think the 5.0 paints the same picture.)

Cactus - 4.0 (nice twist in it. I'm glad you are sticking with the heel Cactus, while adopting your old hardcore gimmick. It was a wee bit messy at times though, so just keep an eye on that.
Doc Holliday -

Spaz - 4.0 (that was very, very good. Unusual, but very good none the less.)
Tyler Stone “The Assassin” - 4.0 (nicely done. Although your charcter is based on Bret Hart, besides the ending, you have evolved it and made it your own.)

Shane Montez’s Ratings

Chadwick - 3.5
Addryd - 4.0

Cactus - 4.0
Doc Holliday -

Spaz - 4.0
Tyler Stone “The Assissin” - 4.1

Wench’s Ratings:

Chadwick - 4.2 (Nice promo. I expected no less from having seen your work elsewhere.)
Addryd - 4.7 (Very good promo. Im impressed)

Cactus - 4 (Good job at bringing back the old hard core Cactus. Off to a good start.)
Doc Holliday -

Spaz - 3.5 (You barely mentioned your opponent at all.)
Tyler Stone “The Assissin” - 4.2 (Nice promo. Very well constructed and well focused)

[Wench]

Very nice write up.

If I didn't know any better, I'd swear you and Stare are trying to kill my poor character.

[Stare]

*whispers to Shinns*

I don't think she knows any better, heehee

Good show Shinns, I liked the new writing style okay enough, and it made the show look better and the matches easier to read.

[Drow]

The show was good, I like the new format. It made the matches easier to read and quicker to make sense of.



(OOC So Shinn's still won't face me one on one yet. He must be scared. )


Seriously though good job to everyone.

[Wench]

Stare said:

*whispers to Shinns*

I don't think she knows any better, heehee.

I HEARD THAT!

[Stare]

*grabs megaphone*

Attention Wench . . .testing, testing . . . Wench can you hear me? Me and Shinns are killing your character. We will do everything in our power to bring the character down. FOREVER!!

*turns Megaphone off and whispers in Shinns ear*

You think she heard me?

[shinnstheory]

Drow said:

(OOC So Shinn's still won't face me one on one yet. He must be scared. )

Actually, I think that was IC. If it really was OOC, you are way off bud.

[Trent Matsunoshin]

Good write-up.

I'm a flow-oriented person, so highlights don't really work for me....

[Nation]

soryy dude, don't like the highlights. but at the end of the day it's easy for me to say that because i don't have to write the show.

[shinnstheory]

Duelly noted.

[spaz]

Fuck!

i mean, weird write-up. did anyone else notice the highlights? i thought it was, dunno.

good match tyler, i'll be looking forward to our next meeting.

[Nation]

at the end of the day dude i think you and stare are doing a brilliant job with the shows. and it's not a ass kissing, it's saying it like it is. the shows are consistently good. but the matches are as important as the backstage bits (if not more) personally if it's a time constraint issue, because real life has to come first, then i'd rather wait 2 weeks and get the full shinns/stare effect. but that's just my view on it.

[Reaper]

Great show. Very great. Especially the Gormy interview. Well done to her.

As for the highlights, I know how much you two put into this, but I think it's better to write full matches, as opposed to highlights.

[stocko]

cool show boys!

highlights are ok, but the matches are much better!

[LK]

I agree Micko, but yes, amazing show.

[stocko]

i actually do like the shorter matches that have been happening lately, but the little points that happened here make it more of a chore to read, imo!

[shinnstheory]

Ok. I'll go back to the normal way of writing the shows. Thanks for the feedback. Just trying something new.

[Wench]

Ok, my 2 cents.

The shorter matches like Stare does are great for the weekly shows. I didn't care for this format. Now, for ppvs, go all out with longer more detailed matches.


And that's my opinion for whatever its worth.

[shinnstheory]

I'm a failure!

Leaps out of the window.

[Gormy]

I agree with Wench on this one. I found the new format a lot easier and less time consuming to read. I only have about 5 minutes each day to catch up.....it is VERY hard work sitting on my arse all day baking...but this way I was able to read everything AND take it all in for a change!!!!!

The PPV's should be full matches though. Everyone seems to pull out all the stops for promos on PPV's so really I feel that the matches should mirror that.

I thought that Gormy woman was boss writing her interview and all...what a good job she did!!!

*pats self on back*

[Drow]

Shinn's your right my comment to you was IC.. I just messed up when I tped is all. I look forward to the match up at deserted.

Good match Spaz. I'll be keeping an eye on you as well.