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Post by shinnstheory on Mar 1, 2005 20:34:12 GMT 1
Don't forget. The extra promo threads are now also discussion threads for the event. Discuss the event here, as well as tossing in an extra promo or two.
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Post by brockandsable on Mar 1, 2005 22:51:47 GMT 1
E2 Promo #2 We FADE UP FROM BLACK to an EXTREME CLOSE UP of E2's profile. His head is leaned slightly forward as if he hunched over deep in thought and there is just enough light in the room to reveal the hardened countenance as well as the many stiches and scars atop the man's head.E2: Gormy I have to give you respect where respect is due. You are a very talented individual at P2PW and you are the reigning P2PW Internet Champion! You have the gold to show that you've got what it takes to get it done in that squared circle. You have gold to show that you've got what it takes to make it in this business where the weak go crawling home and only the tough survive! Gormy time and time again you have stepped into that ring and proved that you are to be taken very seriously when it comes to doing what is takes to stay atop the world of sports entertainment! I respect you Gormy, heh, but I am also a bit concerned about your safety at Sole Survivor.E2 turns his head slightly so that one eye is looking directly at the camera. E2:You see Gormy, the powers that be are leaning toward a match where only a finishing move will decide who walks away with the gold. The powers that be want us to compete for the P2PW Internet Championship in a finisher-only match. Gormy I cannot be responsible for what a spinebuster from the most dominant force in the history of this business will do to your frail body. There is no telling if you will ever recooperate from my sit-down powerbomb. What you must realize here and now, is that we are not merely competing in a match in which one's finisher will decide who leaves the arena with the gold. We are competing in a match that will spell the end of your P2PW Internet Championship reign as well as your tenure in the squared circle. It's over Gormy. The time to pass the torch has come. E2 is the new dominant force here, and you.... E2 smirks .....I guarantee this one will be short and sweet. One spinebuster and your title is mine. FADE TO BLACK
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Post by Aladdin on Mar 2, 2005 0:06:52 GMT 1
^someones eager to win ;D
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Post by Cactus on Mar 2, 2005 21:35:13 GMT 1
personally i think this ppv is going to blow RR and WF outta the water
Just my 2 cents worth
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Post by shinnstheory on Mar 2, 2005 21:36:36 GMT 1
It will be hard to top this one. Or will it?
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Post by Cactus on Mar 2, 2005 21:53:20 GMT 1
only time will tell
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Post by brockandsable on Mar 2, 2005 23:50:52 GMT 1
I'm getting ripped to shreds in the voting promo. Being this is my first match, I'm taking it very serious. I hope my promos can make up for where I'm lacking.
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Post by shinnstheory on Mar 3, 2005 0:13:34 GMT 1
Don't worry about that. Votes are only .1 of a point. It would take 10 votes to get 1 point added to your promo score.
Keep in mind, you are facing one of the best promo writers this e-Fed has. It won't be easy.
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Post by brockandsable on Mar 3, 2005 0:17:50 GMT 1
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Post by Scream on Mar 3, 2005 0:30:09 GMT 1
Turn that frown upside down E2- you're getting a title shot against one of the best. This is my first chance at a possible title shot and look who I'm freakin facing. It's all about character my man, character and you have it!
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Post by brockandsable on Mar 3, 2005 1:50:52 GMT 1
;D
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Post by Nation on Mar 3, 2005 12:02:01 GMT 1
just have patience dude. the quality of your work will shine through soon. already you're getting pops for your promos. and its deserved. soon that will turn into votes. just stick with it and enjoy it. the rest will follow.
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Post by brockandsable on Mar 3, 2005 20:09:28 GMT 1
thanks for the advice fellas; I'll put it to practice and see what happens.
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Post by Trent Matsunoshin on Mar 4, 2005 6:39:49 GMT 1
Damn, I think Nation's got it.....fo real....
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Post by Nation on Mar 4, 2005 12:29:50 GMT 1
thanks a lot, trent. that means a lot coming from you. i read yours and rocky's and just thought "damn, i'm going to have to delve deep here." i thought your promo fucking ruled. really enjoyed reading it.
so far the promos across the board have been fantastic. especially mini nation ;D
mini nation for world champ!!!
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Post by Cactus on Mar 4, 2005 13:44:02 GMT 1
so far the best promos for me have been Nation in the second match and addryd in the first match, addryd has changed gimmicks recently and he executed a flawless promo which intoduced the new gimmick to us but also put his match over
Kudos to all, this is going to be one hell of a ppv
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Post by brockandsable on Mar 4, 2005 18:21:10 GMT 1
Nation's promo was supreme.
*takes notes*
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Post by ChadClassic on Mar 5, 2005 1:26:08 GMT 1
IC: Good luck to all the dipshits involved with tonights PPV, its gonna be one hell of a ride!
OOC: Fuck you guys.
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Post by Stare on Mar 5, 2005 1:40:19 GMT 1
OOC: guys, everyone is pulling out superb promos. I feel ashamed of my own, but one thing's for sure, whoever faces me or Reaper or [/insert name here] (< someone will have to get a shot at Momentum) will have their work cut out for them. Solid work everyone.
IC: It doesnt' really matter who walks out tonight as the numebr one contenders. I have respect for some, hatred for others, but none of them will take this title away from me. And after they see what I do to Reaper, they will be hesitant to step in the ring with me
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Post by Reaper on Mar 7, 2005 6:38:10 GMT 1
Reading over my promo, I have noticed a shit load of typos. I would like to think that, in the context, the typos can be overlooked, in the hope that you realize what I meant. I am about to modify the typos. Not so that I can get a better promo score, but so that it is easier for everyone to read, as there are, alarmingly, a fair few typos in this particular piece of writing.
If I can give some advice to people, it is that you always re-read your promos. I like to think that my promos are generally of a decent standard, but that's because I take the time to read over them before posting it, finding all the mistakes.
Sorry for the rant.
Carry on.
EDIT: I just spelled typos as tyopos! Oops!
EDIT 2: I found 7 basic errors that I missed, becasue I never re-read my promo after posting it.
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Post by Cactus on Mar 7, 2005 18:50:20 GMT 1
i do mine fist in word then spell check, finish, spellcheck again, then grammer check, then preveiw post to re-read, then finally post it, its a pain but it makes it easier to read.
IC: SS wants a shot at my belt huh, well if he fails in his match, i am willing and more than able to take him out!
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Post by shinnstheory on Mar 7, 2005 19:01:36 GMT 1
i do mine fist in word then spell check, finish, spellcheck again, then grammer check, then preveiw post to re-read, then finally post it, its a pain but it makes it easier to read. Same here...exactly. Dun dun dunnnnnnn! "I do mine fist". Ha!
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Post by Cactus on Mar 7, 2005 19:59:28 GMT 1
yeah i know but i dont do itin my normal posts as these do not lose me marks
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Post by ChadClassic on Mar 7, 2005 22:44:46 GMT 1
~~The scene... the P2PW Interview station. Kacet Garcia is in a pair of nice tight white capris. Her tight shirt reads "P2PW Sole Survivor" in white lettering. On it is pictures of P2PW World Heavyweight Champion Stare, P2PW Rage Champion Nation, and on the back are a picture of P2PW Tag Team Champions The Blood Pack. She has a Mic in her hand, and recieves numerous pops from the crowd. All of a sudden, the camera shifts over to her right to see ChadClassic standing next to her. Immediate boos ring threw the arena as Classic grasps his hands together and rubs them. ChadClassic looks determined. He stares into Kacey's eyes. Kacey seems a little startled.~~
Kacey Garcia: "Chadwick... tonight is the night. Tonight you go into the first ever P2PW Elimination Chamber and compete for a shot at Stare at WrestleFever."
ChadClassic: "First off Kacey, get it right, its ChadClassic! Second, your supposed to be a P2PW insider? So obviously you'd know the winner of MY Chamber match, which will 99.9% of the time be me, will face the winner of the first Elimination Chamber, and the two of us will do battle at the next P2PW PPV, Momentum, with the winner getting a shot at either Stare or Soul Reaper at the biggest P2PW PPV, WrestleFever!"
Kacey Garcia: "And you say 99.9% chance of winning. Whats the other half?"
ChadClassic: "Because their a ton of hungry sons of bitches in that match that want in on WrestleFever. ChadClassic has a fever, and the only cure for it is seeing the ref place that World Heavyweight Title in MY hands! Now back to the topic, I only see one threat in that match. Who's that threat? Nation. The current P2PW Rage Champion. Probably the best P2PW currently has to offer. When I get in that match, he will be my main target. I mean, just imagine it. You have Nation down and out, you make the cover. 1-2-3, and he's gone. Now if I got eliminated by one of those remaining nutsacks, I have a guarenteed title shot."
Kacey Garcia: "What makes you so sure that IF you do infact eliminate Nation from the Chamber, you'll get a Rage Title shot?"
~~ChadClassic smiles eviliy. He gets closer to Kacey.~~
ChadClassic: "I know I'd get it. I eliminated the most targeted man in that match, how could I NOT get a shot? Oh yeah, and once I get that shot, I'd win. No doubt, I would be the next P2PW Rage Champion. No one, and I repeat... NO ONE... deserves a title more then ChadClassic. I am the most underrated talent P2PW has to offer, and I will make such a huge impact, no one will ever forget my name!"
~~As ChadClassic is about to speak again, Nation walks up with the P2PW Rage Championship over his shoulder. He smirks as the crowd give a mixed reaction, mostly because they don't care too much for ChadClassic.~~
Nation: "So you think your gonna be the guy to relieve me of my title? Listen kid, your new around here, so I'll give you some advice... stick to your own level. I'm higher in the food chain then you."
ChadClassic: "Oh is that so? Well I'll tell you what "Nation", I'm not afraid of you. And theirs no one else to better take that title off you then ME!"
Nation: "Rocky, SoL, and Spaz all said the same thing. Look whats happened to 'em now..."
~~"OOOOH's" ring through the arena. Nation pushes Classic aside as he walks down the hallway and back to his dressing room.~~
ChadClassic: "Look what happened to them", how cute...."
Kacey Garcia: "So anyways Chad, I wanted to ask you if..."
~~All of a sudden, ChadClassic runs and Spears the daylights out of a camera man. He lays down next to the man holding his ribs and begins yelling in his face and ear. He gets on his knees and looks down at the man.~~
ChadClassic: "NO ONE... laughs at ChadClassic!"
~~Classic slowly stands up and walks backwards and out of the shot. Kacey screams as she runs to the camera man and asks for help. People crowd around as ChadClassic points and laughs.~~
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Post by Aladdin on Mar 7, 2005 23:24:30 GMT 1
Oh my God, i'm so tired. I was really rushing to finish off my promo. I got it in on time though so its all good. Luckily it was locked a bit late.
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